Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- THE STOIC SHADOW SCRIPTURE (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
A sense of spiritual reflection in this poem of assent nicely done in...
May 8th, 2026 04:20 - TWILIGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Beautiful pairing of seasons with emotion and hope. Very nicely done a...
May 8th, 2026 04:15 - Indifference (Alan R)
A most interesting poetic rhyme about a subject seldom addressed. Nicely...
May 8th, 2026 04:14 - अकेला नहीं हूँ (Waiting for Silence)
A poetic expression of a shared path in life. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 04:12 - The Silence Only We Know (Anthony Hanible)
A lovely write Anthony put in most poetic terms of that collision with...
May 8th, 2026 04:10 - Just Three Things. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice in poetic form Gold a very nice write about the essence of...
May 8th, 2026 04:08 - Raven or Crow (FallingAwake2)
Thanks for the author note it makes sense of the poem. Well written it...
May 8th, 2026 04:06 - La La La (David Wakeling)
Surreal, satirical, personified a poem of metaphor enacted in poetic...
May 8th, 2026 04:03 - Everything (Diana Baffoe)
Raw and gritty this poem exposes abuse within the family and fear for...
May 8th, 2026 04:00 - The Weight of Sin, Darkness Timing (Framed Mirror)
A relating of the passion of Christ in this poetic presentation. Nicely...
May 8th, 2026 03:56 - Only Me In The End (Entangled heart)
Feeling misled one fails to learn from the past and falls for the same...
May 7th, 2026 21:30 - A truth, finally. (Amandatoriii)
There is loneliness in this poem a distant sadness that one can not blame...
May 7th, 2026 19:46 - Behind the locked door (Unknown444)
Indeed we all deserve more than pain and sadness. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:44 - better (Lunarchloedip)
Two injured souls nursing each other back from pain and hurt. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:42 - Prometheus\' Tomb/ (Xiaobai Yulan)
The eagle to tear out the liver every day to regenerate in continual...
May 7th, 2026 19:40 - Bright spots (Amethyste)
It is the question that follows all the brightness that gives the poem its...
May 7th, 2026 19:38 - My Sadness (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark)
A great metaphor used to describe the damage done and the possibility of...
May 7th, 2026 19:37 - Silhouettes (Kaz)
Beautiful lines poetically stated in this verse leaving soft feelings
May 7th, 2026 19:34 - Fight (Alan R)
A poem of daily toils and travails encapsulated in verse. Well done
May 7th, 2026 13:31 - Squeaky Shoe (FrasMac)
Clever, logical and humorous what more can you want? Even a bit of rhyme...
May 7th, 2026 13:30 - My Thoughts (Ksey_Gan)
This poem holds feelings of loss and melancholy with a sense of longing....
May 7th, 2026 13:29 - The Last of the Geats (Matthew R. Callies)
Well written of values once more cherished than at present when honor,...
May 7th, 2026 13:27 - Skin (Fränz Müller)
How comfortable are each of us with our naked self. Well expressed
May 7th, 2026 13:25 - Lost (RSM0812)
This existential poem of pleasure and death defining life is well done
May 7th, 2026 13:24 - WITH TASTE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A poem of those things that bring pleasure a carpe diem vision of life....
May 7th, 2026 13:22 - and when I’m healed (Demar Desu)
This one has a twist at the end brightness that allows more darkness. A...
May 7th, 2026 13:20 - Who I truly am 🌹 (Friendship)
This is a revealing of the inner self and mechanism that drives a...
May 7th, 2026 13:19 - The Top of the Hill (Thomas W Case)
This evolution form youth to present takes turns through life and ends up...
May 7th, 2026 13:16 - Our Time Here (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
We never know what life holds in store and this poem speaks of God being...
May 7th, 2026 10:55 - Perhaps it was destruction (Cindy)
The brutal power and force of the words make this a hard read but although...
May 7th, 2026 07:31 - No morality (Littleredone)
A poem that speaks its mind and it speaks it loudly in shame. Well done
May 7th, 2026 06:25 - robin visitor (Jim56)
A beautiful image Jim and one that I have seen many a time. Well written
May 7th, 2026 06:24 - I Like These Walls (Katie B.)
That old saying \" I wish I were a fly on the wall\" I wish I were the...
May 7th, 2026 06:23 - show you (Arqios)
This brings comparisons from different angles, mathematics, seasons,...
