Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Zaftig\'s puppet (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) From bullying to gobstoppers a good read
  May 7th, 2026 04:28
• +- (Birdbird) This reveals an abstract feel with layered meaning. Well done
  May 7th, 2026 04:25
• Drifting away (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) A metaphoric senryu well done
  May 7th, 2026 04:23
• Words and Witness (Gray0328) A write about the first step in a process where sensitivity to what is...
  May 7th, 2026 04:22
• ज़िद्दी (Waiting for Silence) There is self flagellation and immolation in this poem that has become a...
  May 7th, 2026 04:19
• CITY OF POETS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Beautiful words, images and thoughts accompany this surreal creation of...
  May 7th, 2026 04:15
• The Wonderful Light Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A most beautiful poem of positivity and brightening the way. Well done
  May 7th, 2026 04:13
• My Bestie My Headphones (Anthony Hanible) A fun read of a feeling toward headphones. Well done
  May 7th, 2026 04:12
• The Spirit and the Science (David Wakeling) A sad dilema where choice is lifted and guilt reprieved. Well written
  May 7th, 2026 04:10
• Calling Your Name (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Another beautiful set of poems of wisdom Kurt. Each one nicely written
  May 7th, 2026 04:05
• What\'s Left? (Shadowbones) A poem that speaks of destruction and the rubble not leaving anything of...
  May 6th, 2026 20:51
• Jealousy (Brothervilheim) Jealousy a symptom of narcissism nicely written
  May 6th, 2026 20:50
• Cheating on her (Maplespal) Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled....
  May 6th, 2026 20:49
• Buried Beneath the Ruin (Entangled heart) Hope buried and now unearthed. Well written
  May 6th, 2026 20:48
• \"THE GIRL WITH BLOOD LIKE NIGHT\" (Hadeed musa) The venting of black secrets in poetry is a therapy for the soul. Nicely...
  May 6th, 2026 20:45
• How often do you count to 3? (Sunita) Sane defined by society has no meaning to me. A wonderful write...
  May 6th, 2026 20:44
• Ms.divine 🛸🖖🏿🫂👁️🌞👑 (Ogunisjustice) An idle that one wishes to never change. Nicely written
  May 6th, 2026 20:42
• Farewell My Village (Xiaobai Yulan) This poem seems not only a fragment of reality but a metaphor for change...
  May 6th, 2026 20:40
• 📉 Declined ❌ yo ASS (Ms.divine) Anger over control expressed. Powerful emotions in this piece
  May 6th, 2026 20:35
• Confessions of a sunflower (Amethyste) Short and to the point. Well done
  May 6th, 2026 20:33
• NET / RED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A poem of life and its rushing confusion. Nicely written Carlos
  May 6th, 2026 20:32
• Garden of Words (Ghoast) A poem of wondering if one remembers them. Well written and carrying a sad...
  May 6th, 2026 20:30
• Pilgrim (Fränz Müller) Sad and most melancholic but so well worded a fave
  May 6th, 2026 20:28
• An Asymmetrical Truth (Salvia.S) A strong message sent to another. Well said Salvia
  May 6th, 2026 20:27
• Your Finest Rebellion (Gray0328) Another wonderful write Gray well done
  May 6th, 2026 10:41
• Stream of consciousness Part 4 (Donteatmecows) A tough upbringing leads to a downfall in this poem. Nicely written
  May 6th, 2026 09:43
• Commentary (2781) Great message and well written
  May 6th, 2026 09:41
• Enter World Naked Leave Naked (Joseph M Marion) A poem with a beautiful message and great rhyme it shines.
  May 6th, 2026 09:40
• Contemplating Thoughts (Arshia) A poem of recognition of the path to being who one should be and needs to...
  May 6th, 2026 07:30
• the clearing (Tristan Robert Lange) There is something spiritual and sacred that touches the soul and defines...
  May 6th, 2026 07:28
• Lust (Friendship) This poem speaks of the deep urge within the heart and soul of the artist...
  May 6th, 2026 07:16
• the thing that scatters me the most (Sano) This poem speaks of fear of being left behind by another well written
  May 6th, 2026 07:11
• Six Touches Before the Line (Matthew R. Callies) Gripping but I can not help but feel a metaphor here as well. Life itself...
  May 6th, 2026 06:25
• I Listen (Katie B.) As we walk we often sing to ourselves, something privative but comforting,...
  May 6th, 2026 06:23
• cooler months 2026 (Arqios) A poetic invitation to a more comfortable place one that has cooled and...
