Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
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I hear the message and feel that it is already too late, there is no going...
July 16th, 2024 05:23 - ()
A statement of assertion and defiance to proceed without fear and live...
July 16th, 2024 05:21 - Train of Thought (Dan Williams)
A great metaphor here the continues the reader\'s train of thought to the...
July 16th, 2024 05:12 - O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave)
Dave don\'t know how I missed this one I thought I had read all of yours...
July 15th, 2024 18:53 - Walking in Woodland (Cassie58)
Stunning images of nature\'s beauty and the bonds we feel to it. This...
July 15th, 2024 15:40 - Walking in Woodland (Cassie58)
Stunning images of nature\'s beauty and the bonds we feel to it. This...
July 15th, 2024 15:40 - A Gentleman’s Secret (Teddy.15)
This poem says a lot about human nature. Who do we know, how much do we...
July 15th, 2024 11:29 - Spain Won. (Goldfinch60)
Now that\'s the way to do it Andy. Caught me by surprise on this one. And...
July 15th, 2024 06:02 - Wicked (Christina8)
Loved the rhyme to this one it flowed so nicely. So glad to hear from you...
July 14th, 2024 20:47 - No Regrets (Teddy.15)
A great message said so poetically. I think we would all be better off if...
July 14th, 2024 13:48 - Emmaus Experience (Orchidee)
I had forgotten this word and now you have revived that memory. A good...
July 14th, 2024 13:41 - What\'s up doc (2781)
Hitler or Mao is the choice
both have such a charming voice
Right or...
July 14th, 2024 13:37 - Moonlight (Bella Shepard)
I too like the night especially on a moonlit night. Great imagery and a...
July 14th, 2024 13:32 - Though Lovely Is Her Memory (Cassie58)
A most beautiful set of images in anthropomorphism and metaphor simply...
July 14th, 2024 13:28 - a moment (Maplespal)
In determinism events are set just as with rhyme the choices are limited...
July 14th, 2024 06:59 - The Visitor (my Raven ) (Teddy.15)
\"dreamer\'s quilt\" a beautiful image and the overall image of a raven as...
July 14th, 2024 05:45 - Bag Lady. (Goldfinch60)
I tried hard to see you but the image is small and I am left with the same...
July 14th, 2024 05:38 - Promises Prophesied (Orchidee)
Agrarian vegetarian always need more land. It did seem peaceful though...
July 13th, 2024 13:34 - A Small Place Above His Left Ear (Thomas W Case)
He ws right about the left ear in that that side controls the verbal and...
July 13th, 2024 06:34 - Resolve (Cassie58)
Spectacular imagery in metaphor and a poem with a message. Very nicely...
July 13th, 2024 05:55 - Sheep Story (Orchidee)
Always liked this parable but always felt that it was a poor decision and...
July 13th, 2024 05:50 - On The Very Edge of Passion (Teddy.15)
I think you captured this one with the title, picture and words. As is so...
July 13th, 2024 05:44 - Prophetic (2781)
Right on target talk about forced choice. Every time I think of the U.S....
July 13th, 2024 05:40 - Come With Me. (Goldfinch60)
A most wonderful world indeed. And from that road there are many that...
July 12th, 2024 05:56 - I Fell in Love with a Dream (Thomas W Case)
I think that this dream is more common than believed. Many of us have had...
July 12th, 2024 05:53 - When Two Roads Diverge (Teddy.15)
Choices, there is the illusion. Maybe it doesn\'t matter which road is...
July 11th, 2024 13:12 - How Long? (Orchidee)
Age is a relative thing and I have relatives that are older than me, but...
July 11th, 2024 13:05 - Quartet For The End Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
A most interesting choice Gold. My choices are often mood driven and are...
July 11th, 2024 07:10 - The Remberer (Dan Williams)
This is the message of today\'s era and this generation. Sadly it is a...
July 11th, 2024 07:05 - My Love (Thomas W Case)
So true Thomas I echo the feelings. Well done
July 10th, 2024 20:10 - Rose Garden (Teddy.15)
I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza...
