Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Christmas lights (Ja'Quan Shepard)
It seems that gifts are the major emphasis of Christmas it is either...
December 3rd, 2025 04:09 - At the center of it all (Baker)
A poem of more platonic love than passionate in this poem. It seems a mix...
December 3rd, 2025 04:05 - Dawning Day - OT/NT Series 5 (Orchidee)
And the story continues in this hymn. Nicely worded this hymn speaks in...
December 3rd, 2025 04:01 - ๐๐ฌ๐ฏ ๐๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ โ ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ โ๐๐ณ๐ข (Keyara S Trotman)
The first lines ones of vowing to live on the edge while in the body of...
December 3rd, 2025 03:57 - Listen In Our Life. (Goldfinch60)
So right Andy we often listen to the things that of least importance. With...
December 3rd, 2025 03:54 - If I Let it Work (Gray0328)
This poem starts out with uncertainty and ends in hope. Nicely done Gray
December 2nd, 2025 20:48 - God is. (Andrew Deaton)
Infinity plus infinity is no more than infinity itself. Well done a good...
December 2nd, 2025 20:47 - Collection of Anguish (Dyslexic.gun)
We all play the cards we are dealt and I sense the frustration in this
December 2nd, 2025 20:45 - only a love poem if you want it to be (Queer-with-a-pen)
Somewhat nostalgic this poem dives back to a past event held in memory and...
December 2nd, 2025 20:15 - Nightingale (Yazz)
Coincidence my poem today is about a nightbird as well. Loved the metaphor...
December 2nd, 2025 20:13 - DESERT WALK (David Welch)
A story of desert survival and a narrow escape. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 20:10 - Perception (Amethyste)
A most interesting usage of the word and meaning. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 20:08 - Demons within (Nicole Pritchard)
This poem calls for everyone to believe in themselves and have the power...
December 2nd, 2025 20:07 - Poem = [Output Error] (Maydanae)
The frustrations of technology in this poem. Well voiced
December 2nd, 2025 20:05 - Kisses (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Here kisses take precedence and flow over the body like water in a shower....
December 2nd, 2025 20:03 - Always, always (Aa Harvey)
Full of examples as to why the author loves someone. Equally full of...
December 2nd, 2025 20:01 - Fallen (Maplespal)
The distance of communication can be great. Sometimes we can not get...
December 2nd, 2025 14:35 - Train (Gewar)
A great metaphor in the train moving forward and leaving the past behind....
December 2nd, 2025 13:02 - The Best Within (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
The question is always how long. From birth to death it is how long. Well...
December 2nd, 2025 12:17 - Snow Globe Sonnet (Matthew R. Callies)
Beautiful and most romantic as well. Nicely written
December 2nd, 2025 12:12 - How? (A.N.)
An image that works both ways where we treat ourselves based on how others...
December 2nd, 2025 12:09 - A Simple Mystery I Read (Jjudaharts)
A great saying that has deep meaning. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 12:07 - Dark Trophy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The poacher could be any from government to banks to merchants to whom...
December 2nd, 2025 12:06 - Neptunian reverie (Lorenz)
A cloud defying the wind, a lost morning, lips in the tide, a disheveled...
December 2nd, 2025 11:56 - Untitled {23} (Niko Papadatos)
A thought that makes all paranoid. And right we are to be paranoid. Well...
December 2nd, 2025 10:18 - Past Afar, Present Near (Soheil khodaparasti)
A comment on change with technology and what is worse we can not see the...
December 2nd, 2025 10:17 - Toxic (Cindy only version) (Tkatie118)
December 2nd, 2025 10:15 - Toxic (Cindy only version) (Tkatie118)
So interesting the words emphasized: Liberty, God, Love, Peace are we...
December 2nd, 2025 10:15 - question (Tristan Robert Lange)
A good question and well stated. The set up is who asks you to speak. Well...
December 2nd, 2025 10:11 - The First Time (Thomas W Case)
Heartbreak early in life. A sad story but so easily identifiable. Well
December 2nd, 2025 10:09 - ๐๐ป๐โฏ๐ ๐ช๐๐ธโฏ ๐โด๐โฏ โฐ๐โฏ๐ ๐ฎ๐พ๐๐ธโฏ ๐ช๐๐ธโฏ ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ๐ (Keyara S Trotman)
Only we ourselves can say that. Nicely stated
December 2nd, 2025 08:21 - words expelled (Lunarchloedip)
I hear you have read your words and feel the pain. Not a little girl but...
December 2nd, 2025 08:19 - BEAUTY / BELLEZA / ็พใใ๏ผใณใใ๏ผ (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A beautiful poem of memories those pastels of the past and paint the...
