Comments on community poems by Raven333
- Blood on the water (Tallisman)
Another great one tallisman, taking one\'s life is a very personal sad...
July 19th, 2022 17:57 - Encroachment (Blueledge)
Another good one there, and that\'s just how I like to sleep. LOL
July 19th, 2022 17:54 - Wake Up World. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem, and it makes you think is there going to be a day when we...
July 19th, 2022 17:52 - Halo joe (EvenwheniLie)
LOL, another good one, I liked how you talked about Joe. I think I can...
July 19th, 2022 17:50 - MY OLD EAST END ! (Justa_Geezer)
Really good read my friend once again, and as you said it times are not...
July 19th, 2022 17:47 - Cosmos In My Heart (Himanshu_2001)
Really beautiful poem, talking about how to love and the other didn\'t...
July 19th, 2022 17:44 - The Little Yellow Pill (Paul Bell)
I just loved your poem, I thought it was well written and loved the rhyme...
July 17th, 2022 12:45 - A Fool (Peppino)
Great poem, I think I want to become an old fool
July 17th, 2022 12:42 - Happy Birthday big shot (Hzugman)
LOL, I LOVED IT!!
July 17th, 2022 12:39 - The Tale of Two Hearts (Himanshu_2001)
What a lovely poem this was, The words blew my heart away. It was so...
July 17th, 2022 12:38 - Time has come... (Begreenfacility1)
I enjoyed your poem, I thought it was well written and I loved the rhyme...
July 17th, 2022 12:35 - Lifes Journey (Jeannie)
You have a lovely poem there, And I will agree live for today!!!
July 17th, 2022 12:32 - Crying tears of relief (Sophenia)
Nice poem Sophenia, Before my cry and after I know my family will always...
July 17th, 2022 12:30 - Circles in the sand (Tallisman)
Great poem my friend, sometimes I feel like am going in circles. good...
July 17th, 2022 05:35 - Growing Older ! (Justa_Geezer)
Good poem my friend, I think am growing old like fine wine.
July 17th, 2022 05:32 - Natures Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful poem, it was well descriped and made me reflect.
July 15th, 2022 11:59 - Reincarnation (Blueledge)
I enjoyed, You know I always wondered about recarnation. I don\'t know...
July 15th, 2022 11:57 - Philadelphia, or Philly (EvenwheniLie)
I have never been to Philly but it was nice to hear about it and your...
July 15th, 2022 11:54 - For all abused females ! (Justa_Geezer)
Wow, That was very beautiful.
I had to pull myself together after reading...
July 15th, 2022 11:49 - Paths (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
Awesome poem, really enjoyed it and totally agree. Also your flow was
July 14th, 2022 13:56 - They dumbing us down (EvenwheniLie)
Dam they dumbing us down, I loved it. I really enjoy reading your stuff.
July 14th, 2022 13:52 - Still Here (Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa)
What a poet you are, that was absolutely beautiful. Just like your other...
July 14th, 2022 13:48 - Intermission (Tallisman)
Loved it, for some reason it made me smile. But my friend you have to get...
July 14th, 2022 13:46 - Mary Had A Little Lamb 17. (Goldfinch60)
LOL. I think I liked this one better than the regular rhyme.
July 14th, 2022 13:43 - Questioning Religion ? (Justa_Geezer)
I really liked this one, I have to say that I totally agree. Your flow on...
July 14th, 2022 13:41 - These meats is killing me (EvenwheniLie)
I loved that.. I do agree with you though to much dam chemicals. By the...
July 14th, 2022 13:37 - My love in a pandemic (Blueledge)
Once again, Am in love.. Beautiful
July 14th, 2022 13:32 - THE RHYMER (Raven333)
Don\'t ask me what happened, I don\'t know...
July 14th, 2022 06:20 - Fighting! (EmotionsOnwhitepaper)
I fell ya, I totally can identify with all the feelings and struggles you...
July 12th, 2022 05:36 - Awakening (MendedFences27)
Great poem yet it was so sad and filled with emotion. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:33 - I FUCKING hate you. (Rosey)
I LOVED IT... this poem was me telling every bitch that has hurt me...
July 12th, 2022 05:30 - You Are A Sick Pattern (Florence Mango)
I definitely can identify with this one. I thought your poem was very well...
July 12th, 2022 05:26 - WHY ! (Justa_Geezer)
What a great but yet sad poem. my heart fell out of my chest as I was...