July 10th, 2024 12:34 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
Now there is a hymn I can go for. Yes peace is what I look for and if I...
July 10th, 2024 12:29 - Tax time (2781)
Are you talking about me? Most of this fits.
July 10th, 2024 12:21 - My Love (Thomas W Case)
True as well as nicely said with great images.
July 10th, 2024 05:59 - Birth Blessings (Orchidee)
Nature in all its beauty all creations and universal splendor well done...
July 9th, 2024 10:31 - On sale (2781)
This one rings with its depth in echoes of truth and lies. Lie\'s echoes...
July 9th, 2024 09:07 - The Beauty Of Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Yes it is true as attentive as one can be there are always new things to...
July 9th, 2024 08:36 - Raw and Cold (Thomas W Case)
Great images in this poem that cuts deep in its rawness.
July 7th, 2024 17:04 - Broken Mirror (Teddy.15)
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to...
July 7th, 2024 17:00 - UK OK? (Doggerel Dave)
Politics like the weather changes constantly and is unpredictable full of...
July 7th, 2024 16:53 - Seek First... (Orchidee)
Well done Orchi first is always good.
July 7th, 2024 15:21 - Leaves (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks so much Orchi it\'s appreciated
July 7th, 2024 15:18 - A Day Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
The music of joy in this write Gold so glad that the universe is still...
July 7th, 2024 11:38 - Forget Me Not (Teddy.15)
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their...
July 7th, 2024 11:34 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength...
July 7th, 2024 11:29 - Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60)
You have got it Andy but sometimes their hands move with a pen and lies...
July 5th, 2024 09:14 - Leading Light (Orchidee)
Here some gratitude is expressed even though it is with some expectation...
July 5th, 2024 09:10 - Dark things (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Orchi.
July 5th, 2024 09:08 - Full Disclosure (Parisab)
Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
July 5th, 2024 08:25 - Into the Dark (Thomas W Case)
Well if sex and chocolate won\'t save you now there is no hope. Good write...
July 4th, 2024 14:59 - The Backbone of a Poem (Teddy.15)
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it...
July 4th, 2024 14:52 - Scary! (Orchidee)
Some people have just too much time on their hands. I once met a woman who...
July 4th, 2024 08:52 - Stars In My Life. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy and those memories often grow with time becoming even...
July 4th, 2024 07:24 - Mango Madness (Doggerel Dave)
Loved this one Dave, it reminded me of a mango tree I have in the back...
July 4th, 2024 07:20 - Thomas\' Tale (Orchidee)
Now I said the same thing and am still waiting to see. It kind of helps...
July 3rd, 2024 11:34 - Winter’s Meadow (Teddy.15)
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will...
July 3rd, 2024 11:30 - Who’s Responsible? (Doggerel Dave)
The biggest question is: Why do we let them? Good write Dave like all the...
July 3rd, 2024 06:46 - Troll (Peto)
A troll indeed from the description. Vivid images in this poem. It evokes...
July 2nd, 2024 16:07 - Prosperous Prayer (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. Why is it that people only pray when they want...
July 2nd, 2024 12:47 - The invisible prison (Neilton)
Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write...
July 2nd, 2024 12:42 - How? (Thomas W Case)
Most people are basically narcissistic, self centered, oblivious to what...
July 2nd, 2024 07:05 - Missive For Mercy (Orchidee)
Yea I have plenty of sins but already know them so don\'t need to be told...
July 1st, 2024 12:04 - Give with one hand (2781)
It\'s all a hustle and always has been. The winner is the one that dies...
July 1st, 2024 08:14 - the cycle ride (NafisaSB)
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09 - 3rd Time Down (Thomas W Case)
Do both Thomas. The idiot box tells me everything I should not write about...
June 30th, 2024 16:26 - Teacher, Soldier, Athlete (Orchidee)
I am no good at multi tasking. Good write Orchi
June 30th, 2024 14:16 - Unrealistic Inclusion (Dan Williams)
Love the contradictory wording that gives a sense of comedy to the...
June 30th, 2024 12:54 - On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel (Teddy.15)
At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the...
