Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• If Only It Were Real (Kaelyn Jade) Not every movie, book or poem can end happy. This is a poem of a wish and...
  March 18th, 2025 19:59
• Silencio (Falcon_mn) It is the wording of this poem that gives it beauty. Wonderful choices of...
  March 18th, 2025 19:54
• Stronger (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Motivational and encouraging this poem tells the reader not to give up....
  March 18th, 2025 19:51
• Cement Blocks (Hanible) Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell...
  March 18th, 2025 18:21
• Putin non gmo gluten free cheese on the ritz as a celiac to follow (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Given the date of manufacture, are you not sure that this should be past...
  March 18th, 2025 17:09
• Hide and seek (Pineapple_pizza018) Could be a child\'s rhyme but I think it is meant for older people. The...
  March 18th, 2025 16:00
• We\'ll Clean the Mess (Ladywithaquill) A very inviting poem of union and its joint benefits well written and with...
  March 18th, 2025 15:58
• Simple joys (Nicole Pritchard) What is simple is generally right and what is right is generally simple is...
  March 18th, 2025 15:56
• Too Soon... (Framed Mirror) Pruning is a useful action with plants and people. Nicely done
  March 18th, 2025 12:40
• The Saga of the Russian Civil War Part 1 after  Edward Bagritski (Ksey_Gan) Quite the story as a metaphor and with such a touch that it seemed Russian...
  March 18th, 2025 12:17
• The Silence That Listens (Petrichor of Love) Nature and person one and the same the metaphors well said merge into...
  March 18th, 2025 12:11
• A women or a flower (RSM0812) A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely...
  March 18th, 2025 12:08
• Souls (Lorenz) Such juxtapositions of old and new and black snow is the example of purity...
  March 18th, 2025 10:50
• Spring Rain (Kurt Philip Behm) When the language becomes too colorful it draws a different type of crowd....
  March 18th, 2025 10:47
• Conscious sexual engagement advancement (Demar Desu) A good idea I think I\'ll steal. A fun read
  March 18th, 2025 10:45
• Prodomal (Agantuk) Quite an image you present in these few lines. Nicely done
  March 18th, 2025 09:47
• Surrounded by Stones (Tristan Robert Lange) You already advised that it can not be interpreted and yet my mind keeps...
  March 18th, 2025 09:10
• Stories to tell (Tony36) A head full of fantasy in this poem. Lovely Tony
  March 18th, 2025 07:40
• That’s What it Looks Like (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Loved the message and more still your creative rhyme in this poem it reads...
  March 18th, 2025 07:10
• Goodbye (Natalie Heisey) A poem of anger, hate and revenge showing its power in images. Nicely done
  March 18th, 2025 07:07
• garden sun (Jim56) Another of your bright poems of nature that lighten the day but in this...
  March 18th, 2025 05:39
• Murder (The Indignant Poetess) A powerful poem of passion transmuted from love to hate. The strength of...
  March 18th, 2025 05:37
• Manifested & I confide (Maplespal) These both have a feeling of distance and loss of missing someone dear....
  March 18th, 2025 05:35
• Nearly Home (Part.3) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A continuation of the story as not only noted in the title but the poem...
  March 18th, 2025 04:27
• BENIM ASHKIM (Simurgh) The meter and wording of this poem give it an eastern flavor and it seems...
  March 18th, 2025 04:25
• Winner Takes All (Mutley Ravishes) I always loved word play and here it is at its best. A marvelous weaving...
  March 18th, 2025 04:21
• She’s Tired (Chris M 352) Personification well used in this poem to mislead the reader until the...
  March 18th, 2025 04:19
• SURRENDED ARMY (Nephilim56) A vision of defeat and possibly a metaphor as well most wars take...
  March 18th, 2025 04:18
• The ever-persisting hallucination (David Wakeling) Change is inevitable and for those that like the present it is dark but...
  March 18th, 2025 04:15
• Stormy Sea (Orchidee) A wonderful hymn Orchi as a child in church remember singing \"Peace be...
  March 18th, 2025 04:11
• My Mama`s Gone. (Poetic Licence) Abuse an ugly monster that consumes both victim and perpetrator as well as...
  March 18th, 2025 04:08
• Another Weekend By The Sea Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Very nicely crafted Andy a most beautiful piece
  March 18th, 2025 04:04
• whale-watching season (Arqios) This one for me was ingenious. My mind reaching out for connections sees...
