Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- must read (Vividvoid14)
That’s a nice piece. I spent ten minutes rephrasing out the...
September 5th, 2023 11:11 - The Soul of Sun (David Wakeling)
There are more solar systems in the universe that are larger than our...
September 4th, 2023 22:41 - my mom (Vividvoid14)
Makes me proud to know and associate with a writer brave enough and strong...
September 4th, 2023 15:25 - WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN? (LIZ)
Bill and Ted would say
That’s really excellent!💰
September 4th, 2023 04:01 - WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN? (LIZ)
Bill and Ted would say
That’s really excellent!💰
September 4th, 2023 03:54 - Pointless Job. (Goldfinch60)
Self entitled fucks. CALL them out Mr. Finch.
BTW - your poem is getting...
September 4th, 2023 03:20 - Apexed (Introverted Sage)
Weighed bounty
Accumulated heft. Great phrasing
September 2nd, 2023 22:16 - Apexed (Introverted Sage)
Weighed bounty
Accumulated heft. Great phrasing
September 2nd, 2023 22:03 - When A Wiz A Lad (The Fife Wanderer)
Authentic mastery of vernacular.
September 2nd, 2023 07:27 - we were once best friends (Lctc)
Once viscerally attached it’s mostly to share and to give cuz that’s...
September 2nd, 2023 03:26 - Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes (Neville)
To discard the weight of my longing
Next appropriate moment with your...
September 2nd, 2023 03:20 - Mr Bellmeister catches the bus. (David Wakeling)
Loved that story. It floated between a metaphorical trio
( bus named...
September 1st, 2023 19:33 - Lunar (Peto)
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his...
September 1st, 2023 16:21 - Lunar (Peto)
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his...
September 1st, 2023 16:09 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
That made me smile. Jazz bagpipes. Who knew?
September 1st, 2023 13:02 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
Hard to beat that many thanks and much appreciation for your words and...
September 1st, 2023 05:02 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
Perfect
September 1st, 2023 02:45 - Seasons Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
It’s such a beautiful way to churn through certain realities. It’s a...
September 1st, 2023 01:32 - The Making of a Single Murmuration (Neville)
I search out what you write because it has proven piece after piece to be...
September 1st, 2023 00:12 - THE TRUTH IS (LIZ)
It’s intoxicatingly honest and humble and wanting and self assured all...
September 1st, 2023 00:08 - My Teacher (Cedrick)
As the string picks the weak , seems like that was an opportunity to...
September 1st, 2023 00:04 - Whatever Happened to Miriam (Neville)
The vaguest direction I would put that down as victory. Might I guess that...
August 31st, 2023 23:54 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
Thanks. Duke was only one of two known to play the Jazz bagpipes. He...
August 31st, 2023 21:35 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti...
August 31st, 2023 20:45 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti...
August 31st, 2023 20:36 - DAYS by Phyllis Phipps ( Undertherainbow) (Undertherainbow)
Really liked this piece. You go !
August 31st, 2023 18:37 - Wandering (Introverted Sage)
A measure quite like the moon. So excellent and so flowing into the space...
August 31st, 2023 18:36 - The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling)
This is great with intelligent alludes to so many of Dylan’s poetic...
August 31st, 2023 18:33 - I Have A Dream 2. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely. Nice write and a feel good way for the start of my day. Nice...
August 24th, 2023 07:02 - Lily’s Lament (David Wakeling)
Love that story. It truly was love.
August 24th, 2023 07:00 - A Slice of Sky (Neville)
A winter of discontent?
I liked as I do all, the poem
August 24th, 2023 03:15 - One Of The Most Egotistical (Duggantherhymer)
Almost. It flows. IMO the material is perfect for cause / effect
We know...
August 22nd, 2023 04:06 - Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden (Neville)
So, I asked Siri about secateurs and got nothing. I changed her accent in...
August 22nd, 2023 02:35 - Betrayal (Yanbee)
I really like this. I might show this ti a lady I’m trying to impress...
August 21st, 2023 17:29 - Sun Vine (Joakim Bergen)
Great writing
August 21st, 2023 15:09 - She Beautifies Beauty (Petrichor of Love)
“Would mar the grace that’s woven there”
How perfect is that! Your...
