Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- When it All Seemed to Fit (Neville)
Clever Neville short, to the point and seasonal all rolled into one. Merry...
December 24th, 2024 03:25 - Still Away From You (Dev Parth)
Dev you have done well with this poem that not only is nicely rhymed and...
December 24th, 2024 03:22 - From a Taste of Summer to Christmas (Cheeky Missy)
Ah but what a Christmas triolgy here we have. Full of cheer and good will....
December 23rd, 2024 20:59 - Oh Well (Mutley Ravishes)
Imagined places, fears, faces, tears, traces of what we dream but have...
December 23rd, 2024 20:57 - Baby Jon (David Wakeling)
I remember that story chilling and dark as it was so it remains a black...
December 23rd, 2024 15:47 - The Shift of Light (Gray0328)
Many poetic lines that thunder in the darkness of the mind. A most poetic...
December 23rd, 2024 15:45 - Motion (Maplespal)
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m...
December 23rd, 2024 15:43 - ~` I\'m Just Ape Over You! (Thad Wilk)
A tale (tail) of monkey business that comes too close to people business...
December 23rd, 2024 11:31 - United Health Death (Demar Desu)
It is difficult to stop the machinery of society and not even death can...
December 23rd, 2024 11:28 - Broken circle (Lorenz)
Full of pagan images it evokes a feel of the winter solstice and times...
December 23rd, 2024 11:26 - THIS CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards)
Now lap dancers are a picture that brings different pictuers that Lapland...
December 23rd, 2024 11:22 - Along the beach (Tony36)
A painting of a good day with love and nature.
December 23rd, 2024 11:20 - bad and better days (Jim56)
Been there seen that and accept that that is nature\'s way of cleaning and...
December 23rd, 2024 11:19 - WHEN TO STOP (Bobby O)
Such a deep message to all that wish to convert the world to your point of...
December 23rd, 2024 11:09 - You can (2781)
Sounds like another Christmas tune. Most interesting format in song form.
December 23rd, 2024 04:22 - Born A Babe (Orchidee)
Very appropriate for the season Orchi. Another lovely write
December 23rd, 2024 04:20 - Festive Humbug (Teddy.15)
Tis the season to be merry. Drink in the Christmas spirit. A fun read
December 23rd, 2024 04:18 - catch of the day (Arqios)
A beautiful poem of images that goes deeper in meaning and metaphor. I...
December 23rd, 2024 04:15 - Darling I Bought You A Hoover (Poetic Licence)
I love the tone of this poem and how it goes. Despite best intentions and...
December 23rd, 2024 04:13 - Because It Felt Right at The Time (Neville)
All things return to their origin and no less here. In that cycle there is...
December 23rd, 2024 04:07 - Fairytale of Love (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Romance is always played up but in practicality love dies of starvation. ...
December 23rd, 2024 03:58 - words unsaid (Demar Desu)
I thought for sure that the last line would not rhyme. A fun poem of...
December 23rd, 2024 03:55 - Love (MendedFences27)
Loved the duality woven into this poem and as it intertwines how it...
December 23rd, 2024 03:53 - Never Be Me (Sunshine777)
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely...
December 23rd, 2024 03:51 - Happy Birthday Chet. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful tribute to a marvelous musition. Nicely done Andy
December 23rd, 2024 03:49 - We\'ll meet again, I know where; I know when.. (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks for the greeting and the same to you Dave have the best of...
December 22nd, 2024 20:26 - The haunting game (Maplespal)
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem....
December 22nd, 2024 20:25 - New/Old Friends (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A happy ending to the story, nicely written. Glad to hear that all worked...
December 22nd, 2024 20:23 - Jaded Wildflower (Thomas W Case)
Quite the story of wild, and naive actions that we all learn from. very...
December 22nd, 2024 20:19 - ...the Rest of the \"Story\" or so They Say (Cheeky Missy)
Hold the snow I\'ll take an extra helping of sun thank you. Another fun...
December 22nd, 2024 20:16 - Stage Directions (Gray0328)
A most intriguing concept voiced from a different point of view. Nicely...
December 22nd, 2024 20:12 - ~> Her Final Destination (Thad Wilk)
Desperation and fear of loss led to total loss. Sad and tragic a love poem...
December 22nd, 2024 12:39 - From sparks to ash (Domilla)
Times have changed and not for the better in this poem. There is a feeling...
