Comments on community poems by Raven333

• Always read the label. (Tallisman) LOL, I loved it.. I would advise to read the label. nice share
  September 26th, 2022 06:05
• The bells, the bells ! A Tanka. (Justa_Geezer) LOL, Oh hell... I think my heart gave out just thinking about it... nice...
  September 26th, 2022 06:03
• He said, he said… (Tallisman) Really great write my friend, and you bring up so much emotion and truth...
  September 26th, 2022 06:02
• Just Unbelievable! (Goldfinch60) Love it... so there are some courteous drivers once in a while.. LOL
  September 26th, 2022 05:58
• My Town / Village ! (Justa_Geezer) I think I like your little village.. sounds like the place to be.. great...
  September 14th, 2022 15:05
• Harmony Prevails. (Goldfinch60) Now that place is where I want to be!! great write my friend..
  September 14th, 2022 15:03
• Before the morning tide !(Espinela Poem) (Justa_Geezer) I liked this write even though I do not like the ocean or any kind of...
  September 14th, 2022 15:01
• The Strange Woman (Kimani) What a great little write, it made me smile as I read and your rhyme was...
  September 14th, 2022 14:57
• Manners Are Not Needed When You’re Hungr (Christ) Oh girl I have felt that hunger to, it is a powerful one.. great write
  September 14th, 2022 14:55
• The Wonder Of Life. (Goldfinch60) I will follow you Goldfinch!!! I so can identify.. some things might bring...
  September 14th, 2022 14:53
• Pantomime (Tallisman) Excellent write my friend, and yes this is why relationships scare me to...
  September 14th, 2022 14:50
• IF PEACE WERE (Kimani) Absolutely write, I do believe you said it at the end.. clever write my...
  September 9th, 2022 21:04
• My Name Is.. (Felicityjones) OMG, I enjoyed that way to much and I believe you know me.. LOL, because I...
  September 9th, 2022 21:01
• It Pains Me (Just_me__Clary) Such passion in your words I heard, really great write.. thanks for
  September 9th, 2022 20:58
• What They Took (Tayama) What a great yet sad poem, I could feel your hurt, your anguish and your...
  September 9th, 2022 20:56
• Memories (Nemophila) excellent write and yes I think if we don\'t learn from our past how are...
  September 9th, 2022 20:49
•       A Dry Throat And A Bloody Back (Christ) What a great write my fellow poet, such a way with words and I so could...
  September 9th, 2022 20:46
• The singer and the song (Tallisman) Bravo once again my friend, you know it kinda reminded me of my ex.. he...
  September 9th, 2022 14:36
• The Sea Of Eternity. (Goldfinch60) What a great write Goldfinch, I thought that was a nice tribute to the...
  September 9th, 2022 14:34
• Musings (Orchidee) Really nice write and I do identify with some that you said.. I to don\'t...
  September 9th, 2022 14:31
• September 8th 2022 ! (Justa_Geezer) What a great write and a awesome tribute to the Queen.. Thank you for...
  September 9th, 2022 14:27
• Devils bride revisited (Tallisman) AWESOME!!! I totally needed to read that.. as I read I totally became her,...
  September 9th, 2022 14:24
• Fresh Bread. (Goldfinch60) I loved this write, it actually reminded me when I was a kid and my...
  August 18th, 2022 13:51
• Pursuing The Prize (Orchidee) Really good poem once again and a message I needed to hear.. thank you for...
  August 18th, 2022 13:48
• The footwear salesman ! (Justa_Geezer) LOL, I thought that was a great story!!
  August 18th, 2022 13:46
• Sea of dreams (Tallisman) I thought it was another great write by you.. just because no feedback...
  August 10th, 2022 02:06
• Route 66! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Great work my friend, I have never been there but by your description I do...
  August 9th, 2022 16:52
• And I Was Free. (Goldfinch60) Really great poem, when it comes to faith I think we all struggle a little...
  August 9th, 2022 16:49
• Meaningful Moments (Orchidee) Just another great poem about our loving father.. great work!!!
  August 9th, 2022 16:46
• Taking My Shot (FallingAwake2) Love this poem and the rhyme was on point it made it flow beautifully. I...
  August 9th, 2022 16:45
• Trickle Trickle ! (Justa_Geezer) I needed that laugh!!! great work my friend..
  August 9th, 2022 16:41
• Moonstruck🌙 (Domilla) Very beautiful poem you wrote, I love how you talk about love..
  August 9th, 2022 16:40
• Why Poirot Never Married (Saxon Crow) I liked it and I know us women ask alot of questions and yes you better...