August 21st, 2023 12:01 - Controversial (2781)
I got confused
August 21st, 2023 07:17 - Decisions (Weep little lion girl)
Nice piece with thought conveyed nicely to the paper. With that strength...
August 21st, 2023 04:31 - Astral projection (EvenwheniLie)
That is a cool way to repair and complete a self image that needed to be...
August 21st, 2023 02:05 - Love is hard work (David Wakeling)
I guess it is. I tried to imagine that she didn’t show him that...
August 21st, 2023 02:04 - Lost (T. Pitts)
Rediscovery is an exciting challenge. Find something that in a personal...
August 21st, 2023 02:00 - Dame Janet Baker. (Goldfinch60)
I listened and she does have that voice. I’m not as advanced as you to...
August 21st, 2023 01:05 - Overthinking (AlitaOpal)
Engraves my mind
Such a truly creative way to relate a “strong...
August 20th, 2023 22:52 - Lone Wolf (Introverted Sage)
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary...
August 20th, 2023 22:36 - I cry behind my shades (Natalie Heisey)
Bravery is my first takeaway and then empathy that prompted a reread...
August 20th, 2023 22:20 - When Miss Veil comes to the Back Door. (David Wakeling)
Wow! An eerie symbolic figure visits as pets flail w erratic pattern a...
August 20th, 2023 01:35 - Why do I remember? (EllaBrady98)
If my happenstance there’s a few of his items in your possession, get...
August 19th, 2023 20:00 - EVENTS (Finchy)
Amidst your proffered list we exist we sway natural and disasters same...
August 19th, 2023 17:41 - The Genie\'s Price (Introverted Sage)
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w...
August 19th, 2023 17:20 - Triq (Introverted Sage)
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand...
August 19th, 2023 09:09 - Journey to the Underworld (Ravale)
So he has regrets and climbs hills and won’t settle but his future may...
August 19th, 2023 03:28 - CURRENCY (Nephilim56)
I would have not passed. Would have had to reach out to previous nemesis ...
August 19th, 2023 03:25 - Publishers (2781)
I’m on your side, but, who exactly are we battling?
August 19th, 2023 03:06 - The Lion and The Lily. (David Wakeling)
To the trapping and the lure. Not only was Rach “spot” hit , they were...
August 19th, 2023 01:33 - Don\'t Feel Bad. (Goldfinch60)
That’s the best and most clever spin snd I’m gonna go with that.
August 19th, 2023 01:24 - Sun bird (Florin Dragoș Minculescu)
May whisper love. I like this viewpoint and this icon stands w angular...
August 19th, 2023 01:22 - Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe (Neville)
Rarely am I chased to a dictionary. I think it’s cool
August 19th, 2023 00:26 - My God, your god, their god; check the spelling (EvenwheniLie)
Incisive commentary is tricky to present without judgement or personal...
August 19th, 2023 00:24 - The Child and Wonder (Florin Dragoș Minculescu)
I really tried. It piqued my interest initially and about halfway through ...
August 19th, 2023 00:19 - imma make it (Vividvoid14)
Three lines instead??
I know where my place….
Won’t stop till on...
August 18th, 2023 14:14 - My time has come (Bellbell_060609)
That is really great. Written like you’ve been at it for 20 years....
August 18th, 2023 11:09 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
This actually the middle piece in a trilogy that speaks to
1Getting rid...
August 18th, 2023 11:04 - Free (Nicolerobinson)
Bring your own theme. That’s power. You showed both sides of the...
August 18th, 2023 09:34 - MAGIC (Nephilim56)
Blood Ted vision into flame…
How cool is that?
You come up w such...
August 18th, 2023 06:59 - Blessed to Share (Bobby O)
Your kind expressions belie your introverted persona
August 18th, 2023 02:35 - All Bases Covered (Neville)
Suitably crossed and thus applause for this piece is suitable and a joy to...
August 18th, 2023 00:48 - The Hand. (David Wakeling)
I like it. I took it ad a metaphor for Free Will.