  May 6th, 2026 06:21
• doggy heaven (Jim56) A lovely thought Jim but I believe that all dogs go to heaven and that it...
  May 6th, 2026 05:11
• The Cat Woman (Paul Bell) It is not only in music and poetry that timing is important. Well written
  May 6th, 2026 05:09
• and when I’m hurt (Demar Desu) Hope grows back. Well written Demar
  May 6th, 2026 05:06
• Soldier’s lullaby (RCx_Vortex) The meter in this poem reminiscent of hush little baby don\'t say a word...
  May 6th, 2026 05:05
• Beer Garden Blues (8 Months Sober) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Congratulations and best wishes for the future. A good read as well with...
  May 6th, 2026 04:59
• Lolly was a Leprechaun (Cully45) A lovely story with a lovely moral all put to rhyme. What is best may not...
  May 6th, 2026 04:58
• Forbidden Love (Anthony Hanible) Forbidden love I have tasted that apple and it was sweet but it does often...
  May 6th, 2026 04:54
• खुश मैं रहता हूँ   (Waiting for Silence) A poem of things remembered that one loves in another. Nicely worded
  May 6th, 2026 04:52
• AN EMPTY ROOM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of reminders of the past. It is interesting how many marks bring...
  May 6th, 2026 04:50
• Gone With a Smile (Teddy.15) A lovely song Teddy of wanting to be remembered for what one has done and...
  May 6th, 2026 04:48
• The Road We Drive. (Goldfinch60) A great analogy Andy and indeed that highway is crowded at times and with...
  May 6th, 2026 04:45
• Sometimes the Ambulance comes to Pensive Street. (David Wakeling) David I am sure that I remember this poem is it a rework? I from time to...
  May 6th, 2026 04:43
• Fire and ash (Moonie) What a good metaphor based on a real event. Nicely written it evokes...
  May 6th, 2026 04:39
• Enough This Time? (Entangled heart) A poem of questions where resolution comes in the last stanza. Nicely...
  May 6th, 2026 04:32
• 1. Fierce Winds Howl outside the Door/ Coal (Xiaobai Yulan) This poem presents a feeling of desolation and bareness of a god-forsaken...
  May 5th, 2026 21:42
• Trip to the Stars (StephenJames) Cute and nicely written
  May 5th, 2026 21:38
• People romanticize dreams too much (Simple Tendencies) Once went forty eight hours without sleep driving straight and the cars on...
  May 5th, 2026 21:37
• Musings on a Sowbug (Kevin Hulme) We are a different breed and we assume our uniqueness amidst it all. In...
  May 5th, 2026 20:26
• I Do (Mylastwrites) Short and to the point a promise made and meant. Nicely done
  May 5th, 2026 20:22
• A Force of Nature (Fränz Müller) Pride and strength hold firm and the wind rushes by until strong enough to...
  May 5th, 2026 20:21
• Effort to Sound Effortless (Version 2) (FallingAwake2) Boiling off all the broth leaves the soup without flavor. Well written
  May 5th, 2026 20:20
• To my precious soul driven away by nature (Dn) This feels like a mortal loss and the hope that one waits beyond that...
  May 5th, 2026 20:18
• The edge (Amethyste) One needn\'t be the center to be of importance. Well written
  May 5th, 2026 20:17
• The Quiet Middle (Lilmoonxx) Recognition in this poem of something missing and it is yourself. Well
  May 5th, 2026 20:16
• Notification (Rachel P) Love grown old and taken for granted not gone just used and common like an...
  May 5th, 2026 20:15
• Hinterland (Kora) This is charming and holds a feel of a fairytale of love. It is dreamy and...
  May 5th, 2026 20:12
• Stream of consciousness Part 3 (Donteatmecows) Here I feel the rebellion against past advice and the ability to set...
  May 5th, 2026 20:09
• Goodbye To Love (Kurt Philip Behm) Well Kurt there seems again a link between these verses of a love felt...
  May 5th, 2026 20:08
• The Lost Soul in the Still Silence (Salvia.S) A wonderful write Salvia that is deep in its existential meaning. A fave
  May 5th, 2026 20:03
• The Fugue of Attention (Gray0328) Brilliant! a magnificent write Gray this speaks of a unity of the ultimate...
  May 5th, 2026 20:01
• Ignorance (Raye) Deeply beautiful and most philosophical it speaks to all that have had sad...
  May 5th, 2026 19:58
• Discordant (Scraps~n~Scribbles) I love the line \"the song is beautiful because it must end\" there is...
