Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Thought 2 (Maplespal) What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
  December 18th, 2024 17:12
• Love (Doggerel Dave) Here here my friend I could not agree more. A word used loosely and too...
  December 18th, 2024 17:11
• Old Habits (Kerry) Intentions are growing grass that is cut regularly and continually spreads...
  December 18th, 2024 16:07
• Eternity (Ellen Marsell) A most beautiful arrangement of words to describe something much deeper...
  December 18th, 2024 16:04
• Can You See (Poetic Licence) So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be...
  December 18th, 2024 14:20
• Legacy (Cassie58) How often I have wondered what the ground I step upon has seen in its...
  December 18th, 2024 13:56
• ~* For Me There\'s Only You *~ (Thad Wilk) A most romantic sonnet and in very good form as well. Nicely done Thad
  December 18th, 2024 13:52
• Clouds, Like Pink Petals (Thomas W Case) Thomas this one is so sexual that I felt that I was watching blue movies...
  December 18th, 2024 13:50
• The break up (RSM0812) There is a great sense of both sadness and anger in this poem. Although...
  December 18th, 2024 13:46
• between sleep and wakefulness (Gray0328) A most beautiful poetic statement of being and that inbetween state of...
  December 18th, 2024 13:40
• LANGUAGE OF LOVE (Qurrathul Ain) Another gem. We as poets strive to find the right words for emotions but...
  December 18th, 2024 09:44
• A LOVE LIKE KHADIJA AND MUHAMMAD\'s (Qurrathul Ain) This poem like fireworks explodes with magnificense and splendor. It has...
  December 18th, 2024 09:40
• Sublime landscapes (Lorenz) Deeper than the ocean mentioned, more vast than the skies, this poem has...
  December 18th, 2024 09:34
• Rain (Tony36) A new take on rain rain go away and a much more positive one at that. Most...
  December 18th, 2024 09:30
• The Tome Beneath the Tinsel (Tristan Robert Lange) Outside of the form which is wonderful its message is great as well. One...
  December 18th, 2024 09:29
• Settling In (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I have to beg your utmost pardon Shamrocker. I have read your work before...
  December 18th, 2024 09:20
• forever free (Jim56) Beautiful thoughts Jim all set in a beautiful poem of verse
  December 18th, 2024 09:13
• I Must (Teddy.15) Empathetic, kind, heartfelt, lovely, and in the spirit of true Christmas.
  December 18th, 2024 09:03
• I Forgot The Way You Were (Melancholic~Onion) Books are old friends. A lovely write and tribute to them. I love the way...
  December 18th, 2024 08:57
• searching for a season (Arqios) A wonderful work and tribute to those that grace our lives. Most lovely
  December 18th, 2024 08:53
• Pure Hearts. (Goldfinch60) A write from the heart simply put. Hard to find now days where people feel...
  December 18th, 2024 04:33
• Quick Fingers (Neville) Unlike most, your poems provoke a great deal of thought. I would call them...
  December 18th, 2024 04:20
• Chaos Starting (Dan Williams) I loved the last line particularly (then god’s repairman makes the call;...
  December 18th, 2024 03:57
• A Man Raised by a Woman (Ladywithaquill) Very nicely written the traditional role of a man in a relationship.
  December 17th, 2024 19:49
• Atlantic Cracks (Mutley Ravishes) A most interesting write about modern religious views nicely written in...
  December 17th, 2024 19:45
• When You Lie Down Like That (Gray0328) Beautiful lines expertly written resulting in a stunning image
  December 17th, 2024 14:22
• The Snake that Eats its Own Tail (Vicecream) Ouroboros the circle of life in a snake devouring its tail, birth, life...
  December 17th, 2024 13:06
• Red string of fate (Lakshya) A poem of recycled love that never ends
  December 17th, 2024 12:46
• Old land (Ellen Marsell) Beautiful and so classical in nature it pulls hard at my memories and...
  December 17th, 2024 10:17
• Warmth (Tony36) Such a beautiful thought and wish. Lovely
  December 17th, 2024 10:15
• Memory of absence (Lorenz) \"your fingers touching me through the cold mirror ...\" a most...
  December 17th, 2024 10:14
• $0.01 in my bank account (Demar Desu) What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the...
  December 17th, 2024 10:10
• Shadows2 (John Prophet) Very nice John the words like single dorplets fall accumulating into a...
