Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Anti portraits (Lorenz) This is in a different way what we all are. We are a mix of so many things...
  May 24th, 2025 10:45
• Conceptual Identity \'Me\' (AddieThomas100) Nicely said a good message.
  May 24th, 2025 10:39
• Thank you! (Hzugman) Some people are just lucky if you consider contentment good. An enjoyable...
  May 24th, 2025 09:30
• Instruction Manual (Molly Delaney) We all come with damage and flaws as well as no warrantee. A good read
  May 24th, 2025 09:29
• How Much Is  The Hippocratic  Oath? by Remikh Elena (Ksey_Gan) A lovely historic story told in most poetic form. Loved it
  May 24th, 2025 08:16
• Sweet Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor) A most beautiful rhyme about fading away with age. Wonderful wording
  May 24th, 2025 08:12
• Of Dreams, Poetry, and Yes, Precisely. (Cheeky Missy) Break the ice with food and keep the mood with some throughout. Another...
  May 24th, 2025 08:10
• A Senryu (Thoughtless) Well written and a powerful point where overreaction has led to terrible...
  May 24th, 2025 08:06
• Edge of sorrow and love (Jerry Reynolds) A most wonderful write and a fave. The wording is its selling factor...
  May 24th, 2025 08:04
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 39-The auction--28April2025 (Soman Ragavan) Indeed I agree that satire has its place in the armory of the poet to...
  May 24th, 2025 06:50
• Love was made for you and for me (Poetaldo) As in the parting of bread we should share what we have with others.
  May 24th, 2025 06:46
• A Thought: A dawns spark (Maplespal) Very nicely written this poem of rhyme with a metaphor of time passing in...
  May 24th, 2025 06:45
• An Apology To My Poems (Rebellion_in_sanity) Loved this poem and the metaphor here. Vanity is one of the greatest foes...
  May 24th, 2025 06:43
• I kept but forgot (Pamela) A poetic expression of the person that focus\' on the negative and forgets...
  May 24th, 2025 06:39
• Porchlight to Cityscape (Samuel) This poem to me a metaphor of life in general where the familiar and...
  May 24th, 2025 06:37
• Jaguar Wright: Agent Of Deception (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Don\'t doubt anything and don\'t believe anything that\'s my policy. Good...
  May 24th, 2025 06:34
• cruelty (Jim56) People are cruel and kind by nature and this is true to animals and other...
  May 24th, 2025 06:24
• Everyone takes a shit (Demar Desu) Now there\'s a thought to start off the day. Made me feel like going LOL...
  May 24th, 2025 06:20
• Absurd Aburdity (Libellule) Very well rhymed and with such good flow this poem has a deeper message...
  May 24th, 2025 04:36
• Liar. (Rosie) This poem is well constructed and flows nicely leading to a marvelous end...
  May 24th, 2025 04:33
• Have you ever dreamed? (Gewar) Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we...
  May 24th, 2025 04:31
• Safe, Even If He Leaves (The Soft Witness) There is a type of internal wisdom that grows with age and in this case...
  May 24th, 2025 04:29
• WHY? (Kayewaye) Life is at time hard to figure out. A wonderful write that is raw and...
  May 24th, 2025 04:26
• Come To Me Before Winter (ForeverJesus7) This has the feel of another era past and carries with that feel of age....
  May 24th, 2025 04:24
• FREQUENCY OF GODS (Nephilim56) Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a...
  May 24th, 2025 04:22
• Invocation (Vasile Serban) Sad and mournful this poem reflects on loss and a sense of loneliness that...
  May 24th, 2025 04:18
• The River Thinks for Me (Rrodriguez) A fave for the metaphor in this poem. A lovely image penned
  May 24th, 2025 04:15
• Nothing else to add (Seybsdatroller) Cute and endearing this poem speaks of an infatuation that is more than...
  May 24th, 2025 04:13
• Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend (Arqios) This one accomplishes its task well in Acrostic form. It sounds...
  May 24th, 2025 04:10
• Harry Brags. (Poetic Licence) Fun with a moral the best kind. Well done Tobani
  May 24th, 2025 04:03
• Beethoven Will Live On. (Goldfinch60) A lovely poem about a lovely experience. Love Beethoven especially his...
  May 24th, 2025 04:01
• Smile (Sunshine777) A poem of religious belief and conviction that leads to a better life....