December 22nd, 2024 12:35 - What Is This I See? (ADarkerMind)
A dark dream or visions of a nightmare it calls out with haunting images
December 22nd, 2024 12:31 - Love\'s Flower (Tony36)
Lovely and such good advise it cheers the soul
December 22nd, 2024 08:11 - two robins sang to me (Jim56)
Such a pretty picture you paint Jim calm and sunny in nature it cheers the...
December 22nd, 2024 08:10 - UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON (Tristan Robert Lange)
Clever in shape and Accrostic as well as dealing with what is truth...
December 22nd, 2024 07:30 - Parable of Politics (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Survival of the fittist is the rule but we prefer to break the rule with...
December 22nd, 2024 07:24 - Axes, Bold as Love (Mutley Ravishes)
Hopefully we all will bring forth some fruit, even sour fruits have their...
December 22nd, 2024 04:21 - December\'s Angel (Teddy.15)
Touching and so tenderly written. I am not sure why a man was put in this...
December 22nd, 2024 04:18 - Fact or fiction (2781)
Clever play on words for the last phrase. Loved the question format and...
December 22nd, 2024 03:54 - Mary\'s Magnificat (Song of Praise) (Orchidee)
Ah so appropriate for this time of the year Orchi. Very nicely worded and...
December 22nd, 2024 03:52 - drunken suspension bridge (Arqios)
If taken literal it is so difficult to deal with substances in a...
December 22nd, 2024 03:50 - IT SEEMS TO ME (Michael Edwards)
That would make it sepia and when I see that color in my pool it\'s time...
December 22nd, 2024 03:44 - Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two) (Poetic Licence)
A fun read alphabetized mostly. Christmas is a lot of things but the ones...
December 22nd, 2024 03:39 - Some Leaves do and some Leaves don’t. (David Wakeling)
The cycle of life put in poetic verse with personification added to spice...
December 22nd, 2024 03:37 - ignorance among ignorance (Demar Desu)
A wise statement put in senryu form with so much said in so few words....
December 22nd, 2024 03:34 - Light To Brightness. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful metaphor and a good write Gold
December 22nd, 2024 03:32 - Somehow It\'s Quintessentially Xmas, I Guess (Cheeky Missy)
These writes gave me a sense of seasonal warmth and I thank you for that.
December 21st, 2024 16:26 - Walking Home in the Marigny (Gray0328)
A great image (you didn\'t really steal that tree from someone\'s yard...
December 21st, 2024 16:20 - Never Buy A Cyclops A Kitten! - Sonnet- (Thad Wilk)
Thad you never cease to amaze me with your humor and it gives me a smile...
December 21st, 2024 16:16 - Farewell Mary (Domilla)
A sad poem of separation, loss and death of someone close. The poem itself...
December 21st, 2024 16:12 - Give me that sweet ballad (Domilla)
I seldom find two poems in a row that I feel worthy of Favs but you have...
December 21st, 2024 16:08 - Inevitable sign up (Domilla)
A cry from the heart this poem flows with a darkness that the reader can...
December 21st, 2024 16:03 - Counting Blessings (Cassie58)
A beautiful recognition of the disparity between the fortunate and...
December 21st, 2024 15:51 - Christmas (RSM0812)
So loved the addition of giving all the year. It is not only on Christmas...
December 21st, 2024 09:24 - Why? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Heart breaking. A teacher\'s job is to teach and with out incentive you...
December 21st, 2024 09:22 - The Ride (Tony36)
The feeling of freedom and open spaces without a plan or direction. Lovely
December 21st, 2024 09:16 - One-Sided Love (Dev Parth)
Dev you have grown, your poetry has exploded. This piece is so well...
December 21st, 2024 09:15 - No Eggs (Maplespal)
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point...
December 21st, 2024 09:11 - What They Omit (Melancholic~Onion)
A very self reflective poem existential in nature and philisophical but so...
December 21st, 2024 09:09 - puppies are for life (Jim56)
Funny how that goes, people give dogs away a dog never gives a person...
December 21st, 2024 09:04 - The book (2781)
To[ some wicked and to others devine. The workings of the heart known only...
December 21st, 2024 09:00 - Planetarium in love (Lorenz)
A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but...
December 21st, 2024 08:58 - Conversations From Down Under (Mutley Ravishes)
A thought that had never occured to me said in such a familiar way that it...
December 21st, 2024 08:54 - 21-12-24 (Arqios)
Caught the feeling in this poem so well expressed with memories of...