December 2nd, 2025 06:44 - live your life (Jim56)
A most positive guide to brightening one\'s day. Very nicely written Jim
December 2nd, 2025 06:39 - Ignorance! (Friendship)
Bravo! This poem expresses deep feelings peeled away from a core of anger....
December 2nd, 2025 06:37 - benign maleficense (Arqios)
I hear the indignation in this write Cryptic an outrage in quiet that...
December 2nd, 2025 06:32 - Hurt (Katie B.)
The author\'s note clarifies the situation. In reading it first it fit so...
December 2nd, 2025 04:49 - Santas Dilemma (Paul Bell)
My feelings about Christmas exactly Paul and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:47 - Love and Life (RSM0812)
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the...
December 2nd, 2025 04:45 - Our Fates (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A rap indeed this poem spins and spits its message from beginning to end....
December 2nd, 2025 04:42 - benoit bouchard (Oh kay)
Alliteration takes front seat in this write with B driving and A along for...
December 2nd, 2025 04:40 - Nikola Tesla supposedly got by on 2 hours of sleep a night (Simple Tendencies)
The last line ties the others together in this Alice in wonderland dream...
December 2nd, 2025 04:38 - AS ANGELS FADE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
It is the integral weaving of good rhyme, unusual vivid images (stone...
December 2nd, 2025 04:35 - O Stiff One (Anthony Hanible)
Here the cure becomes worse than the disease or maybe is the disease. A...
December 2nd, 2025 04:32 - Margins of Morning Light (JAINESH.D)
This poem paints in vivid images sceneries of beauty that lift the soul. A...
December 2nd, 2025 04:29 - After being scammed... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Software can only go so far in unraveling poetic underwear. A fun poem
December 2nd, 2025 04:26 - The Light (Shahla Latifi)
Here light and dark weave together into a single fabric where black and...
December 2nd, 2025 04:24 - Larceny (Awam)
I love this poem and I use the word love loosely but mean it completely....
December 2nd, 2025 04:18 - Voluminous Voice - OT/NT Series 4 (Orchidee)
Another well constructed hymn that calls out to the reader as if one...
December 2nd, 2025 04:14 - Good Things In Life. (Goldfinch60)
An empty glass needs to be refilled a good host will make sure of this. A...
December 2nd, 2025 04:11 - Magikali (Mutley Ravishes)
A good write. I think about this and ask are we not all whack jobs but...
December 1st, 2025 20:52 - JUSTIFY MY RAGE, or A YOUNG MAN DYING ANGRY (David Welch)
If I were terminal (and we all are) I would be damn angry too. A thought...
December 1st, 2025 20:51 - There Is No Dream (Pete the poet)
A feeling of age, being worn out and overly ripe. This poem conveys the...
December 1st, 2025 18:41 - Cuddling (Amethyste)
Strongly worded, highly sexual, it goes beyond erotic a hard word of...
December 1st, 2025 18:39 - calm (Lunarchloedip)
A poem where contentment can be felt and happiness seems to grow out of...
December 1st, 2025 18:36 - Enough (Maplespal)
A wonderful poem of refusing to give up what one knows. A lovely work...
December 1st, 2025 18:34 - Between Two Shores (GeekSusie)
Two different worlds built on two different values one money and the other...
December 1st, 2025 15:50 - DESPAIR (Will Kevin)
The feeling is such a common one but an overreaction. Caution yes but to...
December 1st, 2025 15:47 - Heartsick (\"Carter Wills\")
Here is a poem that the cynics would adore, a piece of the heart poured on...
December 1st, 2025 15:45 - Mozart\'s voice (Lorenz)
I think that Mozart would love to play with a synthesizer and computer...
December 1st, 2025 15:41 - The Quiet Art of Becoming (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
A poem of beginning a continual practice of shaping and reworking that...
December 1st, 2025 15:34 - Sparrow that flies /Gorriรณn que vuela (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Although this can be taken literally, I believe it is a metaphor. A...
December 1st, 2025 11:17 - Sing Me a Christmas Song (Matthew R. Callies)
This poem sounds like one in weight or anticipation of a season that they...
December 1st, 2025 11:16 - Faulted Lines (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very nice Kurt, the poem is, but the shout the proceeds the action. There...
December 1st, 2025 11:13 - handbook of normalcy (Corian Baek)
One is tangled in the net of society and cannot escape it try is one...
December 1st, 2025 11:12 - ๐ฏ๐พ๐๐โฏ ๐๐ป๐โฏ๐ ๐ฒ๐๐พ๐๐โฏ๐ (Keyara S Trotman)
To me going above and beyond words means action and actions speak louder...
