Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Snowdrops (Kaz) A lovely reminder of what is to come. Seasonal and nicely done
  November 27th, 2025 08:43
• There I will be (Poetaldo) Such a temporal poem. Yes indeed life is terminal and good that it is so...
  November 27th, 2025 07:21
• bluebird dream (Jim56) Nature at its best. Beautiful in color poem, dream and bird. Nicely...
  November 27th, 2025 07:20
• Pass the Turkey, Praise the Lord! (Tristan Robert Lange) A great satire indeed on a day of satire but then the irony is that it has...
  November 27th, 2025 07:10
• A Lofty Kiss (Katie B.) A poem and love proclamation. So well rhymed and with good meter and flow...
  November 27th, 2025 06:43
• Change (Friendship) I love the shift from gratitude for the past to the focus on determination...
  November 27th, 2025 06:32
• ink on the Savannah (Arqios) My mind wanders through the grass. Hyena it seems to laugh but fierce and...
  November 27th, 2025 06:26
• Taxation of Credulity (Rebellion_in_sanity) I hold the same sentiments and am wholly behind you on this one. if I...
  November 27th, 2025 04:42
• upstairs (PerditaRose) I love this senryu that is not only sensuous and seductive but most...
  November 27th, 2025 04:31
• acceptance (or not) (MatPie) Graphic language about addiction and it takes many forms. Some prefer...
  November 27th, 2025 04:29
• Deep In My Emotions (Ajon4wheels) This seems a poem of young love or should I say infatuation where passion...
  November 27th, 2025 04:26
• On Dreams (Markashley1961) There are those vague thoughts and feelings that can not be put into words...
  November 27th, 2025 04:23
• SNAPSHOT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This sounds like a rough part of town. Yet in metaphor we all steal and...
  November 27th, 2025 04:20
• Why Is Nobody Angry? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I was angry and in my anger was rebellious but found it diluted by the...
  November 27th, 2025 04:17
• Purple Diary (Aman 12) A poem of recorded private history in the form of a diary. I love the line...
  November 27th, 2025 04:14
• Part of my story. (Andrew Deaton) Circles in this poem whether life or relationships all things go in...
  November 27th, 2025 04:09
• I\'m \'orrible! (Orchidee) Always knew you were kind Orchi but double portions exceeds even your...
  November 27th, 2025 04:04
• Types Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Andy I have always liked the way you word your taste in music. It is not...
  November 27th, 2025 04:00
• Spiritually Transmitted Demon (AmbitiousC) A sad poem of joy suppressed, happiness stolen, love taken. It is brutal,...
  November 27th, 2025 03:56
• Living In Fear (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt this is a personal favorite of mine and is so true. Your wording of...
  November 27th, 2025 03:51
• I\'D RATHER BE... (David Welch) Upon reading this the cadence and content brought to mind the song El...
  November 27th, 2025 03:48
• Dirty Postcards (Kevin Hulme) I just knew that they were going to be pictures of mud or something like...
  November 26th, 2025 20:50
• Thankful baby 🦃 (Ms.divine) Now there is no pulling punches with this one it is direct and to the...
  November 26th, 2025 20:45
• Love is the way of life. (Caitlyn Nicholson) Love in its aspects in this poem. Clever and nicely written
  November 26th, 2025 20:08
• My Actions (NinjaGirl) A metaphor of great power, guilt and unintended consequences. Lovely
  November 26th, 2025 19:29
• Sour capuccino (Amethyste) Now here is a poem with a dubious meaning. To put to sleep could mean...
  November 26th, 2025 17:51
• Afterwards (Pete the poet) This poem gives greater meaning the term filthy lucre. A writing of advice...
  November 26th, 2025 17:50
•  Before Your Throne, I Humbly Kneel (Joseph M Marion) A most interesting view of the giver and relationship to them. Nicely...
  November 26th, 2025 15:18
• Powerful ... 𝒯ℴ𝒹𝒶𝓎, 𝓉ℴ𝒹𝒶𝓎 𝒾𝓈... Powerful (Keyara S Trotman) A beautiful affirmation nicely stated. Well done
  November 26th, 2025 14:11
• The temple merchants (Lorenz) Love this write Lorenz I heard that Lincoln stepped on ants not caring...
  November 26th, 2025 13:46
• The Last Night (Firefall) A beautiful picture well written in a most poetic manner
  November 26th, 2025 13:41
• Don\'t be snood dee, but wattle you think about Thanksgiving gobbledygook? (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Bib box stores may be like big box marketing where the box gets bigger and...
