Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Thankyou (Buttercup) A wonderful thought with very good images. Nicely crafted from an idea...
  March 14th, 2025 03:47
• Some issues (Maplespal) Confusion is the first word that comes to mind that is confusion of the...
  March 13th, 2025 19:34
• I\'ll Take Chocolate Pudding, Thank you. (Cheeky Missy) A full day\'s journey from morn to night with weather, food, vogue...
  March 13th, 2025 16:08
• RESIDENCY (Twizzle48) A poem of concern for an invading force. Questioning even sanity it...
  March 13th, 2025 15:55
• The Sunshine in my life (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of gratitude. I too feel this way frequently when a poem brightens...
  March 13th, 2025 15:51
• I write (Lorenz) Obscurity, darkness and a very gothic feel to this poem. It has a sense of...
  March 13th, 2025 15:49
• The Choice is Always Yours (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A lovely write with a great message. Very nice indeed
  March 13th, 2025 13:21
• When Money Speaks (Mohammad Younus) Money, wealth the siren of man who steals, lusts, prostitutes himself for...
  March 13th, 2025 13:02
• Dark Corners of my Soul (Thomas W Case) A poem that makes a journey and learns on the way to protect itself. Well...
  March 13th, 2025 11:48
• washed up (Demar Desu) Short and thought provoking. Very nice
  March 13th, 2025 11:16
• Chained (RSM0812) A thought provoking poem. Very nice
  March 13th, 2025 11:15
• Contemplations (John Prophet)
  March 13th, 2025 11:08
• Contemplations (John Prophet) Questions that we all have that remain unanswered. Nice
  March 13th, 2025 11:08
• Duet Larisa and Yasha from the operetta The White Accacia after Isaac Dunaevsky (Ksey_Gan) A poem of supplication. There is a lot of desire in this poem it screams...
  March 13th, 2025 11:03
• Hotel El-Camon (Jerry Reynolds) I see this as a metaphor of life itself. Each line seems to apply. Well...
  March 13th, 2025 09:43
• Putting on a band-aid (Ella-1427) A raw and powerful poem of resistance to others abuse through being...
  March 13th, 2025 09:40
• A Lingering Dream (Kurt Philip Behm) Another poem with deep meaning my friend.
  March 13th, 2025 09:38
• Reflection (Reflet) (Ellen Marsell) What a beautiful work of art this poem is. Wonderful image together with a...
  March 13th, 2025 09:37
• Stole my tent (Tony36) A poem with deeper meaning Tony loved it
  March 13th, 2025 09:35
• light & shadow (Tristan Robert Lange) A beautiful image and metaphor as well all wrapped up in a Haiku. That...
  March 13th, 2025 09:33
• Soft sky missing the clouds (Caring dove) Very nice and I guess that feeling at home is most important. A lovely...
  March 13th, 2025 07:43
• MEN OF THE CLOTH (Nephilim56) When violations are quietly condoned by those in power there is little...
  March 13th, 2025 06:43
• Set Free (Hanible) Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out...
  March 13th, 2025 06:41
• when you fall in love (Jim56) Another bright poem this time of love. Very nice Jim
  March 13th, 2025 06:39
• The Weight of Enlightenment (Neville) The Tao taught me to look at things in more than one way. Forgiving and...
  March 13th, 2025 06:38
• Overnight Temblor (Gray0328) A great description so well done in verse. Been through them and know the...
  March 13th, 2025 04:11
• My Parents & Poetry (Tom Dylan) Poetry is more than words it can be shown in love and so it is in this...
  March 13th, 2025 04:09
• Power In The Pen (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Few people do care what others think or say unless it gets them something...
  March 13th, 2025 04:06
• Prose: A Night in Mussoorie (Naina Pandey) A beautiful picture painted in poetic words in this poem. Very nice
  March 13th, 2025 04:04
• Is culture, culture (EvenwheniLie) Poetic rhyme in this poem gives it its strength. The rhyme is internal as...
  March 13th, 2025 04:02
• Forever Etched (Job Welime) This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance...
  March 13th, 2025 04:00
• stay with me (Sheta) This poem seems to speak from two different perspectives that then merge....
  March 13th, 2025 03:57
• God\'s Been Good (Originally by someone else) (ForeverJesus7) This poetry\'s strength lies in its colloquial language. It speaks out of...
