Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Till The Music Stops (Kurt Philip Behm) Live life to the fullest, opportunity only comes once. Carpe diem
  April 12th, 2025 12:46
• Screaming (Jonathan Merida) Letting go is such a difficult process when one feels attached. Addictions...
  April 12th, 2025 12:45
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) Very appropriate but more this one sings out in majesty and glory. A most...
  April 12th, 2025 11:45
• Just Me, and All My Failing (Dev Parth) A brave poem that opens up one\'s soul and lays bare in raw honesty for...
  April 12th, 2025 10:39
• I am to suffe (Devender Kumar) A poem of pain and suffering. A sad and hurtful read
  April 12th, 2025 10:34
• the language of hands (Gray0328) Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a...
  April 12th, 2025 10:32
• The Call (Ksey_Gan) It would seem that in this world being nice is too high a price for many....
  April 12th, 2025 10:30
• Listening to silence (Maplespal) So much in so little. As the noise diminishes the acuteness of hearing...
  April 12th, 2025 10:29
• Love bounded (Demar Desu) We call love many things or rather we call many things love and some of...
  April 12th, 2025 10:26
• The Spire (Tristan Robert Lange) So brief yet inspiring the metaphor can not go unnoticed if human the...
  April 12th, 2025 09:21
• MARIPOSA (DEBIH MARTIN) Butterflies although beautiful are most fragile. Love to watch them fly...
  April 12th, 2025 08:51
• Imaginary (Lorenz) Wonderful shameless images that delight the mind run through this...
  April 12th, 2025 08:47
• A Petal for His garden ([email protected]) A most beautiful tribute to one loved and passed. Well penned
  April 12th, 2025 07:57
• Tears Of A Cold Heart (Hanible) Go for it is the message I get and don\'t worry about the consequences. A...
  April 12th, 2025 07:55
• Dear Heart (Tony36) Perseverance is the key do not let failure stand in your way. Every try is...
  April 12th, 2025 07:54
• the killing of a conifer (Mourgana of the Fey) The vary wording and metaphors in this write make it most intriguing and...
  April 12th, 2025 07:52
• half open half closed eyes (Xqw) We equate life with eyes open and death with closed eyes very nicely...
  April 12th, 2025 07:10
• cute hedgehog (Jim56) Delightful, a wonderful look at nature and her children.
  April 12th, 2025 05:49
• Daredevil: Born Again (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Poems, videos, or shows must be total and all action now days or are...
  April 12th, 2025 04:42
• Eloquence (Libellule) A fave for the flow and meter in this poem it flows off the tongue like...
  April 12th, 2025 04:39
• Echos (Teardrop) Hidden is the word that comes to mind. Feelings of timidity and possibly...
  April 12th, 2025 04:37
• Come Get Some (DREEK0) A poem of challenge and a feeling of defiance. Nicely worded.
  April 12th, 2025 04:35
• A BED WITH TWO BLANKETS (Nephilim56) It is the metaphor and careful imaging that gets the fave in this poem it...
  April 12th, 2025 04:33
• The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes. (David Wakeling) I love this unique rhyme scheme that goes so well with this poem. The...
  April 12th, 2025 04:30
• celestial threads (Arqios) Beautiful images here my friend, nicely woven into a tapestry of celestial...
  April 12th, 2025 04:25
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (3) (Poetic Licence) Poor Mary she never seems to catch a break. A fun read set in rhyme loved...
  April 12th, 2025 04:22
• Absence (FallingAwake2) This poem sends a message of rapidly distancing and falling out of grasp....
  April 12th, 2025 04:19
• doggy style fun... (Dimpy) Erotic, sexual, sensual, seductive it pulses with pleasure.
  April 12th, 2025 04:16
• The Deer (MKS) Very well written this poem has good rhyme and very nice meter as well as...
  April 12th, 2025 04:14
• Secluded (Cendrine Marrouat) Here a picture is painted in words. Well done.
  April 12th, 2025 04:11
• Where The Willows Grow (MDStone) A wistful longing fills the heart with this poem\'s reading. Nostalgic...
  April 12th, 2025 04:10
• Gratitude For Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful Andy. Very nicely penned this poem weaves its words with care...
