Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- A Very Epic Morning (Teddy.15)
Life has no joy without balance. No appreciation of the good without...
May 4th, 2024 04:03 - And It Rained! (Goldfinch60)
Here it has been raining for days and some houses are up to the roof top....
May 4th, 2024 03:56 - Far From The Madding Crowd (Cassie58)
A poet\'s sensitivity and ability to communicate emotion is a connection...
May 4th, 2024 03:50 - Necropolis Nonsense While on a Tour… (Doggerel Dave)
What did Micky do to deserve that? I thought that he was one of the good...
May 3rd, 2024 10:37 - A Perfect Moment in May (Teddy.15)
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying...
May 2nd, 2024 03:45 - Cycles (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Teddy your reviews are always so encouraging and appreciated. Thank...
May 2nd, 2024 03:37 - Liking? (Orchidee)
I am grateful that they don\'t have a dislike button Orchi or I might have...
May 2nd, 2024 03:34 - Into Summertime. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s so queer in a different hemisphere. I go back and forth, this time...
May 1st, 2024 03:03 - Wise Way (Orchidee)
All of life is preparing a place to go and so here too. Metaphorical or...
April 30th, 2024 04:32 - Let (2781)
Many great pleas for what would bring happiness and peace. Nicely done
April 30th, 2024 04:28 - Confines (Alan R)
This one is to think about. AI worries me but then who am I? Provocative...
April 29th, 2024 14:21 - Here, Sit I (Cassie58)
This poem speaks powerfully to any parent where a child should not go...
April 29th, 2024 12:23 - That Line (Doggerel Dave)
Here here, I agree such frustration from the present system yet what other...
April 29th, 2024 11:55 - Vain (2781)
Everyone needs a bit of security gained from different sources, some from...
April 29th, 2024 11:19 - Gospel Givers (Orchidee)
The spreader of good news is alwasy welcome. Good write Orchi.
April 29th, 2024 08:21 - Rocking Worlds (Teddy.15)
There are some famous musicians that keep such a little book and so are...
April 29th, 2024 08:15 - For Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful feeling that will carry the day and the rest of eternity.
April 29th, 2024 03:06 - My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60)
Amazing how nature and one\'s focus upon it can remove stress and pain. A...
April 28th, 2024 02:59 - Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60)
Most interesting synchronicity in that you wrote of Mozart and I of Jacob...
April 28th, 2024 02:54 - Colonoscopy (Bella Shepard)
I never expected a Haiku of such depth, the naked truth revealing inner...
April 27th, 2024 12:12 - Resorting to Refuge (Orchidee)
I\'ve been looking for that secret place heard there is a lot of treasure...
April 27th, 2024 09:48 - Locket (Cassie58)
Deep meaning here it is not what we are made of that dictates value but...
April 27th, 2024 07:15 - Raven\'s Encore (Teddy.15)
Rather spooky in that we both wrote of silence at the same time but you...
April 27th, 2024 03:41 - Night Sweats (Orchidee)
The end of last month? Was this a preparation for April fools? Or was it...
April 26th, 2024 11:22 - Mighty few (2781)
Ecclesiastes 1:9 “The thing that hath been, it is that which shall be;...
April 26th, 2024 11:16 - A Prayer of King Nebuchadnezzar (Orchidee)
I heard he was a heck of a gardener building hanging gardens. Good write...
April 25th, 2024 11:56 - Necropolis Nonsense While on a Tour… (Doggerel Dave)
Now this one was wonderful, well metered and rhymed but better yet was the...
April 25th, 2024 09:38 - Random Kindness (Cassie58)
Such a beautiful poetic smile to lift the spirits of all its readers....
April 24th, 2024 08:51 - The Happiness Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great metaphor that seems almost biblical in some way. It is also great...
April 24th, 2024 03:41 - Awakening (Teddy.15)
Such good advice in poetic form. Both sides need to be considered and...
April 24th, 2024 03:38 - I remember when.... (Orchidee)
Glad to hear you came out on the winning end of that one. Good write
April 23rd, 2024 16:28 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Great win in verse is the best of humor. Loved this one Andy it actually...
April 23rd, 2024 03:57 - Our Skies Are Red With Blood (Teddy.15)
Separated by many more years than Europe from war on her own ground, the...