  March 13th, 2025 03:55
• boarding pass (Arqios) Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there...
  March 13th, 2025 03:53
• Today, Tomorrow, Last Year? (Orchidee) Everybody loves somebody that knows less than they do, or at least what...
  March 13th, 2025 03:49
• The Water. (Poetic Licence) Water, one of the four basic elements of old. It cleanses, is powerful and...
  March 13th, 2025 03:46
• Deirdre (David Wakeling) A very personal poem of love and loss and pain. A beautiful expression of...
  March 13th, 2025 03:41
• Doubt (James Michael) A poem, a prayer for forgiveness? Short and to the point it cries out of...
  March 13th, 2025 03:39
• The Library (Kevin Hulme) So true, not only libraries but books themselves and few children like to...
  March 13th, 2025 03:38
• The Moon Above. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful declaration of a full and happy life well lived. Very nicely...
  March 13th, 2025 03:32
• A Bird and the Rose in Folks (King-consort Amor Hari Seldon of Spain, GAF/61SX (USAF)) A well written poem with a great story and the metaphor is sad and...
  March 12th, 2025 20:28
• Texting and sexting as therapy (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A fun read about something so popular. Thought provoking
  March 12th, 2025 15:55
• Passwords ! (Chris Duffy) This a jewel and well crafted too. A problem we all have and put in poetic...
  March 12th, 2025 15:50
• Dry Lipped (Maplespal) Metaphor is this poem. A great write of love and death. Very nice
  March 12th, 2025 15:47
• A Prayer (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) A beautiful prayer poem for the little folk. Lovely
  March 12th, 2025 14:05
• Poetry Is For Me A Light (Mohammad Younus) Great are the words. The Quran, Bible, Tora, Tao are poetry and if God...
  March 12th, 2025 13:30
• A Revisit To The Present (Arshia) A fellow spirit in this poem. Writing poetry is my therapy that serves me...
  March 12th, 2025 13:24
• Today (Jerry Reynolds) And it always does. Loved this short statement of fact that rang so true....
  March 12th, 2025 12:53
• We All Have A Dream (Kaelyn Jade) A poem in song format with a chorus. It presents a great message and reads...
  March 12th, 2025 12:28
• Flower and tree (Caring dove) A most comfortable image created in this poem. It presents a surrealistic...
  March 12th, 2025 12:26
• The Greatest Myth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) These are almost Tao like in their wisdom. Most lovely
  March 12th, 2025 12:23
• Clock of time (RSM0812) Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons...
  March 12th, 2025 12:21
• Happiness (Gray0328) I had to read this twice to grasp it. The it in this poem makes it...
  March 12th, 2025 12:17
• The Cost of Dreams (TheInnerLens) This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes...
  March 12th, 2025 12:13
• Beyond words (Nicole Pritchard) A plea for belief this poem has good rhyme and flows well. It makes its...
  March 12th, 2025 12:10
• mothers love (Jim56) True love indeed it maternal Jim. Whether human or animal none can exceed...
  March 12th, 2025 12:08
• Russian Ballad after Alexander Vazenmiller (Ksey_Gan) There are stacks of wood in the wood shed here and someone has lost a hair...
  March 12th, 2025 12:06
• Lost home (Lorenz) All things are not as they seem. This poem offers so many metaphors it is...
  March 12th, 2025 11:59
• Casual Sunburn (Tkatie118) A poem of loss? Or maybe the loss is the innocence lost. A poem of pain...
  March 12th, 2025 08:40
• Don\'t Call This A Come-Back (Tom Dylan) Glad to hear it. We all take a hiatus once in a while and a needed rest...
  March 12th, 2025 08:35
• DREAM RETURNING (Nephilim56) Wow! How nicely written this piece that could be about the old or one...
  March 12th, 2025 08:33
• The Devil\'s Design (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan this poem filled with delightful alliteration, anaphora, oxymoron...
  March 12th, 2025 08:30
• Tick or Tock? (Orchidee) Caught in a time warp Orchi? Think of the jet lag. Maybe your a photon...
  March 12th, 2025 05:09
• Familiar (Eugene S.) I can feel the darkness in this poem and it has sense of power to it....
  March 12th, 2025 04:17
• don\'t run (Sheta) Good advice in poetic form. Motivational, inspirational, educational. Very...
  March 12th, 2025 04:14
• Osiris And The Eye of Horus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A great metaphor here short but sweet and told for ages in different...