May 7th, 2026 06:20 - a remnant\'s prayer (Tristan Robert Lange)
A rather deep reflection of being part of everything and what we do to...
May 7th, 2026 06:12 - every year for a day (Sano)
Clever word play in the beginning of this poem \"terrific smile\" this...
May 7th, 2026 04:31 - Suncharged (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Religious wording and connotations permeate this piece. Lovely
May 7th, 2026 04:29 - Zaftig\'s puppet (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
From bullying to gobstoppers a good read
May 7th, 2026 04:28 - +- (Birdbird)
This reveals an abstract feel with layered meaning. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:25 - Drifting away (Ethan Mikel St.Amour)
A metaphoric senryu well done
May 7th, 2026 04:23 - Words and Witness (Gray0328)
A write about the first step in a process where sensitivity to what is...
May 7th, 2026 04:22 - ज़िद्दी (Waiting for Silence)
There is self flagellation and immolation in this poem that has become a...
May 7th, 2026 04:19 - CITY OF POETS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Beautiful words, images and thoughts accompany this surreal creation of...
May 7th, 2026 04:15 - The Wonderful Light Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful poem of positivity and brightening the way. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:13 - My Bestie My Headphones (Anthony Hanible)
A fun read of a feeling toward headphones. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:12 - The Spirit and the Science (David Wakeling)
A sad dilema where choice is lifted and guilt reprieved. Well written
May 7th, 2026 04:10 - Calling Your Name (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another beautiful set of poems of wisdom Kurt. Each one nicely written
May 7th, 2026 04:05 - What\'s Left? (Shadowbones)
A poem that speaks of destruction and the rubble not leaving anything of...
May 6th, 2026 20:51 - Jealousy (Brothervilheim)
Jealousy a symptom of narcissism nicely written
May 6th, 2026 20:50 - Cheating on her (Maplespal)
Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled....
May 6th, 2026 20:49 - Buried Beneath the Ruin (Entangled heart)
Hope buried and now unearthed. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:48 - \"THE GIRL WITH BLOOD LIKE NIGHT\" (Hadeed musa)
The venting of black secrets in poetry is a therapy for the soul. Nicely...
May 6th, 2026 20:45 - How often do you count to 3? (Sunita)
Sane defined by society has no meaning to me. A wonderful write...
May 6th, 2026 20:44 - Ms.divine 🛸🖖🏿🫂👁️🌞👑 (Ogunisjustice)
An idle that one wishes to never change. Nicely written
May 6th, 2026 20:42 - Farewell My Village (Xiaobai Yulan)
This poem seems not only a fragment of reality but a metaphor for change...
May 6th, 2026 20:40 - 📉 Declined ❌ yo ASS (Ms.divine)
Anger over control expressed. Powerful emotions in this piece
May 6th, 2026 20:35 - Confessions of a sunflower (Amethyste)
Short and to the point. Well done
May 6th, 2026 20:33 - NET / RED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A poem of life and its rushing confusion. Nicely written Carlos
May 6th, 2026 20:32 - Garden of Words (Ghoast)
A poem of wondering if one remembers them. Well written and carrying a sad...
May 6th, 2026 20:30 - Pilgrim (Fränz Müller)
Sad and most melancholic but so well worded a fave
May 6th, 2026 20:28 - An Asymmetrical Truth (Salvia.S)
A strong message sent to another. Well said Salvia
May 6th, 2026 20:27 - Your Finest Rebellion (Gray0328)
Another wonderful write Gray well done
May 6th, 2026 10:41 - Stream of consciousness Part 4 (Donteatmecows)
A tough upbringing leads to a downfall in this poem. Nicely written
May 6th, 2026 09:43 - Commentary (2781)
Great message and well written
May 6th, 2026 09:41 - Enter World Naked Leave Naked (Joseph M Marion)
A poem with a beautiful message and great rhyme it shines.
May 6th, 2026 09:40 - Contemplating Thoughts (Arshia)
A poem of recognition of the path to being who one should be and needs to...
May 6th, 2026 07:30 - the clearing (Tristan Robert Lange)
There is something spiritual and sacred that touches the soul and defines...
May 6th, 2026 07:28 - Lust (Friendship)
This poem speaks of the deep urge within the heart and soul of the artist...