April 22nd, 2024 08:16 - Omnipotent Observations (Orchidee)
Did you steal this from Trump\'s acceptance speech? I heard that he...
April 22nd, 2024 05:23 - Nature\'s Blanket. (Goldfinch60)
Fall\'s beauty in the temperate zones of the world. I grew up with this...
April 22nd, 2024 04:39 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
\"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you\"
A great line. In this plea for...
April 21st, 2024 16:28 - Reigning Ruler (Orchidee)
I like the clapping hands part I wonder if he will bow. The last church I...
April 21st, 2024 03:12 - Our Love Will Never Die. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful picture, faith, and emotion cast by this poem. Oh that such...
April 21st, 2024 02:08 - visionary (Teddy.15)
As I read I notice that I have expectations as to the outcome of each work...
April 20th, 2024 08:51 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
I couldn\'t afford the daily rate and so I have been sent to a one star...
April 20th, 2024 08:44 - Exalt (2781)
We have been waiting for the visit for some time now, I sometimes wonder...
April 20th, 2024 05:15 - Daily Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
I spend the night touching up what I painted that day. A poignant write...
April 20th, 2024 03:59 - Some Words Speak for Themselves (Neville)
Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that...
April 19th, 2024 06:46 - Perpetual Presence (Orchidee)
Perceptual presence is what the government proposes. I need a little...
April 19th, 2024 04:59 - Blind Date (Teddy.15)
So nice to start the morning with a smile and I am glad that no aliens...
April 19th, 2024 03:58 - A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer (Neville)
Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.
April 19th, 2024 03:42 - The Mountain Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great message that more should heed. Different paths to the same goal....
April 19th, 2024 03:40 - Frozen Love (Thomas W Case)
From the sad and morbid to the humorous poetic in its contrast. The...
April 18th, 2024 20:57 - Angels Encore (Teddy.15)
Such a pleasant though or dream as opposed to those moments paralyzed by...
April 18th, 2024 13:57 - Comforting Concerns (Orchidee)
\"Blessed they that help the powerless
And the poor in distress\"
A...
April 18th, 2024 09:05 - All\'s Going Well (Doggerel Dave)
Something light hearted is always welcome both the clip and your poem. I...
April 18th, 2024 06:52 - Imitators (2781)
Always said any church that asks for money is a red flag. Good write.
April 18th, 2024 04:11 - They Came To The Door. (Goldfinch60)
I used to believe in an organized religion but then I used to believe in...
April 18th, 2024 03:38 - The Pierced Dreamer (Thomas W Case)
Short but with a message. I loved the line
\"Some dreams are
best...
April 17th, 2024 15:53 - Christ-Like Living (Orchidee)
Reminds me a bit of charity as in second Corinthians 13 but a bit more....
April 17th, 2024 09:33 - Do-over (Teddy.15)
Brilliant! Another write that is on more than one level. Do we not all...
April 17th, 2024 03:46 - Gospel Given (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. Faith is a good thing for in the end it is what we base...
April 16th, 2024 15:34 - Gratitude (Cassie58)
Such a touching and vivid picture you paint. Sad yet poignant aging and...
April 16th, 2024 15:27 - Full Employment. (Doggerel Dave)
Got you Dave I\'m in the same boat sailing down shit creek with no paddle.
April 16th, 2024 07:04 - What\'s \'is name (2781)
He has many names some of which are lost to time in that they were never...
April 16th, 2024 05:31 - Sleeping Beauty (Teddy.15)
A great saying and even greater thought and mind set. So healthy to think...
April 16th, 2024 03:57 - From Shakespeare with Love (Teddy.15)
Funny how a person can write something so iconic that after centuries it...
April 16th, 2024 02:44 - People Watching Once More. (Goldfinch60)
With children and grand children of my own, I remember the greatest joys...
April 16th, 2024 02:33 - Prayer Pleas (Orchidee)
You continue in faithful hymns Orchi each reminiscent of scriptures and...
April 15th, 2024 13:10 - Contented Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
Gold you have become a Buda. Your teachings are profound and wise indeed...
April 15th, 2024 03:49 - Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
Gratitude is a good thing. Good write Orchi.
April 14th, 2024 11:00 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
Young deaths always draw more attention due to the potential loss and the...
April 14th, 2024 09:30 - This Moment (Thomas W Case)
A powerful pledge and plea for the love of another. Hard to resist.
