Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Him (Lyricalremedy) A poem of seduction being entranced by another. Well written
  August 16th, 2025 17:38
• Departure (Sami Mulaj) A town an allegory or metaphor a town that only people leave from. Nicely...
  August 16th, 2025 17:15
• Home (Keeter C) All those things I am familiar with and love . It does feel like home.
  August 16th, 2025 16:00
• Wary glances are cast; (Amy Michelle Mosier) A reflective poem that asks the reader to reflect as well. Nicely done
  August 16th, 2025 15:15
• Love or lust (Krissy.V) A twist on most poems of love it asks the reader to question what is love...
  August 16th, 2025 15:13
• Who can put U.S., out (EvenwheniLie) A poem of outrage at the state of the nation and the divide that is...
  August 16th, 2025 14:04
• Fire In My Soul (Teddy.15) A lovely write of the process, the ups and downs and the needed support...
  August 16th, 2025 13:29
• not afraid of aging (Gray0328) A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
  August 16th, 2025 13:28
• Ukiah At Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm) Simply lovely and a fave
  August 16th, 2025 13:26
• Bath (Amethyste) A most unique manner of getting to know someone and depending on the...
  August 16th, 2025 11:53
• You Recall that Childhood Game? (Cheeky Missy) A series of sonnets party like in flavor and oh yes I remember that old...
  August 16th, 2025 11:52
• A Troubled Soul (Shahla Latifi) A poem replete with images of metaphoric brilliance
  August 16th, 2025 11:50
• Unfinished watercolor (Lorenz) Images pour out of this poem in a smorgasbord of flavors running down the...
  August 16th, 2025 11:47
• Fly Like A Bird (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) Light and most positive this poem speaks to the heart of the reader....
  August 16th, 2025 10:26
• Children (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A strong and powerful message that needs to be heard. Children, the...
  August 16th, 2025 08:42
• Confession (Maplespal) A beautiful and gentle expression of growing fondness and love for...
  August 16th, 2025 08:39
• The unknown. (Cloie) Like a magic trick the knowing of how it works takes the wonder away....
  August 16th, 2025 08:37
• Untitled (RSM0812) Woven within this poem is a dark thread of man that leaves a stain in the...
  August 16th, 2025 08:33
• Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville) This may have more meaning to me than most. I believe that all life forms...
  August 16th, 2025 08:30
• The Open Door (Tristan Robert Lange) Prometheus -Zhu Rong -Mixcoatl -Ti’iti’i -Maui, the trickster gods of...
  August 16th, 2025 08:26
• TO THE DARK (Saswati das) Fragments joined a puzzle assembled but it is only a broken picture and I...
  August 16th, 2025 05:02
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) This one tastes Australian and though I got many of the colloquial...
  August 16th, 2025 05:00
• we all have love (Jim56) Another positive message sent in poetic form. Nicely done Jim
  August 16th, 2025 04:55
• Joy (Doc X) Clever the usage of divine images and personages to tie into the the final...
  August 16th, 2025 04:54
• INDELIBLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Memories that fade with time left and on occasion they are turned over and...
  August 16th, 2025 04:51
• Son of Shatan (Devender Kumar) This poem delves into religious beliefs with which I am not familiar but...
  August 16th, 2025 04:49
• Analysis-Entering Furnace-Part 3--14Aug2025 (Soman Ragavan) A most interesting review of a poem of cremation. Interesting how fire is...
  August 16th, 2025 04:46
• To the House on Katelyn Court In Yukon (Samuel) A poetic offer and question all in one. The poem plays on perceived desire...
  August 16th, 2025 04:41
• Tell Me Where It Hurts (Meagan Adelle) A poem asking for sharing to be able to know what the other needs and an...
  August 16th, 2025 04:39
• Quiet Storm (Haleyalexis) Two desires one choice, follow your own path to take another\'s leads to...
  August 16th, 2025 04:35
• Wishful Thinking (Silent_Shay) Regret over a dead flower the question being is it and anual or a...
  August 16th, 2025 04:29
• Reality bites (Shadowbones) To speak of pain one must have felt it. The shutting down as one comes...
  August 16th, 2025 04:25
• flower (Lunarchloedip) Joy always lighter than pain. A brighter poem full of hope and...
  August 16th, 2025 04:15
• Death Wrapped (Tony Grannell) This is such an interesting and well worded poem that draws images that...
