Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- A Very Temporary Arrangement (Neville)
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an...
July 15th, 2023 12:43 - Lord (GermanDJ)
Who knew that the adage bounces true
“Be careful what you ask for cuz...
July 15th, 2023 12:38 - Lord (GermanDJ)
Who knew that the adage bounces true
“Be careful what you ask for cuz...
July 15th, 2023 12:37 - Broken Albatross (Sorenbarrett)
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that...
July 15th, 2023 12:31 - Presence Pleasantries (Orchidee)
I’m still torn. Lately I’ve been thinking it’s all just made up as a...
July 15th, 2023 09:40 - Raceisinm (2781)
The word “they” leaves the poem hanging without a real point of view....
July 15th, 2023 08:20 - UNCERTAIN PLANNED (Bobby O)
Hopeless!
July 15th, 2023 03:19 - the fantasy that ended as a tradey (Ace_)
I’m guessing you euphemistically use the word FUNNY. I feel ya, what I...
July 14th, 2023 21:02 - A THOUSAND WORDS (LIZ)
A certified winner. It’s fun to unwind the moment to remember with an...
July 14th, 2023 18:02 - My cat ([email protected])
I got nothing
July 14th, 2023 17:47 - LOVE IS NOT AN IRONY (Phylicia 2023)
Nice write. May I submit, he’s not able to know. Furthermore , he’s...
July 14th, 2023 17:05 - NEW (Nephilim56)
There’s no way to prove it won’t happen. Let’s go with it.
July 14th, 2023 17:00 - SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY (Bobby O)
Smokey is as close to prayers in my music as will likely occur. I respect...
July 14th, 2023 08:45 - The Supermarket on Forsaken Street. (David Wakeling)
So much here. Not all are real but through those you describe w acuity is...
July 14th, 2023 03:41 - A LETTER TO YOU (LIZ)
Attaching meaning to what might be a padding incident ti some Tesky...
July 14th, 2023 03:38 - The Weight of Ignorance (Ok Waleed)
I’m still unraveling but it’s a profound conundrum that I strum while...
July 14th, 2023 03:33 - As a Matter of Fact (Neville)
Idiomatically precise and the obvious not obviated. I look for your pieces...
July 14th, 2023 03:29 - Singing Our Hearts Out. (Goldfinch60)
I love the love you grab from art. Nice write. And the sense of that choir...
July 14th, 2023 03:27 - Favourable Forgiveness (Orchidee)
Cadence just grabs and it lifts even an almost lifted so high subject to...
July 14th, 2023 03:24 - Beth (Peto)
You’ve been sailing at a high level. I look for your pieces though I...
July 14th, 2023 03:21 - OUT OF REACH (Bobby O)
It was his friends that wouldn’t take the help.
July 13th, 2023 23:56 - MYSTERY of LOVE (Phylicia 2023)
I may politely suggest that most of the mystery is solved. So many that...
July 13th, 2023 21:40 - Whisper of Sensitive Soul (Abigail001)
Really nice piece and it displays your wisdom in a humble everyday way and...
July 13th, 2023 21:26 - AWESTRUCK (Bobby O)
Did you get that 56?
July 13th, 2023 17:44 - Words fail me. (Job Welime)
Tach left keel right pick a Oxford not Webster and Ssil
July 10th, 2023 03:43 - The Lady Who Liked Mangos. (David Wakeling)
Enchantment will burn we learn and up side turns thrive on purest concern....
July 9th, 2023 07:27 - Not Another Ending Surely (Neville)
A second hand emotion …like60 secs? No , more like I’m cuz the feeling...
July 9th, 2023 07:24 - Beggars All (Ranga)
Dig that ! Grabbing that pompous view of condescend might be the beginning...
July 9th, 2023 07:13 - Bebop. (Goldfinch60)
It’s “like the Bird, Charlie Parker, bravely brake rules, take take...
July 9th, 2023 07:09 - Unrequited (Nix :))
That’s a nice piece. I read it twice. Nice write good read
July 9th, 2023 06:33 - AWESTRUCK (Bobby O)
You woke me up for that whole truck full of incite w that deep look? Love...
July 9th, 2023 05:33 - FAR FROM HOME (Kurtis77)
Man’s best friend. I love my dog but I think he used an Alia’s first...
July 8th, 2023 20:52 - Dear Ane (Nik)
Nik Nik Nik there’s a secret An important methodology.