  April 12th, 2025 04:04
• In These Verses... (Rrodriguez) A beautiful poem of love and admiration. Nicely worded
  April 11th, 2025 19:23
• The boy in the bus (Amethyste) Sexual drive in this poem drives an urge primal. Nicely said
  April 11th, 2025 18:17
• Lost in the Mud (Thomas W Case) Disheartened and dark this poetically describes the end of many dreams....
  April 11th, 2025 18:15
• A Living  Heart on a Merciful  Palm by Sam Kirsanoff (Ksey_Gan) A sad and paradoxical story told in this poem of care for one another....
  April 11th, 2025 18:13
• The Podcaster\'s Prayer (Alex Arnot) Most creative and well played. Loved it
  April 11th, 2025 16:49
• Tropical easterlies (Spilleronsheet) Great wording in this loved how butterflies came after anxieties were...
  April 11th, 2025 14:42
• Taking the long view (Hzugman) I love the idea and humor in this short piece
  April 11th, 2025 14:40
• Looking Ahead of Time (Dyslexic.gun) Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely...
  April 11th, 2025 14:39
• Storm Ports (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely and so is language that gives us these feelings
  April 11th, 2025 12:44
• bite (Gray0328) Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite...
  April 11th, 2025 12:43
• Scared on where to begin (Jennybee89) A poem of decision. New beginnings happen every day. Throw fear to the...
  April 11th, 2025 12:41
• Great Is The Lord (Orchidee) Another great song of tribute my friend
  April 11th, 2025 12:36
• Unbound by time (Kaz) Most beautifully worded and poetic
  April 11th, 2025 10:23
• The Calm (RSM0812) This poem takes us through the storm to the calm on the other side. Very...
  April 11th, 2025 09:25
• Made Manifest (John Prophet) Words nicely compiled in this poem that takes us on a journey to knowledge...
  April 11th, 2025 09:23
• I am Cursed (Hanible) A curse, a spell, Voodoo, witchcraft what ever it seems that more than the...
  April 11th, 2025 09:21
• Journey of a dream (Pukur) There is no view that satisfies as much as turning around on one\'s climb...
  April 11th, 2025 09:19
• The 40th Anniversary Of The New Coke (Randyjohnson71) How easily we become accustomed to the old. The original formula marketed...
  April 11th, 2025 09:16
• The Missiles and its People (Gaurav Gurung) War, Famine and Pestilence the three big killers that act indiscriminately...
  April 11th, 2025 09:13
• Big boys don\'t cry (Tony36) A most modern view indeed. Yes men have always cried on the inside but not...
  April 11th, 2025 09:08
• Cold heart (Spilleronsheet) In few words the image is painted and comes to life. Well done
  April 11th, 2025 09:02
• Oh Snap (Tristan Robert Lange) Anxiety one of the biggest killers, raise blood pressure, alters sugar...
  April 11th, 2025 08:58
• Lost words (Lorenz) So much symbolism lies in this poem full of metaphor. It is a light in its...
  April 11th, 2025 06:14
• Hymn for the hooved (Mourgana of the Fey) A beautiful work this poem uses vivid and identifiable imagery to paint a...
  April 11th, 2025 06:05
• Shaking feeling (Maplespal) A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on...
  April 11th, 2025 05:57
• The biggest fight yet. (Hey!) What a nice message of what friendship is. I enjoyed the rhyme punctuated...
  April 11th, 2025 05:54
• sunshine happiness (Jim56) Such a lovely poem Jim full of sunshine and brightness to lift a rainy day...
  April 11th, 2025 05:50
• wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku (Xqw) Actions speak louder than words and as poets we use words which would be...
  April 11th, 2025 05:48
• Ripples in Rhyme (Libellule) A wonderful poem set in great rhyme and meter with such a smooth flow. It...
  April 11th, 2025 05:43
• Violin Strings (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Used to play the violin as a child and it is a devil of an instrument with...
  April 11th, 2025 04:27
• Liquid Cope (KTay) A ritual cycle of the addict whether to alcohol, food, or whatever. So...
  April 11th, 2025 04:25
• To The Executioner, To Time (Abdullah123) This poem is so classical in form and style I love it and it speaks to me...
  April 11th, 2025 04:22
• be brave... (NafisaSB) I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly...
  April 11th, 2025 04:20
• THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY (Nephilim56) Haunting and well depicted in images the meter with short lines was rapid...
  April 11th, 2025 04:17
• AWE. (David Wakeling) A haunting poem David I loved several lines in this poem but my favorite...
