Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Life (Bella Shepard)
Bella what a great thought. I do try to laugh at the sadness in life, it...
December 2nd, 2022 17:16 - The Chair. (Doggerel Dave)
I\'ve always had problems with these put together yourself items, the...
December 2nd, 2022 12:25 - thursday winds (Dusk arising)
Dusk this brought back memories that have been buried for a long time.
December 2nd, 2022 12:21 - Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
Music touches the soul where nothing else can reach. A nice write that...
December 1st, 2022 06:40 - Just Asking (Doggerel Dave)
Have you been reading my stuff again? You can recognize them by a couple...
November 30th, 2022 22:12 - with my rhymes i am greater (MR.apocalypse)
I liked this poem. At first it reminded me of a poem I had written some...
November 30th, 2022 22:04 - Doing his Best (Fay Slimm.)
This brings so many memories. Watching hawks and eagles as a grand part of...
November 28th, 2022 07:58 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
A great analogy and wonderful poem put very succinctly and words as smooth...
November 28th, 2022 06:23 - so once (Dusk arising)
We all question ourselves at times and it is how we respond to these...
November 28th, 2022 06:21 - Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave)
This is a good and valid point. We or us are used without validation to...
November 28th, 2022 06:09 - baggage claim delay (Arqios)
Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which...
November 28th, 2022 05:43 - Walking To School. (Goldfinch60)
I like you grew up in those times walking and later riding a bicycle to...
November 26th, 2022 16:35 - so once (Dusk arising)
Loose the chains, loose the beast, there is beauty in that beast. Do I...
November 25th, 2022 15:09 - Freedom From Enticing Words - Series (4) (Orchidee)
Good write John
November 25th, 2022 13:06 - Beholding The Baptist (Orchidee)
This brought back many memories from childhood of Bible stories. So well...
November 25th, 2022 07:20 - Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I have been there. I\'m not sure whether it is worse to be bitten or...
November 25th, 2022 07:18 - I Am One With Creation (Bella Shepard)
I couldn\'t agree more Bella and I too feel that winter has arrived in my...
November 25th, 2022 07:15 - ice fishing anyone? (Arqios)
Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other...
November 25th, 2022 07:11 - Creating Music. (Goldfinch60)
A nice setting well imaged and with the feeling of completion and present...
November 25th, 2022 07:08 - germinant style birthed (Arqios)
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A...
November 23rd, 2022 09:07 - negotiable leave (Arqios)
A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks...
November 21st, 2022 10:28 - Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
Andy there is too little of this. Years ago, in Brazil, the news would...
November 20th, 2022 06:08 - fastidious malignment (Arqios)
Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the...
November 19th, 2022 07:09 - where might you be? (Arqios)
A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded...
November 17th, 2022 08:33 - My Good Life. (Goldfinch60)
I feel the same way Gold and I feel and endorse your last line.
November 16th, 2022 07:26 - What is To Be Done? (Doggerel Dave)
Well rhymed, well timed. I approach politics like a crime scene with the...
November 15th, 2022 22:01 - irreconcilably different? (Arqios)
A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the...
November 15th, 2022 10:37 - transitions (Arqios)
I particularly liked the last stanza, pregnant with imagery. A timely...
November 13th, 2022 09:03 - To Walk By Moonlight (Bella Shepard)
Bella this revives many feelings of peace and serenity. Such moments must...
November 12th, 2022 12:48 - Love (Doggerel Dave)
So true Dave. Love is used as a façade to cover what really lies behind a...
November 12th, 2022 07:21 - muffly muppet (Arqios)
Somehow this little miss Tuffet sounds vaguely familiar. Are you sure...
November 11th, 2022 07:29 - Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60)
The older I get the more this is true. When young other\'s opinions...
November 10th, 2022 11:07 - Fatalist? (Bella Shepard)
This one goes far deeper than the light hearted initial impression. I...
November 9th, 2022 16:56 - Presence Perceived (Orchidee)
Very nice orchidee it reminds me a great deal of Psalms, one of the more...
November 9th, 2022 16:45 - asteriskos (Arqios)
This brings to mind the Kabala and the angel\'s alphabet that to those...