  November 26th, 2025 13:40
• The Immeasurable Want {Lust} (Friendship) A wonderful expose on the word that puts Websters to shame. I love the way...
  November 26th, 2025 13:37
• In the Faraway Land (Cellinic) A fanciful write that is most romantic and wistful. A lovely write
  November 26th, 2025 10:57
• the high school labyrinth (Gray0328) Ending of class for the day or holidays it shows the scuffle and clatter...
  November 26th, 2025 10:55
• Thus Ends the Feast (Matthew R. Callies) Ah yes set to good rhyme and meter the clean up of the feast. I always...
  November 26th, 2025 10:52
• THE MYCELIAL EPIC OF “PLEASE DON’T STEP ON MY FACE” (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Being open minded whether scientific, religious, or an artist is a most...
  November 26th, 2025 10:15
• Untitled {21} (Niko Papadatos) Very nice I can feel this poem and identify with spirit in all. Lovely
  November 26th, 2025 10:13
• The Last Ring on the Tracks (EchoCanvas) It is not only the shock factor but the added follow up of the phone...
  November 26th, 2025 10:11
• Black Floyd (Tristan Robert Lange) Love Pink Floyd and Black Floyd echoes so many memories. Nicely worded...
  November 26th, 2025 09:20
• ORGASM O (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) This poem is quite sensual, erotic, sexual and animalistic. Well done...
  November 26th, 2025 09:17
• Thanksgiving (Koby) Fond memories awaken on special days and in this poem one is remembered on...
  November 26th, 2025 08:51
• Shutdown (PerditaRose) I have been there and it always turns around. Stick with it would miss...
  November 26th, 2025 08:20
• autumn scene (Jim56) Picturesque and seasonal it speaks of nature\'s beauty
  November 26th, 2025 08:19
• Love thy will. (Andrew Deaton) So well worded it calls out to the reader. Its antithesis lies in Alister...
  November 26th, 2025 06:27
• Predawn (Katie B.) This poem is truly beautiful in its simplicity and peaceful feeling....
  November 26th, 2025 06:23
• Dear Geologist, identify me (Narayan Gadagkar) Are we not all rocks laid down by from what we were born and the dust and...
  November 26th, 2025 06:21
• Small Duststorm (Jjudaharts) Dance of dust nature\'s ballet or disco depending upon its force. Lovely...
  November 26th, 2025 06:18
• Ambiguous (2781) I was always advised to eat before a party or even going out to eat so as...
  November 26th, 2025 06:17
• Ashes To Ashes (Ajon4wheels) Like a fire that warms love can be destructive when out of control. And...
  November 26th, 2025 06:15
• forever keep silent (Arqios) Well Cryptic this one is cryptic. The feeling is there but not the...
  November 26th, 2025 06:12
• Love Smoke (Paul Bell) Intended or not I read between the lines here. The things in life that are...
  November 26th, 2025 06:02
• Kraas on Kraas (Poetaldo) A cycle of life explained in this poem where we live in a world of...
  November 26th, 2025 05:05
• The Fastest Man Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A poem straight from the comics adventure filled it runs right on by. A...
  November 26th, 2025 05:03
• CRUEL DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem speaks in a wistful manner with a melancholic voice of a longing...
  November 26th, 2025 05:02
• Insomnia (Anthony Hanible) This poem describes well the experience of insomnia and its frustrations....
  November 26th, 2025 04:59
• EAR (Drniran) This poem contains a most interesting answer response pattern and seems to...
  November 26th, 2025 04:58
• A Sinful Love (The Velvet) Spoken of as if a drug it holds the same addiction. Nicely written...
  November 26th, 2025 04:56
• Pistol pop (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem has the ring of gangster rap to it. It seems to be talking about...
  November 26th, 2025 04:53
• Whatever New Thing (Vipassana) What an interesting vision it would be to see our part in the cycle of...
  November 26th, 2025 04:51
• Fearing God (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This makes sense in regard to the author\'s note but upon first read it...
  November 26th, 2025 04:49
• Everyday grinding (Funmiwrites) I get the gist and feel. Nicely done
  November 26th, 2025 04:45
• Gentle Spirit (RSM0812) A beautiful sonnet of love. Very nicely written with great images, meter...
  November 26th, 2025 04:42
• You have to break the cycle first. (Caitlyn Nicholson) Welcome to MPS. Here is a poem of cycles. Cycles are made so as to keep a...
  November 26th, 2025 04:40
• Sharks (Aman 12) The metaphor is a great one that speaks loudly. The author\'s note was...
  November 26th, 2025 04:36
• The Living And The Lifeless (Orchidee) This one a hymn and poem of proclamation it rings out in rhyme. Very...