  March 12th, 2025 04:13
• I bleed holy (Funmiwrites) Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building,...
  March 12th, 2025 04:10
• Quantum Mix (John Prophet) Information, energy, transformation, matter, gravity, time, entropy, so...
  March 12th, 2025 04:07
• The things I wish I said in Therapy. (Gracie🍯) Such a common feel for any new relationship. How do you strip yourself...
  March 12th, 2025 04:02
• There is a flower (Kevin Hulme) I love the metaphor in this poem, it blooms fresh. So nicely written with...
  March 12th, 2025 04:00
• panhandler’s timepiece (Arqios) This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no...
  March 12th, 2025 03:56
• I Thought I saw You Standing There. (Poetic Licence) This poem leaves a wistful feeling one of longing and memories that will...
  March 12th, 2025 03:53
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) I would too if not for the menu. It takes a tough stomach to be a buzzard....
  March 12th, 2025 03:50
• Alone in the sea at night. (David Wakeling) Giving up comes to mind with this poem. I hear disillusion, disgust and...
  March 12th, 2025 03:47
• Cant do anything right (Hey!) A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else...
  March 11th, 2025 19:57
• Returns (Mutley Ravishes) Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only...
  March 11th, 2025 19:54
• Distractions (Dyslexic.gun) A poem of realization of self. Very nicely done
  March 11th, 2025 19:51
• How is it? (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Many questions in this poem and they all lead to the same answer: you...
  March 11th, 2025 19:46
• Прощання | Farewell to a loved one (Hanna_love) A love poem for distant galaxies. Very nice
  March 11th, 2025 19:43
• Gloryhole (A Boy With Roses) Passion builds tension in this poem of desire and fantasy. Well done.
  March 11th, 2025 17:01
• What do I do (Xqw)
  March 11th, 2025 16:57
• What do I do (Xqw) A poem of emotional confusion where two are torn apart but can\'t bring...
  March 11th, 2025 16:57
• I\'m waiting here (Maplespal) A sense of loss and longing pervades this poem and extends a hand of hope...
  March 11th, 2025 15:54
• Regret\'s Heavy Weight (Nicole Pritchard) Guilt and forgiveness go hand in hand. This poem screams out with pain and...
  March 11th, 2025 15:53
• Let\'s Celebrate Fat Tuesday Year-Round, Eh?! (Cheeky Missy) I hear the exhaustion in the first the longing for sweet in the second and...
  March 11th, 2025 13:17
• Rippling rhymes (Arial) Calming and like a lullaby it hums
  March 11th, 2025 12:46
• Your Mind (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A wonderful write full of wisdom that flows in flowing words as water...
  March 11th, 2025 12:45
• Ms. Neal - The Sonnet (JuneM) Descriptive and with great images it tells its tale without telling it.
  March 11th, 2025 12:42
• Born To Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) Grim thought to many hope to others. Another well written poem
  March 11th, 2025 12:15
• The fifth horseman (Lorenz) A grim picture of the disease and in metaphor it rides its horse over the...
  March 11th, 2025 12:14
• The .embroidered towel after Andre Malishko (Ksey_Gan) Those reminders that trigger memories. A poem that in its charm lays out...
  March 11th, 2025 12:11
• Let\'s say hello... (Cellinic) Ah Hippocrates and the spleen issue. What type of bile do we have today,...
  March 11th, 2025 12:09
• Ordinary married sexagenarian mortal fêted as savior incarnate... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Times have changed and one has to adapt. A fun poem about keeping one\'s...
  March 11th, 2025 12:07
• The Divine Circle (Gray0328) Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is...
  March 11th, 2025 10:56
• friends#2 (Sheta)
  March 11th, 2025 10:54
• friends#2 (Sheta) Friends more important than most know. Friends we pick and so unlike...
  March 11th, 2025 10:54
• Tangle Teaser (Cassie58) A poem of nostalgia and flavored with a hint of sadness and longing. Very...
  March 11th, 2025 09:55
• Night Psychosis (Katdream) A impelling write in question of what is real and what is illusion. A dark...
  March 11th, 2025 09:52
• Empty (RSM0812) Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and...
  March 11th, 2025 09:50
• The Magic Man (Thomas W Case) Great stuff here Thomas. Some lines lead to inspiration. In metaphor it...
  March 11th, 2025 09:47