Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Positive > Negative (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A wonderful poem of question and one that I have asked many times why does...
  March 21st, 2025 06:41
• I want to... (Real Rhyme) There is a longing in this poem a feel for the more simple life. I live...
  March 21st, 2025 06:39
• Focusing out of distraught (Maplespal) This poem gives a hint in the first line that the snow being mentioned is...
  March 21st, 2025 06:37
• holy kestrel (Jim56) A fun poem with a twist at the end. But then are we not all birds of prey...
  March 21st, 2025 06:34
• Us (Asiabtheeedon) An acknowledgement of a higher power to help us through tough times and...
  March 21st, 2025 05:01
• Permanently vacant (Poetic Dan) A sense of powerlessness encompasses this poem there is an apology and a...
  March 21st, 2025 04:25
• The Dog Ate My Poem (An Ode to World Poetry Day) (Tom Dylan) Tom the feel of this is so down to earth and common day. Although about a...
  March 21st, 2025 04:21
• Make a Change (Acricketschorus) The poem starts out with numerous questions that feel dark in nature but...
  March 21st, 2025 04:17
• Nib out (David A Liebermann) A poem that speaks in gratitude and appreciation for the gifts of nature...
  March 21st, 2025 04:15
• Something Only We Can feel (Reynaldo Casison) This poetic verse has the makings of a song. With a repeated chorus it...
  March 21st, 2025 04:12
• BIRTHDAY CARD (Nephilim56) A poem of loss and a sad one at that. Symbols well used of a dried rose....
  March 21st, 2025 04:10
• Lie In a Truth. (Poetic Licence) In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven...
  March 21st, 2025 04:08
• cure-alls (Arqios) In comfort our choice of entertainment is far different than when under...
  March 21st, 2025 04:06
• RAISED CLOUDS. (David Wakeling) This poem in its form seems classical in nature and narrative nature as...
  March 21st, 2025 03:55
• WHAT WOULD YOU TITLE THIS? (Cerry) A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion...
  March 21st, 2025 03:43
• Kindness In Your Heart. (Goldfinch60) A write of gold Andy this one should be taught at home, in the schools,...
  March 21st, 2025 03:36
• My conscious is clean (Poetaldo) Simple and short but clearly stated.
  March 20th, 2025 19:01
• Ugly Joint (Damaso) A most interesting write. Well done.
  March 20th, 2025 19:01
• Profusions of Your Love (Reynaldo Casison) A love poem full of imagery nicely done
  March 20th, 2025 18:55
• Me (Tkatie118) Speaking for those that can\'t speak for themselves this poem talks of...
  March 20th, 2025 17:09
• I\'m Dead (Hanible) Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their...
  March 20th, 2025 17:03
• Bath night. (Jan bach) This poem describes a ritual no longer practiced but in the mind and...
  March 20th, 2025 16:19
• Consequences of a dirty hit (Nicole Pritchard) I hear the message in this poem loud and clear. Controversial as in other...
  March 20th, 2025 16:15
• I am (Xqw) Discontent and pain run through this poem seeing the past generations and...
  March 20th, 2025 16:07
• Daft Obsession (Orchidee) It\'s all a trick for AI to recognize its own kind and has nothing to do...
  March 20th, 2025 13:57
• Guiltless Death (MKS) Intriguing comparisons and thought provoking ideas in this poem. Lovely
  March 20th, 2025 13:01
• give & take (Gray0328) A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form...
  March 20th, 2025 12:59
• Pretty Colours (A piece of luggage) Loss in this poem leaves feeling hopeless and dark. Sad
  March 20th, 2025 12:57
• Irreverent (Coracaodacripta) Lack of trust does interfere with deep relationships in present day...
  March 20th, 2025 12:54
• Circling The Square (Kurt Philip Behm) As the song of Me and Bobbie McGee says I would trade all of my tomorrows...
  March 20th, 2025 12:52
• COMFORT ZONE (ChrisLyn🕊) Balance is always the key. A great poem about finding it. Nicely done
  March 20th, 2025 12:49
• Dear Fathers, (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
  March 20th, 2025 12:07
• Dear Fathers, (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Wow! such great advice to fathers. Being a father I can see the need for...
  March 20th, 2025 12:07
• The Ghost in the Dog Tag (Rebellion_in_sanity) Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried...
