Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Cycle (John Prophet)
Loved the format of this poem with its one word lines and the flow that it...
April 6th, 2024 14:18 - Noir Nightmares (Katdream)
Noir is indeed the feel of this poem. It is dark in its shadows and paints...
April 6th, 2024 14:15 - April Trials (Bella Shepard)
When it comes to politics you could never offend me Bella since I see the...
April 6th, 2024 13:42 - Rejoicing Repertoire (Orchidee)
It\'s that slow to anger part that I worry about along with casting the...
April 6th, 2024 11:01 - Nightingale and I (Teddy.15)
Never give up on oneself is a battle cry that should be held by all of us....
April 6th, 2024 10:56 - War (2781)
War hurts the poor fought over gold
sometimes religion, or land we\'re...
April 6th, 2024 07:50 - The Village Ghost (Goldfinch60)
I enjoyed this tale Gold and brought a smile to me with the end line....
April 6th, 2024 04:42 - Reflection of the Soul (Thomas W Case)
They say that eyes are the mirror of the soul and so this poem reads. So...
April 5th, 2024 19:55 - Dear Little One (Mase ♪)
A great message of reassurance and guidance. Well said.
April 5th, 2024 19:53 - A Perfect Madness (Teddy.15)
I love the picture and the poem but having worked with the insane for many...
April 5th, 2024 17:09 - Wholesome Wordings (Orchidee)
Many tell me I should be afraid and fear but I\'ve got too much other...
April 5th, 2024 10:44 - The Lord is my God. (2781)
So many thoughts common to many yet a beautiful wish.
\"But who is my...
April 5th, 2024 09:20 - So All Is Fine. (Goldfinch60)
Words that reminded me of my father who when asked how he was, always used...
April 5th, 2024 04:56 - Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots (Teddy.15)
Dreams, such an interesting topic. Some say their meanings are important,...
April 4th, 2024 13:03 - Persevere (Bella Shepard)
A great take on Descartes quote turned to another view and the play on...
April 4th, 2024 08:15 - Victory Verified (Orchidee)
With this thought in mind there is no need for Botox. One of my favorite...
April 4th, 2024 08:09 - Going To Galilee (Orchidee)
A most famous story well told in clear description. Nicely written Orchi
April 3rd, 2024 05:45 - Enlightened (Teddy.15)
Beautifully stated in poetic style a feeling of relief. Lifted from the...
April 3rd, 2024 05:41 - The New Season. (Goldfinch60)
Something historical always gives a little more weight to something. I...
April 3rd, 2024 05:32 - A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say….. (Doggerel Dave)
A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no...
April 2nd, 2024 18:44 - Whose Will To Do? (Orchidee)
Very timely Orchi and well written as well.
March 26th, 2024 11:30 - Please Achieve Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Peace such a lovely thought but like most other good thoughts almost...
March 26th, 2024 11:27 - Hard Head Soft Behind (Bragee)
A wistful write merging the past with the present.
March 26th, 2024 11:15 - Love Letter (Teddy.15)
Very clever wording and idea in general/ Loved it.
March 26th, 2024 11:11 - Faithful Family (Orchidee)
Now this is a bit different it speaks of Jesus\' brothers and sisters but...
March 19th, 2024 10:19 - A Very Modern Tale (Teddy.15)
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
\"Romeo, my...
March 19th, 2024 10:14 - The Proper Task (Thomas W Case)
The metaphors are great in this poem. Nicely done
March 19th, 2024 09:58 - Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave)
It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
March 18th, 2024 16:29 - Guide And Guard (Orchidee)
Trust is a big word for someone you can\'t see and or hear. Someone that...
March 18th, 2024 09:42 - Six (Thomas W Case)
Very nice it speaks to those few days where poems just roll out.
March 16th, 2024 23:16 - Pedestal (Teddy.15)
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many...
March 15th, 2024 04:40 - Everlasting Exhortation (Orchidee)
My parents used to tell me the same thing. Our commandments obey and they...
March 14th, 2024 11:36 - Guiness Is Good For You. (Goldfinch60)
Didn\'t know that. Not sure it\'s available where I\'m at. I love a beer...