  December 17th, 2024 07:52
• autumn chofu (Arqios) Beautiful a dance of words painting a lullaby of decent from heights to...
  December 17th, 2024 07:48
• The Promise (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We\'ll have to see what happens...
  December 17th, 2024 06:59
• memories (Jim56) Good advice and upbeat with rhyme Loved it Jim
  December 17th, 2024 05:23
• Giving up the fight (David Wakeling) A wonderful poem with a great analogy that speaks to a place that many of...
  December 17th, 2024 04:26
• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) The complexity and different layers of your poems astounds me, They mirror...
  December 17th, 2024 04:23
• Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence) The message is received and heard I have felt it but even this time can...
  December 17th, 2024 04:15
• First Kiss (RSM0812) This had in many ways a very classic feel to it. Lovely enamored sensual...
  December 17th, 2024 04:11
• Love Is All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Buddy Holly one of my old favorites another that died too soon. A very...
  December 17th, 2024 03:56
• LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR (Rebellion_in_sanity) A great analogy yes the future is imagination and the past is seen in a...
  December 17th, 2024 03:51
• Skepti-schism (Mutley Ravishes) Clever and well written. When you pour a beer from a height it froths and...
  December 16th, 2024 19:22
• I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case) Comparison with what we are used to gives us our measure of good and bad....
  December 16th, 2024 18:31
• Composing For Beethoven (Gray0328) Gone but not forgotten a master of emotion that left behind music that...
  December 16th, 2024 15:25
• slipping slowly (NinjaGirl) Dark and sad it speaks of uncertainty and a need to be oneself. To find...
  December 16th, 2024 15:21
• Little Things (Cassie58) Wonderful Cassie I too have such items around the house. Loved the poem
  December 16th, 2024 15:02
• [ Our Sea Of Love ] (Thad Wilk) A poem of rejoicing and jubilation at finding love. Beautiful and
  December 16th, 2024 11:14
• The twilight of time (Lorenz) So true when the flow, clocks, traffic all stop you have indeed reached...
  December 16th, 2024 11:11
• Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange) A sad message of how we as people take nature out of its place and put in...
  December 16th, 2024 09:39
• Gave you my heart (Tony36) A sad poem of betrayal that pulls at the heart Tony
  December 16th, 2024 09:37
• in the mood for love (Demar Desu) Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so...
  December 16th, 2024 09:35
• love and care (Jim56) A most beautiful thought that I hope kindles a fire in the hearthes of...
  December 16th, 2024 09:33
• THE FINAL TIME (Nephilim56) Short lines like hurried footsteps race this poem to its end. There is a...
  December 16th, 2024 05:29
• season\'s jailbreak (Arqios) A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic
  December 16th, 2024 05:26
• A Christmas Unearth (Teddy.15) I think that glass of water made me drunk because I see a metaphor here,...
  December 16th, 2024 05:24
• In Old Egypt (David Wakeling) As all great stories of drama extreem passion is accompanied by extreem...
  December 16th, 2024 05:18
• Sorry Santa / The List (Poetic Licence) The holidays are nice but for me the last of the hat and the cat made my...
  December 16th, 2024 05:14
• Ways of Falling Out of Love (Neville) This poem, as many of yours do, provoked a grate deal of thought and...
  December 16th, 2024 05:11
• Into The New Year. (Goldfinch60) A truely beautiful and kind message that may be a toast for the new year....
  December 16th, 2024 05:00
• Drink In the Sunrise (Dan Williams) This one spoke to me with each stanza a great line, so many in fact that I...
  December 16th, 2024 04:56
• holiday time (NinjaGirl) Love the shape of the poem that looks like a Christmas tree and the...
  December 15th, 2024 21:29
• Converse (Maplespal) Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its...
  December 15th, 2024 20:06
• How About Truffles from the Dark Forest? (Cheeky Missy) Many a trouble enfrented four stories invented Deprived of sleep helps...
  December 15th, 2024 16:09
• Bojangles (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem of promisses made and never kept. So is the human condition
  December 15th, 2024 13:06
• Collateral Damage (Madds) Truth spoken in a world that wishes to blame someone else for everything....
  December 15th, 2024 13:04
• THE NEXT TABLE (Nephilim56) This poem paints such a vivid picture that I could not help but Fav it. It...
