Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- Dembe’s Dust (Neville)
At first I was hoping it could be Dembe from the BLACKLIST but that was...
June 25th, 2023 03:54 - Midlife Rap (Parisab)
Way cool. How your mind got to some of those “bars”? Is out of realm...
June 25th, 2023 02:04 - Summer Feast (Parisab)
I just really love your style. The Ease and confidence paired and powers...
June 25th, 2023 00:36 - Bloody Mary (Girlinthemirror)
Your cognizance us high as well ,based on the keenness of your phrasing ,...
June 24th, 2023 19:21 - AMBER SKY (Nephilim56)
I felt like I was there. Your honest phrasing and lack of cumbersome...
June 24th, 2023 07:01 - Little Flower (Neville)
That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover...
June 24th, 2023 04:22 - The Phase of Self (Verse Twister)
It’s just a list that poses as a story line to nowhere. I don’t get...
June 24th, 2023 03:29 - Crying (Peto)
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue...
June 24th, 2023 03:27 - Say my name. (Alex Redstone)
Now you stuck me raw w a Beyoncé dream do fuck Jay Z
June 24th, 2023 03:21 - Push On (Never Be Gone) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Anything with indirect Grim Reaper Reference softly hits me like the...
June 24th, 2023 03:20 - Do We No Longer Care? (Goldfinch60)
And that tune youposted sparks a thought of a thought running back to...
June 24th, 2023 02:39 - Do We No Longer Care? (Goldfinch60)
I have no words and I have no hope that the infidels can ever reclaim a...
June 24th, 2023 02:31 - Keep Going (13LaurenD)
In order to reach that glory ..:
Wishing they had stayed on your...
June 23rd, 2023 23:51 - Tainted (Liberty_Shadows)
I see hope amongst the ravage of your phrase and not for a moment do I...
June 23rd, 2023 22:46 - Don\'t tell. (Chris Duffy)
Lots of thought and it reads like you reminding you of important basics.
June 23rd, 2023 22:39 - Fall (PoeticBiscuit)
I really felt the sentiment and conviction. Wishing you spent a little...
June 23rd, 2023 21:04 - Ache (Nia_stargirl)
Listing after something inconceivable /
That pretty much explains my mood...
June 23rd, 2023 20:58 - DIG DEEP (Nephilim56)
Like some discovered garden elf - how fun is that? I like your phrase
June 23rd, 2023 20:53 - stark-stuck (Jark)
I mostly just didn’t understand or grasp any of it.
June 23rd, 2023 20:51 - Down the Rabbit Hole (HangingbyaHalo)
It’s a perfect love affirmation.
June 23rd, 2023 20:49 - Shitbag Sheep Won\'t Speak (Strengthen) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Too blinded by the pyramids peak… freaking cool and who wouldn’t be...
June 23rd, 2023 14:07 - Fluoroscopic Focus (Introverted Sage)
Really nice and impressive. The “plating” of your phrase added an...
June 23rd, 2023 13:38 - Obsession (Kathryn Amaka)
I love the surreptitious references to some pretty cool songs. Another...
June 23rd, 2023 04:59 - Advice (2theright)
Shaken, frozen in place, forcing a smile born of recurring fear....
June 22nd, 2023 23:28 - Advice (2theright)
In accordance w the poems name I shall offer what once a wise poet shared...
June 22nd, 2023 23:16 - Flame The Fuse (Edthepoet)
Seems that you like this person ? Smooth and eloquent piece. Songs that...
June 22nd, 2023 19:19 - cloud. (Alex Redstone)
When I’m alone….
Being fine is euphemistic , alone is no problem the...
June 22nd, 2023 15:34 - OBSESSION. (David Wakeling)
More careful is their step of dawning..,
What a great line. Nice job.
June 17th, 2023 20:50 - mimesis by torchlight (Arqios)
I got excited when thinking if I knew what a fortnight was I could taste...
June 17th, 2023 10:08 - She Ambles in Beauty (Petrichor of Love)
Nice tribute. I’m thinking if I had to make a wild guess That You Like...
June 17th, 2023 10:01 - My Dad, My Hero (Petey1975)
Great subject and fitting tribute. I also liked the way you sent a nod...
June 17th, 2023 09:58 - Love me harder (Niki Oz)
Now is the perfect time. Nice write. Good read.
June 17th, 2023 09:17 - glimpses of crescent light (Viomputer)
I understand imagery and metaphors but this was so much all over the place...