March 14th, 2024 05:04 - Shanties Getting Better. (Goldfinch60)
Why is it that such pub stories are so nostalgic and warm in their nature....
March 14th, 2024 05:00 - Humbly Hoping (Orchidee)
Yes indeed Orchi \"in spirit poor\" it seems that most church goers and...
March 14th, 2024 04:56 - Tariffs (2781)
This in its literal sense I experience myself with constant costs. This...
March 13th, 2024 05:58 - That Sorceriffic Ass (Thomas W Case)
A definite statement that can be taken various ways. Nicely done
March 12th, 2024 15:29 - Beautiful people (Alan R)
The goodness of some people is a blessing to see. When that goodness comes...
March 12th, 2024 11:22 - Confession. (Doggerel Dave)
Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual...
March 12th, 2024 07:53 - Shadow and Light (Saxon Crow)
A most interesting write.
\"But magic is real
Where we are not
And...
March 12th, 2024 05:44 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
Well done Orchi
March 12th, 2024 03:03 - One for Hunter (Thomas W Case)
The first person helps this wonderful write present itself in a vivid and...
March 12th, 2024 02:42 - Egg yolk on a comet tail (Teddy.15)
A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more...
March 11th, 2024 15:13 - Fossilised? (Orchidee)
Now those human footprints in rock are explained. Good write Orchi.
March 8th, 2024 04:30 - Joy, Love, Sadness and Hate. (Goldfinch60)
This is why I do not watch the news anymore. The imbalance is such that it...
March 8th, 2024 04:26 - Dancing with Doubt (Cloie)
An existential journey that at one time or another we all take. Nicely...
March 7th, 2024 12:05 - The Makings of a Poet (Accidental Poet)
To say that real men are not poets is to say that real men are blind....
March 7th, 2024 11:22 - Deceitful Desires (Orchidee)
Lust is a big problem not only morally but practically. It never ends...
March 7th, 2024 09:13 - The Great Journey Home (Teddy.15)
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the...
March 7th, 2024 09:00 - The George. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful story that rings with nostalgia and fondness. Very nice Gold.
March 7th, 2024 05:50 - Confident Comfortings (Orchidee)
Confusing how many names he has. Last time you said his name is always the...
March 6th, 2024 16:58 - Death In Verona (Teddy.15)
I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s...
March 6th, 2024 16:48 - Exposé (Doggerel Dave)
I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good...
March 6th, 2024 06:32 - A CRITICAL MEASURE (Bobby O)
This holds a great deal within it. A deeply human experience that anyone...
March 6th, 2024 05:19 - Looking Forward. (Goldfinch60)
Gratitude for the past and hopeful anticipation of the future are keys to...
March 6th, 2024 05:10 - False Spring (Firefall)
The analogy was a good one and was unexpected despite the title. Nicely...
March 5th, 2024 15:14 - All Roads to Happiness (Accidental Poet)
A beautiful message that more people need to hear and take notice of....
March 5th, 2024 11:49 - Presence Providence (Orchidee)
My name is the same too is that special? Good write Orchi.
March 5th, 2024 05:10 - Algebra of Love (Teddy.15)
A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is...
March 5th, 2024 05:06 - Veil of Sorrow (Cloie)
Focusing on the bad and painful only enhances it. This world is a balance...
March 5th, 2024 04:05 - Walking The River Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful metaphor for the changes in life that come unplanned and need...
March 5th, 2024 03:33 - Grieving Heart (Teddy.15)
The metaphor is a clear sign indeed but in the winds and rain (tears) of...
March 4th, 2024 04:47 - Must you.....? (Orchidee)
Made me chuckle Orchi I hope you have a good hair day.
March 4th, 2024 04:42 - Peace On Earth Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
So well said Andy a well organized piece full of wisdom that I too wish...
March 4th, 2024 02:18 - A Memory So Deep (Accidental Poet)
This struck the memory chords and they still vibrate at my age. Very nice...
March 3rd, 2024 21:49 - Echoes of Lavender (Cassie58)
Beautiful images that take me to another plane. Lovely feelings go with...
March 3rd, 2024 21:45 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
Beautiful thoughts in beautiful words. Wistful in nature almost surreal.
