Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Journey with a Spouse (Rajatbagchi) Well done. The topic a worthy one with good format and flow. Nicely done
  October 13th, 2025 03:46
• Her Gaze (Praful Rao) This one is very nicely written and speaks with the power of that glance....
  October 13th, 2025 03:40
• It stole my breath. (Friendship) Very nicely written in very good rhyme and meter a story of a happy...
  October 12th, 2025 20:46
• When She Calls (JBentley) A poem of battles whether literal or metaphorical and in rhyme as well....
  October 12th, 2025 20:43
• Touching the Real (GeekSusie) It is the last stanza that ties this together for me. Machine versus...
  October 12th, 2025 19:07
• Unrecognizable2 (E.J. Waling) This poem uses snapshot single or two or three word phrase to create a...
  October 12th, 2025 19:05
• Dream Salad Slowpoke (Steve Goldenfort) A poem sending a message to readers but expecting only a few to...
  October 12th, 2025 15:39
• What kind of threat am I? (HolesInMyJeans) A question and a plea in this poem. Heart felt and nicely written
  October 12th, 2025 15:37
• Vulnerability found (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of realization and openness to change. A scary place, change leaves...
  October 12th, 2025 14:37
• When the Darkness Comes (Gewar) A emotional poem of dread and fear, of suspicion and lack of trust that...
  October 12th, 2025 14:34
• Story of God\'s love (Jesus is Lord) A religious proclamation of faith nicely written
  October 12th, 2025 13:44
• Wanted Man. (Andrew Deaton) Clever with nice rhyme this poem is a religious proclamation of faith....
  October 12th, 2025 12:33
• Thy Blade of Love (Malcolm Gladwin) A wonderful poem. Love can not be forced nor purchased it happens or not...
  October 12th, 2025 12:32
• Fresh First Fruits (Orchidee) Well Orchi that is why I love your hymns not only historic and educational...
  October 12th, 2025 12:29
• Ylang ylang (Amethyste) A most interesting write that seems to say whatever helps is the way to
  October 12th, 2025 12:26
• Disrobed (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed we do. How many times caught with hand in the cookie jar. Good...
  October 12th, 2025 10:56
• Your Apology (Anthony Hanible) Feelings are not always shared and at times can be quite different. A good...
  October 12th, 2025 10:55
• Apartment 5 (Abdullah123) Not on the menstrual cycle was it? A real nail biter you got there.
  October 12th, 2025 10:54
• Purgatory bar (Lorenz) Far worse in between where one knows not what to expect but more of the...
  October 12th, 2025 10:50
• Untitled (RSM0812) Beautiful and dream like images in this poem. Very nicely done
  October 12th, 2025 10:47
• My Darling of Divine Delight (Kevin Michael Bloor) A wonderful tribute to one loved and admired. Nicely written in such a...
  October 12th, 2025 09:57
• Thoughts #178 (Maplespal) This is a sad poem where abuse is encouraged as a means of dealing with...
  October 12th, 2025 09:55
• Bent but not broken (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A shame to ridicule what one has no control over. A sad write but in the...
  October 12th, 2025 09:51
• TRANSITION (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Time seems to shorten to mere instants as we approach the end. A poem to...
  October 12th, 2025 09:49
• UNHOLY FOR ALL RIGHT REASONS.... (REBELLIOUS SOUL) It is not only the message but the metaphor used that gets the fave....
  October 12th, 2025 08:43
• The Shape of Why (Tristan Robert Lange) Deeply philosophical this write starts right off with a puzzle and ends...
  October 12th, 2025 08:40
• Am I the Only One ? (Keyara S Trotman) Did I miss something? I have been on web sites that have gone down for...
  October 12th, 2025 06:57
• Slow (William Hromada) Very nice a most relaxing read that smooths out the troubles of a rushed...
  October 12th, 2025 06:43
• Another Birth Passage Conquered (Rebellion_in_sanity) I love the mix and blend of different types of rape in this poem. The use...
  October 12th, 2025 06:42
• The Peregrine (Tony Grannell) Beautifully done my friend. You have painted it well. When a teen a good...
  October 12th, 2025 06:33
• Biodigital Jazz (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Remember Tron as a movie when it first came out but have buried it years...
  October 12th, 2025 06:30
• The Hill (Paul Bell) A beautiful poem set with the contrast of childhood games and war as an...
  October 12th, 2025 06:28
• The Secret Treasure Trove (Gray0328) The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases...