June 17th, 2023 05:11 - A Daft Update (Orchidee)
Freakin Halloween surely a harbinger of predictive chaos
June 16th, 2023 04:29 - Missing Balls. (Goldfinch60)
I got squirrels that have defeated my every attempt. Once I had them...
June 16th, 2023 01:21 - Abandoning The Watchtower (Kurt Philip Behm)
I won’t question the opinion you relay as I’m guessing my knowledge of...
June 15th, 2023 23:01 - Inglourious Basterds (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It’s cool to invent ways to thrash him. It’s cathartic.
June 13th, 2023 08:21 - Sorrow and Resilience (Sofia Coffey)
Truth struggle is always close but that resilience is the power. I like...
June 13th, 2023 02:36 - The veil (2781)
Nice write good read
June 13th, 2023 02:34 - Confined (Sassy Lou)
Confined could mean temporarily interrupted. You write well, you think...
June 13th, 2023 01:52 - RAIN. (David Wakeling)
I will confess that I can’t quite put together the meaning of the last...
June 13th, 2023 01:48 - Only Three Hundred Yards! (Goldfinch60)
Never played the game competitively. Seems like a great idea.
June 13th, 2023 01:47 - I\'ll find my way (Natalie Heisey)
That’s a real nice piece. Phrasing succinct and joyful end. I’m a fan.
June 12th, 2023 21:57 - Sea and Sky (AJ Douglas)
Wow! Having read a lot and I’m a curios sort hence over time my...
June 11th, 2023 00:59 - Night Garden (AJ Douglas)
Thoughts obscured blurred…scattered like seeds…. taking root ….my...
June 10th, 2023 06:43 - Antonym of Happiness (Pacifique Niyitanga)
I liked the phrading
June 10th, 2023 06:20 - The chapter of love, we wrote (Shree)
Hold this close and reread and rebreathe those moments that introduced...
June 10th, 2023 04:34 - The Devil Makes Work For Idle Hands (JasmineUK)
It’s joyous with with a reality that might usually hide but instead...
June 10th, 2023 04:17 - Guys And Dolls. (Goldfinch60)
You’re on that roll my friend. Let’s tip a glass in honor of Mathan...
June 10th, 2023 01:38 - Keep busy and don\'t seek spirituality? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Wired umbilically ?you hot this piece going on dude. Set and balanced. But...
June 9th, 2023 22:48 - Doritos on a Balcony (Luckyphoenix)
That’s a story that’s personification takes action w result hid in a...
June 9th, 2023 22:38 - Sitting in a Sunny Grassy Field (Ravale)
Vigor w self realization is that shield that gifts w ease to cope. Nice...
June 9th, 2023 22:36 - Trawl tale of a fictitious seaman told to ye... (Rew4er2nail)
I was with you the whole while and then , well have this personal bias...
June 9th, 2023 22:16 - Touching The Heart (Afropana14)
I like this. Nice write Good read
June 9th, 2023 21:29 - Go Nanna Go Nanna (David Wakeling)
I really liked this for many reasons. It was so from the heart w no...
June 9th, 2023 20:48 - writer no more (Jaxxie)
Try a blue pill
June 9th, 2023 20:33 - Piercing (Cyriac maliakkal)
I love the style but I kinda list the message. Props on the phrasing...
June 9th, 2023 19:36 - Hear (Terriblesoul977)
That passion that here is displayed is predictive of an eventuality that...
June 9th, 2023 03:17 - Life is an opportunity (Joslouis)
Like that gift horse’s mouth!!
June 9th, 2023 02:29 - The childhood (Nature)
Nice write good read
June 9th, 2023 02:29 - They say.. (Ritika Deore)
They say and you place all that in proper order and place. Nice write good...
June 9th, 2023 02:04 - night drive to nowhere (Heartshapedglasses)
I like this a lot. It has a complexity that speaks out if one listens but...
June 9th, 2023 02:02 - Every piece of me (Kayla Jackson)
Speed that word! Twas an uplifting read.
June 9th, 2023 01:58 - Musical Feelings. (Goldfinch60)
You my friend have been on an excellent roll. Freaking happy to see the...
June 9th, 2023 01:46 - Instrument (2781)
A true aficionado that’s also humble yet digs in sure to not let...
June 9th, 2023 01:44 - Inevitable collisions (Eclisse)
Such a vibrant style. It’s a brave style. I’m stuck in the safer...
June 8th, 2023 22:46 - Gullible (Terriblesoul977)
That’s a good write. Was a nice enough read to draw me back to read...
June 8th, 2023 22:12 - \"Placeholder\" Raw Freestyle (FallingAwake2)
I really like this piece on multiple levels. Succinct phrasing w clever...