December 21st, 2024 08:46 - Signs of The Times x5 (Neville)
The less control we have over our world the more we seek to control...
December 21st, 2024 04:13 - God`s Gift To Us (Poetic Licence)
A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written
December 21st, 2024 04:08 - AND THE PAST TENSE IS: AWAKE (Michael Edwards)
A most clever write using the ideosynchrocies in the language. Short and...
December 21st, 2024 04:06 - Longest Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful sonnet again but being on the under side it is the opposite
December 21st, 2024 04:02 - Dark Passage (John Prophet)
The perils and adventures of riding out life. One is already in it so you...
December 20th, 2024 20:11 - Tomorrow Ask Me Why I Remain Confused (Cheeky Missy)
A most interesting combination of things dates and issues. A most seasonal...
December 20th, 2024 20:09 - The Train to Treblinka. (David Wakeling)
Cold, dark. haunting. A story that I hope I never have to hear again. It...
December 20th, 2024 20:02 - Poverty & Peace (Demar Desu)
A true statement put in plain words, Well written,
December 20th, 2024 19:58 - Telescopes, Microscopes (Vicecream)
A most different point of view, Nicely written,
December 20th, 2024 19:56 - United Moral Rights (Badjanah)
I can hear the anguish in this poem it screams out for those that will...
December 20th, 2024 12:52 - Mind displays (Maplespal)
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for...
December 20th, 2024 11:35 - They Are Not DRONES In The Sky! (Thad Wilk)
Some have migrated to Florida and the county uses them to monitor new...
December 20th, 2024 11:32 - Second Chances (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Another episode and on we go toward what we hope will be romance or maybe...
December 20th, 2024 11:30 - Dang Tree! (Orchidee)
Orchi have used artifical trees for years they drop needles too. After a...
December 20th, 2024 11:26 - Strong Enough (Tony36)
The best steel is forged in the hottest fire. A powerful write about...
December 20th, 2024 08:17 - love unspoken (Arqios)
Most tender and at the time most splendid in images this poem speaks to...
December 20th, 2024 08:14 - Requiem for Real (Rebellion_in_sanity)
A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye...
December 20th, 2024 06:15 - cant buy love (Jim56)
So true Jim it is given not bought. A wonderful poem of love
December 20th, 2024 06:12 - When nature calls.. (NafisaSB)
Living in nature and with it all around me I relate. Hearing the birds in...
December 20th, 2024 04:23 - HATE IS A SOCIAL ISSUE (Gray0328)
A strong message that comes through clearly in this poem pleading for...
December 20th, 2024 04:20 - Come On It`s Christmas (Poetic Licence)
All that by ten in the morning only in Key West. I\'ve been there. A fun...
December 20th, 2024 04:18 - Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful Christmas Wish written in such nice form. Lovely Andy
December 20th, 2024 04:15 - The Good don’t die young. (David Wakeling)
Good, nice, meek. The sermon on the mount comes to mind and he did walk on...
December 19th, 2024 21:39 - All Ears (Mutley Ravishes)
Cleverly said it makes its point in a most poetic way. Very nice
December 19th, 2024 20:45 - Go and get it (𓆩Mase𓆪)
Be your own person is the message I get. Questions asked and answered make...
December 19th, 2024 20:44 - Christmas Ambivalence (Kerry)
A most familiar flow to this poem for this time of the year. A fun read....
December 19th, 2024 18:24 - What Is LOVE? Part.1 (Melancholic~Onion)
A valid point in that love is too amorphous a word to define, It means so...
December 19th, 2024 18:21 - I am up (Maplespal)
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39 - Forgiveness?? (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
As life goes on so does everyone\'s story. A good read. I\'ll be back.
December 19th, 2024 14:38 - conservation of momentum (Demar Desu)
You have a good point and I agree categories are made by man and to be...
December 19th, 2024 14:25 - Gift Wrap a Better Kind (St. Nick, I Cry To You) (AuburnScribbler)
A Christmas greeting or wake up call to realize what Christmas is all...
December 19th, 2024 14:23 - Constant (Cassie58)
Cassie this poem of nature and its constancy in a changing world is most...
December 19th, 2024 14:19 - 4:00am, mtn Dew, and bad decisions (NinjaGirl)
This is deeper than the first glance does tell. Every one wants something...
December 19th, 2024 14:16 - Gone a Fishin\'! -Redneck- (Thad Wilk)
A most fun read reminds me of my childhood
December 19th, 2024 12:03
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