Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- PERHAPS (Bobby O)
Alliteration has always been a favorite of mine. It plays a beautiful...
April 30th, 2023 17:25 - True Teachings (Orchidee)
This one struck a chord. A beautiful chord. Here you have sorted out the...
April 29th, 2023 06:52 - A Wedding. (Doggerel Dave)
Politics, politics, money, votes, power, control, call it what you will,...
April 29th, 2023 06:44 - It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I found this ingenious and novel to present a background for the poem...
April 28th, 2023 08:49 - Blood (2781)
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41 - Suburban Solidarity (Doggerel Dave)
There are always neighbors like this. In Salt Lake City, where my sister...
April 25th, 2023 07:53 - summer breeze (Arqios)
And so is life my dear friend. So poetically said. We like the wind are...
April 25th, 2023 07:19 - Today (2781)
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics...
April 25th, 2023 07:14 - Shinrin-yoku (forest bathing) (Bella Shepard)
A most beautiful and magic image painted in words.
April 24th, 2023 16:57 - The Heartbeat Of The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
I see love as a far greater force than what any dictionary would describe...
April 24th, 2023 06:22 - Written (Rhmn_7)
A great play on words to send a strong message. After writing poetry for a...
April 22nd, 2023 16:27 - Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave)
Truth in advertising. Buyer beware is the moto. This one made me smile and...
April 22nd, 2023 07:19 - I Have A Dream. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful dream indeed. I too, like John Lennon can only \"Imagine\"...
April 22nd, 2023 07:12 - Poets Die, Poems Don\'t (Rocky Lagou)
I am grateful for your comments about the poem, they give it more context....
April 21st, 2023 09:31 - lift (Arqios)
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS...
April 21st, 2023 08:10 - Sorry I Am Alive. (Goldfinch60)
As is usually the case, the problem is being shifted to distract from what...
April 20th, 2023 05:37 - Restoring Requests (Orchidee)
Another nice write Orchidee. Although not religious I loved the lines:...
April 19th, 2023 13:39 - A Taste of Tears (Bella Shepard)
A touching write of sensitivity and care. A tribute to boundaries and...
April 19th, 2023 12:11 - Finale (Doggerel Dave)
I have also pondered on all these possibilities and am not religious but...
April 19th, 2023 12:08 - hearticulate (Arqios)
They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this...
April 19th, 2023 08:30 - CORRECTION (Bobby O)
A great message to be true to one\'s self. Nicely said.
April 19th, 2023 07:21 - Acsetic (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you for your welcome review and most kind comment
April 19th, 2023 07:19 - Dear Garden of Eden (Rocky Lagou)
Each line refers back to Eden or some aspect of it. Each leaves me with a...
April 17th, 2023 19:38 - come and get it (Arqios)
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture...
April 17th, 2023 08:49 - Knowledge And Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
True Andy, the words may be the right notes but the tempo makes all the...
April 16th, 2023 06:28 - Mozart In The Morning (Bella Shepard)
The god of music celebrated in this piece. how excelent to choose the...
April 16th, 2023 06:25 - Luminous Light (Orchidee)
Don\'t know is it is because he is near but never had any fear of night. A...
April 16th, 2023 06:18 - Kernou (Arqios)
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town...
April 16th, 2023 06:09 - Sheila. (Goldfinch60)
A great story and in a sense parable. Times change, how one small thing...
April 14th, 2023 08:04 - Peanut Butter (Sophin)
\"and the old ghosts of the souls
that i used to know still haunt me
it...
April 13th, 2023 12:49 - seasonal diabetes (Arqios)
This one left me thinking and that is dangerous. I often see things that...
April 13th, 2023 12:39 - Scheme (2781)
True it is control is the issue silver and gold are the tools.
April 11th, 2023 09:37 - Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave)
What a great metaphor Dave. It always seems that I\'m stepping in it....
April 10th, 2023 12:29 - If I be remembered let it be: Kindness that names me (L. B. Mek)
L.B. some time ago you wrote that you were thinking the same thought I...
April 10th, 2023 08:33 - Easter Expressions (Orchidee)
A fine write and very timely too. It tells the story well and I only wish...
April 9th, 2023 14:45 - Poets Die, Poems Don\'t (Rocky Lagou)
A poem easily identified with. The last stanza and particularly the last...