  December 15th, 2024 13:03
• Madness (John Prophet) How much is nurture and how much nature in the human race. Full of...
  December 15th, 2024 11:50
• `~ Love Is In The Air -Limericks Chain- (Thad Wilk) One question always occurs to me, If people taste like pigs why won\'t a...
  December 15th, 2024 11:48
• Neriah (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I have to say you have a most unique manner of bringing the reader back....
  December 15th, 2024 11:46
• a moment in between (Arqios) A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured,...
  December 15th, 2024 11:43
• Ticking Clock of Doom (Rebellion_in_sanity) Panic in the face of a threat a normal human response. Well described in...
  December 15th, 2024 11:40
• No Taller Than A Tulip (ADarkerMind) A seasonal feel to this poem dark and a bit angry it shows disdane and...
  December 15th, 2024 07:49
• Demons (Tristan Robert Lange) We all are tempted to dance with sirens and at one time or another we all...
  December 15th, 2024 07:34
• Busy A Gut (Tony36) A good laugh can heal and certainly lifts the mood. A good write Tony
  December 15th, 2024 07:32
• mrs santa (Jim56) A fun seasonal story with a moral (always have a plan B) Very nice Jim
  December 15th, 2024 06:56
• Ancient Whispers in the Soil (Gray0328) History in fragments, untold stories told in pieces. What we all come to...
  December 15th, 2024 06:54
• Ripped off again (2781) Had it happen before and now make a second copy on the side in case. Had...
  December 15th, 2024 06:49
• Anagram (Lorenz) This poem sets the profane against the holy, the absurd against reality...
  December 15th, 2024 06:46
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) I tried Neville, but my conscience wouldn’t allow it. This poem is far...
  December 15th, 2024 04:49
• Preparing The Way (Orchidee) Good choice of topic Orchi nicely worded and I always liked that the last...
  December 15th, 2024 04:23
• LIMERICK 132 (Michael Edwards) Love limericks and am so glad to see that Teddy Faved this one.
  December 15th, 2024 04:20
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) Upstairs neighbor? Of course and so the crack and stain. A lovely piece of...
  December 15th, 2024 04:18
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Settling for second best is always disconcerting and although practical...
  December 15th, 2024 04:14
• Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows. (David Wakeling) Beautiful images with poetic words combined with a most romantic...
  December 15th, 2024 04:10
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence) A most exceptional write for a 12 year old. A wonderful write at any age....
  December 15th, 2024 04:07
• Circumcision (2781) You did well the story to tell and from history to reveal the mystery/. If...
  December 15th, 2024 04:02
• creature (Rin) God in poetry. Creating makes one its god so to speak.
  December 15th, 2024 03:54
• thought 1 (Maplespal) Clever wording and well done. Very nice
  December 14th, 2024 13:35
• Celestial Trading (Rebellion_in_sanity) So true capitalism based on greed has provided great comfort maybe too...
  December 14th, 2024 11:12
• ~> If I Was A Dawg! _ Monorhyme_ (Thad Wilk) A fun read for a dog day afternoon. I think you should consider doing...
  December 14th, 2024 11:08
• Doors (Tristan Robert Lange) Wise words that one must loose fear to hear the truth before one can hear...
  December 14th, 2024 11:05
• My kingdoms of legend (Lorenz) Written in rose thorns, What a wonderful line. A mystical place in an...
  December 14th, 2024 11:02
• The Prophet’s Eye (Demar Desu) Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
  December 14th, 2024 08:58
• Christmas Time (Tony36) A most pleasent feeling to this seasonal poem. Lovely Tony
  December 14th, 2024 07:54
• friendship (Jim56) A most beautiful message conveyed in this poem
  December 14th, 2024 07:53
• Do You Believe in Angels? (Gray0328) (In silent rooms where moonlight lifts the dust,)(And time corrodes the...
  December 14th, 2024 07:51
• Go Nanna Go Nanna (David Wakeling) Love how you built up to the end of this poem by creating charters and...
  December 14th, 2024 04:49
• Fragile (Cassie58) Masterful Cassie! Each line a new reveal that paints the picture of a girl...
  December 14th, 2024 04:45
• The Consequences of Failing to Prep (Neville) Had my children early and that had its problems too. Too early or late in...
  December 14th, 2024 04:41