  March 20th, 2025 12:03
• Fanny (Lorenz) Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
  March 20th, 2025 09:39
• Moments of Tranquility (Elias H.F.) A great twist on the idea that adversity breeds creativity here...
  March 20th, 2025 09:35
• Speechless (Pineapple_pizza018) Speaking up rather than staking speechless. A great message sent.
  March 20th, 2025 09:33
• Sculptor, I\'m not your sculpture (Juwaireeyah) A desire to be oneself and run one\'s own life. A realization that others...
  March 20th, 2025 09:28
• In the Box (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a thought that many have shared but now put to words and questioned...
  March 20th, 2025 08:17
• On The Cusp Of Pure Darkness (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A great poem of existential value maybe it is not the home but the company...
  March 20th, 2025 08:14
• my little friend (Jim56) A Jim I can only imagine what is this little friend. Knowing your love of...
  March 20th, 2025 06:42
• The Collective (Tony36) Ah the dilemma individualism and collectivism. A great poem pulling for...
  March 20th, 2025 06:38
• What path (Maplespal) A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to...
  March 20th, 2025 05:54
• Sometimes I wish to be (Adiii) A poem a child would love with all the animal names and rhyme. A fun read.
  March 20th, 2025 04:32
• Speeches Freedoms (RSM0812) Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the...
  March 20th, 2025 04:29
• déjà brew (Arqios) This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires...
  March 20th, 2025 04:26
• Bacterial Warfare (Mutley Ravishes) I heard that it is now a war crime and outlawed by the Geneva convention....
  March 20th, 2025 04:21
• I Wait (E Naughton) Word play in this poem where stillness reigns a thought provoking write.
  March 20th, 2025 04:18
• Spring (also known as vernal) equinox arrives March 20th, 2025 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Lunar it is. They say shoot for the moon and indeed this one does. A...
  March 20th, 2025 04:17
• Last Spin\'s Echo (TRIGGER WARNING: Self-inflicted death) (Matthew R. Callies) The short and choppy breaks enhanced the racing thoughts and progression...
  March 20th, 2025 04:12
• Be careful (Poetic Dan) Expectations are seldom met. Voiced in this poem now a new expectation...
  March 20th, 2025 04:09
• Fall Of Tyrants (Mohammad Younus) The poem of a liberator nicely worded
  March 20th, 2025 04:06
• UPON THE SHORE (Nephilim56) A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s...
  March 20th, 2025 04:03
• Am I Alone. (Poetic Licence) A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it....
  March 20th, 2025 04:00
• The Tempest Wake. (David Wakeling) David this mention of bitter fruit brought to mind the song (Strange...
  March 20th, 2025 03:52
• The First Day Of Spring. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet to spring Andy. The wording and images created evoke...
  March 20th, 2025 03:47
• Black Rose (Alex PB) A poem of proposal and love. Nicely stated
  March 19th, 2025 20:03
• Capitalism in Crisis (Demar Desu) A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
  March 19th, 2025 20:01
• The Mirror in the Mist (TheInnerLens) A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to...
  March 19th, 2025 20:00
• Pawing At Nightfall (A Boy With Roses) A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
  March 19th, 2025 18:00
• Come Back Mojo (Thomas W Case) A great write that pulls at the brain caught in the metaphor unraveling...
  March 19th, 2025 17:58
• Ancient Thought (John Prophet) We are our past just as one ring in a tree forms around another. Much of...
  March 19th, 2025 16:09
• Reborn (Juwaireeyah) Rebirth is just that letting go of the past and starting new. A lovely
  March 19th, 2025 16:06
• A shield of silence (Anabasova) Water and fire quite the combination only lack earth and air to be...
  March 19th, 2025 16:04
• Wot You Doin\' On \'Ere? (Orchidee) I\'m 60% water Orchi. Hey you started posting latter in the day thought I...
  March 19th, 2025 16:02
• The mystery box (Nicole Pritchard) Very nice this poem holds secrets hidden and to be solved. Very nicely
  March 19th, 2025 15:59
• My eternal bundles of joy (Neilton) A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children...
  March 19th, 2025 15:57
• The lament of The Russian Inmate after Arkadi Severni (Ksey_Gan) This poem carries the feel of Russian writing, I\'ve read Tolstoy,...
