Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Free Exchange (Doggerel Dave) There is no truth it changes each day If only people would this...
  March 13th, 2023 11:02
• The Rhyme of Time (Thinkerbell) A great thought with clever use of images and a different way to look at...
  March 11th, 2023 06:23
• Flows. (Doggerel Dave) If not the government, the church, private entrepreneurs (present day...
  March 11th, 2023 06:20
• The spot on the wall (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Dave the thought had passed my mind. Rented a room to a church once...
  March 11th, 2023 06:12
• Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett) Thank you so much Bella for the read and wonderful comments. Yes we all...
  March 9th, 2023 17:02
• A Necessary Evil (Bella Shepard) How relatable is that. And at the same time how metaphorical. How much...
  March 9th, 2023 10:04
• Today (2781) That was a good comic relief and well done too.
  March 9th, 2023 09:59
• Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett) So true L.B. this is why I always look forward to your remarks. You have...
  March 8th, 2023 05:53
• Helpful Hope (Orchidee) Orchidee your second and fourth stanzas really hit me. This was a...
  March 5th, 2023 07:38
• Inscription Plus... (Doggerel Dave) This was a gem that I was not aware of. So true, we did not ask to come...
  March 5th, 2023 07:31
• Reflections (Sorenbarrett) Only pieces and not the best ones either. Thanks for the read orchidee.
  March 3rd, 2023 10:54
• no longer mine (Arqios) So true by the time we think of it, it is already in the past. A Haiku?
  March 3rd, 2023 08:39
• Gutted Like A Fish (Christina8) Such a plea of pain and anguish. Gutted is vivid and brutal. We all are...
  March 3rd, 2023 08:32
• Not another one….. (Doggerel Dave) Passion is the driving force not love and the need to feel loved and...
  March 3rd, 2023 07:09
• Dancing With Joy. (Goldfinch60) All of life is a dance. Those that don\'t dance can not find the joy....
  March 3rd, 2023 07:04
• Indifferent Nature (Fay Slimm.) Reflections of the meaning of life and its cycle. Our vision is too short...
  March 3rd, 2023 06:28
• Lasting Love (Orchidee) He certainly must have a great deal of patience (except for some like...
  March 3rd, 2023 06:22
• Almost Without Purpose (Neville) So much philosophy in this write. Yes, almost is the key word. It is from...
  March 3rd, 2023 06:18
• My Daily Torment (Christina8) Such a perfect metaphor, having lived in the ice and cold I can feel it. I...
  March 1st, 2023 07:36
• Respect Deserved. (Goldfinch60) Here here, such a great message. Maybe that is why it has shrunk. Looking...
  March 1st, 2023 07:31
• Troll. (Doggerel Dave) Trolls they seem like they have multiplied these days. I\'m glad that I\'m...
  March 1st, 2023 07:27
• Daniel (2781) Very biblical, hopeful and bright. What you believe becomes true.
  March 1st, 2023 07:21
• Old Joe Finds His Place. (Doggerel Dave) One should always know when to hole their tongue. Sometimes we learn the...
  February 27th, 2023 05:42
• Joseph and the last orange (David Wakeling) Misunderstood intentions, over reaction, exageration all great ways of...
  February 27th, 2023 05:30
• The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60) This has happened so many times, even when I write down the idea...
  February 26th, 2023 05:04
• Icy Tundra (Christina8) I grew up in the ice and snow and could feel it in the poem. I didn\'t...
  February 25th, 2023 10:29
• The Kimono (Madam Butterfly not here). (Doggerel Dave) Dave this one led me in several directions. I guess in all the smoke I...
  February 25th, 2023 06:04
• When Jannis sang the blues (Sorenbarrett) Good thing you weren\'t that is a club you wouldn\'t want to join. Thanks...
  February 25th, 2023 05:45
• Circle Of Life (Bella Shepard) Bella this is a fav The idea is so similar to what I feel. Infinite...
  February 23rd, 2023 13:28
• CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS (Doggerel Dave) I liked this one Dave. I didn\'t see it comming. Clever though. I guess it...
  February 22nd, 2023 17:56
• Cloudy Coffee Day. (Goldfinch60) At first read this one was puzzling, however, on second read it was...
  February 22nd, 2023 05:28
• Blow Wind (Bella Shepard) Bella this is beautiful and strikes deep in the soul for the inner voice...
  February 19th, 2023 15:59
• A word (2781) One word can make all the difference. Funny how a single word can lead to...