  May 5th, 2026 19:56
• Psychology (Cindy) This poem holds and expresses the exuberance of youth and childhood. It...
  May 5th, 2026 19:54
• A beauty in disguise (Cerise456) People pleasing can cause one trouble and I hear it in this poem
  May 5th, 2026 19:52
• Within (RSM0812) Here is the deterrence of growth, deprivation, in the midst of plenty. To...
  May 5th, 2026 19:51
• SECOND TO HER (@merci) I hear the difference between passion and attraction and love and value in...
  May 5th, 2026 19:47
• Inkadelic element (Poetic Dan) Dan this starts with the feeling of the Tao then walks through Ancient...
  May 5th, 2026 19:46
• The envelope (Lorenz) Better sealed than not I say. Secrets I don\'t know, ignorance is bliss
  May 5th, 2026 11:14
• learning to linger (Tristan Robert Lange) Don\'t we all need to learn this living amidst stress everyday. Well...
  May 5th, 2026 09:37
• My Tender Feral Beast (Thomas W Case) Lovely Thomas it seems to me that we sometimes find ourselves the real us...
  May 5th, 2026 09:22
• Little Thunder in the Leaves (Matthew R. Callies) A tribute to a breed that I was not familiar with. Nicely written Matthew
  May 5th, 2026 06:48
• Red Star Sunblock Cream (Mutley Ravishes) This is deeper than skin deep and x runs along the land
  May 5th, 2026 06:45
• Elegy for Nuance (GeekSusie) It is in diversity that beauty is seen and this poem speaks to me of...
  May 5th, 2026 06:44
• I still visit you (Maplespal) So hard to forget love. A strong poem my friend
  May 5th, 2026 06:40
• meme-ma (Arqios) Funny how much more keen the senses when emotion is aroused. Nicely...
  May 5th, 2026 06:39
• With Nothing But Love (lyrics) (Teddy.15) A wonderful song of memory of love that has lived its life but remains in...
  May 5th, 2026 06:37
• They love to judge you. (Friendship) There is a feeling of being judged by others and not understood so...
  May 5th, 2026 06:34
• A Heart\'s Beat (Katie B.) A tragic story that is graphic and filled with images evoking empathy for...
  May 5th, 2026 06:29
• This Body (Syd) I feel you with arthritis kicking in, muscle shrinkage, energy loss, aches...
  May 5th, 2026 04:10
• Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man (Neville) Unfortunately seems tis true. Never the less tis also true that out there,...
  May 5th, 2026 04:06
• Marriage Is A Cake You Bake Together (Anthony Hanible) Like a cake it takes ingredients, time and a lot of work with proper...
  May 5th, 2026 04:03
• Last good bye (Joseph M Marion) I certainly hope tis not so. A sad farewell well written in most poetic...
  May 5th, 2026 04:00
• PRECIPICIO / PRECIPICIO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Nicely crafted the interplay of good and evil and the coming of times....
  May 5th, 2026 03:58
• Clear Thoughts (AaliyahC.) Internal peace and happiness are what count. Nicely written
  May 5th, 2026 03:56
• Evening Time Approaches (Cully45) A poem of nature and her call. Nicely written
  May 5th, 2026 03:54
• Iranian choices (EvenwheniLie) A definite political stand in poetic rhyme well done
  May 5th, 2026 03:53
• ETERNAL WINGS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This has a most interesting flow pattern with waves and surges as if a...
  May 5th, 2026 03:50
• Cobra (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) A fabulous haiku that paints its picture well in reality as well as...
  May 5th, 2026 03:48
• The ghost that saves. (David Wakeling) A ghost of love sounds haunting and so it should be. Well written
  May 5th, 2026 03:47
• Mavericks Awaken (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Some are sound sleepers and a trumpet call will not awaken them. Nicely...
  May 5th, 2026 03:45
• Normality Was Back. (Goldfinch60) Snooker, Billiards, pool all capture my interest when played well just as...
  May 5th, 2026 03:43
• दोस्त (Waiting for Silence) Trust and forgiveness are principle parts of this poem related to family...
  May 5th, 2026 03:39
• Night Reflections (Kaz) There is much room for thought in this write. Well done
  May 4th, 2026 21:32
• my imaginary lao tzu quotes #2 (Jon Nakapalau) I love this one and all its implications it rings true. Well done
  May 4th, 2026 21:32
• Fracture Patterns (Haleyalexis) This poem holds elements of being overcome. It has darkness and a sense of...
  May 4th, 2026 21:31