Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Bend what you see (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Teddy for the generous words you are always so kind. I appreciate...
May 30th, 2024 05:30 - Communion Considerations (Orchidee)
Bread and water is a rather strict diet and the idea of flesh and blood is...
May 29th, 2024 16:28 - A Leap In The Dark (Teddy.15)
It is true but I usually have heard it the other way that the head makes...
May 29th, 2024 11:15 - Forget Four Letter Words Redux (Plus Bonus....) (Doggerel Dave)
The two letter word that came to mind was (F-U) but then that is where my...
May 29th, 2024 11:07 - An Empty Space (Cassie58)
Sad and nostalgic at the same time. It calls out with memories and the...
May 29th, 2024 05:55 - The Hopeville Hilton Hospital - ity (Doggerel Dave)
I once had a patient that said God was talking to her through her TV it...
May 28th, 2024 09:56 - What\'s Up?! (Orchidee)
Quite a story Orchi true or not it sounds good and like they say \"one...
May 28th, 2024 07:32 - Shingles Shenanigans (Teddy.15)
A tragic event turned humorous. Never the less I am not sure which is...
May 28th, 2024 05:04 - Creaturely Celebration (Orchidee)
I sometimes wonder if he made us as a joke and yes people are sheep they...
May 27th, 2024 15:20 - Knowing I Saw Enough (Teddy.15)
Words of light that pave the way to another day. Oh so bright in the night...
May 27th, 2024 15:16 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60)
Humor like music is essential for one\'s health and well being. Thank you...
May 27th, 2024 05:40 - In a Battle Without a Shield (Thomas W Case)
The sense of stillness and aloneness as well as the season and site are...
May 27th, 2024 04:33 - Nothing (2781)
I love poems that the use of language requires thought and make sense in...
May 26th, 2024 12:05 - A load of rubbish! (Orchidee)
Liked this one Orchi three in one and one in three. You know you should...
May 26th, 2024 12:00 - My Angel (Teddy.15)
A most beautiful painting in vibrant colored words. I love the implication...
May 26th, 2024 06:06 - Singing In Hindi. (Goldfinch60)
I have visited many religions and studied about others but none seem so...
May 26th, 2024 04:48 - Trusting Testimony (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi. I love green olives and need all the mercy and...
May 25th, 2024 07:30 - The Train in Spain Stays Mainly on the Plain (as elsewhere) (Doggerel Dave)
This marks your and my age in that I remember the ride on steam...
May 25th, 2024 07:15 - Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale (Teddy.15)
A thought that most don\'t think of. We are two things: what we experience...
May 25th, 2024 07:08 - Havan For Shivani. (Goldfinch60)
A poem of brotherhood, union and peace that I wish for you and yours as...
May 25th, 2024 04:57 - Furor Scribendi (Thomas W Case)
This was so raw and the wording with images and metaphor were so clever....
May 24th, 2024 12:27 - Commission Call (Orchidee)
Very nice Orchi I guess you are spreading the word as well.
May 24th, 2024 10:54 - Ratios (2781)
My sentiments exactly, A very clever write with the idea that numbers...
May 24th, 2024 10:49 - And That Has Never Changed (Teddy.15)
An image that conveys such a feeling so well. Short and to the point. In...
May 24th, 2024 04:48 - Looking Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
One step at a time. That\'s what I get from this. If those steps are small...
May 24th, 2024 03:16 - Trips to the Cemetery. (Thomas W Case)
A great story that keeps the timeline. When I was small my father took us...
May 23rd, 2024 17:56 - Praise - study word Barak (Orchidee)
Always liked Psalms Orchi that and Proverbs one of my favorite old...
May 23rd, 2024 10:07 - A Very Brief Moment (Teddy.15)
What a wonderful way of stating that there are moments in time that we...
May 23rd, 2024 09:59 - Chips (2781)
They already put them on our dish with fish and chocolate ones in our...
May 23rd, 2024 06:26 - General Election Rant! (Goldfinch60)
Mark Twain once said :Politicians and diapers need to be changed...
May 23rd, 2024 05:07 - All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
Great poem and artwork the poem has a Scottish of English flavor and...
May 22nd, 2024 20:05 - Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54)
This was masterfully written and crafted. A wonderful write.
May 22nd, 2024 15:35 - An Exceptional Moment (Teddy.15)
They do happen indeed guaranteed. The odds of being born who you are is...