  March 19th, 2025 14:59
• ANGER !! (Jan bach) A poem of the power of anger that needs an outlet. Nicely stated
  March 19th, 2025 14:55
• Sitting in class (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) Clever and a great write about not judging others. Well done
  March 19th, 2025 13:55
• Countdown To Armageddon (Kurt Philip Behm) This requires thought and is well spoken
  March 19th, 2025 12:08
• Can I call you? (Daisydoo) A poem of mixed relationship that defines itself over time. Nicely done...
  March 19th, 2025 12:07
• the aching pedestal (Gray0328) The glorifying of war, destruction, hate, revenge, pain on TV a spot of...
  March 19th, 2025 11:06
• Fake (RSM0812) A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it....
  March 19th, 2025 11:04
• Blandishments eroded invaluable necessary viz life savings of mine videre licet alms (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Many metaphors here as well as pop references such as music. Lovely
  March 19th, 2025 11:02
• The corridor (Lorenz) The treat of future and the hope to lye in green meadows. Here is the...
  March 19th, 2025 10:58
• The Hippogriff\'s Meadow (Matthew R. Callies) So nicely rhymed and metered it tells a mythical story in great imagery...
  March 19th, 2025 10:06
• At home (Caring dove) A feeling that many have so nicely captured in this metaphor and explained...
  March 19th, 2025 09:59
• Riosin and Riordan Update! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Shamrocker you are an original. You are one of the few that brilliantly...
  March 19th, 2025 09:57
• Nature\'s Palette (Salvia.S) A most beautiful painting of nature you give in this poem. Funny that I...
  March 19th, 2025 09:54
• Her (Tony36) Haunting is a good word for this poem. A poem of violence, betrayal, death...
  March 19th, 2025 09:52
• Please stay (Bird In Red) A most comforting poem of another type of love and security. A beautiful...
  March 19th, 2025 09:50
• Catalyst (Tristan Robert Lange) I find it most intriguing your painting with letters meaning (the use of...
  March 19th, 2025 09:48
• Canadian I am (Maplespal) When I was small if one wanted to designate something as cheap or poorly...
  March 19th, 2025 06:03
• too much too little (TTEUK) A poem of extremes. How to moderate becomes the question, how to regulate...
  March 19th, 2025 05:59
• Escape (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Pulling from modern genre this poem speaks with power and anger of not...
  March 19th, 2025 05:57
• Whispers at Dawn (Whats write for me) Set in a new frame of Biblical verse the words Carpe Diem ring out. Nicely...
  March 19th, 2025 05:55
• Membership of One (Tom Dylan) Embers of memories still glow beneath the ashes. Warmth still alive from a...
  March 19th, 2025 05:53
• INNER EYE (Nephilim56)
  March 19th, 2025 05:49
• INNER EYE (Nephilim56) This poem leaves feelings of the core of fear where nightmares begin. An...
  March 19th, 2025 05:49
• Peace (2781) Some famous words of warning nicely woven into this poem that reads...
  March 19th, 2025 03:35
• Life – The Unscripted Stage (Job Welime) A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage....
  March 19th, 2025 03:34
• George Escram (MKS) A wonderful poem about fear and its paralyzing aspects but how in reality...
  March 19th, 2025 03:31
• unveiling (Arqios) Beautifully rhymed and metered it also sends a poet\'s message. So smooth...
  March 19th, 2025 03:29
• Today Is Tomorrows History. (Poetic Licence) A lovely play on words that becomes a play on thoughts that becomes good...
  March 19th, 2025 03:25
• What Is Life Together? (Goldfinch60) A most beautiful recognition making for a lovely poem. All nicely stated...
  March 19th, 2025 03:24
• Harold Percy (David Wakeling) Once burnt twice shy they say. A most engaging story that bleeds of more...
  March 19th, 2025 03:22
• peering into my soul (Pilisydo) Most of us strive for recognition and to leave a mark. This poem echoes...
  March 19th, 2025 03:18
• Stress (Jennybee89) A motivational poem that gives good instructions and relates what works...
  March 19th, 2025 03:16
• Awaken, O Humanity (Mohammad younus koul) A call for peace this poem speaks of war\'s horrors and appeals for...
  March 18th, 2025 20:01