  August 16th, 2025 04:07
• Oscar Peterson. (Goldfinch60) A celebrity\'s centenario celebration in poetic tribute. Very nicely said...
  August 16th, 2025 03:57
• SAFE INSIDE (Michaelm) A wonderful weaving of word and rhyme in a poem independence. Nicely done
  August 15th, 2025 19:40
• The quiet pond (Kaz) A most beautiful haiku that speaks in metaphor as well. Nicely done
  August 15th, 2025 19:39
• Bones (EllieKay) A legacy of division, rupture, broken relations. A stark read of a...
  August 15th, 2025 19:38
• Yes Depression Is Real (Anthony Hanible) Depression is an understatement in this poem that languishes in lethargy...
  August 15th, 2025 19:34
• A Song In My Veins (A Boy With Roses) Sexual, errotic, this poem runs through dreams to naked reality. Well done
  August 15th, 2025 19:32
• Going (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem a flow of word associations with rumbling rhymes. A fun read
  August 15th, 2025 19:28
• Baggage (Fränz Müller) Tiny worlds where in reality size makes no difference. A lovely write
  August 15th, 2025 15:56
• Crazy Thoughts (Ezekiel Olayemi) For many it is easier to use the barrier of pen and paper to voice...
  August 15th, 2025 15:54
• Beach time. (Ginny jayne) Metaphoric this write carries one to the depths of their mind in its...
  August 15th, 2025 14:59
• The Roar of the Indigenous (Mottakeenur Rehman) This has such an Indian flavor the Mythological references are like...
  August 15th, 2025 14:57
• Do I? (Velvet.Riot) A cynical write and with a sardonic flavor.
  August 15th, 2025 14:52
• Trek (Keeter C) This speaks of otherworldly feelings and images that transcend worldly...
  August 15th, 2025 13:33
• Stars (Amethyste) Again short but packed with emotion and meaning. Nicely done
  August 15th, 2025 13:31
• Etun Atay (Aa Harvey) A poem that sounds like a prophesy and a type of Revelations. Nicely...
  August 15th, 2025 13:29
• Oh, You Know (Cheeky Missy) I have worked third shift before and it is my least favorite of all the...
  August 15th, 2025 13:27
• Graveyard (Not) This has a dark and gothic feel to it. It well could be taken as...
  August 15th, 2025 13:25
• The Land That Refused to Kneel (REBELLIOUS SOUL) A splendid poem of patriotism and the format perfect with color....
  August 15th, 2025 10:51
• To The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem that says one thing but implies another. Nicely composed my friend
  August 15th, 2025 10:48
• The great nation (Lorenz) Lorenz this poem speaks gallons of thoughts in dripping words. Distilled...
  August 15th, 2025 10:46
• Naturally Unnatural (NEPIEGE) A most personal, sensuous poem of desire and the fire that burns beneath....
  August 15th, 2025 10:43
• Filling your shoes (Baker) A wonderful poem of reflection on the adult that we all aim to be. Very...
  August 15th, 2025 10:41
• Garden-Blade (AuburnScribbler) A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its...
  August 15th, 2025 10:38
• Detour on My Way to Heaven (Gray0328) A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their...
  August 15th, 2025 10:34
• Sweet Forgiveness (Tony Grannell) Magnificent! Another well composed poem with a message. Funny Toney we are...
  August 15th, 2025 10:30
• The Descendant of Dereliction (Tristan Robert Lange) Impending doom in this poem. Alliteration aids in its flow as does some...
  August 15th, 2025 10:26
• Truly not built for most human interactions (Poetic Dan) Disparity in feelings and thoughts the barrier to social interactions...
  August 15th, 2025 06:53
• Do You Belong? (Rebellion_in_sanity) A question that lurks in the back of the mind fluttering in and out of the...
  August 15th, 2025 06:47
• Again (Lorna) Beautiful words that unfold the seasons and life that it holds. The sheer...
  August 15th, 2025 06:19
• The Quiet Build (Samuel) This poem speaks of quiet performance not calling attention but simply...
  August 15th, 2025 05:38
• learn to live (Jim56) A lovely thought Jim that encourages one to go one and enjoy each day...
  August 15th, 2025 05:36
• The lonely (RSM0812) Questions asked reminiscing in this poem that speaks of a relationship...
  August 15th, 2025 05:34
• Hidden in the Rye (Parsa) The power of the moon over tides and planting times comes through in this...