  November 26th, 2025 04:28
• separation song (Devender Kumar) A sad senryu that is most interesting because of the juxtaposition of the...
  November 26th, 2025 04:25
• Six O\'clock Each Morning. (Goldfinch60) A good read my friend that sounds fresh and bright. A lovely way to start...
  November 26th, 2025 04:23
• Indigo Days (Ssandell) We never know what we have until we loose it. Nicely written this poem...
  November 25th, 2025 19:51
• THE MEMORY OF GLENORE (David Welch) Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with...
  November 25th, 2025 19:49
• Reasoning (Ja'Quan Shepard) A poem with a rap meter to the rhyme. Nicely done
  November 25th, 2025 19:44
• In Anguished Adoration (Spencer Wilhelm) Although this may be taken as a son talking to their literal father it...
  November 25th, 2025 17:09
• Think In Shapes (Pete the poet) Geometry in poetry Euclid would be proud. A most unique poem that combines...
  November 25th, 2025 17:07
• A Magnificent Day (Teddy.15) Teddy I love this one. It is not only descriptive and full of nature but...
  November 25th, 2025 17:04
• The Well (John Lee) Such a great metaphor here and followed through so poetically it rings...
  November 25th, 2025 17:01
• Words undone (Jaryyn) What an existential poem of a journey taken. A lovely write
  November 25th, 2025 15:47
• Such with curriculum (Shenielyn pacaldo) An ode to teaching and education in general. Well written
  November 25th, 2025 15:42
• The madman\'s journey (Lorenz) Well said Lorenz. Madness is denoted by those that call themselves sane...
  November 25th, 2025 14:50
• Mac n cheese sounds (Ms.divine) A most sexual, sensual, erotic poem
  November 25th, 2025 14:38
• Happy Birthday, Melissa (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A beautiful birthday wish in verse and rhyme nicely done
  November 25th, 2025 13:21
• Sweet cherry (Funmiwrites) Passion in a seductive, sensual, erotic, sexual set of verse.
  November 25th, 2025 13:20
• Memory (Markashley1961) memories bring nostalgia and different memories bring pain better not to...
  November 25th, 2025 13:18
• Make A Choice (Tkatie118) A journey through space and time a life lived and a dream dreamed. Well...
  November 25th, 2025 13:16
• the last lines of life (Devender Kumar) A great senryu here Kumar well done
  November 25th, 2025 13:11
• The Milkman\'s Passing (Gray0328) Very poetic the lines of this poem Gray. Your writing has definitely grown...
  November 25th, 2025 13:10
• Pass The Turkey You S.O.B. (Kurt Philip Behm) Time have gotten rougher and people more ugly in their responses. Another...
  November 25th, 2025 11:36
• Amply funneling kickstarting politesse undergirds zyzygy (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) This poem takes one through many thoughts and it starts off with being...
  November 25th, 2025 11:35
• Untitled {20} (Niko Papadatos) There is a feel of being so small in this write with the fronds being...
  November 25th, 2025 11:33
• Sometimes by Tamara Nesterovich (Ksey_Gan) A wait can turn the grey to bright and beautiful. Nicely written
  November 25th, 2025 11:31
• 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔖𝔢𝔢 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱 𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔐𝔶 𝔏𝔦𝔣𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) here I hear a poem of demur, caution, fear of discovery and the hiding of...
  November 25th, 2025 11:30
• THE CONVICT (SJSangeetha) The cat holds different meanings in different cultures. What was the wish?...
  November 25th, 2025 11:27
• LOST (Freedom4) The introjection of her being me in the past raises questions of who is...
  November 25th, 2025 11:25
• Villanelle for a Plastic Oracle (Matthew R. Callies) I remember as a child having one and it seemed that the answers were never...
  November 25th, 2025 10:22
• some certain uncertainty (Corian Baek) A great poem of sensitivity and trying to grow stronger. The way I know to...
  November 25th, 2025 10:18
• PTSD (Laguna) The frozen nature of emotional trauma is spoken in this poem. Nicely said...
  November 25th, 2025 09:01
• Young love is silly (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected...
  November 25th, 2025 09:00
• Saint Expertise (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan this poem seems to have been written with ease like a gentle...
  November 25th, 2025 08:56
• i heard a robin sing (Jim56) Another lovely poem of nature Jim. Nicely written
  November 25th, 2025 08:52
• SIGNALS / Señales (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos this is a great poem describing that feeling of sliding away that...
  November 25th, 2025 08:50
• Watching stupidity (Maplespal) The message is clear in this poem of changes that have taken place and how...
  November 25th, 2025 08:48