May 22nd, 2024 15:31 - Prosperous Presence (Orchidee)
How does Fido feel about being left out? It says every man and woman but...
May 22nd, 2024 07:08 - Economics (2781)
So true in every way. Money although necessary is a temptress and many...
May 22nd, 2024 07:05 - Music In Life. (Goldfinch60)
After listening to what I thought was all types of music I always find...
May 22nd, 2024 03:40 - Submerged In The Canals of Venice (Teddy.15)
The raven returns and a lost love from the past, now dead, haunts the...
May 21st, 2024 22:07 - The Cages (Thomas W Case)
Loss of freedom, chokes out life whether physical or emotional. Nicely...
May 21st, 2024 11:47 - Wind Powered Submarines. (Doggerel Dave)
That gives new meaning to passing wind. Most interesting in that it seems...
May 21st, 2024 09:43 - Affections (Christina8)
A most beautiful tribute to a wonderful relationship that endures over...
May 21st, 2024 08:55 - Coincidence (Alan R)
Signs, those things we look for to find what we want to be but need...
May 20th, 2024 14:10 - A Sixteen-Hour Miracle (Teddy.15)
Teddy you were born the same year as my oldest son. I too, although not in...
May 20th, 2024 05:40 - Judge (2781)
No I would never want to be a judge for it implies injustice or...
May 20th, 2024 05:33 - Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head) (Thomas W Case)
Magnificent words that set the limits between heart and head. Very nice.
May 19th, 2024 17:06 - Pentecost Promise (Orchidee)
I\'ve been to Pentecostal churches and although I find them amusing they...
May 19th, 2024 12:58 - Covid 19 (Doggerel Dave)
A great relief Dave. Now long after this I can look back and say...
May 19th, 2024 08:52 - Philosophy of Me (Teddy.15)
I read your note and empathize with the plight. I too am on multiple sites...
May 19th, 2024 07:33 - The Nature Of Wales. (Goldfinch60)
You strike at my weak spot Andy. I spend most of my time in the wilds...
May 19th, 2024 05:37 - Please (2781)
I feel in church somehow. Tomorrow is Sunday, am I Jewish? or seventh day...
May 18th, 2024 19:29 - Sunrise in the Marianas (Mutley Ravishes)
The paradoxical words fit the title but under the surface is more truth...
May 18th, 2024 18:55 - Any moment now the 5th and last will land (Poetic Dan)
A great message to your children and I can hear the pride and optimism in...
May 18th, 2024 16:02 - Three Palms Revisited (Doggerel Dave)
I can relate Dave thank God only a house or two erected to stop my view of...
May 18th, 2024 14:54 - Lowly Lines (Orchidee)
A most hopeful write Orchi full of optimism and good will.
May 18th, 2024 14:46 - Little Tommy Titbit (Teddy.15)
You are right Teddy there is always time for humor. Not quite sure why...
May 18th, 2024 14:42 - Lovelorn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful words of loss and missing someone. Short but so nicely written.
May 17th, 2024 04:00 - Humane Relations. (Doggerel Dave)
A fun write Dave it touches on real issues and I find that charming and...
May 16th, 2024 20:38 - Redemption Rejoicing (Orchidee)
Forgiveness is great and I only hope that the cloud doesn\'t go away.
May 16th, 2024 09:30 - Tentacles (2781)
So it appears. When we look for the cause we only need to look in a...
May 16th, 2024 06:10 - Always By My Side (Teddy.15)
I love surprise endings and this one caught me off guard. But as all...
May 16th, 2024 04:42 - Redemption Rejoicing (Orchidee)
Redemption is a powerful word Orchi. I believe it should be reserved for...
May 16th, 2024 04:06 - Why Wars? (Goldfinch60)
True Andy sharing is not an innate human quality for most of us. I ask...
May 16th, 2024 04:01 - Fishing (Teddy.15)
I love the play on words and like throwing in the towel it is over when...
May 15th, 2024 16:35 - Trees - or Something. (Doggerel Dave)
Yes trees do talk or at least communicate with each other so I hear and...
May 15th, 2024 14:15 - Into And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful picture here. Calm and peaceful full of the wonder of nature
May 15th, 2024 14:10 - Collective Communing (Orchidee)
I love poems of gratitude they are so far and few between. Good write
May 14th, 2024 09:25 - Ageless Love (Teddy.15)
Memories stimulated by a fragment of the past. Such an interesting way of...