December 1st, 2025 11:09 - Every Moment (Paul Gerard Reed)
There is a feeling of heaviness in this poem, the weight that one carries...
December 1st, 2025 11:07 - Between Light and Dark (Nayak)
The roles we are assigned in this world determine how we act. The most...
December 1st, 2025 11:05 - wooden keys (Tristan Robert Lange)
How true it is that the lack of sound can be heard as loud as any other...
December 1st, 2025 11:03 - Merry Christmas, Mom - Part XIII (Randyjohnson71)
A lovely poem of tribute to your mother, and I could feel the sadness in...
December 1st, 2025 11:01 - tomorrow (Jim56)
Most cheerful and upbeat poem Jim loved it
December 1st, 2025 11:00 - A Brief case (Awam)
A very powerful poem, that evokes strong images and raises the emotions....
December 1st, 2025 10:58 - Quieting stress (Friendship)
Iโve given the description of stress, illustrated with numerous images...
December 1st, 2025 10:56 - A (Katie B.)
A lovely poem of love expressed in tenderness. Nicely composed and written
December 1st, 2025 06:21 - Her Eyes (Tkatie118)
A poem of love and care through the years. Nicely composed and written
December 1st, 2025 06:20 - Shadow\'s Echo (Markashley1961)
A poem full of symbols and metaphor that leaves one in the shadows of...
December 1st, 2025 06:18 - Someone I knew (The Velvet)
A poem of being overlooked and offering what was desired was not seen....
December 1st, 2025 06:16 - outstaring a blank wall (Arqios)
Cryptic this poem brought to mind the story of Bodhidharma and how he sat...
December 1st, 2025 06:14 - WINTER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A poem of winter and its advent. Well written with great imagery it feels...
December 1st, 2025 04:47 - Industry Plants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The road to fame not all it\'s cracked up to be. A poem that calls for...
December 1st, 2025 04:46 - NO NO NO NO NO (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
Short but deeper that it appears at first sight this poem requires...
December 1st, 2025 04:44 - Midnight Morning (RSM0812)
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42 - yours (Ja'Quan Shepard)
A very unique and most interesting rhyme pattern in this poem that pulls...
December 1st, 2025 04:40 - Carousel (Hacklec)
Wonderful poetic images fill this piece. Very nicely crafted
December 1st, 2025 04:38 - Fear ูุฑุงุณ (Soheil khodaparasti)
Deeply philosophical the imagery in this poem is very nicely conceived....
December 1st, 2025 04:37 - Film Critic (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
How transient is life but a blink. This poem uses great imagery to convey...
December 1st, 2025 04:32 - Past (Niki)
A poem about feeling strong and asserting oneself in a situation. Nicely...
December 1st, 2025 04:30 - December\'s Eve (Dyslexic.gun)
A frightening prospect and experience when allergies take hold. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:28 - Who is I am Addicted? (Mutley Ravishes)
A deep philosophical poem that deserves a good deal of pondering. The...
December 1st, 2025 04:01 - Horror Of Herod - OT/NT Series 3 (Orchidee)
A most sad and dark story which seems a little too tragic for the...
December 1st, 2025 03:59 - You\'re My All Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful sonnet that speaks of your love for your wife. Very nicely...
December 1st, 2025 03:55 - I am a Stone (Cedrick)
Art already exists within the rock, that around it just needs to be...
November 30th, 2025 20:13 - All I know (Ja'Quan Shepard)
This poem sounds like threats on the street. Well written
November 30th, 2025 20:11 - 7am Sugar Fix (Liza-Jean)
A vivid description of the streets upon return from work. Nicely done
November 30th, 2025 20:09 - Breathe yourself into being (Zephyrschild)
A poem to one\'s own body a plea for forgiveness for ill treatment and...
November 30th, 2025 20:07 - Runnin\' in circles (BoxMyHeart)
People like to criticize others for doing the same thing that they are...
November 30th, 2025 18:41 - Windows (William Hromada)
Beautiful words of sensitivity where the eyes are the mirror of the soul
November 30th, 2025 18:38 - Needed this out (Maplespal)
Time passes so quickly a wonderful write
November 30th, 2025 16:51 - Painting With My Fist (Jjudaharts)
Hitting the wall is a phrase made literal in this poem. Nicely said
November 30th, 2025 14:21 - Donโt Worry Be Happy. (As said by the renowned bard Bobby McFerrin) (Jan bach)
Food a comfort stress reliever. How to let loose of stress. Well done
November 30th, 2025 14:20
« Return to the profile of sorenbarrett
