Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The fifth horseman (Lorenz) A grim picture of the disease and in metaphor it rides its horse over the...
  March 11th, 2025 12:14
• The .embroidered towel after Andre Malishko (Ksey_Gan) Those reminders that trigger memories. A poem that in its charm lays out...
  March 11th, 2025 12:11
• Let\'s say hello... (Cellinic) Ah Hippocrates and the spleen issue. What type of bile do we have today,...
  March 11th, 2025 12:09
• Ordinary married sexagenarian mortal fêted as savior incarnate... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Times have changed and one has to adapt. A fun poem about keeping one\'s...
  March 11th, 2025 12:07
• The Divine Circle (Gray0328) Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is...
  March 11th, 2025 10:56
• friends#2 (Sheta)
  March 11th, 2025 10:54
• friends#2 (Sheta) Friends more important than most know. Friends we pick and so unlike...
  March 11th, 2025 10:54
• Tangle Teaser (Cassie58) A poem of nostalgia and flavored with a hint of sadness and longing. Very...
  March 11th, 2025 09:55
• Night Psychosis (Katdream) A impelling write in question of what is real and what is illusion. A dark...
  March 11th, 2025 09:52
• Empty (RSM0812) Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and...
  March 11th, 2025 09:50
• The Magic Man (Thomas W Case) Great stuff here Thomas. Some lines lead to inspiration. In metaphor it...
  March 11th, 2025 09:47
• Your Journey (Tony36) Another good message to stay true to oneself. (To thine own self be true)...
  March 11th, 2025 08:02
• Astrophel\'s call to the stars (Kaelyn Jade) A great poem of an existential journey that ended in finding oneself and...
  March 11th, 2025 07:06
• Life Saver (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great words that should be taken to heart. To each their own and taste can...
  March 11th, 2025 07:03
• The Life in Words (Whats write for me) Words of wisdom with which to sharpen a tool used to hew stone and flesh....
  March 11th, 2025 07:01
• family (Jim56) A bright and wonderful thought Jim this poem brings a smile of warmth to...
  March 11th, 2025 06:59
• The Dastardly Dell of Death (Tristan Robert Lange) Vivid and graphic this poem appears so literal and dark, Cold as a corpse...
  March 11th, 2025 06:57
• Unmask Me (Scarlette Patricia Howard) A poem in a prayer or a prayer in a poem. Either way a plea for protection...
  March 11th, 2025 05:31
• Respect Jesus But Don\'t Forget God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Contradictions in everything. Religion itself a contradiction as is God....
  March 11th, 2025 05:29
• Epic (Alan R) Memories wings grown strong with positive distortion are a beautiful sight...
  March 11th, 2025 05:25
• Moments (A.H. Browning) And don\'t we all? The question is to whom and for what reason. A fun poem...
  March 11th, 2025 05:21
• This Is Me (Ajon4wheels) A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived...
  March 11th, 2025 05:19
• Miss Mary Court (Kevin Hulme) A very nicely worded poem around a topic little discussed and with great...
  March 11th, 2025 05:14
• The Patience of Time (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie) A beautiful poem that grows as it moves along until the end where it...
  March 11th, 2025 05:11
• Organic vs Artificial (Demar Desu) Got it I think, how hard to eat rocks. Very nice.
  March 11th, 2025 05:06
• Poetry isn\'t for me (Tom Dylan) A beautiful recognition that poetry in different ways is for all. A...
  March 11th, 2025 05:05
• One More Open Verdict For the Road (Neville) This short poem encapsulates so much in an instant just like the fall....
  March 11th, 2025 05:03
• a royal pain (Arqios) Pride and obstinacy together make for an immovable object as well as an...
  March 11th, 2025 04:54
• Hang Your Head in Shame (Poetic Licence) A powerful and daring write. It is ironic that sex is seen as something...
  March 11th, 2025 04:51
• The Wistful View of The Great Desecration. (David Wakeling) A most interesting point of view. From that perspective yes the strongest...
  March 11th, 2025 04:42
• A Demon in Disguise (Jodie) A poem of being lost in identity and image and the need for that...
  March 11th, 2025 04:37
• They were just words (Pineapple_pizza018) A poem of regret and sadness. There is anger and remorse in this piece and...
  March 11th, 2025 04:35
• Armored Vehicle (Mutley Ravishes) This could well be about the Covid or black death or about alien invasion...