  March 18th, 2025 04:02
• the wardrobe (Pilisydo) We often keep souvenirs of items that serve as triggers to our memory....
  March 18th, 2025 03:55
• Lovely lady (Jennybee89) A great motivational poem.
  March 17th, 2025 19:36
• Finding Light, Returning Dawn. (Mohammad Younus) Great images and well painted this poem
  March 17th, 2025 19:34
• Ode to rebirth (Neilton) What a dream it must have been. The poem seems epic in its proportions and...
  March 17th, 2025 18:33
• in and out (Xqw) A fun use of the terms in and out. Creative
  March 17th, 2025 17:43
• Now, Don\'t Quote Me on This-- (Cheeky Missy) Here you go again making me hungry. Full of details this poem has great...
  March 17th, 2025 17:41
• Varying Consent (Thoughtless) Tender and nicely said. A tribute to a great love. Nothing more need be...
  March 17th, 2025 15:01
• The sound of you (Arial) A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
  March 17th, 2025 14:59
• The gift of release (Nicole Pritchard) A great topic and message. It asks each person to let go of hate and anger...
  March 17th, 2025 14:58
• Be Wary (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A poem of warning and repudiation of witchcraft. Nicely written
  March 17th, 2025 14:52
• A Warrior of Speech (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Firm believer in this and yes the pen is mightier than the sword. Well...
  March 17th, 2025 13:47
• Wisdom for the Day (AwHec8) A great play on rhyme. I happen to agree with both. A delightful short
  March 17th, 2025 13:46
• victim (MR.apocalypse) In a way it is a reversal of power. It is most frustrating when weakness...
  March 17th, 2025 13:45
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) A strong feeling of frustration with society voiced in this poem some...
  March 17th, 2025 12:10
• The Dance of Light and Darkness (Heledd) All those that believe in fate should cherish each moment and yes it might...
  March 17th, 2025 11:36
• New Moon Laughing (Kurt Philip Behm) A metaphor I assume. People are like this and from there it goes many...
  March 17th, 2025 11:34
• Love Love Love (Hanible) The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love...
  March 17th, 2025 10:49
• An ode to love (Enigma747) Your wording makes this poem, word choice and juxtaposition are wonderful....
  March 17th, 2025 10:18
• The Sun To My Moon (Akshadha_Joshi1310) Nice combination of two needed pieces to make a whole just as two lovers...
  March 17th, 2025 10:03
• They (Tony36) With more people more control and so it goes. There is an internal drive...
  March 17th, 2025 10:01
• NICE PRICE (ChrisLyn🕊) A very resolved poem of what one has to face and the reality of what one...
  March 17th, 2025 09:59
• Daddy…. (Ajon4wheels) A most tender and heartfelt poem of love for father gone but not...
  March 17th, 2025 09:24
• Green sits softly (Caring dove) A different perspective adds distance and scope to our view. Here the...
  March 17th, 2025 09:03
• vines (Newt) Too often this metaphor is lived by people where pruned they lay some...
  March 17th, 2025 09:00
• The inverted smile reigns (Tommy B Goode) How do we understand others if we don\'t understand ourselves? How can we...
  March 17th, 2025 08:58
• black desire (Lorenz) Darkly erotic and sensuous in nightly tones this poem holds black magic at...
  March 17th, 2025 08:56
• Exactly Where You Need To Be (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I see the progress in your poetry it is amazing. Here in your form you in...
  March 17th, 2025 07:55
• Wokey Pokey Song (Gregstarandgoff) I remember something like that. A fun song to get the day going. Come to...
  March 17th, 2025 07:53
• Saint Patrick\'s Brood (Tristan Robert Lange) A spear through the saint\'s heart. A pome to elucidate the fabricated...
  March 17th, 2025 07:49
• A simple thought (Maplespal) A most interesting question and one with a complex answer. Nicely said
  March 17th, 2025 07:11
• get help (Jim56) A most needed poem for those that have reached the end of their rope....
  March 17th, 2025 07:10
• The Artist\'s Ascent (Gray0328) A most artistic and poetic presentation of creation. Lovely images spring...
  March 17th, 2025 07:08
• RADIO CRACKLES (Nephilim56) A great representation of the toughness of life in the present economy and...
  March 17th, 2025 07:05
• The Tree That Grew Us All (Junes) A great metaphor of the strength of family ties and the unseen protection...
  March 17th, 2025 07:03
• The Mischief of the Leprechaun (Matthew R. Callies) A wonderful poem appropriately posted on the right day. Well rhymed and...