April 9th, 2023 09:55 - Mr Bellmeister catches the bus. (David Wakeling)
Portrays social distancing present in modern day society and a sense of...
April 9th, 2023 06:25 - Shepherd Sufferings (Orchidee)
Peaceful and very reassuring, if only others would heed the words to not...
April 5th, 2023 09:32 - The voice (2781)
So true. \"Loose lips sink ships\" A word said can not be retracted so be...
April 5th, 2023 09:27 - A Poem About Spring (MysteryGhost)
A great pairing of elements and the metaphor of the children\'s last...
April 5th, 2023 09:23 - full stop (Arqios)
Been there, done that. That is to say in literal traffic and also...
April 5th, 2023 09:18 - Birdsong (Bella Shepard)
Nature reflected in the songs of birds helps erase my insanity. It might...
April 3rd, 2023 18:05 - Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave)
Until the system of polotics changes this will always be true. Polititions...
April 3rd, 2023 06:34 - The persistent will (Nature)
Never give up. At the same time look to your expectations and be sure that...
April 1st, 2023 11:59 - My System (Doggerel Dave)
My oh my! Is it paranoia or am I not spending enough time reading? I...
March 31st, 2023 06:28 - Pamela Strong and the Lemon Meringue Pie. (David Wakeling)
Very home like and domestic.
March 30th, 2023 17:29 - Lonely (Sorenbarrett)
This applies to all no one has anyone outside of themself. Everyone else...
March 30th, 2023 17:26 - Ooh Nina.... (Doggerel Dave)
This provokes curiosity and curiosity killed the cat. But then...
March 29th, 2023 14:44 - awkward footfalls (Arqios)
Traditionally power comes from on high. Many tremble at hidden power...
March 28th, 2023 18:39 - Dear Mrs. Christie (Bella Shepard)
Dear Bella this fits for me as well although I substituted the tales of...
March 28th, 2023 18:29 - Restoration In Returning (Orchidee)
Forgiveness is so important. This piece could be easily mistaken for...
March 21st, 2023 10:40 - Home (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks orchidee, I appreciate the review and comment
March 21st, 2023 10:37 - exist-inguished crises (Arqios)
At first sight dismal, but no! I think not. Plundered and pecked to fall...
March 21st, 2023 10:09 - skyward (Arqios)
Loved this short piece. Hope you are not in this state. It\'s metaphor is...
March 21st, 2023 10:02 - Notice of absence (Doggerel Dave)
Walking the beaches of south Brazil I have seen penguins but usually just...
March 20th, 2023 14:19 - American Poop System (Ok Waleed)
An interesting choice of topic. Waste disposal has become a luxury issue...
March 19th, 2023 11:01 - Dear Mama (L. B. Mek)
Motherly love us men have a hard time understanding or appreciating. Too...
March 17th, 2023 09:46 - Willing Witnesses (Orchidee)
orchidee, your last line struck hard \"True gospel spread, no lies\" This...
March 15th, 2023 06:28 - It\'s spiritual (2781)
A greater power than we surely there must be.
March 15th, 2023 06:20 - The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave)
This was a great read. It read like a book, was short as an article,...
March 15th, 2023 06:16 - The Burden of Poets (Ok Waleed)
The only shame is if one is trying to keep these things a secret.
March 15th, 2023 05:56 - Free Exchange (Doggerel Dave)
There is no truth it changes each day
If only people would this...
March 13th, 2023 11:02 - The Rhyme of Time (Thinkerbell)
A great thought with clever use of images and a different way to look at...
March 11th, 2023 06:23 - Flows. (Doggerel Dave)
If not the government, the church, private entrepreneurs (present day...
March 11th, 2023 06:20 - The spot on the wall (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Dave the thought had passed my mind. Rented a room to a church once...
March 11th, 2023 06:12 - Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much Bella for the read and wonderful comments. Yes we all...
March 9th, 2023 17:02 - A Necessary Evil (Bella Shepard)
How relatable is that. And at the same time how metaphorical. How much...
March 9th, 2023 10:04 - Today (2781)
That was a good comic relief and well done too.
March 9th, 2023 09:59 - Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett)
So true L.B. this is why I always look forward to your remarks. You have...
March 8th, 2023 05:53 - Helpful Hope (Orchidee)
Orchidee your second and fourth stanzas really hit me. This was a...