  August 9th, 2022 16:38
• The best of times (Tallisman) Beautiful poem you got here, of course your flow was on point.. great...
  August 9th, 2022 16:35
• Toreador (Tallisman) Another great one tallisman!!! nice play on words
  August 9th, 2022 11:34
• I wrote a poem that no one reads (Tallisman) Wonderful but yet a little sad write, but another great one!!!
  August 9th, 2022 11:32
• The Beacon (Tallisman) OMG. Yet another GREAT write. You got me scared thinking about death. I...
  August 4th, 2022 02:13
• Love out of time (Tallisman) What a delight my friend, As I was reading it was like I was also watching...
  August 3rd, 2022 01:45
• Ghost Girl (FallingAwake2) Very good write, I thought you wrote it very well.
  August 2nd, 2022 15:09
• The pulpit (EvenwheniLie) Another great poem evenwhenilie, Great flow to it also!!
  August 2nd, 2022 15:07
• Hold on to you (Domilla) Really good poem, I can relate there is one person that am having trouble...
  August 2nd, 2022 15:04
• MY SECOND TRUE LOVE...LOST ! (Justa_Geezer) Really touching poem, great write!! even though so sad..
  August 2nd, 2022 15:01
• Excellent Exhortings (Orchidee) Really loved reading this write, well written with great flow
  August 2nd, 2022 14:59
• Through The Mist. (Goldfinch60) Really good poem Goldfinch, very well written. Enjoyed the read
  August 2nd, 2022 14:57
• Play the game (Tallisman) Awesome poem!!! Really enjoyed the read, it was true and so well written....
  August 2nd, 2022 14:55
• The Mood (LostLoner) Awesome poem, could identify. when am mad people need to let me be. loved...
  July 27th, 2022 20:12
• Final Breath (Harrison03) Really nice poem, it was well written and very descriptive. it almost made...
  July 27th, 2022 20:10
• Transition. (AMusings) Liked your poem, it was so truthful.. I hate moving!!!
  July 27th, 2022 20:08
• Love Lost [OC] (FallingAwake2) Liked your poem, even though short it conveyed a lot. loved the rhyme made...
  July 27th, 2022 20:06
• OK (Shattered angel) Loved your poem, I so could identify with it. I to once was in a...
  July 27th, 2022 20:04
• Dark Waters (Kurtis77) Can\'t believe I stumbled on to this poem, because I so can identify. I...
  July 27th, 2022 20:01
• A Fools Journey of Love (Neito) Really liked your poem, I could identify with it for I am to a victim of...
  July 27th, 2022 19:57
• Searching for a question…(Acrostic) (Tallisman) OMG!!! WHERE IS THE LOVE... That is awesome. I wonder if I could do...
  July 27th, 2022 11:34
• So Much (Fay Slimm.) Very lovely poem, it was very descriptive. as I read i could picture the...
  July 27th, 2022 10:35
• there were shadows (Dusk arising) I thought this was a great write..well written and descriptive. well
  July 27th, 2022 10:25
• Look what I see (Hzugman) What a cute but lustful write, enjoyed it.
  July 27th, 2022 10:22
• Listen to my words (Nicky903) You go honey!!! I felt a little bit of anger there but a profound...
  July 27th, 2022 10:21
• Two Whales ! (Justa_Geezer) OMG!!! I loved it, mostly the ending of course.. Have you ever thought...
  July 27th, 2022 10:19
• Pleasant Prospects (Orchidee) You are spreading the word, again another great one!!
  July 27th, 2022 10:14
• Seasons Change (Saxon Crow) I love that poem!! It somehow put a smile on my face as I was reading....
  July 27th, 2022 10:11
• Miss sunshine (Domilla) Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very...
  July 27th, 2022 10:09
• Strange Dream. (Goldfinch60) What a dream!!! Crazy.. I like dreams, mostly dreams that are pleasant not...
  July 27th, 2022 10:07
• Searching for a question…(Acrostic) (Tallisman) OK, you ask how can your heart break again. Well how can your heart break...
  July 27th, 2022 04:00
• Life In The Light (Orchidee) Always love your poems about the Lord, very nice write
  July 26th, 2022 16:57
• A SMILE ! (Justa_Geezer) Really good write. made me smile, very nice flow
  July 26th, 2022 16:55
• Amaizing! (Saxon Crow) Very lovely write my friend
  July 26th, 2022 16:53
• Life (Michael William Reid) Liked your poem, and all so true. Nice job
  July 26th, 2022 16:51
• Boxing 🥊my amateur career (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Aww, I loved your poem, was nice to hear about your boxing days but so...
