Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- robin in my garden (Jim56)
Another wonderful nature poem Jim very nice.
November 19th, 2025 08:17 - Butter storms (Aman 12)
Such a good write. A easily identifiable life that serves as a metaphor...
November 19th, 2025 08:16 - Death callouses aimless tries (Cirawrites01)
Death but the lack of breath, a heart stopped, a body swapped, too much...
November 19th, 2025 08:13 - To the core. (Andrew Deaton)
A wonderful poem. How strong is a rock? Does it strike back? It without...
November 19th, 2025 08:05 - the road ahead (Arqios)
I have someone I know that always says never go backward only forward. He...
November 19th, 2025 08:02 - THE WIDOWER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
How difficult to adapt to someone missed, how to fill the hours of the...
November 19th, 2025 05:04 - We are the innovator\'s (Aa Harvey)
A poem of alliteration galore, enough to fill the belly of any desiring...
November 19th, 2025 05:02 - Encouraging Exhortation (Orchidee)
Some of these old testament ones are head scratchers for me since I must...
November 19th, 2025 04:58 - it didn\'t take long (Carpe4diem)
A tender love poem that comes as a revelation of inner disrobing of...
November 19th, 2025 03:41 - Gimmick (Ja'Quan Shepard)
Colloquial in nature it reveals the author in street poetry. A budding...
November 19th, 2025 03:36 - The world a distant hum (Kayla Jackson)
This poem calls to the reader from the shadows. It speaks softly and...
November 19th, 2025 03:34 - Excerpts from \"The Coffee Machine\" (DeadRose)
Loosing one\'s focus from the beauty around us leaves us in a routine and...
November 19th, 2025 03:32 - ๐ฒ๐ถ๐๐ธ๐ฝ ๐๐ฝ๐พ๐... (Keyara S Trotman)
A power outage now days is a disaster but one could make it into a...
November 19th, 2025 03:28 - Sonnet On The Choral. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful sonnet that speaks to the power of music and how it can heal....
November 19th, 2025 03:25 - Thoughts of Spring (PerditaRose)
A nicely done poem of winter\'s approach and the changing of the season....
November 18th, 2025 20:46 - C\'est la vie (Poetaldo)
A poem of trying to do things right and giving credit to God. Nicely...
November 18th, 2025 19:49 - Desolate Echoes (El Gato)
A poem that identifies with rear and yet anxiety is a great motivator and...
November 18th, 2025 19:47 - ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE (David Welch)
Moral of the story never judge a book by its cover and there are more than...
November 18th, 2025 19:45 - Chef-Shocked (Mutley Ravishes)
One never knows what to believe now days and this poem seems to reinforce...
November 18th, 2025 19:41 - Sacrificing warmth (Maplespal)
This poem speaks with nostalgia of the past and well said as well. It...
November 18th, 2025 19:40 - Headache (Violet_Writes)
November 18th, 2025 19:39 - Headache (Violet_Writes)
A most interesting poem of faults and pains suffered. I have to ask myself...
November 18th, 2025 19:39 - Forever Yours (Neil Higgins)
Most poetic this declaration of love and accompanying natural beauty. Well...
November 18th, 2025 19:36 - a cruel love (Applecherry)
This poem expresses a strong feeling of attachment and no desire for...
November 18th, 2025 19:34 - Dawning of the Day (Pete the poet)
Quite the nocturnal journey in this poem. A dream of symbols and images....
November 18th, 2025 16:56 - Restitution and reinstatement of EBT funds a dogsend (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
What a wonderful world it is indeed. A poem that leads to this conclusion....
November 18th, 2025 15:09 - Two shaggers (Velvet.Riot)
A poetic plea for love and an offer. Nicely made
November 18th, 2025 14:27 - Whilst We Are Living (Paul Gerard Reed)
Such a true statement that we are only afraid while we are living. Nicely...
November 18th, 2025 14:24 - Toxic Persistence (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
Most all things start small and here in this treaties of poetic line it...
November 18th, 2025 13:16 - Untitled {14} (Niko Papadatos)
The puppeteer does not need to leave his place he has strings to do his...
November 18th, 2025 13:09 - The man (Ja'Quan Shepard)
A poem of relationship not working and the fallout from it. Well said
November 18th, 2025 13:08 - My Wings of Affection (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to a love that can\'t be. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 12:06 - Symbiotic Fratricide (Kurt Philip Behm)
Now Kurt this one was so clever I had to give it a fave. Well done
November 18th, 2025 12:05 - I Started Talking to God (Aziza S)
A very personal poem of belief and love. Nicely done.
