Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Donโt Worry Be Happy. (As said by the renowned bard Bobby McFerrin) (Jan bach)
Food a comfort stress reliever. How to let loose of stress. Well done
November 30th, 2025 14:20 - Wyoming Nuptial (Kurt Philip Behm)
Most well imaged, been there. A lovely write Kurt
November 30th, 2025 14:17 - Why am i here? (Xlayla55x)
A poem of pain and desperation. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 14:16 - The Somatic Economy: An Epic of Flesh and Finance (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
The analogy of the body to the social and economic system is well done....
November 30th, 2025 12:47 - THE STEADY HAND (David Welch)
The foolishness of youth in this poem. Nicely worded it tells of the...
November 30th, 2025 12:45 - Strictly parasocial (Abirami99)
Abandoned is not a good feeling and the loneliness takes one down some...
November 30th, 2025 12:41 - Impenetrable Sky (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Indeed no longer able to be off the grid we all are under an impenetrable...
November 30th, 2025 12:40 - Love making (Amethyste)
Ah the difference between love and passion. Often the two go together but...
November 30th, 2025 12:37 - Mรถbius Trip (Eugene S.)
A mobius has a hole in the middle and I hear this hole in my reading of...
November 30th, 2025 12:36 - Damn You Title (Anthony Hanible)
The title often the hardest to find. We often remain stumped without a...
November 30th, 2025 12:33 - A Brand Plucked from the Fire (Tristan Robert Lange)
Whether a Christian or not the message of Jesus is what saves, that of...
November 30th, 2025 08:52 - ๐ผ๐๐ฃ๐๐ช ๐๐ ๐ฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค: ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ โฌโฏ๐๐โฏ๐ ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ ๐ฏ๐พ๐โฏ (Keyara S Trotman)
Such a wonderful poem of putting emotions into verse. A lovely write
November 30th, 2025 08:49 - Final Retreat (Thomas W Case)
I love this one Thomas I have shared this feeling and have retreated to...
November 30th, 2025 08:46 - kindness (Jim56)
A fantastic moral in this poem Jim. Couldn\'t agree more. A lovely poem...
November 30th, 2025 08:44 - Off to the races? (2781)
The poem starts at the races and ends in rest. Well done a journey well
November 30th, 2025 08:42 - 1 (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A sad poem of hiding from pain and putting on a mask and living in a...
November 30th, 2025 07:03 - I Partake in Joy (Katie B.)
Substances, knowledge, meditation, spiritual enlightenment, sexual climax,...
November 30th, 2025 06:58 - Echo ูพฺูุงฺฉ (Soheil khodaparasti)
The contradiction from one culture to another is expressed in this poem....
November 30th, 2025 06:17 - Wynken, Blynken, and Nod (reprise) (Arqios)
Wow! A truly masterful poem that in the nostalgia of childhood takes one...
November 30th, 2025 05:33 - Bus Stop (Gray0328)
Ah Gray you have most poetically caught the spirit of past dreams and...
November 30th, 2025 05:18 - Letting go. (Friendship)
So nicely composed in structure, meter and rhyme a poem that speaks to...
November 30th, 2025 05:12 - Reunited (Paul Bell)
It is most sad that we do not consider the effect of our actions on...
November 30th, 2025 05:07 - Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics) (Teddy.15)
Beautiful and touching it is the poetic plea of one who fears and suffers...
November 30th, 2025 05:03 - The Butterfly (RSM0812)
Butterfly real or metaphorical a symbol of romance it floats and shows its...
November 30th, 2025 04:59 - Piggy bank (Poetaldo)
Hope the piggy is a big one that stretches with inflation. Well done...
November 30th, 2025 04:06 - STARLET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
There are some who have had great careers ahead of them that threw it all...
November 30th, 2025 04:04 - No escape (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
Great senryu well done again. You have a knack with these.
November 30th, 2025 04:00 - Painting in the dark (A.B. Jakobsen)
A great story and metaphor in this poem that took my mind to the deaf...
November 30th, 2025 03:59 - Wind Song (Hacklec)
Some very nice allegories used in this piece. Good imagery as well is...
November 30th, 2025 03:56 - Explicable descent (EvenwheniLie)
A fun read that showed multiple rhymes and a running meter. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2025 03:53 - Twilight on Sunday (NafisaSB)
This poem had the meter of the season meaning it felt somehow Christmassy....
November 30th, 2025 03:48 - Amenable Andrew (Orchidee)
A famous story put into a hymn and nicely too. Well done Orchi
November 30th, 2025 03:44 - Two Singing Sessions. (Goldfinch60)
Tis true Andy with song, poetry, one\'s own being appreciated in one...