  May 24th, 2025 03:54
• Just Shoot Me (Anthony Hanible) This seems scattered thoughts of a free association that takes one through...
  May 24th, 2025 03:52
• Chastity (Alex PB) Most interesting beginning to this seductive poem of love. Nicely done.
  May 23rd, 2025 19:58
• I Human (Kevin Hulme) A fun read. Too bad we have gotten to that point. Well done
  May 23rd, 2025 19:56
• Nighttime images (BlessedbyGod) So many beautiful places to see mentioned in this poem. Have seen them all...
  May 23rd, 2025 18:37
• He who Troubles his Own House (Thomas W Case) Once again a most gritty poem with plain talk of life. Lovely
  May 23rd, 2025 17:16
• Deathbed (Teddy.15) This poem of synchrony of appreciation of nature and love is nicely...
  May 23rd, 2025 17:12
• Sleeping with you (Amethyste) Short and seductive this poem pulls no punches. Well done
  May 23rd, 2025 15:39
• I Set the Moment Down (GeekSusie) So many beautiful stanzas of acceptance. The Master told Tenzin: “You...
  May 23rd, 2025 14:48
• A Waste of Time (Violet_Writes) A poem so nicely said in a few words. Speaking of a loss and the...
  May 23rd, 2025 14:02
• My Anger Turned Into Sadness (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A poem of loss and sadness over it as well as some denial that it had...
  May 23rd, 2025 13:12
• The Unfiltered Mirror (Gray0328) A lot of unexpected combinations in this poem. Another fun read.
  May 23rd, 2025 13:07
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 38-LimbsInTheBush--28April2025 (Soman Ragavan) Another great analysis of a poem and the socio-cultural implications as...
  May 23rd, 2025 12:01
• Your Face (Paul Gerard Reed) I sense deeper meaning to this poem where a grave is not where the person...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:57
• Archer Divine (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Karma they say or justice depending upon belief. Nicely done Kurt
  May 23rd, 2025 11:55
• A Rhyming Believer (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Rap is poetry in music with meter and rhyme. Nicely done
  May 23rd, 2025 11:53
• A senior moment experienced by this drip... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Clever use of the letters REM in spellings and the allusion to dreams....
  May 23rd, 2025 11:51
• Unrequited Love (Eira Solen) We all have choices and sometimes we feel we made the wrong one and can\'t...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:46
• Instant (John Prophet) This sounds like the new computer generation and AI news briefs. A great...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:43
• Traviata (Ksey_Gan) Such a great analogy in this piece. A flower wilted.
  May 23rd, 2025 11:41
• My twin sister (Lorenz) You know what it is to hear discordant music this poem was so many chords...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:39
• the night & the carnage (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Mind altering indeed. Chemical handcuffs. A most interesting read.
  May 23rd, 2025 11:31
• Rain (2781) We all bail when the water starts coming in. A great tale in poetic form....
  May 23rd, 2025 11:23
• Bonkers! (Orchidee) Ah what would this site be without Orchi? The saga goes on. Made my day.
  May 23rd, 2025 11:19
• joys of retirement  (Devender Kumar) A most idealistic senryu loved it. You know no one retires anymore they...
  May 23rd, 2025 09:09
• Untitled (RSM0812) The words, rhyme and meter captured me with this write and like a lullaby...
  May 23rd, 2025 09:02
• my porcelain bird (Hyerin) The metaphor seems clear to me and how we are all that bird frozen on a...