April 14th, 2024 08:44 - San Francisco’s Waiting (Teddy.15)
Living in California for some years I have driven over this bridge and...
April 14th, 2024 03:54 - Just a world (Alan R)
A fine description of the world we live in, or at least most of us. There...
April 14th, 2024 02:43 - Modern poet (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks so much for the review and comment it is appreciated
April 14th, 2024 02:41 - The Shadows Were Back. (Goldfinch60)
I remember those years they were my teen years as well and the music was...
April 14th, 2024 02:26 - A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody (Doggerel Dave)
I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry...
April 14th, 2024 02:21 - This Morning (Bella Shepard)
A most poignant and sad poem Bella. There are so many senseless tragedies...
April 13th, 2024 16:07 - Argh! Pain (Orchidee)
When I was younger I had a puffer fish in my aquarium, didn\'t last long...
April 13th, 2024 10:22 - My Darling London (Teddy.15)
It is strange how locations of birth, childhood, and places where one...
April 13th, 2024 04:55 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine several other images less holy that he could have painted...
April 13th, 2024 03:23 - The Womb\'s Lullaby (Thomas W Case)
The rhythm reflected in the rhythm of the poem itself. Yes I have felt it...
April 12th, 2024 14:17 - Saving Safety (Orchidee)
When I was young and even more poor than now I banked at Zion\'s bank. I...
April 12th, 2024 14:09 - A Poet’s Death or Encore? (Teddy.15)
Such a grand love, inspiring and in this there is no shame. In the...
April 12th, 2024 14:03 - Weak To Strong (Goldfinch60)
A message that many need to hear. I do believe in giving up on a method...
April 12th, 2024 04:19 - Olive Oil (Orchidee)
I haven\'t seen an olive tree since California. I do love olive oil...
April 12th, 2024 04:15 - Observer Of A Gentle Soul (Teddy.15)
Such a message of what we all go through in many different ways of...
April 11th, 2024 06:45 - Unitarians. (Goldfinch60)
I too feel that religion is more of a problem than a gift. Even the symbol...
April 11th, 2024 04:36 - Dead End Eyes (Thomas W Case)
I have seen eyes like that before. Dead end eyes often lead to a dead end...
April 11th, 2024 04:27 - Counting Cost of the Cross (Orchidee)
So as not to lose my soul I have it chained to my ankle. I do tend to...
April 10th, 2024 12:09 - See (2781)
Sacraments always bothered me somehow. It seems cannibalistic, excuse the...
April 10th, 2024 12:04 - Tangerine Dreams (Teddy.15)
Such imagery in vivid color and setting. I too remember the Beatles, one...
April 10th, 2024 05:45 - Cheltenham Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
A long anticipated celebration and enjoyment as well as tribute to a...
April 10th, 2024 04:01 - Narcissist (Thomas W Case)
A vivid description of a narcissistic person. Difficult to live with I\'m...
April 9th, 2024 20:06 - Waste places (2781)
Not much of a religious guy anymore but I hear the message and yea there...
April 9th, 2024 07:27 - Senryu 3 (Teddy.15)
A sad truth and a well written piece Teddy.
April 9th, 2024 07:05 - My World. (Goldfinch60)
An element of poetry often forgotten the twist at the end that makes sense...
April 9th, 2024 03:36 - I\'ve Been Touched By An Angel Today. (Teddy.15)
Some beautiful lines:
\"I had been struck fiercely by a bolt of...
April 8th, 2024 15:44 - O Abundant Spirit (Orchidee)
I made a friend of death too Orchi but he told me he does no favors even...
April 8th, 2024 15:27 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
So many of us have dreamed of flight and gliding over land and sea....
April 8th, 2024 04:36 - Dreams of the Fishes (Thomas W Case)
Sleeping with the fish always had a different meaning for me. In this case...
April 7th, 2024 23:47 - Sustenance (Bella Shepard)
Wouldn\'t it be nice to be obese on wisdom? Great write Bella
April 7th, 2024 19:47 - In Harmony Together. (Goldfinch60)
Green the symbol of new life. A great metaphor Andy. Clear with youth and...
April 7th, 2024 04:06 - Red (Anthony “Tappy” Paull)
Loved it. Basic addressing a primary color. I have written a couple of...
April 6th, 2024 14:21
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