November 30th, 2025 03:41 - Santa daddy\'s response ๐ฆ๐ (Ms.divine)
Christmas started early this year it appears
November 29th, 2025 21:50 - over and over alone (Ja'Quan Shepard)
This sounds like a rebellious soul created by society. it speaks with some...
November 29th, 2025 17:49 - Mind Control (E.J. Waling)
Under old names new threats appear on the horizon. A world spiraling...
November 29th, 2025 17:45 - Chilly day by pool (William Hromada)
A dip in a chilly pool can be refreshing or chilling and if cold enough...
November 29th, 2025 17:43 - Neolithic Song by Alexander Men (Ksey_Gan)
You don\'t have to be human to be human. A lovely write though a bit...
November 29th, 2025 16:57 - Is it seppuku (EvenwheniLie)
A most interesting write of internal processes involved in the process (at...
November 29th, 2025 16:25 - Cosmic being (Amethyste)
Someone that will take no less than expectations is a true trader and...
November 29th, 2025 16:23 - Live an Organised Life (Tkatie118)
Great literature is the backbone of a solid education whether done on...
November 29th, 2025 14:58 - The Gift (Kurt Philip Behm)
An alternate point of view is always so valuable. Nicely said Kurt
November 29th, 2025 13:00 - An birthday greeting to my eldest sister that went awry... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I do not believe in utopian societies but we can always wish and hope. A...
November 29th, 2025 12:59 - Stars Align (Melanie Rodriguez)
That feeling that we all get once in a while of being so comfortable that...
November 29th, 2025 12:57 - Gazing at Nature (Jjudaharts)
Picturesque and beautifully imaged a snapshot of nature
November 29th, 2025 12:55 - The Mercury plains (Lorenz)
Cosmic it walks out of another dimension seduces with a synthetic siren...
November 29th, 2025 12:54 - She doesn\'t even know (StarLoom)
Tender, soft and most romantic this poem puts them all together and leaves...
November 29th, 2025 11:12 - THOROUGHBRED BLUES (David Welch)
It takes all kinds but we are at home where we don\'t have to put on...
November 29th, 2025 11:10 - Forgive the Climb (Gray0328)
A most poetic journey over water and land to reach a destination. Although...
November 29th, 2025 11:08 - If I Die First (Ladywithaquill)
A most passionate love poem that speaks of death and a bond up to it. Most...
November 29th, 2025 11:05 - My Own True Friend (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
Very nicely composed it also speaks a truth of mastering the inside to...
November 29th, 2025 11:04 - Honour (Adrija Pathak)
A poem of values and the point is made well that we should assess our...
November 29th, 2025 09:31 - panels and tears (Arqios)
What a wonderful metaphor Cryptic. We do indeed focus our attention on the...
November 29th, 2025 09:28 - not your appliance (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem that I feel the surge in. Electrical it shocks and in its current...
November 29th, 2025 09:22 - Uriah (GenXer Sharon ๐๐)
Another beginning that starts the season with hope and faith. A lovely...
November 29th, 2025 08:43 - ๐๐ซ๐ก๐ฉ๐ข๐ฐ๐ฐ~ ๐๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ซ๐ก๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค (Keyara S Trotman)
Your keyboard like my brain deletes the past and moves on to the present....
November 29th, 2025 08:41 - ROT AND DECAY / PODREDUMBRE /่
ๆ (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos a touching poem of loss and the passage of time that brings decay...
November 29th, 2025 07:58 - Because I Write (Katie B.)
A beautiful poem of passion poured into an intoxicating drink of words. I...
November 29th, 2025 07:56 - Assumption (Friendship)
Your own author\'s note encapsulates this poem\'s meaning. Assuming is a...
November 29th, 2025 07:52 - robin song (Jim56)
Another poem of the robin and his song. Nicely done my friend
November 29th, 2025 06:32 - Just Keep Going (13LaurenD)
A most motivational poem that encourages to continue trying and working...
November 29th, 2025 06:29 - Will of the Sires (RSM0812)
This poem has some classical traits but is melded with more contemporary...
November 29th, 2025 04:25 - Bias (Awam)
This poem is clothed in such poetic garments of words and metaphor it...
November 29th, 2025 04:23 - COLLAR TO THE RAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I really like this one it paints a picture true in life and metaphor. The...