May 6th, 2026 07:16 - the thing that scatters me the most (Sano)
This poem speaks of fear of being left behind by another well written
May 6th, 2026 07:11 - Six Touches Before the Line (Matthew R. Callies)
Gripping but I can not help but feel a metaphor here as well. Life itself...
May 6th, 2026 06:25 - I Listen (Katie B.)
As we walk we often sing to ourselves, something privative but comforting,...
May 6th, 2026 06:23 - cooler months 2026 (Arqios)
A poetic invitation to a more comfortable place one that has cooled and...
May 6th, 2026 06:21 - doggy heaven (Jim56)
A lovely thought Jim but I believe that all dogs go to heaven and that it...
May 6th, 2026 05:11 - The Cat Woman (Paul Bell)
It is not only in music and poetry that timing is important. Well written
May 6th, 2026 05:09 - and when I’m hurt (Demar Desu)
Hope grows back. Well written Demar
May 6th, 2026 05:06 - Soldier’s lullaby (RCx_Vortex)
The meter in this poem reminiscent of hush little baby don\'t say a word...
May 6th, 2026 05:05 - Beer Garden Blues (8 Months Sober) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Congratulations and best wishes for the future. A good read as well with...
May 6th, 2026 04:59 - Lolly was a Leprechaun (Cully45)
A lovely story with a lovely moral all put to rhyme. What is best may not...
May 6th, 2026 04:58 - Forbidden Love (Anthony Hanible)
Forbidden love I have tasted that apple and it was sweet but it does often...
May 6th, 2026 04:54 - खुश मैं रहता हूँ (Waiting for Silence)
A poem of things remembered that one loves in another. Nicely worded
May 6th, 2026 04:52 - AN EMPTY ROOM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A poem of reminders of the past. It is interesting how many marks bring...
May 6th, 2026 04:50 - Gone With a Smile (Teddy.15)
A lovely song Teddy of wanting to be remembered for what one has done and...
May 6th, 2026 04:48 - The Road We Drive. (Goldfinch60)
A great analogy Andy and indeed that highway is crowded at times and with...
May 6th, 2026 04:45 - Sometimes the Ambulance comes to Pensive Street. (David Wakeling)
David I am sure that I remember this poem is it a rework? I from time to...
May 6th, 2026 04:43 - Fire and ash (Moonie)
What a good metaphor based on a real event. Nicely written it evokes...
May 6th, 2026 04:39 - Enough This Time? (Entangled heart)
A poem of questions where resolution comes in the last stanza. Nicely...
May 6th, 2026 04:32 - 1. Fierce Winds Howl outside the Door/ Coal (Xiaobai Yulan)
This poem presents a feeling of desolation and bareness of a god-forsaken...
May 5th, 2026 21:42 - Trip to the Stars (StephenJames)
Cute and nicely written
May 5th, 2026 21:38 - People romanticize dreams too much (Simple Tendencies)
Once went forty eight hours without sleep driving straight and the cars on...
May 5th, 2026 21:37 - Musings on a Sowbug (Kevin Hulme)
We are a different breed and we assume our uniqueness amidst it all. In...
May 5th, 2026 20:26 - I Do (Mylastwrites)
Short and to the point a promise made and meant. Nicely done
May 5th, 2026 20:22 - A Force of Nature (Fränz Müller)
Pride and strength hold firm and the wind rushes by until strong enough to...
May 5th, 2026 20:21 - Effort to Sound Effortless (Version 2) (FallingAwake2)
Boiling off all the broth leaves the soup without flavor. Well written
May 5th, 2026 20:20 - To my precious soul driven away by nature (Dn)
This feels like a mortal loss and the hope that one waits beyond that...
May 5th, 2026 20:18 - The edge (Amethyste)
One needn\'t be the center to be of importance. Well written
May 5th, 2026 20:17 - The Quiet Middle (Lilmoonxx)
Recognition in this poem of something missing and it is yourself. Well
May 5th, 2026 20:16 - Notification (Rachel P)
Love grown old and taken for granted not gone just used and common like an...
May 5th, 2026 20:15 - Hinterland (Kora)
This is charming and holds a feel of a fairytale of love. It is dreamy and...
May 5th, 2026 20:12 - Stream of consciousness Part 3 (Donteatmecows)
Here I feel the rebellion against past advice and the ability to set...
May 5th, 2026 20:09 - Goodbye To Love (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well Kurt there seems again a link between these verses of a love felt...
May 5th, 2026 20:08
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