  July 26th, 2022 16:50
• Searching for a question…(Acrostic) (Tallisman) You know my friend, I could read YOUR poems all day. Great job!!
  July 26th, 2022 16:47
• Peace Possible (Orchidee) Great message here, really good write
  July 25th, 2022 11:14
• Foolish #1 (Saxon Crow) I thought that was a great poem, well said my friend
  July 25th, 2022 11:12
• Watching the world go by —- [ villanelle ] (Tallisman) Another great write, but I was so sad reading it. Then again am a grown...
  July 25th, 2022 11:11
• Death!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) I thought that was absolutely beautiful and inspirational!! very good...
  July 25th, 2022 11:08
• Hateful jezebel (EvenwheniLie) Another good one my friend, loved the flow!!
  July 25th, 2022 11:05
• Growing In Graces (Orchidee) A really inspirational poem, good write
  July 25th, 2022 11:04
• The one (Michael William Reid) Omg, that was so beautiful!! good write my friend..
  July 25th, 2022 11:01
• Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60) LOL, I really enjoyed that!!
  July 25th, 2022 11:00
• Haiku (Tallisman) I thought that was beautiful, good job my friend!!
  July 25th, 2022 10:58
• Someones looking out for us ! (Justa_Geezer) I love this poem, great read!!!
  July 25th, 2022 10:57
• Pumpkin 🎃🎃 patch (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) I loved your poem, kinda got me in the mood for halloween
  July 24th, 2022 00:00
• Calmness Into Reality. (Goldfinch60) Nice poem, I do have to agree with you. I want my life as calm as the sea.
  July 23rd, 2022 23:57
• Recalled, Remembered, Redeemed (Orchidee) I liked it, thought it was nicely written and I do like that you wrote...
  July 23rd, 2022 23:55
• Mister Purple got flash (EvenwheniLie) You know I do believe I have known a few of these. nice write, loved the...
  July 23rd, 2022 23:52
• WHAT\'S OUR FUTURE ? (Justa_Geezer) Loved this write, It is so true what it is saying but somehow people just...
  July 23rd, 2022 23:49
• Break the chain… (Tallisman) I liked it although it was a little scary but I can not deny that I have...
  July 23rd, 2022 23:46
• Podiatrist 🦶👣!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Love this poem about your feet!!! Once again your rhyme was tight and made...
  July 21st, 2022 01:46
• A Song of Us (Himanshu_2001) very nice sensational poem, I really enjoyed it. very good write.
  July 21st, 2022 01:43
• Give up the tapes (EvenwheniLie) LOL, I loved it!!! It put a smile on my face. I thought that was a great...
  July 21st, 2022 01:40
• HEAR THIS ! (Justa_Geezer) LMAO, That was Excellent!!! I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
  July 21st, 2022 01:35
• More Important. (Goldfinch60) AMEN to that!!! To many people focus on material things these days.
  July 21st, 2022 01:33
• Leaky Day. (Goldfinch60) You got that one right, here in Florida that\'s all we do is leak. great...
  July 20th, 2022 07:07
• True Friendship ! (Justa_Geezer) Really liked this poem, great one
  July 20th, 2022 07:05
• Extinction event (Blueledge) Your wish might come true the way things are running anymore. LOL
  July 20th, 2022 07:04
• Fibbing mathematically (Hzugman) Nice poem and I have to agree do not tell lies but a fib here and there...
  July 19th, 2022 18:18
• Mesmerized (Curtlynfaith) I really enjoyed, it was a lovely poem. talking about how much in love and...
  July 19th, 2022 18:16
• Nothing lasts forever (Doriana) Really lovely poem, it does seem that way that nothing lasts forever.....
  July 19th, 2022 18:14
• And They Leave Us Alone... (Kurt Philip Behm) nice poem you got, if only more people could swallow what they chew..
  July 19th, 2022 18:11
• Suicide and Revenge (Randyjohnson71) Really great poem, sorry about the suicide. It is sad that there are...
  July 19th, 2022 18:09
• Dear Mom and Dad: Letter from the Soul of an Aborted Fetus (BeWilling ToCha(lle)nge UrBeliefs) Wow, really good poem, it hit on a lot of sensitive issue. I enjoyed the...
  July 19th, 2022 18:04
• Tear shield (Anabasova) Really lovely poem, I thought it flowed really nice.
  July 19th, 2022 18:01