November 18th, 2025 11:25 - Brain Farts and Other Commonalities (Matthew R. Callies)
Wonderfully written this poem hits the fun points and amusing...
November 18th, 2025 11:23 - glory of morning (Devender Kumar)
A great short that displays nature in her glory
November 18th, 2025 11:12 - My Angel (RSM0812)
An angelic poem of angels. Nicely written
November 18th, 2025 11:11 - This is a Mess (Thomas W Case)
A most interesting poem with a series of vivid images well done Thomas
November 18th, 2025 11:05 - Elegy of the self (Nayak)
Dark and sad it offers redemption at the end but with no trace. A most...
November 18th, 2025 09:42 - dreamer (Jim56)
Dreams we all have and need. A lovely poem that reflects what many wish...
November 18th, 2025 07:35 - The Odds (Katie B.)
A lovely message so well said. Everything is relative and often the dream...
November 18th, 2025 07:34 - Prophet\'s Prayer (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan again the visual drop of precipice and the falling feeling of...
November 18th, 2025 07:30 - Growing Pains (Sebastian.)
Emotions and principally love and hate come in waves and tides the cycle...
November 18th, 2025 05:52 - Kybalion (Andrew Deaton)
A good deal of thought went into this poem. It holds and broadcasts a...
November 18th, 2025 05:44 - WORLD WAR ONE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Strong images evoke a visceral feel to this poem. Nicely written
November 18th, 2025 04:49 - Mitchell: Man, Lover (Edited version) (Tkatie118)
The introduction of wordplay in this poem was most creative the...
November 18th, 2025 04:47 - You Got To Believe (Jjudaharts)
A haunting poem that is brief but powerful and speaks to what hope is all...
November 18th, 2025 03:45 - Learning To Set Me Free (Kman Pumpkin King28)
This poem speaks of shutting off the pain of emotions and the return of...
November 18th, 2025 03:44 - Crimson desert (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
You produce haiku after haiku a specialist and good for you. This one is...
November 18th, 2025 03:38 - Victory Invitations: Your Go-To Place for Stunning Wedding Invitation Cards (Victory Invitations)
Adds on a poetry site, what next? I guess everybody needs to make a buck
November 18th, 2025 03:36 - The Book Of Shaun Matthew (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
We all have strong feelings about things that others disregard. Diversity...
November 18th, 2025 03:33 - The Fog and the Fever (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
Feelings at times so contrary to reality and possibility yet resilient to...
November 18th, 2025 03:30 - A Walk On The Moors (Goldfinch60)
Such a walk can free the thoughts and emotions, nature is a wonderful...
November 18th, 2025 03:28 - Maybe you also got a check, yes mate? (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A taste of the old scam sandwich. Take a bite and taste the bitterness. A...
November 17th, 2025 20:58 - For a song (Ja'Quan Shepard)
Got the rhyme and the beat but my ignorance took away the meat. I got the...
November 17th, 2025 20:55 - Born Helper or hinderer (EvenwheniLie)
The awesome spectacle of being human and mere existence. The very being of...
November 17th, 2025 20:53 - UNCLE TOM (David Welch)
A great social commentary in the story of a man. Nicely written in a...
November 17th, 2025 20:50 - A Rose (RSM0812)
A beautiful picture painted in this poem with great metaphor as well....
November 17th, 2025 20:47 - That moment we dread (Maplespal)
A poem that seems a premonition. The question is who is being referred to....
November 17th, 2025 18:07 - That\'s not me. (ViolenceEndeavour)
A poem stating not only that the author is different that others but that...
November 17th, 2025 16:05 - Presence (FrasMac)
Such a great image the frost. The continuation of this image through that...
November 17th, 2025 15:29 - Quiet Ache (Rosey)
Distraction is often the best way to keep negative thoughts out of mind. A...
November 17th, 2025 14:13 - Kingmaker (Ladywithaquill)
Whether relating to a marital relationship or a country with people it...
November 17th, 2025 14:10 - Washed Ashore (Gewar)
A poem that tells us that despite as bad as it gets things can get better....
November 17th, 2025 14:07 - Elixir (Carter M. Flynn)
New experiences have to be lived not thought. Well done
November 17th, 2025 13:01 - \'Seasons Go Round ...\' (Kurt Philip Behm)
A so it would be with Buddha observe, do not judge just watch.
November 17th, 2025 12:59 - A Unclear Life (Kainat Noor)
Cryptically written it walks through social facades and gives the reader...
November 17th, 2025 12:58 - The running girl (Lorenz)
Fantasies fly reality crawls on the ground and buries itself in the sand....