June 1st, 2023 00:58 - Poetic Rush (Novaero)
The way back mends in dark of night or can soothe like Lady Day, with...
May 31st, 2023 18:14 - a little poem’s wayfaring (Arqios)
I’ll take my chances with that finest miss! Or is it mist ?
May 31st, 2023 18:08 - STOP SIGN (Short Attention Span Poetry)
Strictly enforced every Sunday ?
May 31st, 2023 18:03 - Virtuous Visitation (Orchidee)
It’s nice art. I’m in Chicago and have somr recent anger, not toward...
May 31st, 2023 04:47 - Love Of Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Beauty beauty beauty
Nature nature
Glory glory
You never go that....
May 31st, 2023 03:19 - Celebrity Hypocrisy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Anybody who’s looking for cheap quotes can pick on the demagogues in...
May 31st, 2023 03:13 - Exacerbated (Cyriac maliakkal)
It’s more a political statement than it is a poem. The challenge is to...
May 31st, 2023 03:07 - How Am I To Trust? (Jasmine Swift)
I won’t actually ask but a certain question admittedly briefly crossed...
May 27th, 2023 18:17 - SUDDENLY AWKWARD (Bobby O)
The travels and travails….
May 27th, 2023 13:30 - Oasis (Torpedo)
Perfect cadence an unstoppable rhythm enlivens this piece and drew to a...
May 27th, 2023 07:10 - \"Apple Juice\" (Ilovethecolorblue6)
And if a bit is aged an effect to one’s sobriety!
May 27th, 2023 05:51 - No More Blues for These Tired Eyes (Neville)
There is not a response that first visit trite. I would freaking hate if...
May 27th, 2023 05:47 - Doppelgänger (Horrorautumnpoet)
Now, I see the connection. Seems you developed the strains of strength as...
May 27th, 2023 04:08 - FACING HARD TRUTH (Bobby O)
It was an ode to distraction and an admission I’m still prone to the...
May 27th, 2023 03:56 - SUDDENLY AWKWARD (Bobby O)
Does that detract or raise the level?
May 27th, 2023 03:49 - Roses Don\'t Hurt (Horrorautumnpoet)
The thorn eternal , is that maybe representative of the ubiquitous force...
May 27th, 2023 03:48 - PERFECT TIME IS NOW (Bobby O)
Thanks for the read and kind words. I surely will read your piece, like...
May 26th, 2023 21:21 - Something we don\'t know (Jack Trip)
The inevitability of the costs inside all the envelopes quietly placed in...
May 26th, 2023 13:29 - Forever Losses (Parisab)
Reminding in succinct style the debt we owe without preaching but a touch...
May 26th, 2023 13:24 - PERFECT TIME IS NOW (Bobby O)
Thanks for the read and kind words. I surely will read your piece, like...
May 26th, 2023 06:44 - Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Nice write. Good story. One small thought , that line “sprinkled from...
May 26th, 2023 06:43 - Rainy day (Myself and me)
The progression adds a knowing frame and the weather, well who doesn’t...
May 22nd, 2023 18:01 - Always Forever (Evamoon)
This speaks. And I like the remind of that cool HEAT WAVE tune.
“Every...
May 22nd, 2023 08:58 - A Soft Whistler (Mark Tha Phenomenon)
Nice flow and cool phrasing. That ending was sorta stark and has me trying...
May 22nd, 2023 08:55 - Lesson Not Disappointment. (Goldfinch60)
Keep all the journeys close enough to remind and guide. Nice piece and...
May 22nd, 2023 03:56 - Memories in the Making.. (Serene)
Daily moments that add value and cheer
Such a nice phrase and it...
May 22nd, 2023 03:52 - Maybe She is the Girl (Mrharrell)
Maybe she is, no heck that, positively she is the girl w her fresh style...
May 21st, 2023 19:35 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
Simpatico! Gonna ask for your hand in meaningful friendship. Thanks for...
May 21st, 2023 17:56 - The Cavern (Tattooedreverie)
I like the way you presented a point w a certain clarity w confident...
May 21st, 2023 17:54 - Swelter (Vera Podell)
Past events, reels that flicker occupy my mind vivid w this image this...
May 21st, 2023 13:53 - Oh, What a Glorious Day (LesliChisom40)
Freaking extra extra cool in many ways and I am now your fan and following...
May 21st, 2023 13:22 - Privet Hell ... (Mystica)
It hit you in a certain way that left an image of a lasting defeat , for...
May 21st, 2023 13:17
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