It’s fine...
July 8th, 2023 20:01 - Destination (2781)
In the land of the blind the one eyed man is king. I respect your core...
July 8th, 2023 11:03 - TO LIFE (Nephilim56)
Your phrases send simple message but w expertly crafted prose never...
July 8th, 2023 10:56 - Morpheus Sings. (Goldfinch60)
Like the power from within the Goldfinch drives into the mix w aplomb.
July 8th, 2023 08:48 - thoughts from the void (Asrealastheycome)
Dichotomy. Forever the path. Each side has a list to point direction. The...
July 8th, 2023 08:42 - Digital Aether (John Prophet)
So many things are both. Humans cannot survive without water and fire....
July 8th, 2023 08:36 - Accolades and pans (Hzugman)
That’s is honoring the art.
July 8th, 2023 08:32 - YOUR TEARS (LIZ)
My first thought was about them, impolitely I delay my applause for the...
July 8th, 2023 07:04 - She (Peto)
You’ve been on fire. I admire how proliferate you are. I go in stages...
July 8th, 2023 03:11 - Blossom Rain (Marajo)
Nice ode to a loved one, leaving no doubt how important she is. I’m...
July 7th, 2023 21:20 - The Flag bearer and The Bagpipe (Hadden)
I liked it. I had to fight to stay with it. IMO most just won’t stay...
July 7th, 2023 18:01 - « Till another world » (Hopeless lover)
Dedication and commitment of pure mission. Nice write. Good read
July 7th, 2023 17:56 - Letting Go (CaitlinKCarter)
The loop and the act and the polite charade that you describe illuminates...
July 7th, 2023 17:55 - Far From Home (DrichThePoet)
It’s hits on many levels. It could be a parent. Or someone you love. Or...
July 7th, 2023 17:52 - Sea Faring (Introverted Sage)
It’s real nice I felt invigorated by the tribute to beauty and wonder if...
July 7th, 2023 16:23 - Tech (Peto)
Allegorical. Pushes up thoughts that sway. That’s another way to say...
July 7th, 2023 12:10 - Stay (Wackyheartache4)
If that music includes jazz I’m sold.
July 7th, 2023 12:07 - CORRECTION (Bobby O)
You’re a monster. Much appreciated my friend
July 7th, 2023 03:22 - About you (Shanzah)
Getting addicted to the pain has avenues of risk. Perhaps the catharsis...
July 4th, 2023 22:29 - Loud (Joisu)
When my mind is spinning around certain worries it’s like it’s...
July 4th, 2023 20:53 - THE NASCAR LOOP (Bobby O)
I love it when coincidence of separate unrelated behavior coincides...
July 4th, 2023 05:58 - THE NASCAR LOOP (Bobby O)
I love it when coincidence of separate unrelated behavior coincides...
July 4th, 2023 05:57 - My Lover Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
I got nothing. You’ve proven that three lines qualifies. I’m not brave...
July 4th, 2023 05:49 - Aussie dollar (2781)
Reading w anticipation and the ending caught me off guard.
July 4th, 2023 05:38 - Radiate (Peto)
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of...
July 4th, 2023 05:35 - Golden Handcuffs (Readership Blues)
May I inquire? Is the tiny bit of ambivalence for a sort of protection if...
July 3rd, 2023 20:46 - Thinking of Him (Alana6789)
It speaks fir itself. That was brave
July 3rd, 2023 10:15 - The Devil I\'m Fighting (Introverted Sage)
Ping pings with my mind.
Denotes the powerful back and forth that is...
July 3rd, 2023 07:34 - Pleasure (2781)
The babe and the beast. A memorable line indeed. It added a dimension that...
July 3rd, 2023 07:31 - Fruit Salad Skies (Neville)
And the cherry is elusive. True if many things that tease delight.
Nice...
July 3rd, 2023 05:21 - The Backwards Man (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Reverse is the nice way of describing it. I like this piece my friend.
July 3rd, 2023 02:32 - Lady (Peto)
That brand new notebook made her rise. Perfect. Not even afraid of the...
July 2nd, 2023 22:58 - Souls2 (John Prophet)
That one word in a line hurts my eyes.
July 1st, 2023 20:10 - Cynic\'s love (Sorenbarrett)
Nice phrase and metaphor. If we pretend we slid the last stanza to the...