November 29th, 2025 04:20 - Yesterday (Jorge serra)
A poem of renewal. it sings out like a raising sun. Nicely done
November 29th, 2025 04:17 - Probability ุงุญุชู
ุงู (Soheil khodaparasti)
Logical and beautifully stated. Concise and true that is poetry
November 29th, 2025 04:16 - A fairy in my garden (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A beautiful haiku that has a most brilliant image painted. Nicely done
November 29th, 2025 04:14 - Handle in its home (Sophia.)
A sad poem of self abuse whether to feel the pain of being alive, to...
November 29th, 2025 04:13 - Dollette (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
An interesting depiction of a doll. Nicely penned
November 29th, 2025 04:09 - True will (Ja'Quan Shepard)
Very nicely said a short poem of character and dependability. Nicely done
November 29th, 2025 04:08 - Some time left โ (Peculiarly Lauren)
A relationship where trust breaks and change takes its toll. A sad write
November 29th, 2025 04:06 - Guidance (Melanie Rodriguez)
Nice use of symbolism in this poem where there is a guiding light in the...
November 29th, 2025 04:04 - What I feel. (Jorge serra)
There is passion that still resides in this write. Nicely done
November 29th, 2025 04:03 - I Have Seen Yunus (Prasun Goswami)
A picture painted with literary figures and out of this mixture of fine...
November 29th, 2025 04:01 - The knots. (Andrew Deaton)
Clever word play make this poem the use of homophones works well. A knotty...
November 29th, 2025 03:55 - THE BLOOD OF JEB O\'HEARN (David Welch)
Another saga with a meaning. All happens for a reason and for those that...
November 29th, 2025 03:52 - Time. (Goldfinch60)
There is power in unity and with power security and peace. A lovely write...
November 29th, 2025 03:41 - A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2 (Orchidee)
Well that is pretty Christmassy Orchi and it\'s not even December yet....
November 29th, 2025 03:39 - it may be obvious (Applecherry)
Mixed feeling in this poem not so much uncertainty as just confusion. Well...
November 28th, 2025 18:51 - Francesco Petrarca Sonnet XC Another translation (Ksey_Gan)
A most classic approach in this poem with its images and presentation....
November 28th, 2025 17:04 - What makes me human (Amethyste)
Beautiful words decorate this poem
November 28th, 2025 15:33 - little girl at the table (Poet\'s Dream)
So hard to grow up when there is no fertilizer, water or sun. A lovely...
November 28th, 2025 14:54 - #11 (Temptation)
Passion can take many turns and doesn\'t always end up well. A great poem...
November 28th, 2025 14:52 - Progress (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
Loving oneself a theme of this poem. Such a misunderstood concept. Such...
November 28th, 2025 14:00 - The Joker Wild (Kurt Philip Behm)
The cards that one is dealt plays a big part but if one is smart they know...
November 28th, 2025 13:54 - Chilly day by pool (William Hromada)
The change of the seasons expressed in this poem. Well written
November 28th, 2025 13:53 - ABRAZADO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A wonderful love poem nicely expressed. Romantic and sensual
November 28th, 2025 13:50 - Enthral (Paul Gerard Reed)
A lovely poem Paul that emphasizes that what the world calls important is...
November 28th, 2025 12:20 - From Whales to Wild Cats - A Garden Route Ballad (Jane Walker)
Never been to Africa but have seen the Right Whales breach off the beach...
November 28th, 2025 12:19 - cyberspeak (Lorenz)
I swear that there is cyber dementia in that my files at times disappear...
November 28th, 2025 12:15 - Out Of The Bottle (E.J. Waling)
Pandora\'s box is open, the genie is out of the bottle and like the atomic...
November 28th, 2025 10:43 - Jammin (Jjudaharts)
All of nature is a dance and a song. We are just too busy to notice. A...
November 28th, 2025 10:40 - Loser (John Lee)
Everyone needs to number one at something and loosing is one area that...
November 28th, 2025 10:39 - Black Friday easel lee brushed off... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
To think that black Friday came about because of greed and the death of...
November 28th, 2025 09:57 - RESPLANDECE R (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
November 28th, 2025 09:55 - RESPLANDECE R (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Do not be ashamed of who you are seems to be the point of this poem....
November 28th, 2025 09:55 - Just Keep Going (13LaurenD)
A tough write of a broken relationship that is recognized as never meant...
November 28th, 2025 09:34 - haunts of humiliation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Darkness rules and in this poem it comes off in spots and holes. Well done...
November 28th, 2025 09:30 - Someone, Something (TRADMAX)
This poem made me think. The ability to cry or the ability to do whatever...
November 28th, 2025 08:02 - Question of the Day (Keyara S Trotman)
A belief that everything will turn out for the best always leave the...
November 28th, 2025 07:34
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