May 14th, 2024 05:00 - Justified (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you Teddy your kind remarks are again appreciated. Yes peace seems a...
May 14th, 2024 04:54 - Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful image Here it seems that the key is the last stanza. I...
May 14th, 2024 04:28 - My Spell Checker (Doggerel Dave)
Nothing worse than to have a word changed without knowing it\'s spelling...
May 13th, 2024 10:38 - Dilly-dally (2781)
Been there done that. I can feel this one as if it were a mirror and a...
May 13th, 2024 03:56 - Unsighted (Teddy.15)
Art comes from the heart not the senses. Surging emotion will find a way...
May 13th, 2024 03:51 - Cats Know Fun (Thomas W Case)
This makes me think of all the times that such things occur and then I...
May 12th, 2024 11:14 - Scribble (2781)
Been there and probably will be there again. Liked the playfulness of this...
May 12th, 2024 11:11 - The Love in my Heart (Teddy.15)
Beautiful! There can not be one without the other Love and Hate are...
May 12th, 2024 05:49 - Please (Bella Shepard)
I love waltzes preferring a fast Viennese waltz where the whirling becomes...
May 11th, 2024 13:51 - Favourable Faith (Orchidee)
Faith, trust, belief, confidence in all are pretty much lacking these days...
May 11th, 2024 10:02 - Just to Hear your Laughter (Teddy.15)
The imagery in this poem is so enthralling and bright that it lifts and...
May 11th, 2024 03:55 - Musical Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Poetry a close kin to music in that it has meter and evokes emotion as...
May 11th, 2024 02:46 - At All Cost (Thomas W Case)
Thoughts that give pause. Great lines in this piece Thomas.
May 10th, 2024 10:49 - Bed Bath and Beyond (Teddy.15)
At first the title led me to think that this was about a store we used to...
May 10th, 2024 02:42 - Birdman! (Orchidee)
Did you get anything in the hunt? And were these wings angel wings? Good...
May 10th, 2024 02:18 - Death spiral (2781)
I like the feel of spiraling out of control in this poem and subject. More...
May 10th, 2024 01:55 - Yet Another Fine Day. (Goldfinch60)
And may it be longer and longer with better and better health and joy. A...
May 10th, 2024 01:20 - Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold (Teddy.15)
A wonderful picture and so well written with a bit of mysticism. So...
May 9th, 2024 17:39 - Ascension Acclamations (Orchidee)
Alleluia Orchi Good write.
May 9th, 2024 12:31 - Too Drunk to Fuck (Thomas W Case)
It\'s like a flooded engine it just won\'t start until it has sat for a...
May 8th, 2024 09:53 - A Soul\'s Portrait (Teddy.15)
Many great lines speak from a wounded heart in this poem
a poetic heart...
May 8th, 2024 05:34 - Prayer Persevering (Orchidee)
My father was a believer in the moving of mountains he worked in a mine....
May 8th, 2024 04:09 - My Night of a Thousand Storms (Thomas W Case)
A poem of desperation well represented in ironic fashion. Nicely done.
May 7th, 2024 11:32 - Knowledge (Alan R)
The question becomes, can you afford to ask? A thought provoking poem that...
May 7th, 2024 10:19 - Possessing Peace (Orchidee)
I like the idea that gratitude should be voiced. It simply should precede...
May 7th, 2024 08:56 - My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again…. (Doggerel Dave)
Here here Dave I echo these sentiments. Well stated in verse. Loved it.
May 7th, 2024 06:37 - The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant!! Such a metaphor here Andy. I feel that I have seen this happen...
May 7th, 2024 01:23 - Prayer Petitions (Orchidee)
I go one step beyond when I pray I go where God can not see or hear me. I...
May 6th, 2024 12:43 - Firefly (Teddy.15)
This did seem to be for one gone from this world although it could be for...
May 6th, 2024 10:46 - Access to Asking (Orchidee)
Familiar words since childhood and I have asked in the past and my record...
May 5th, 2024 16:42 - Health In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So true Gold and though being loved is a wonderful thing and ideal it is...
May 5th, 2024 02:54 - Memories (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
An intriguing story that seems not to be finished yet.
May 4th, 2024 11:04 - Creation Considerations (Orchidee)
Orchi did you get rid of the rating before I got to it? I suppose you...
May 4th, 2024 08:56 - Storm (Doggerel Dave)
Funny how many people follow like sheep whether lies, superstition,...
May 4th, 2024 06:05
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