November 17th, 2025 12:53 - when all else fails, try following directions (Gray0328)
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often...
November 17th, 2025 11:39 - Four Score and Seven Years Ago Our Fathers Brought Forth on This Continent, a New Nation, Conceived in Liberty, and Dedicated to the Proposition That All Men Are Created Equal (Matthew R. Callies)
Patriotic and bold it speaks with power. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 11:37 - The Gravity of Unconcern: A Whimsical Trilogy (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
The flirt game in print. I particularly loved the first part of this poem...
November 17th, 2025 11:35 - wounds of the zephyr (Devender Kumar)
This senryu has a wonderful last line that makes it a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:28 - Shame (Sebastian.)
What a marvelous blend of rhyme schemes near rhyme and meter. In many ways...
November 17th, 2025 11:27 - Untitled {13} (Niko Papadatos)
A great thought the scales of love. If there were such scales they would...
November 17th, 2025 11:24 - just let me write poetry (DeadRose)
Clever blending of numbers and the poem. A good write of expectations of...
November 17th, 2025 11:22 - moonlight walk (Jim56)
Such a beautiful scene you created Jim. I have been there and feel it....
November 17th, 2025 11:19 - Jingle Bells (Aman 12)
Funny how tradition melts into plastic and candles become LED lights....
November 17th, 2025 11:18 - Thorns (Meera Mere)
Truth in this short piece and a prickly truth at that. Well written it...
November 17th, 2025 11:14 - Grace Still Remains (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan this sounds like the passage from an old spell book, or maybe a...
November 17th, 2025 11:12 - Patience (William Hromada)
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand...
November 17th, 2025 11:09 - BETWEEN CORDS / ENTRE CORDELES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Bustillos I prefer that first English translation in that it has more raw...
November 17th, 2025 11:02 - Thankful Thoughts (Orchidee)
And so Solomon did build it only to have it destroyed and have to be...
November 17th, 2025 10:56 - hello poetry (Arqios)
Poetic thoughts put to ink. I find may a poem breaks in through a closed...
November 17th, 2025 10:53 - Heart Felt (Brian Taylor)
This poem is a terrifying image of coming close to death and feeling it as...
November 17th, 2025 04:52 - Fire among the water (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A beautiful haiku of sunset or sunrise on the water. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 03:43 - LITTLE BOY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Whether by death or abandonment the loss of a father figure is sad for the...
November 17th, 2025 03:42 - ๐จShedding light on light (Ms.divine)
A message directly sent in few words. In metaphor a clear understanding....
November 17th, 2025 03:40 - Who is you (Florin Dragoศ Minculescu)
One often asks that question of who and in this poem it becomes a mirror...
November 17th, 2025 03:38 - Faith and Hope (James Michael)
A poem of belief and of faith from which grows a sense of religiosity....
November 17th, 2025 03:36 - The Merger (E.J. Waling)
The process of amalgamation, the mixing and merging of all things to unify...
November 17th, 2025 03:35 - A Renewed Prescence (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read with a blend of religion, sci-fi and the use of metaphor in...
November 17th, 2025 03:31 - ODD AND ODDER (5) (Michael Edwards)
Now there is a rhyme that made me feel young again. Such words told by the...
November 17th, 2025 03:28 - Happy Birthday Dad. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful tribute Andy. Mine too passed many years ago and would have...
November 17th, 2025 03:26 - ๐๐ซ๐ก ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฑ\'๐ฐ ๐๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐๐๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ฑ โ๐ฑ (Keyara S Trotman)
Thoughts caught between what we think and what we say. Often it is not...
November 17th, 2025 03:22 - A Light has Travelled (Kevin Hulme)
A poem of memories cast in light and distance. Reflections of past...
November 17th, 2025 03:19 - To Marlene Dietrich by Alexander Vertinsky (Ksey_Gan)
A poem of parting and leaving. In its sadness there is little sadness....
November 16th, 2025 20:20 - Sheherazade (Eugene S.)
A poem that at first glance seems surreal and with most interesting...
November 16th, 2025 20:17 - My fault, all of it (Hadley)
The reiteration of my fault reinforces the feeling in this poem. It is an...
November 16th, 2025 20:14 - Heart Felt (Brian Taylor)
Welcome to MPS a poem with such vivid imagery and with a continuing flow...
November 16th, 2025 20:11 - I COULD\'VE SWORN.. ONLY I (Michaelm)
The line the midnight hourglass was always empty is a good one provoking...
November 16th, 2025 20:08
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