November 9th, 2022 09:25 - POOL (Dusk arising)
A wonderful reflection. It is in water that we seek wisdom, its form...
November 9th, 2022 08:44 - Truth (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so
November 9th, 2022 08:36 - The Future (Bella Shepard)
Another great haiku yes we are all trying to catch up with our future.
November 7th, 2022 16:02 - Dwelling Delights (Orchidee)
A hymn indeed. Be careful they will soon draft you to write these for the...
November 7th, 2022 10:09 - rail branches (Arqios)
This short snapshot of a poem dives deep into my heart and soul. I have...
November 7th, 2022 10:03 - Centipede scare (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature...
November 6th, 2022 14:27 - fill each unruled page (Arqios)
Judging a book by its cover when there is no book seems to be the norm now...
November 6th, 2022 09:12 - To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice: (Doggerel Dave)
Poetry is like music to me, there is no one type that I prefer. A well...
November 6th, 2022 09:00 - Praises Prepared (Orchidee)
A true hymn of praise. I am glad to see you pointed out the the formal...
November 6th, 2022 08:53 - Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave)
A well told story with wit and a happy ending. What more could you want in...
November 5th, 2022 07:11 - Brain Full. (Goldfinch60)
The process may not be selective but why does it seem that what falls off...
November 5th, 2022 07:05 - minding your portals (Arqios)
This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the...
November 5th, 2022 06:58 - seasonalities (Arqios)
Many think of Christmas when talking of seasons, I no. I hear these words...
November 4th, 2022 21:32 - Storms Of Clearance. (Goldfinch60)
If it doesn\'t kill you it will make you stronger.
November 4th, 2022 21:28 - Exhorting To Endurance (Orchidee)
A hymn of praise indeed. This could easily be sung in church. Nicely...
November 4th, 2022 21:26 - Collective Communion (Orchidee)
A true poem of thanks giving. Very nicely written.
November 3rd, 2022 06:20 - The C Word. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s funny what is in a word that we can only use the first letter and...
November 3rd, 2022 06:16 - Just Another Day…. (Doggerel Dave)
I don\'t know what has led us to be so politically correct and loose our...
November 2nd, 2022 19:10 - I Dreamt (Bella Shepard)
This to me is an ideal haiku, although maybe not by oriental standard, it...
November 2nd, 2022 13:26 - with you (Arqios)
A wonderful longing feeling accompanies this poem. It seems somehow...
November 2nd, 2022 09:41 - Not Enough (Doggerel Dave)
Agreed, too many unthought suggestions by those that don\'t understand the...
October 31st, 2022 13:58 - Turtle On A Brick (Bella Shepard)
Bella I love the way you present this story and dilema. Not only were the...
October 31st, 2022 13:55 - main architect (Arqios)
This is what I once believed and still hold some tendency toward. I would...
October 31st, 2022 13:50 - Teaching Respect. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful story. To me a handshake is a sign of respect. I knew a man...
October 31st, 2022 13:46 - Raindrop (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you, L.B. your comments are always so welcome. I deeply appreciate...
October 31st, 2022 08:39 - Concern.... (Doggerel Dave)
Years ago in Brazil they made an attempt to match each bad item on the...
October 27th, 2022 07:31 - Ian (Rocky Lagou)
I have weathered so many hurricanes I have lost count, of holding in...
October 27th, 2022 07:02 - The Potion (Paul Bell)
Although not form the UK I loved this one. I loved how it was a bit...
October 27th, 2022 06:52 - Going On In Grace (Orchidee)
A beautiful write that we should all look to fulfill
October 27th, 2022 06:47 - Magic In Music. (Goldfinch60)
Art, poems, and music all give meaning to life and translate life\'s...
October 27th, 2022 06:45 - toward-winter verse (Arqios)
All things need a time of rest or hibernation, so too with writing. It...
October 27th, 2022 05:59 - there were shadows (Dusk arising)
A snapshot frozen in time. This also evokes something far deeper, a...
October 26th, 2022 16:39 - Two Loners at the Pond (Haiku/Senryū #6) (Rocky Lagou)
I always have been intrigued by haikus and only wish I knew how to wright...