  October 12th, 2025 06:19
• skylight morning (Arqios) Another lovely write Cryptic. I love your metaphors they weave an allegory...
  October 12th, 2025 06:16
• get together (Jim56) A great thought Jim echoing my poem yesterday. Enjoyed it
  October 12th, 2025 06:07
• I believe in paky people (Poetaldo) Equality in treatment and respect well written and nicely done
  October 12th, 2025 05:10
• Spiritual deformities (EvenwheniLie) Everything must be the maximum, super sized so to speak. Why must we...
  October 12th, 2025 04:22
• ONE (Drniran) Advice given with each following line being the advice. You got me on...
  October 12th, 2025 04:20
• She\'s Tired (Sassy Lou) The message comes through loud and clear of the exhaustion that comes with...
  October 12th, 2025 04:17
• Dear Death (Meera Mere) This is a fave for I feel death to be a friend, kind, and yet unyielding....
  October 12th, 2025 04:15
• CRUEL VERSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) The feeling of betrayal comes through in this poem of sadness. It is dark...
  October 12th, 2025 04:11
• I write fact as fiction (Aa Harvey) A poem that in its anguish of loss tells of dreams unmet and the sadness...
  October 12th, 2025 04:08
• Ran for a Home (Moumita) A story of searching for a place of safety, a place to call home. Finally...
  October 12th, 2025 04:05
• Poem-Amrita Kaur, the golden voice... 12 Oct 2025 (Soman Ragavan) Nicely written this dedication to one honored and adored. Well written...
  October 12th, 2025 04:02
• Health Within You. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful poem Andy may we all have peace. A lovely dedication to a man...
  October 12th, 2025 04:00
• Cementery (Vogelfrei) Beautiful in its ugliness this poem speaks of the poor and sad area of...
  October 12th, 2025 03:58
• Joy Stick (Ms.divine) The title alone begins this poem with a direction. it is sensuous,...
  October 12th, 2025 03:52
• Torture (NinjaGirl) I can feel the irritation and aggravation in this poem. It calls out for...
  October 12th, 2025 03:49
• THE BREAK-IN (David Welch) A poem written in short lines like short breaths taken in fear, it speeds...
  October 12th, 2025 03:46
• i wish (Lunarchloedip) Loosing a parent is tough and this is voiced in this poem. Memories cloud...
  October 12th, 2025 03:43
• Streaming ad (Thoughtless) All to true today a story of might makes right governments or gangs....
  October 11th, 2025 21:09
• Greed (Sami Mulaj) A story that is harsh and dark. It speaks of a one way love with feelings...
  October 11th, 2025 21:07
• Observational Patterns (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This poem starts so peacefully with a tranquil color and ends more...
  October 11th, 2025 20:14
• ℭ𝔬𝔫𝔰𝔦𝔰𝔱𝔢𝔫𝔠𝔶 (Keyara S Trotman) Colors the major emphasis in this poem it leaves the feeling of a...
  October 11th, 2025 20:08
• digitalis purpurea (Cody James) Well worded this poem paints the flower poetically. Nicely done
  October 11th, 2025 20:02
• Would you? (Dn) A poem of questions that ask the reader to reflect on their values and...
  October 11th, 2025 20:00
• THE EX (Bame Bame) Creative using the name of a hurricane and then movies to reinforce the...
  October 11th, 2025 18:28
• Her Silent Battle (Sassy Lou) That was quite creative fading out on the last two lines by smaller and...
  October 11th, 2025 18:26
• A.I.’s Take (E.J. Waling) An interesting read of an analysis of four poems each with their own...
  October 11th, 2025 18:24
• Nightmares (Arial) They say owls are omens of death but I feel akin with them and have sat at...
  October 11th, 2025 16:40
• Last Promise (Aiswarya Girish) A love found the person lost and the wait for the next time around. All...
  October 11th, 2025 16:37
• Solemn nights (Spilleronsheet) A most beautiful description of the coming of Autumn a fave
  October 11th, 2025 15:36
• Grey (Amethyste) It is the last line that puzzles me and I like that. Well done
  October 11th, 2025 15:33
• The Trust (Gewar) A great poem of facing one\'s fear and vowing to beat it. Love it
  October 11th, 2025 15:32
• Unlimited (Fränz Müller) Words of truth disguised in poetic form. Nicely done
  October 11th, 2025 15:27
• Peace talks/lost&find (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) A good write that speaks in cryptic words and images. Well done
  October 11th, 2025 13:30
• Pay Attention (Joseph M Marion) A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word...