March 5th, 2023 07:38 - Inscription Plus... (Doggerel Dave)
This was a gem that I was not aware of. So true, we did not ask to come...
March 5th, 2023 07:31 - Reflections (Sorenbarrett)
Only pieces and not the best ones either. Thanks for the read orchidee.
March 3rd, 2023 10:54 - no longer mine (Arqios)
So true by the time we think of it, it is already in the past. A Haiku?
March 3rd, 2023 08:39 - Gutted Like A Fish (Christina8)
Such a plea of pain and anguish. Gutted is vivid and brutal. We all are...
March 3rd, 2023 08:32 - Not another one….. (Doggerel Dave)
Passion is the driving force not love and the need to feel loved and...
March 3rd, 2023 07:09 - Dancing With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
All of life is a dance. Those that don\'t dance can not find the joy....
March 3rd, 2023 07:04 - Indifferent Nature (Fay Slimm.)
Reflections of the meaning of life and its cycle. Our vision is too short...
March 3rd, 2023 06:28 - Lasting Love (Orchidee)
He certainly must have a great deal of patience (except for some like...
March 3rd, 2023 06:22 - Almost Without Purpose (Neville)
So much philosophy in this write. Yes, almost is the key word. It is from...
March 3rd, 2023 06:18 - My Daily Torment (Christina8)
Such a perfect metaphor, having lived in the ice and cold I can feel it. I...
March 1st, 2023 07:36 - Respect Deserved. (Goldfinch60)
Here here, such a great message. Maybe that is why it has shrunk. Looking...
March 1st, 2023 07:31 - Troll. (Doggerel Dave)
Trolls they seem like they have multiplied these days. I\'m glad that I\'m...
March 1st, 2023 07:27 - Daniel (2781)
Very biblical, hopeful and bright. What you believe becomes true.
March 1st, 2023 07:21 - Old Joe Finds His Place. (Doggerel Dave)
One should always know when to hole their tongue. Sometimes we learn the...
February 27th, 2023 05:42 - Joseph and the last orange (David Wakeling)
Misunderstood intentions, over reaction, exageration all great ways of...
February 27th, 2023 05:30 - The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60)
This has happened so many times, even when I write down the idea...
February 26th, 2023 05:04 - Icy Tundra (Christina8)
I grew up in the ice and snow and could feel it in the poem. I didn\'t...
February 25th, 2023 10:29 - The Kimono (Madam Butterfly not here). (Doggerel Dave)
Dave this one led me in several directions. I guess in all the smoke I...
February 25th, 2023 06:04 - When Jannis sang the blues (Sorenbarrett)
Good thing you weren\'t that is a club you wouldn\'t want to join. Thanks...
February 25th, 2023 05:45 - Circle Of Life (Bella Shepard)
Bella this is a fav The idea is so similar to what I feel. Infinite...
February 23rd, 2023 13:28 - CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS (Doggerel Dave)
I liked this one Dave. I didn\'t see it comming. Clever though. I guess it...
February 22nd, 2023 17:56 - Cloudy Coffee Day. (Goldfinch60)
At first read this one was puzzling, however, on second read it was...
February 22nd, 2023 05:28 - Blow Wind (Bella Shepard)
Bella this is beautiful and strikes deep in the soul for the inner voice...
February 19th, 2023 15:59 - A word (2781)
One word can make all the difference. Funny how a single word can lead to...
February 19th, 2023 09:09 - Use Love to Muse, Hearts be Tied by Love-Tide (Mvvenkataraman)
Beautiful goals and admonishments to a world that has more often neglected...
February 19th, 2023 09:06 - Simple Equation…. (Doggerel Dave)
Dave the rich would say it\'s merely natural selection or survival of the...
February 19th, 2023 08:58 - Good Cop Bad Cop (2781)
Hard to know what to believe these days, whether it comes from one side or...
February 17th, 2023 09:34 - Love: Connate (L. B. Mek)
L.B. A very classical touch to this poem on such a widely spoken topic....
February 17th, 2023 06:08 - Love so Lovely (Fay Slimm.)
I loved the format of this poem and how the modification of the adjective...
February 17th, 2023 06:02 - The Library of Time (Bella Shepard)
What a unique and wonderful way of putting this. Life is on borrowed time...
February 16th, 2023 17:19
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