July 12th, 2022 05:22 - Untitled (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
Wow, what a touching poem. am almost lost for words. well written with a...
July 12th, 2022 05:19 - ME! (QueenMax)
I loved this poem, it was very sensual and flirty. I thought it was a very...
July 12th, 2022 05:15 - Cups And Sugar. (Goldfinch60)
I love how you talk about your love, it is so sweet and true.
July 12th, 2022 05:13 - LOVE IN BETWEEN (Raven333)
Thank you so much, and your comment means a lot
July 10th, 2022 22:39 - A Darkness in the heart (Tallisman)
I loved this poem like many of yours. It is sad though how love always...
July 10th, 2022 15:54 - Amy (Blueledge)
I thought that was a nice inspirational poem. great write..
July 10th, 2022 15:51 - Hard Week. (Goldfinch60)
What a great poem, vacations seem to take more out of you then regular...
July 10th, 2022 15:49 - Road trip (Tallisman)
What a great poem about love and how it started. kinda took me back...
July 10th, 2022 15:46 - US ! (Justa_Geezer)
What a sweet but yet sad poem, I enjoyed it. Nicely written and a great...
July 10th, 2022 15:43 - Many worlds (Blueledge)
To pledge love to someone in a Multiverse.. There is no other. loved it
July 7th, 2022 01:48 - Love Forever FIB. (Goldfinch60)
I wish everybody could have a love like this..Beautiful
July 7th, 2022 01:45 - Beatles Pandora playlist!!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
I think this is the most clever poem I have ever read. To flow like it did...
July 7th, 2022 01:43 - The Greatest Day (Ellegee3)
I liked the way you talked about Mother Nature, is how I got it. What a...
July 6th, 2022 23:53 - So Good. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely done, I know this is going to sound weird but I can only say what I...
July 6th, 2022 23:46 - Love (Blueledge)
Your wife or partner must be so pleased in how you feel, So Sweet.
July 6th, 2022 23:42 - \"Feelings\" (Sameer)
well written, and the words rang truth in my ear. Keep Writing!!
July 6th, 2022 00:11 - The Spider (Aniahmator)
I hate spiders.. But really glad I read your poem. I thought it was great...
July 6th, 2022 00:09 - Night Alone (Chris frank)
Really nice poem you wrote, I can identify with it.
July 6th, 2022 00:07 - Sea of Heartbreak (MendedFences27)
Although sad that was a good poem. I thought it flowed very well.
July 6th, 2022 00:05 - Silence is a blessing....or is it? (Voicesecho88)
I liked it, it dam sure spoke the truth. But the question is.. is silence...
July 6th, 2022 00:03 - Truth Of Being (Satishverma)
I liked your poem, I thought it was beautifully written.
July 6th, 2022 00:00 - The Fourth of July!!! Evening 🌆 (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
Nicely done, loved to hear how you spent it. LOL I thought it was nicely...
July 5th, 2022 23:58 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
That was a good write, and oh so true. Unfortunately I know a few of these...
July 5th, 2022 23:53 - Marcus. My flat friend (Blueledge)
LOL, Still making me smile.. good poem about your flat friend.
July 5th, 2022 23:48 - Mysterious Tales (Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa)
Great poem honey, It always amazes me that when I read your writes I...
July 5th, 2022 23:46 - THE CAT\'S PRAYER ! (Justa_Geezer)
Sorry about your loss but if she was here I would gladly tell her that I...
July 5th, 2022 23:42 - Crying out for hope (Tallisman)
Oh Wow, Another great one to put in your books. I actually read this one...
July 5th, 2022 23:37 - You (Aijaialberts)
Nice poem, I could so identify. For I to was such a fool.
July 4th, 2022 14:12 - Cry Of Pain! (Goldfinch60)
Once again you made me smile as I was reading... OUCH..
July 4th, 2022 14:07 - MISSING YOU ! (Justa_Geezer)
What a tender loving poem this is, what every woman wants to hear from a...
July 4th, 2022 14:06 - Not gonna turn out well… (Tallisman)
What a great poem, it took me from the first stage of this man all the way...
July 4th, 2022 14:03 - Bad Dreams and Nightmares (Aijaialberts)
A really good poem, so much feeling and pain in it.
July 3rd, 2022 13:46 - LOST IN THE RAIN (Osei Zion)
Really enjoyed it, I love the rain. it was a nice write.