March 3rd, 2024 21:41 - Among Poets (Rhmn_7)
A great question put in verse. I can only speak for myself. I write for...
March 3rd, 2024 08:11 - I\'ll Sacrifice (Cloie)
There are no bonds stronger than the love between mother and child....
March 3rd, 2024 08:04 - Listening Lord (Orchidee)
Now you are reviewing my bible knowledge. This one seems a bit more...
March 3rd, 2024 05:43 - Glimmers in the Dark (Cloie)
A great contrast is shown here. Light could be knowledge and dark...
March 2nd, 2024 11:20 - Eruption (Teddy.15)
Love is not only at the top but also at the bottom. It is the underlying...
March 2nd, 2024 09:23 - Winsome Worship (Orchidee)
An anticipatory celebration here. Another good write Orchi.
March 2nd, 2024 05:00 - Freedom In Life. (Goldfinch60)
You have said it Andy. That is the key to freedom and to peace. Nicely...
March 2nd, 2024 04:57 - Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15)
\"the day is now your follower
and today she\'ll be with you\"
Loved...
March 1st, 2024 22:11 - Wisdom Ways (Orchidee)
Now that was short!
March 1st, 2024 03:14 - Time To Text. (Goldfinch60)
I feel it Andy. From land lines to beepers, cell phones, texts, instant...
March 1st, 2024 03:13 - From Florence With Love (Teddy.15)
A beautiful tribute to not only a city but in metaphor a person.. This...
March 1st, 2024 02:41 - Boo Hoo! (Orchidee)
Had that happen before and felt very frustrated. My sympathies Orchi.
March 1st, 2024 02:33 - Every New Day. (Goldfinch60)
The message hear is plain and a good one that all should take to heart....
March 1st, 2024 02:30 - Dreamer (2781)
This seems a pledge along with a type of psalm nicely stated.
March 1st, 2024 02:28 - Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
I could certainly identify with this one Teddy it is not only beautiful...
February 29th, 2024 01:02 - I LOVE YOU. (Goldfinch60)
This is the mortar that holds the blocks together. A beautiful statement...
February 28th, 2024 03:00 - My existence (Meera Mere)
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but...
February 27th, 2024 14:51 - Grace Guardian (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi
February 27th, 2024 11:02 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
I love the way this is written without a specific narrator as if a unfaced...
February 27th, 2024 04:04 - From where the wild roses grow (Teddy.15)
How did I miss gem? There is just enough mystery and puzzle in these lines...
February 27th, 2024 03:55 - March Birthdays! Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Wow you know that many people? I just give each two cents, that is my two...
February 27th, 2024 03:07 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
I have to say I have never been there myself. Wonderful wording and...
February 26th, 2024 20:47 - Your Favorite Beverage (Accidental Poet)
My favorite is tequila they say tequila will kill ya but I find it good...
February 26th, 2024 20:43 - Prayer Requests (Orchidee)
I always wondered what it would be like if everyone got everything they...
February 26th, 2024 20:38 - The Book Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Good advise and a new way to look at adversity, so nicely worded. It...
February 26th, 2024 04:14 - God is an Artist (Thomas W Case)
God is an artist and you\'re right our creations pale in comparison.
February 25th, 2024 16:54 - Happy Birthday George Harrison (Accidental Poet)
Here comes the sun, one of my favorites. George responsible for bringing...
February 25th, 2024 12:10 - Paper Planes (Rhmn_7)
Your approach with a question to the reader was a great beginning. It is...
February 25th, 2024 09:24 - An Informal Visit. (Doggerel Dave)
Couplets my friend. Well when Taylor came down here a girl dropped dead....
February 25th, 2024 05:34 - In Quiet Wonder (Cloie)
This is beauty in words beyond your years. Lovely, poetic and wise as...
February 25th, 2024 05:20 - Creation Clarity (Orchidee)
I like the way this one begins.
\"The heavens declare the glory\" Indeed...
February 25th, 2024 05:07 - It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15)
Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow....
February 25th, 2024 04:59 - Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee)
Well Orchi reading your hymns/poems I regard as my weekly church duty....
February 24th, 2024 08:58
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