August 17th, 2023 20:12 - too big to be little, yet too small to be big (Raxoon)
A metaphorical group hug could be good therapy
August 15th, 2023 19:59 - Give What You Can. (Goldfinch60)
They struggle but stay generous others filling pockets copius
August 15th, 2023 01:50 - Conquest (John Prophet)
Point taken. Aldo the extrapolation of that AI means they may not even...
August 14th, 2023 21:05 - Soul Searching (Matthew McLaughlin)
Truth humble brave and w take t. You go dude!!
August 14th, 2023 21:02 - Heartbreak (Gg_a_poet)
Ooops. I didn’t realize you were so young. Sure can’t tell from your...
August 14th, 2023 21:01 - Inanna’s Descent (Vicecream)
Relinquish all reigning
Love that line. All at once it’s humble ,...
August 14th, 2023 19:14 - Restless (MaggieRaven)
The road that had no detour.
Nice write
August 14th, 2023 19:12 - Shaken Balance (Bobby O)
It’s what we do. Thanks for the read. I look forward to your future...
August 14th, 2023 16:07 - The Ode To The Greatest Batter And Pilot Ted Williams (Kinsley Lee)
1941-.406
521 HR
Add back avg HR production fir it not for 2 Wars he...
August 14th, 2023 15:06 - Lonely Ole Lonesome (JBentley)
I feel you and I feel the lines paint your inner rollercoastered emotional...
August 14th, 2023 13:52 - Heartbreak (Gg_a_poet)
I love the last line. It’s perfect cuz I was drawn in by the situation...
August 14th, 2023 13:46 - Waxing Arrhythmic (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Deigning new veins, great and consistent metaphorical theme that drew for...
August 14th, 2023 13:30 - Natural soporific narcotic (Rew4er2nail)
I really like this piece, as soon I felt like it was my MAIDEN VOYAGE I...
August 14th, 2023 13:26 - Barred (AuburnScribbler)
I like this piece a lot The symbolism you chose really transferred the...
August 14th, 2023 13:20 - Burnt Out (PaperFlowerFields)
Smoke is the perfect metaphor. This had continuity that draws a reader in....
August 14th, 2023 13:15 - My journey (Natalie Heisey)
The price. Whether hidden or shouted if it reigns down w impudence in...
August 14th, 2023 10:35 - Unknown Promise (Purplecherry)
That’s a nice piece. Each phrase had purpose and movement and conjured...
August 14th, 2023 10:30 - Argue / Спор (Eng/Rus) (Alex Praw)
I get it
August 14th, 2023 10:28 - SCRAPS OF LOVE (Finchy)
Love the metaphor. I felt the depth of disenchantment through your verse
August 14th, 2023 10:27 - she is gone (Vividvoid14)
My video on Hip Hop meets Jazz
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
August 14th, 2023 07:12 - Javelin. (David Wakeling)
The first two stanza ‘s rlude me.
August 14th, 2023 05:05 - GHOST (Nephilim56)
It’s probably just me but I read it twice and some if the symbolic...
August 14th, 2023 05:03 - Leap year (Peto)
Both at once.
An honest chronicle of reaching fir the brass ting and the...
August 14th, 2023 04:02 - Recollecting Unusual Positions (Neville)
Not many things for me match the allure of the small of a women’s back....
August 14th, 2023 01:37 - Annoyed (Afflicted Overseer)
Not if you take time to properly season the meal. !
August 13th, 2023 23:47 - Kettle Water (Jaxxie)
Descriptive but at the end I was hoping for a reason or wrap up.
August 13th, 2023 23:42 - Loathing of Embers (Michaelpoet)
It took that turn at the end and the tone set me aback. It’s a story...
August 13th, 2023 23:41 - SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY (Bobby O)
alas , have I found my station? Across time bridged by teen to senility my...
August 13th, 2023 17:53 - Old Men of Steel (Parisab)
That’s is exact and the suggestive political fix encouraged is the...
August 13th, 2023 17:49 - heartfelt (Vividvoid14)
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is...
August 13th, 2023 17:46 - heartfelt (Vividvoid14)
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is...
August 13th, 2023 17:41 - heartfelt (Vividvoid14)
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is...
August 13th, 2023 17:41 - Once again besieged by fruit flies (Rew4er2nail)
I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away
August 13th, 2023 07:49
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