October 26th, 2022 16:29 - Just Because (senryu-maybe) (Bella Shepard)
I know little about the senryu form but regardless this is an appropriate...
October 25th, 2022 18:58 - Phoenix (Bella Shepard)
Bella I have seldom found so few words convey so much emotion and meaning....
October 24th, 2022 16:07 - Into The Universe (Bella Shepard)
Breathing helps center us, calm us and is a method used by different...
October 23rd, 2022 16:09 - A Single Thought (Bella Shepard)
Profound and deep, but don\'t pant too deep or it may never come up. So...
October 21st, 2022 13:43 - Compass Rose (Rocky Lagou)
All dreams need just a little water to spawn germination and a little more...
October 17th, 2022 11:51 - Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.)
Carpe diem! Well expressed. I too believe that there only is the present...
October 17th, 2022 11:47 - Off On Vacation! (Bella Shepard)
I hope that this trip inspires many more wonderful poems of yours. Look...
October 17th, 2022 11:42 - licence to keel (Arqios)
All kinds are needed, comedy and tragedy, but of Shakespeare\'s works, I...
October 17th, 2022 11:33 - The Thing (Paul Bell)
Very appropriate at this season in the U.S. for Halloween. It reminds me...
October 17th, 2022 11:27 - With All My Fondest Regards (Neville)
Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called...
October 17th, 2022 11:24 - Nature Nurtured (Orchidee)
A true poem of thanksgiving. Very appropriate for this season in the U.S....
October 17th, 2022 11:21 - Thoughts In Life. (Goldfinch60)
A positive view that lifts the spirit and gives hope in a world so full of...
October 17th, 2022 11:13 - queen (Dusk arising)
Am touching piece, about a loved lady. We all must some day follow.
October 17th, 2022 11:09 - Strindberg Principle (Arqios)
A wonderful write Strindberg would be proud. naturalism or mysticism,...
October 10th, 2022 10:34 - The Fortress of a Lonely Mind (J.H.Byron-Nuel)
I like plays, although I am somewhat ignorant in this area. This was short...
October 8th, 2022 07:45 - Gracie’s Ghost (J.H.Byron-Nuel)
Ghosts hold two juxtaposed images for me: the spirit that can not rest and...
October 7th, 2022 22:03 - sunrising sunset (Arqios)
This poem hit me in different ways. The sunrise portrayed so well the dawn...
October 6th, 2022 20:58 - Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I love the humor at the expense of the suffering. I find it helpful...
October 6th, 2022 09:40 - Brahn Boots. (Doggerel Dave)
I love satire in any works, but poetry seems to lend itself to this....
October 6th, 2022 07:12 - In Life (Bella Shepard)
An existential question that we all need to ask ourselves. Well said Bella
October 5th, 2022 13:00 - looking for a real bargain (Arqios)
I love these bits and pieces. Too little too late.
October 5th, 2022 07:23 - take two (Arqios)
\"Personification of hope\" well stated. Hope the last to die. I loved...
October 4th, 2022 06:49 - I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere.. (Doggerel Dave)
I think most of us can identify with that. My house I trapped over 80 rats...
October 4th, 2022 06:38 - Oh Please! (Doggerel Dave)
Politics has been a problem for some time. Plato wrote a book or two on...
October 4th, 2022 06:32 - Each Night (Bella Shepard)
A beautiful verse, so full of peace and calm. It brought back so many...
October 3rd, 2022 13:59 - Let Me Be (Bella Shepard)
Wise words and good advice for everyone. I felt almost as if I were in...
September 29th, 2022 14:19 - to be seen (Arqios)
The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written...
September 27th, 2022 13:23 - Teach Me (Bella Shepard)
A great message that is far deeper than the few words initially reflect.
September 26th, 2022 16:40 - This Cat is Coo Coo (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
A fun poem to read. It is always nice to lighten up a bit.
September 26th, 2022 10:02 - hands off that snooze button! (Arqios)
This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the...
September 23rd, 2022 07:08 - A Right Royal...... (Doggerel Dave)
God save the queen. Oh too late. I too did like her and her image....
September 17th, 2022 09:29 - re(ad)writing poetry (Arqios)
This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing...
September 17th, 2022 06:49
« Return to the profile of sorenbarrett