  March 11th, 2025 04:31
• In recent news (EvenwheniLie) The future doesn\'t look too bright. A good write
  March 10th, 2025 18:09
• My forever puppeteer (Melancholia) We are all pulled by strings. Strings of emotions pulled by those we care...
  March 10th, 2025 18:07
• It there but its not (Hey!) Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it...
  March 10th, 2025 18:04
• The Last Man On Earth (TommyDingo) A most interesting metaphor for social isolation. Nicely rhymed.
  March 10th, 2025 15:46
• The nanosecond bad a** to risk romance (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Poetic cybersex. A most unique write.
  March 10th, 2025 15:45
• THE REVENGE OF THE EXECUTED WITCH after Vessa Blumenbaum (Ksey_Gan) An interesting story well told. Poetically written. Very nice
  March 10th, 2025 15:39
• I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title (Hanible) A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top....
  March 10th, 2025 13:46
• A Good Cry (M.E.M.)
  March 10th, 2025 13:44
• A Good Cry (M.E.M.) Spillways are built to let water out of a dam and are far better than a...
  March 10th, 2025 13:44
• hello, spring (Paperjam) The unexpected end is what makes this poem lovely
  March 10th, 2025 11:23
• Self-Love (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again a reflective write that all of us should look at. A beautiful...
  March 10th, 2025 10:55
• Stubbornness (Scarlette Patricia Howard) A prayer in a poem recognizing human frailties and asking for help. Nicely...
  March 10th, 2025 10:54
• Queues (Neville) Neville this poem is darker than burnt bread. Ashes to ashes dust to dust...
  March 10th, 2025 10:51
• I am only 85 (Hzugman) A poem that does not tell if this is a girlfriend or a dog. Either way it...
  March 10th, 2025 10:37
• Evening (Ellen Marsell) Great imagery in this poem. Very nice.
  March 10th, 2025 10:35
• The Tavern (JasmineUK) A wild ride fantasy aside a bar\'s bride with doors open wide. Nightmare...
  March 10th, 2025 08:48
• Things Change Everyday (Kaelyn Jade) Change is inevitable in all things from environment to emotions and in the...
  March 10th, 2025 08:40
• One Way (Teardrop) Delightful words and images in this poem of letting go and finding one\'s...
  March 10th, 2025 08:37
• Speak (Tony36) A wonderful message that needs to be heard and acted on. Don\'t only speak...
  March 10th, 2025 08:35
• LEAVES (Nephilim56) A beautiful image in and of itself free of the metaphor. And such is life...
  March 10th, 2025 08:33
• Adoration\'s Eyes (Tristan Robert Lange) Romantic, sensuous, erotic and loving. A most lovely love poem.
  March 10th, 2025 08:09
• Hell is a Rollorcoaster (RSM0812) A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not...
  March 10th, 2025 06:53
• happiness (Jim56) I can always depend on you Jim to cheer the day with one of your poems so...
  March 10th, 2025 06:51
• A Fanfair Of Hot Air (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It would be a fun read if it weren\'t real...... if it weren\'t...
  March 10th, 2025 05:07
• All Things Revealed in Him (Whats write for me) Shedding light on something has various meanings here part is revealed....
  March 10th, 2025 05:05
• Robust and vast (Maplespal) Varied thoughts are introduced as the poem evolves. Imagination is shown...
  March 10th, 2025 05:02
• A Shred of Evidence (Tkatie118) A mystery poem that remains unresolved. The beginning of this poem reminds...
  March 10th, 2025 04:58
• The Constant Flow (Gray0328) Well stated in good images the concept that time continues to flow...
  March 10th, 2025 04:50
• No silence (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Nice use of the last word technique. It worked well in this poem bringing...
  March 10th, 2025 04:46
• I Would Have Lost Hope Series Pt. 2 (Pita) A very nice sonnet that is at the same time a plea for help. Very nicely...
  March 10th, 2025 04:44
• Mute (Funmiwrites) A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature....
  March 10th, 2025 04:40
• Will This Stop? (Orchidee) You made me smile Orchi and that is always good. Have a great day
  March 10th, 2025 04:38
• Lost In a Snowstorm. (Poetic Licence) Now that was clever! Almost missed it and with my poor eyesight had to...
  March 10th, 2025 04:36
• Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A poet\'s nightmare. Try putting rhyme to that. I think that you have...