  August 15th, 2025 05:30
• and how are you? (Maplespal) I love the conversive nature of this poem as it gos on to describe the...
  August 15th, 2025 05:27
• Waiting For The Call (Paul Gerard Reed) The well written rhyme and rhythm of the meter in this poem carries the...
  August 15th, 2025 05:24
• Expectations (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) The last line seals it. One that relies on violence is not mature or in...
  August 15th, 2025 05:22
• I want a home (Meera Mere) What defines a home is what resides within and whether that is love or...
  August 15th, 2025 05:20
• The Keys Of Christ? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A different view of an iconic figure where the metaphor of food is used as...
  August 15th, 2025 05:18
• THE NAKED FRAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Assumptions are what we all do but are the basis of misunderstandings and...
  August 15th, 2025 05:16
• Analysis-Entering Furnace-Part 2--14Aug2025 (Soman Ragavan) Accompanying the previous write of cremation this one adds some...
  August 15th, 2025 05:14
• Fraternity (Spencer Wilhelm) The recognition that with the blessing of rain comes a little mud. Very...
  August 15th, 2025 05:11
• Called to the Laurels (Spencer Wilhelm) A plea for love and support. A love poem that speaks with passion and...
  August 15th, 2025 05:08
• the cupboard light (Arqios) This feels so familiar so comfortable and relatable. It has a sense of...
  August 15th, 2025 05:05
• The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60) That poem is now conversing with a dozen others of mine that met the same...
  August 15th, 2025 04:58
• What could have been (NinjaGirl) That common thought that most have of what if. What could have been,...
  August 15th, 2025 04:55
• Matthew Scott Harris may be... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A poem of strong opinions that flow through the body of this poem. Nicely...
  August 14th, 2025 19:41
• I Still Love You (Anthony Hanible) A poem that proclaims its love despite the other\'s disbelief. Nicely
  August 14th, 2025 19:35
• Love at first sight (Nikola) Love at first sight I am not so sure about but passion or desire at first...
  August 14th, 2025 18:12
• Under a Real Sunset (Teddy.15) Young love, memories and learning from it the process of growing and the...
  August 14th, 2025 16:02
• The gridiron passion (Nicole Pritchard) A poem about a man that has passion for the game and which has a large...
  August 14th, 2025 16:00
• Damsel from heaven (Doc X) A poem of romance, sweet, innocent, yet seductive and lovely
  August 14th, 2025 14:43
• Earned (Keeter C) How we all have asked is it free will or destiny. Here is a poem that...
  August 14th, 2025 14:25
• love or hate (Aubree Young) Reluctance for commitment voiced in this poem. A wonderful write
  August 14th, 2025 14:23
• Mercy on Repeat (Directionlesssheep) REliance, mercy, pity emotions that I pick up from this poem a lovely
  August 14th, 2025 14:21
• A Forever Friend (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A write that is full of belief and faith nicely written
  August 14th, 2025 13:20
• Traces (Fränz Müller) A most poetic write with wonderful images that set a mood ending in...
  August 14th, 2025 13:18
• prey(predators) (Ja'Quan Shepard) A most interesting rhyme scheme in this write that takes one though...
  August 14th, 2025 12:14
• Intuitive (M.E.M.) Most unique a poem building off of a disorder and using it as a strength...
  August 14th, 2025 12:12
• Roses in Late Summer, Year 2 (DeadRose) This poem brought back to mind days of pressed flowers. Of dried flowers...
  August 14th, 2025 12:10
• Feeling Turned Around (Kurt Philip Behm) Another that makes sense in most poetic form Kurt.
  August 14th, 2025 11:10
• Cabbages Rule OK? (Orchidee) Can human beans join or just human beings. A fun read.
  August 14th, 2025 11:06
• Crick the Cliq (AuburnScribbler) A clever manipulation of words and use of metaphor nicely done
  August 14th, 2025 10:59
• Grandpa\'s Lesson (Gray0328) A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds....
  August 14th, 2025 10:56
• Pearls before Lovers (Berniece) A interesting write and I like the last two lines that add a sense of...
  August 14th, 2025 10:32
• My Past Love (Violet_Writes) For most of us the more time that passes the better the past becomes. A...
  August 14th, 2025 10:28
• The Best Sparrow Is a Dead Sparrow (Rebellion_in_sanity) Social commentary in metaphor well written.
  August 14th, 2025 10:22