  April 11th, 2025 04:15
• Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence) A most noble write Tobani one that I can sense you feel strongly about....
  April 11th, 2025 04:11
• Anton Ego (Arqios) A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their...
  April 11th, 2025 04:06
• Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes) Now this was a fun read that takes one along on a journey with your...
  April 11th, 2025 04:01
• I\'m sorry (Vividvoid14) Sad this poem speaks from the perspective of one with love unrequited....
  April 11th, 2025 03:59
• Silent Screams (Haleyalexis) Well written and compelling this poem speaks to me of hidden things that...
  April 11th, 2025 03:56
• 4/10/25 (Wren) The onset of a panic attack? It sounds so much like it. A vivid and...
  April 11th, 2025 03:52
• an actor by any other name (Queer-with-a-pen) Such a refreshingly original poem in the change of scene stanza to stanza,...
  April 11th, 2025 03:50
• Unicorn Choir. (Goldfinch60) Magic mushrooms a little psilocybin to spice up the night. Love mushrooms...
  April 11th, 2025 03:44
• Such A Wicked Game (Sunshine777) Deeply philosophical this poem explores the meaning of life. Well written
  April 10th, 2025 19:03
• Was There Time (Lewisgale mental hospital) A poem to ponder over. Thought provoking. Very nice
  April 10th, 2025 19:02
• I have lived a hundred different lives - (Amy Michelle Mosier) Very nice a life well lived that despite problems and errors even regrets...
  April 10th, 2025 17:50
• Jasmine (Amethyste) A good poem marked by anthropomorphism that makes the bloom tender and...
  April 10th, 2025 17:44
• Tonight (Alex PB) Sensuous and an invitation for a sexual encounter. Well written
  April 10th, 2025 17:42
• My Man (Tony Grannell) Now that is what I call love and that is what I call a beautiful poem so...
  April 10th, 2025 16:22
• Prism of light (Kaz) A very nice message. The analogy of breaking light into a spectrum of...
  April 10th, 2025 16:14
• You grew old, while I was busy growing up. (Pie) A great poem of finding oneself and one\'s goals but loosing the one that...
  April 10th, 2025 16:12
• Electric touch (Nicole Pritchard) You describe very well the sensations of infatuation,, passion, and...
  April 10th, 2025 16:10
• What are you thinking? (Maplespal) A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and...
  April 10th, 2025 13:53
• Hold on to Humanity (JBentley) A noble poem with a noble message that we are far from reaching. As long...
  April 10th, 2025 13:19
• Desire By the Orange Tree (A Boy With Roses) Does anyone really know anyone? The poem poses the question (If you knew...
  April 10th, 2025 12:15
• Sympathies (Coracaodacripta) A poem of protest this is powerful in its message. Nicely worded it speaks...
  April 10th, 2025 12:13
• My Love! I Shall Never Return! (Petrichor of Love) A sad poem of love death and loss. It flows in good meter and rhyme...
  April 10th, 2025 12:11
• To the Russian soldier in 2025 by Vladimir Tsiniker (Ksey_Gan) Wars are fought on money and that money goes to certain people. Wars are...
  April 10th, 2025 12:05
• Muscle Car (Tristan Robert Lange) My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with...
  April 10th, 2025 10:57
• Glasses and Lashes (A piece of luggage) A most interesting poem that speaks of a relationship. Very nicely penned
  April 10th, 2025 10:12
• Summertime (Lorenz) A poem of seasons. Within this poem a metaphor as well. Nicely penned
  April 10th, 2025 10:08
• Rising Sun (Shahla Latifi) A poem of sadness that takes one back and recalls a relative. Nicely
  April 10th, 2025 10:06
• You problem (Pineapple_pizza018) There are many like this. Well written
  April 10th, 2025 10:02
• So Deceiving the Crown (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) A word of warning that power is not to be trusted but has ulterior motives...
  April 10th, 2025 09:59
• RIP (KTay) Another dark write sad and written in short phrases like gasping breath or...
  April 10th, 2025 09:41
• They\'re Waiting For Me To (Hanible) A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have...
  April 10th, 2025 09:22
• He pulls the trigger (Tony36)
  April 10th, 2025 09:03
• He pulls the trigger (Tony36) Dark very dark and with a message that alienated we do not survive. Most...
  April 10th, 2025 09:03