  March 10th, 2025 04:31
• Mr Piecrust has a visitor. (David Wakeling) Ah assumptions they will get you every time. A lovely write and yes even...
  March 10th, 2025 04:23
• Roofing Conundrum (Doggerel Dave) The rich get richer and the poor get poorer and politicians are there to...
  March 10th, 2025 04:19
• wolly mammoth (NinjaGirl) Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write...
  March 10th, 2025 04:09
• see you there (Arqios) A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from...
  March 10th, 2025 04:07
• Rest and Renewal (Whats write for me) A potential ,metaphor if rest can be taken as death and waking up as a...
  March 9th, 2025 19:43
• Brief Encounter: Aisle 6: World Foods (Kevin Hulme) Close encounters with a potential and a near miss. A fun read
  March 9th, 2025 19:42
• Memories Sake (RSM0812) A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the...
  March 9th, 2025 16:30
• More habit forming than any drug or liquor (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A diversity of images fill this poem with numerous thoughts and questions
  March 9th, 2025 16:20
• No, I\'ve Not Run Out of Excuses...Yet (Cheeky Missy) A fun read that I took advantage of filling myself with your words and was...
  March 9th, 2025 16:08
• i stay (Xqw) A great write of (I could but I don\'t) A very nicely imaged poem
  March 9th, 2025 15:56
• Elusive traces (Domilla) Questions unanswered. Well written this poem takes one inside the head of...
  March 9th, 2025 14:32
• Don\'t look outside for answers (Hzugman) Calming and very nicely stated.
  March 9th, 2025 13:41
• Why did God choose you? (Shantha Teldeniya) A sad and dark poem but absolutely lovely
  March 9th, 2025 13:39
• May December (Kurt Philip Behm) From the first time I read your poems I loved them. There is a polished...
  March 9th, 2025 13:37
• One last poem (Definitelymayank) A poem of goodbye that ends with a twist. A most interesting poem
  March 9th, 2025 13:35
• The Guiding Flame (TheInnerLens) A most beautiful poem of hope amidst despair and darkness. Lovely
  March 9th, 2025 13:34
• Help (Hey!) I hear a lot of pain and anger in this work. It screams at the reader.
  March 9th, 2025 12:13
• Magic Exists (Kaelyn Jade) A beautiful message to this poem and well said
  March 9th, 2025 12:10
• Mom is not a burden! after Fyodor Kraev (Ksey_Gan) Some things can\'t wait. Priorities need to be set. A touching poem.
  March 9th, 2025 12:07
• The Buddha\'s awakening (Lorenz) One can not take anything too seriously even religion. A fun read.
  March 9th, 2025 12:04
• Reflection on Human Madness and Sanity (G.Cabús) What a wonderful topic too little explored in poetry except tangentially....
  March 9th, 2025 09:46
• The same (2781) A poem of acknowledgement and surrender a poem of faith. Nicely written
  March 9th, 2025 09:39
• Please tell me (Poetaldo) Trust is a difficult thing to build. A heartfelt plea nicely written
  March 9th, 2025 09:37
• THE OLD SCHOOL (Nephilim56) A great picture painted here and a metaphor for each person as they age as...
  March 9th, 2025 08:19
• Low waged & A soldiers need (Maplespal) Two different stories but similar in some ways. Both under paid both with...
  March 9th, 2025 08:18
• Seasons of life (Tony36) Seasons of life in this poem. You can\'t stop the seasons unless death...
  March 9th, 2025 08:14
• A Poet’s Poet (Demar Desu) A fun read that left a smile.
  March 9th, 2025 08:12
• THE DEEP DREAM REVEALING SOMETHING 4TH March 2025 (Swarovski20) Passion rules a part of out brain but the frontal lobes get in the way....
  March 9th, 2025 08:11
• every one loves dogs (Jim56) Had a few and your words are so true. Lovely poem Jim
  March 9th, 2025 08:04
• Where is Spring? (Arobot) So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of...
  March 9th, 2025 08:02
• Lazarus a Reincarnation (Teddy.15) Wonderful lines asserting the power that is within all of us and the...
  March 9th, 2025 07:35
• Wrong Shoes (Distant View) I love this poem and its meaning. It speaks to human nature and where we...
  March 9th, 2025 06:24
• Journey Through the Unknown (Salvia.S) Very well said. Another truth stated.
  March 9th, 2025 06:15