  May 23rd, 2025 09:00
• THE PRE-ANNOUNCED BOMBING- WHILE SWIMMING 1992. (Swarovski20) A most interesting write of the battle of justice against greed and of...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:57
• Echoed and streamed (Maplespal) A wonderful story told in this poem of deceit and consequences. Most...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:53
• Tell it slant (Libellule) Such good wording in most poetic style bordering on neologisms that cast...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:50
• Pandora’s Box (Muse of Calliope) A most lovely poem of myth and the metaphor always got me. If you think of...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:46
• Desolate Vigil of Longing (Amirreza Nazari) A poem of praise to one\'s God and belief nicely stated
  May 23rd, 2025 05:54
• Scent of Secrets (Salvia.S) Secrets promote guilt and guilt can be resurrected by any reminder. Nicely...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:40
• wishes (Jim56) Wish upon a star and then believe with all your heart and in that belief...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:37
• A CHALICE OF GORE (Saša Milivojev) Violence and its horrors portrayed in this poem of modern day war torn...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:36
• Two Houses, Two Loves (Samuel) Very nicely crafted with a wise concept of how definitions vary and lead...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:33
• Only Love Will Keep Us Together (A piece of luggage) Identifying with a past memory can be a trigger that sets off old feelings...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:29
• FROST OF LOVE (MYSTROGWAPO) A cute poem of finding and capturing one that is felt to be chosen. Lovely
  May 23rd, 2025 05:20
• CHILD GHOST (Nephilim56) A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:19
• I Didn\'t Answer (The Soft Witness) A poem of growing self respect and sense of what one wants and how to get...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:17
• \"Stars Beyond Reach\" (Cirawrites01) A poem where the cosmos becomes part of the metaphor of chase. Lovely
  May 23rd, 2025 05:14
• Just A Test (Sahildhobalepoetry) A poem of encouragement and belief. Nicely done
  May 23rd, 2025 05:12
• ONCE CALLED HEAVEN (Ferjohn Timung) It is the combination of the rhyme and wording of meaning that gets the...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:10
• Velvet Command (Salian) A most erotic, sensual poem where sex and power become one. Strangely...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:08
• Exclusively Ours (Mottakeenur Rehman) Such poetic clever wording that encompasses so much meaning. A truly...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:06
• Fine wine Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Sensuous, seductive it likens one to nature itself and all of its beauty....
  May 23rd, 2025 05:04
• An Unspoken Conversation (Radha Raghunathan) A great metaphor. Nicely penned it speaks of passing by things that may or...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:00
• Made of Mirrors (COGNOVA) I loved how this poem reflects how we take pieces of others to be...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:57
• Spit pages (Bonnie) Reflections in this poem that have the feel of both being stuck in time...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:54
• Coffee And Pie For Two (ForeverJesus7) Sharing is more lovely and this is depicted in this poem. Nicely written...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:48
• Bruce Lee (EvenwheniLie) I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:46
• Tug Of War (Anthony Hanible) Dark images in this poem leave feelings of insignificance and depression...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:43
• Soundtrack of Silence (FallingAwake2) I love the use of incompatibilities in this poem to emphasize the...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:41
• heights (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Wow! what a dig. There seems to be a good deal of resentment here and the...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:37
• life in poetry (Demar Desu) Meaningful wisdom in a Haiku very nicely done
  May 23rd, 2025 04:34
• alive in uncertainty (Demar Desu) This one is one of my favorites of yours Demar it made me smile.
  May 23rd, 2025 04:33
• constants of change (Arqios) Loved this poem where mathematical features are turned mythical in a great...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:31
• The Urge To Kill. (Poetic Licence) Tobani as I read this at first I pictured this as another individual then...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:28
• No escape (NafisaSB) A poem about the force of passion that overcomes reason. Very nicely...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:16
• Stepping Stones. (Goldfinch60) A great metaphor and excellent wisdom in it. I have enough stepping stones...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:11
• Antipathy (NikNak73) I love your use of opposites and you contrasts. (Shrinking from sight with...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:06
• Recompense (NikNak73) I love the contrast in this poem between the ephemeral nature of many...
  May 23rd, 2025 03:55
• Faith - it is a journey (Amy Michelle Mosier) Interesting wording that creates some doubts about its meaning and leaves...
  May 22nd, 2025 19:33
• The Oracle (Sunshinefalling) A most interesting format and well spoken as a conflict that needs...
  May 22nd, 2025 19:31
• A Doll Named Hope (Rrodriguez) Heartfelt, tender and sad it speaks to faith and hope. Lovely
  May 22nd, 2025 19:28
• Returned to the wild (Keeter C) A clever write and a good message in this poem. A lovely write
  May 22nd, 2025 19:00
• Barbed Wire Wedding Ring (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could...
  May 22nd, 2025 18:58
• Tough Crowd (Seybsdatroller) A brave revelation that exposes the fear we all have of other\'s reactions...
  May 22nd, 2025 18:53
• Verses of Ukraine Mariners by Alexey Fatianoff (Ksey_Gan) A poem that seems so folk like and something from another era. Lovely
  May 22nd, 2025 18:50