  March 17th, 2025 07:01
• On St Patrick\'s Day (Tom Dylan) A poem of heritage and its importance. My heritage also has a line to...
  March 17th, 2025 06:57
• Dangerous words (Jeremy Leach) A delightful poem about the care one needs to exercise when handling a...
  March 17th, 2025 06:55
• Feeling (L.R.A) It is the opposition in all things that make up this world. A poem of...
  March 17th, 2025 06:51
• I Would Have Lost Hope Series Pt. 3 (Pita) A poem that begs the reader to assess their wrongs and make changes. A...
  March 17th, 2025 06:48
• Sonder Eyes (L_19) We are all a piece of a whole a cell in a body, an atom in a universe. As...
  March 17th, 2025 06:46
• Dusty roads take me out (Amy Michelle Mosier) A poem of nature\'s beauty and a place I have been before. It feels home...
  March 17th, 2025 06:41
• Is Peace Just a Fantasy. (Poetic Licence) It appears that violence is part of the human DNA and greed as well. It is...
  March 17th, 2025 06:38
• Mr Walton had to wait. (David Wakeling) Indeed I have been there I think both in person and on the phone. It is...
  March 17th, 2025 06:11
• just my ☘️ luck (Arqios) Well timed this one does, now that you mention it, remind me of that song....
  March 17th, 2025 06:05
• KP she says..... (Orchidee) It sounds like you are still on fair terms calling her dear. Another fun...
  March 17th, 2025 06:01
• Wet Words. (Goldfinch60) And so they do Andy, in the shower or when driving are the worst in that...
  March 17th, 2025 05:58
• The Lighthouse that saved me (Kaelyn Jade) We all need something greater to look to. A great poem about this. Well...
  March 16th, 2025 20:48
• Fire (Shadowbones) I love the meaning of this poem. It to me speaks of unity being greater...
  March 16th, 2025 20:46
• My Car, Ma (Mutley Ravishes) A fun read and brings back memories of some old cars I had. Loved it
  March 16th, 2025 20:44
• Grief (Sassy Lou) Grief comes to us all at one time or another. Pain is part of life and no...
  March 16th, 2025 18:47
• Pedestrian Brake Pads (Matthew R. Callies) The shoes we walk in take us through life and all the steps we take. A...
  March 16th, 2025 18:45
• Sleeping Through Alarms (Mya) A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
  March 16th, 2025 18:42
• Beware bloody hyperbolic contents incorporated to embody rage against the machine (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) From now till then this poem goes over events and everything from music to...
  March 16th, 2025 18:40
• The weight of an empty room (Jodie) A poem of leaving already decided. Powerful. Nicely done.
  March 16th, 2025 18:34
• Descending Unlocks (Kurt Philip Behm) Another poem of metaphor of ups and downs. Very nice.
  March 16th, 2025 18:31
• Balancing (Spilleronsheet) This may well be a metaphor for the artist. A wonderful write that...
  March 16th, 2025 13:07
• Misty forests (Alan R) A metaphor of inner self comes to mind and well imaged and stated in most...
  March 16th, 2025 12:59
• Finding (Spilleronsheet) This come and go in poetic form provokes a great deal of thought. A fight...
  March 16th, 2025 12:58
• The Love Choice (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) A poetic recognition that the choice is two fold and that one can put an...
  March 16th, 2025 12:56
• Forgiveness denied (Nicole Pritchard) A worthy write on a subject so misunderstood. Making good a part as is...
  March 16th, 2025 12:55
• Of Bar-B-Que, Pink, and Deja Vu.... (Cheeky Missy) Another day told and so may details that are painting this story. Lovely...
  March 16th, 2025 12:53
• Do I belong? (Pineapple_pizza018) Biblical in nature and archetypal it speaks of power, betrayal, the...
  March 16th, 2025 12:49
• The Weight of Truth ([email protected]) Journalist or metaphor this speaks of telling the truth and the bravery to...
  March 16th, 2025 12:44
• Night Shift (Gray0328) A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well...
  March 16th, 2025 12:41
• The time (Lorenz) Here are thoughts of a beyond and paradox that makes life. Very nicely...
  March 16th, 2025 12:38
• Tears icicled (Tommy B Goode) I hear anger and pain in this poem. It is sad.
  March 16th, 2025 11:56
• She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost (Dev Parth) A sad poem of loss that bleeds with sorrow. Missed encounters, lost...
  March 16th, 2025 10:00