July 3rd, 2022 13:42 - Tales are scared (Lyes)
Your poem was great, It had a lot to say and you could feel the pain in...
July 3rd, 2022 13:40 - A Regent\'s Tale (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I liked this poem, it had a message and a really good flow to it.
July 3rd, 2022 13:37 - Sad days (Blueledge)
Yes always sadness mostly but nice when there is someone there. nice
July 3rd, 2022 13:34 - Leading To Eternity (Goldfinch60)
What a lovely write, enjoyed reading it
July 3rd, 2022 13:33 - LITTLE ANNIE ! (Justa_Geezer)
LOL, it was a good write and I do have to say I had a awkward smile on my...
July 3rd, 2022 13:31 - Unraveled (Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa)
Really nice write, beautiful.
July 3rd, 2022 13:27 - Damnation (EvenwheniLie)
This poem definitely gets you thinking, it has a really good flow to it....
July 3rd, 2022 13:25 - Big White Cloud (A Boy With Roses)
It is sad when we lose someone but I like to believe that we will see our...
June 30th, 2022 20:43 - I Want To Break Free – 1 (Nafis Light)
I liked this poem and the message it puts out, and so true.
June 30th, 2022 20:39 - When all is said and done (Tallisman)
Loved your poem, and I agree words can burn your soul.
June 30th, 2022 20:37 - I Am Becoming My Dad. (Goldfinch60)
Loved reading this poem, When we are raised by awesome people it instills...
June 30th, 2022 20:35 - What is the self (EvenwheniLie)
Great poem, and yes it is \'self\' I think in all ways it were we start...
June 30th, 2022 20:32 - Letter to my lover (Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa)
Loved it.. reminded me of some of my past loves.
June 30th, 2022 20:26 - Sorry ! (Justa_Geezer)
I loved this poem, I felt like you were talking to me. LOL
June 30th, 2022 20:24 - Justices (Blueledge)
Lol, I liked it\'
June 30th, 2022 20:19 - Autopsy (Audraburwell)
All though it was a little scary and very descriptive I liked this poem....
June 29th, 2022 18:53 - Be Less Sh*t (Saxon Crow)
I like it, if only there were less shit..
June 29th, 2022 18:47 - Turn the TV Off (Saxon Crow)
Good poem, and I do have to agree I sometimes have to shut off the TV. I...
June 29th, 2022 18:43 - Blood moon (Tallisman)
Nice poem, I thought you nicely wrote it and the rhyming was very good,
June 29th, 2022 18:41 - Memory Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Good poem, and oh so true but it is always to late when you realize that...
June 29th, 2022 18:38 - Hungry for love (Blueledge)
Nice little poem, said a lot and oh so sweet.
June 29th, 2022 18:36 - Anxious !!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
I liked your poem, but it sucks that some people do that to others. really...
June 29th, 2022 18:35 - You Told Me (Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa)
Nice poem, had a lot of feeling and very sad. very nice flow.
June 29th, 2022 18:32 - Still Looking for Love. (Justa_Geezer)
Really liked your poem, I think most people are looking for love but I do...
June 29th, 2022 18:28 - Loneliness (Victor Everlight)
It seldom happens to me but as I read this poem my eyes welled up in tears...
June 29th, 2022 18:24 - Words (Junior Mboweni)
I liked this poem. it explained a lot. and this is true words are a very...
June 29th, 2022 18:18 - Like a Hardback Book ! (Justa_Geezer)
nice read, this is true we are like reading material. life and what road...
June 27th, 2022 21:24 - should (Jon Nakapalau)
I think lie should follow truth
June 27th, 2022 21:20 - Ghost (John Prophet)
your pen was great but I think the way the poem was threw me off my game,...
June 27th, 2022 21:17 - Afterlife (ModernBard)
although short I read a lot into it, I believe in connecting with someone...
June 27th, 2022 21:15 - Midnight hour (Tallisman)
really enjoyed, had a lot of emotions and I felt love. it was well written
June 27th, 2022 18:06 - A Dream to Dream (Shalyn Roby)
you know J will tell you the truth, I normally do not care that much for...
June 27th, 2022 18:00 - Cosmic Grand Scheme (Anybody)
As I was reading I felt that I was there looking up at the stares, into...
June 27th, 2022 17:57 - Smitty!!!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
you know, I really liked this poem for the simple fact that as I was...
June 27th, 2022 17:53
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