  February 19th, 2023 09:09
• Use Love to Muse, Hearts be Tied by Love-Tide (Mvvenkataraman) Beautiful goals and admonishments to a world that has more often neglected...
  February 19th, 2023 09:06
• Simple Equation…. (Doggerel Dave) Dave the rich would say it\'s merely natural selection or survival of the...
  February 19th, 2023 08:58
• Good Cop Bad Cop (2781) Hard to know what to believe these days, whether it comes from one side or...
  February 17th, 2023 09:34
• Love: Connate (L. B. Mek) L.B. A very classical touch to this poem on such a widely spoken topic....
  February 17th, 2023 06:08
• Love so Lovely (Fay Slimm.) I loved the format of this poem and how the modification of the adjective...
  February 17th, 2023 06:02
• The Library of Time (Bella Shepard) What a unique and wonderful way of putting this. Life is on borrowed time...
  February 16th, 2023 17:19
• Oldest And Youngest. (Goldfinch60) Andy this was a very nice pairing of the two most stated things about age,...
  February 15th, 2023 05:56
• A Relationship (Doggerel Dave) Presumptive, cats are presumptive as well as arrogant. I have had several...
  February 14th, 2023 23:38
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight. (Doggerel Dave) An interesting experience and one to file away in memories library. They...
  February 13th, 2023 21:28
• Belief (Bella Shepard) This one haiku strikes at the heart of western science. We can only...
  February 12th, 2023 15:40
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (2) Around Midnight. (Doggerel Dave) This was a great tale. In all my adventures in life I can\'t say I have...
  February 12th, 2023 08:24
• Unity in Diversity (Mello) A beatiful message highlited with vivid imagry and a great metaphor....
  February 12th, 2023 08:16
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (1) Almost Midnight (Doggerel Dave) In my youth I worked laying track in a mine and have ridden steam...
  February 10th, 2023 21:52
• No offense (Ok Waleed) Dreams are more easily lived out than life itself. And yes there is little...
  February 10th, 2023 17:16
• Individual Journeys. (Goldfinch60) So true, so many paths that cross and intertwine. As we cross it is nice...
  February 9th, 2023 06:05
• Peter’s Complaint (Doggerel Dave) A gritty piece of work that took me to the scene. Nicely written with the...
  February 9th, 2023 06:01
• Words (2781) So true. Short and to the point.
  February 9th, 2023 05:40
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) I loved the pairings. Subtle yet to the point. A bit melancholic but also...
  February 9th, 2023 05:07
• Peace Plea (Orchidee) Orchidee this is a beautiful thought and prayer that we are still a long...
  February 7th, 2023 05:45
• Dancing To Infinity. (Goldfinch60) Yes, life is a dance. Hopefully we love our partner and don\'t step on too...
  February 7th, 2023 05:37
• “Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani?” (Ok Waleed) Doubt, lack of trust are the seeds from which paranoia and hate grow. I...
  February 7th, 2023 05:32
• Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave) Not been there but similar and your words framed the images well. Very...
  February 6th, 2023 21:59
• River And Time. (Goldfinch60) Rivers meander and they rush, they flood and they dribble by. Time too...
  February 6th, 2023 04:53
• of Geometrical Substance or Mode (L. B. Mek) Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so...
  February 3rd, 2023 05:48
• The Chick Cycle (Thinkerbell) A nice poem with a sad ending. Yes we all imprint whether biologically of...
  February 1st, 2023 09:35
• Statues - a Rhymeless Rant (Doggerel Dave) What I was taught i school I have found to be mythical, and one sided....
  February 1st, 2023 07:45
• flowershop blather (Arqios) Emeralds caught my eye in that it is my birthstone. The idea that it...
  February 1st, 2023 07:37
• Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett) Bella so glad you enjoyed it. It was more fun to write about years later...
  January 31st, 2023 17:07
• Circular journey (Sorenbarrett) Dear Bella you humble me with your more than gracious comments. My mind...
  January 31st, 2023 15:57
• Possibilities. (Goldfinch60) Yes, words as true as Gold.
  January 31st, 2023 04:14
• The Night Male (Doggerel Dave) This was truly an enjoyable read so well constructed that it flowed like...
  January 30th, 2023 10:11
• what if i (Amepiesces) This is so raw, so loaded with emotion, it drips pain. It oozes the human...
  January 30th, 2023 06:09
• not to be messed with (Arqios) This is thought provoking and maybe shouldn\'t be. The chesire cat and I...
  January 30th, 2023 05:28
• Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities (L. B. Mek) L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski...