July 1st, 2023 18:00 - Bread (2781)
HEY, have you ever tried really reaching out to that other side …?
July 1st, 2023 17:54 - Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe)
Absolutely love this but Jazz to Jazz please permit a tiny request to...
July 1st, 2023 17:38 - New Depth (PoeticBiscuit)
Nice words but I got a question? If you begin the comparison of depth to...
July 1st, 2023 10:56 - Writers block (Peto)
On some days go you feel like maybe there’s enough room to dance a...
July 1st, 2023 10:34 - If You Leave (Roselyn)
Take the bullet once and then you gdd add in a piwer
July 1st, 2023 06:08 - squelch (Arqios)
And hopefully before the paint dries I could add influence and an escape...
July 1st, 2023 00:03 - Reincarnate (Lettersofminee)
Now I see it but may I suggest a flawed plan? It doesn’t seem that you...
June 30th, 2023 23:24 - Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab)
It’s exact. The pleasure or place to find privileged rest that has a...
June 30th, 2023 22:10 - Love Is (Saxon Crow)
It’s just aimless.
LOVE IS WHAT I GOT!!
Sublime
June 30th, 2023 18:10 - Love Is (Saxon Crow)
It’s just aimless.
LOVE IS WHAT I GOT!!
Sublime
June 30th, 2023 18:10 - That girl (Ekh)
That hits me hard and brings a tear to my eye. I will not offer words...
June 30th, 2023 10:34 - Machiavellian box (Shadowbones)
I get what you’re saying. I’m a math guy myself. When it’s new...
June 30th, 2023 04:33 - Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Some grow out of it and some have set a pattern gif life. I couldn’t...
June 30th, 2023 03:34 - The king is dead (Peto)
True but with a wonderful mythological twist. Love it.
June 30th, 2023 02:39 - Our Love For Each Other. (Goldfinch60)
Nice piece Andy. Any chance you take me up on that Miles?
June 30th, 2023 01:44 - Our Love For Each Other. (Goldfinch60)
Roberta is regal. I got a question ?
WHERE IS THE LOVE?
June 30th, 2023 01:42 - We (Theodore Zendarski)
I think therefore ….
Kind of thing?
Why copywriter on the Throne?...
June 30th, 2023 00:53 - Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers (Neville)
That’s a good way to describe total bewilderment. I imagine most visit...
June 30th, 2023 00:48 - Lost (Theodore Zendarski)
I kinda get where you wanted go but it misses because you didn’t bother...
June 29th, 2023 23:37 - To the Deep (Lorrel ONeill)
I don’t get it. Led arms and singing whales. If you meant it as a...
June 29th, 2023 23:31 - Reincarnate (Lettersofminee)
That’s nice. Great phrase w descriptive images that enter the readers...
June 29th, 2023 21:19 - Friendships (Lex_Konki_0)
It was nice and I sorta feel bad that you lost touch. Life I guess. I...
June 29th, 2023 20:53 - I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER (Bobby O)
That’s about as nice as it gets. You mention lingo and call me fellow...
June 29th, 2023 15:35 - Note (Peto)
P.S. I can’t imagine what she scribbled and that aspect of keeping...
June 29th, 2023 14:04 - Note (Peto)
You , my friend, have a style that is at a real nice level. This is a...
June 29th, 2023 14:02 - POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE (Bobby O)
Cool. Sometimes I go rap it to impress the ladies
June 29th, 2023 09:17 - Praise Of The People (Orchidee)
I could try and sing but even my mother asked me to just mouth the words...
June 29th, 2023 02:13 - Terra firma (Shadowbones)
The resilient are forgotten. A freaking great line that serves as a...
June 29th, 2023 01:36 - 996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I loved this even though I’m a little slow with smart and the triangle...
June 29th, 2023 01:33 - Django Alive. (Goldfinch60)
Flowing into my heart , and that sums it all up Mr Finch, as you are a man...
June 29th, 2023 01:31 - Seen and Raised (JasmineUK)
Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read
June 28th, 2023 23:00 - Seen and Raised (JasmineUK)
Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read
June 28th, 2023 22:59 - The winds of change (Billijo)
You’re standing, smelling , feeling,, bragging you still hit hair,...
June 25th, 2023 21:45 - The Phase of Self (Verse Twister)
I am completing an example for your perusal to honor your brilliant and...
June 25th, 2023 07:51
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