June 30th, 2024 12:50 - Caged Hummingbird (Teddy.15)
\"I wish for the day
empathy opens my cage
and lets me fly away?\"
Ah...
June 30th, 2024 12:44 - Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case)
What no forbidden fruit? At least Kumquats. Fun write Thomas
June 30th, 2024 07:33 - Living forever (2781)
I identify with this write.
\"Enjoying life at a leisurely...
June 29th, 2024 13:54 - The Summer of ‘49 (Cassie58)
The image of snap shots plays out in the snap shot lines of this poem....
June 29th, 2024 05:32 - Faith confronts the wayward (Orchidee)
I need a lot of healing because I do a lot of erring. Good write Orchi
June 28th, 2024 06:03 - Extraordinary Vision (Teddy.15)
\"I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own...
June 28th, 2024 04:55 - Secrets of Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in...
June 27th, 2024 15:39 - Richness In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So true indeed whether money, relationships or anything else. A thought to...
June 27th, 2024 08:32 - Always With Me (Orchidee)
Do you suffer from PTSD? Good write Orchi
June 27th, 2024 08:28 - I Want to be your Lumberjack (Thomas W Case)
A strong manly poem of wanting to return to nature. I feel you.
June 27th, 2024 05:19 - God\'s Power in Judgement (Orchidee)
I just think that when there is a tornado, hurricane, volcano, landslide,...
June 26th, 2024 08:43 - Aggh! the heat! (Orchidee)
Don\'t over heat on those over 18 poems Orchi keep cool. Good write Orchi
June 25th, 2024 11:08 - Rural life (NafisaSB)
The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I...
June 25th, 2024 09:04 - Most high (2781)
An enigma a paradox yes in many ways so. Hard for many to understand...
June 25th, 2024 08:05 - Time Is Like A River. (Goldfinch60)
You follow in the steps of Heraclitus my friend but I imagine following...
June 25th, 2024 05:50 - Empath (Bloomingcereus)
It is one who is near sighted as to emotions unable to see the close inner...
June 25th, 2024 05:45 - Humble Pie (BlessedbyGod)
A truly great message Orchi that I wish more would hear. A human write I...
June 24th, 2024 09:48 - Back from The Future (Teddy.15)
Old friendships revived such a joy a wonderful write friend showing...
June 24th, 2024 09:38 - Dreams Worth Gold (Teddy.15)
Dreams can be so kind. Such a feeling of loss and still a feeling of joy...
June 24th, 2024 09:35 - Reigns (2781)
Don\'t build on a flood plain unless you are building on high pilings....
June 24th, 2024 07:20 - Passover Psalmings (Orchidee)
Mercy, kindness, truth not a bad lot. Good write Orchi
June 23rd, 2024 21:24 - Pain, Like Pie (Thomas W Case)
Great write Thomas
June 23rd, 2024 21:18 - Belief (Doggerel Dave)
It\'s gotten to the point that I don\'t believe even half of what I see...
June 22nd, 2024 21:26 - Onwards with Omnipresence (Orchidee)
Good opening I can always use my heart being lifted. Good one Orchi
June 22nd, 2024 17:34 - Tasting As Good. (Goldfinch60)
My mother used to bake cookies and set them on brown paper to cool. My...
June 22nd, 2024 06:10 - Life for Living (Orchidee)
\"Bringing salvation to each one
Who believes in you through your...
June 21st, 2024 11:01 - Singing Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful picture painted here and the even more beautiful thought that...
June 21st, 2024 06:00 - Reflecting in The Shower (Teddy.15)
Love the positive and negative aspects of this reflection. And in the word...
June 21st, 2024 05:51 - From Farm To Table belated Juneteenth (MLHnow)
How hard to understand others even when we listen. It seems that to really...
June 21st, 2024 05:46 - Here Comes Lucky (Thomas W Case)
A fun read my friend hope you got a roof over head.
June 20th, 2024 13:37 - Pretension (2781)
If it doesn\'t ask for money it\'s your friend. Good write
June 20th, 2024 13:33 - Secure Steps (Orchidee)
The older I get the more secure need to be the steps. Good one Orchi
June 20th, 2024 13:31
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