  January 30th, 2023 04:42
• ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54) This haunting tale evokes many memories and the experiences that have gone...
  January 29th, 2023 05:50
• Sad Little Puppy (Bella Shepard) Bella, this took me back to my childhood and I felt like my mother was...
  January 28th, 2023 13:01
• We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave) Well Dave I have to agree. I have no proof otherwise. Belief, yea we all...
  January 28th, 2023 07:44
• What a Way to Go…. (Doggerel Dave) I came a little late to this party but have been a student of the Darwin...
  January 26th, 2023 20:56
• Laughter Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy. The old adage that laughter is good medicine is true. What...
  January 25th, 2023 10:45
• Queen Victoria Sits Again. (Doggerel Dave) Sounds like a white elephant gift to me. So sad when your not wanted. Nice...
  January 24th, 2023 20:46
• Prams. (Doggerel Dave) Have to admit I had to look up what a pram is. Then it all made sense and...
  January 23rd, 2023 05:45
• I can’t trust my wife (Ok Waleed) I\'m white so don\'t trust me, I\'m a man so maybe you can, Satan was an...
  January 22nd, 2023 13:51
• Earth, Air, Fire (Sorenbarrett) Thanks for the review and comment
  January 22nd, 2023 13:48
• No Shave, Thanks - Just a Haircut! (Doggerel Dave) I started shearing my own hair long before the Covid thing so it didn\'t...
  January 19th, 2023 09:08
• Acromegaly. (Goldfinch60) \"I wonder if\" such a great entry to this piece. It paints a vivid...
  January 18th, 2023 14:20
• Balance. (Doggerel Dave) When ever there are more than one person there will be politics and a...
  January 13th, 2023 05:14
• Mozart\'s Morning. (Goldfinch60) Love Mozart but then I love most music. Nice piece Andy.
  January 12th, 2023 06:29
• The scent of a dream (Sorenbarrett) Thank you Andy, your comment is appreciated.
  January 12th, 2023 06:25
• My Biggest Fear (Rhmn_7) A precursor to the existential question. Shakespear said \"To thine own...
  January 10th, 2023 11:50
• The Violin Wept (Bella Shepard) I used to play the violin and I love the minor key but maybe this is...
  January 10th, 2023 11:39
• Believe In Dreams. (Goldfinch60) It is the last line that made me reflect. Yes I believe you are right,...
  January 7th, 2023 06:06
• Epiphany Expectations (Orchidee) So many times from childhood I have heard this story but you have told it...
  January 6th, 2023 11:18
• on the banks of the Oise (Arqios) This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending...
  January 6th, 2023 06:50
• Beautiful Destinations. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy I have walked them all I believe, and yet each day I find a...
  January 6th, 2023 06:08
• Boston Lay Beneath Our Pity (Charles69) This was a touching piece that goes deeper than the surface. In a sense we...
  January 4th, 2023 11:39
• Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60) Dark is the word. Nature has a way of working things out but wow. A very...
  January 3rd, 2023 05:41
• a vantaged perch (Arqios) A most beautiful vision. I am sitting in a country house far from people...
  January 2nd, 2023 10:15
• Distractions (Bella Shepard) A good point and although it may be true for many, for me I prefer the...
  January 1st, 2023 15:59
• Raining In My Heart To Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Thank you for sharing. It is a bittersweet poem of loss and gain.
  December 30th, 2022 06:56
• grand coterie (Arqios) This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the...
  December 29th, 2022 20:51
• Burning Souls (Rhmn_7) This started with such an obvious but neglected view \"do we live in the...
  December 23rd, 2022 16:00
• Prince Of Cool. (Goldfinch60) So true. I love music of all types but particularly blues and jazz. Chet...
  December 23rd, 2022 15:43
• Mr. Bean (Bella Shepard) Bella I look forward to your poems and how they share the common beauty in...
  December 23rd, 2022 15:36
• Liebestraum. (Goldfinch60) I too love music that has the power to make or change a mood. Although we...
  December 22nd, 2022 06:51
• retitled and reposted of chemotherapy (Dusk arising) Such a mature and wise view of life. It is not only the bitter medicine...
  December 21st, 2022 19:40
• Together And Forever. (Goldfinch60) Love is a wonderful thing. It is what makes us feel not alone in this...
  December 21st, 2022 07:31
• Disaster Trumps Competition. (Doggerel Dave) I\'m glad you didn\'t end it \"humanity rotten to the core\" , although...
  December 20th, 2022 19:40