  October 11th, 2025 11:15
• The voice of the rubble (Lorenz) Here is a word painting of abstract art that in vivid colors plashes and...
  October 11th, 2025 11:13
• Reciprocal Mistrust (Gray0328) Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their...
  October 11th, 2025 11:10
• The Hour Of The Witch (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Now this one leaves me feeling a bit slow and still thinking about it....
  October 11th, 2025 11:03
• Never Forgotten (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A poetic expression of faith and belief that assures and encourages others...
  October 11th, 2025 10:58
• Silence the words (Maplespal) A great write about the ways words pass on knowledge and feelings and how...
  October 11th, 2025 09:21
• imbued illumination (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting shape and manner of format. As direction changes and...
  October 11th, 2025 08:43
• À tout suite (Poetaldo) A poem that is a prayer to God. Nicely done
  October 11th, 2025 07:14
• Your Voice (William Hromada) Very nicely worded it evokes a warm and loving feeling a fave
  October 11th, 2025 06:21
• bluebird song (Jim56) There will be bluebirds over the white cliffs of Dover. I remember that...
  October 11th, 2025 06:19
• CUTE MAN (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Is this the feminist strategy to demasculinize men so as to equal the...
  October 11th, 2025 06:16
• The Planets (Paul Bell)
  October 11th, 2025 06:13
• The Planets (Paul Bell) This reminds me of the movie The Big Lebowski. Rituals for pregnancy and...
  October 11th, 2025 06:13
• Untitled (RSM0812) A poem of infatuation, passion and expressed love set in beautiful images....
  October 11th, 2025 06:07
• thoughts on world homeless day (October 10) (Arqios) This poem speaks with words that echo off barren walls, it touches cold...
  October 11th, 2025 05:17
• BOATS INLAND (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Here in this poem dreams create boats of many things and I suppose that...
  October 11th, 2025 03:55
• Waiting (Shri Qoin) According to Pope hope springs eternal and so they say is the last thing...
  October 11th, 2025 03:53
• Steadfast (Muse of Calliope) Simple in structure and wording it is short yet conveys its message well....
  October 11th, 2025 03:51
• The Moment We Stop Pretending (G.Cabús) You make a good point in this poem that it is hard to be oneself in an...
  October 11th, 2025 03:49
• ONE MINUTE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem to me seems a metaphor of loss. Sad it is in some way haunting...
  October 11th, 2025 03:46
• Earth\'s Twisted Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) DNA in a spiral, Music on a record player gos in circles, Bat man puts on...
  October 11th, 2025 03:43
• Genocide (NafisaSB) This has happened several times in the past and probably will happen again...
  October 11th, 2025 03:39
• Beauty By My Side. (Goldfinch60) Beauty is wonderful in whatever form it takes. A lovely write my friend
  October 11th, 2025 03:37
• Patience (Kayla Jackson) A poem of warning and explanation. Short but it makes its point quickly....
  October 11th, 2025 03:35
• Sitting on an A/C unit in Spring (Simple Tendencies)
  October 11th, 2025 03:34
• Sitting on an A/C unit in Spring (Simple Tendencies) A poem that speaks of the importance of family and fears of its loss. The...
  October 11th, 2025 03:34
• The Black Man Part 1 by Sergei Esenin (Ksey_Gan) A most interesting fable that speaks of blame ascribed. Most interestingly...
  October 11th, 2025 03:31
• Yes Sir (Sophia Garcia) A strongly emotional poem written with power and vivid images. The point...
  October 11th, 2025 03:26
• Reflections (Kaz) Snapshots of visual wonder in a poem. Nicely done
  October 10th, 2025 20:26
• Clipping My Nails (NinjaGirl) A most interesting analogy that you make with days and hours growing as...
  October 10th, 2025 20:26
• S.T.I. (Andrew Deaton) Clever play on anacronyms to give an injection of interest to the read. It...
  October 10th, 2025 20:23
• Old Friend (Introverted Sage) We all have friends like that, that take over when they come assuming they...
  October 10th, 2025 20:22
• Relative drifting (Shadowbones) When I read this I picture an insect talking but I love how it is left...
  October 10th, 2025 20:18
• Old Soul (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A most interesting poem of age perception. They say your are only as old...
  October 10th, 2025 18:22