Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- cold heart (Vividvoid14)
25 times. Excessive
What’s next , challenging Steph on shooting 3’s?...
September 24th, 2023 01:04 - 10:06 p.m. (HoboBilbo)
Write a real piece that shows a side of your personality. Haiku is cool...
September 23rd, 2023 22:26 - My Australian Raven (HoboBilbo)
Who’s stealing who’s breath?
September 23rd, 2023 22:23 - Orphaning The Moment (Kurt Philip Behm)
A mantra and recurring visage. To the point with volumes said in a few...
September 23rd, 2023 19:50 - Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab)
I am such a fan. Are you possibly familiar with Miss Cecile McLoren...
September 23rd, 2023 17:27 - MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O)
Men are such j@@offs so many times over.
September 23rd, 2023 17:23 - Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54)
I really like the piece, even more so after reading it’s history and...
September 23rd, 2023 13:36 - LIFE (Bobby O)
Thank you for excellent insight. You jumped into my mind cuz that was...
September 23rd, 2023 13:30 - LIFE (Bobby O)
You are way cool
Hope you also share thoughts on the one from yesterday?...
September 23rd, 2023 12:16 - Emily goes for a walk. (David Wakeling)
That touched my heart. Nice topic with much kindness spread.
September 23rd, 2023 04:38 - MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O)
Thanks very much. She was fun for a minute. That photo above the poem is...
September 23rd, 2023 03:59 - Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville)
A take a deep conscious that deals with a choice that maybe was absolute....
September 22nd, 2023 23:19 - Box (Introverted Sage)
What a nice piece.
“In the guise of becoming wise”
That statement...
September 22nd, 2023 23:16 - Accumulations (Neville)
Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers...
September 22nd, 2023 21:35 - OP (Peto)
The whole piece was great and many lines are worthy of quote but that last...
September 22nd, 2023 21:23 - Beneath The Veil (Kurt Philip Behm)
I really love your style and have a mind to work harder to incorporate at...
September 22nd, 2023 21:19 - Olivia Ran (Cynthiavkelly)
I wanna meet Olivia.
September 20th, 2023 16:37 - Who Gains? (David Wakeling)
In the comedy lies the tragedy and the forever legacy perhaps I’d best...
September 20th, 2023 01:20 - Nature\'s Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
That Blue Note monster LP had the range of a Cannonball shot so powerful...
September 20th, 2023 01:16 - Uncertain. (LostInMyMistakes)
This is really good. It’s an honest introspective. I love your metaphors...
September 19th, 2023 20:21 - Towers Of Shame (Kurt Philip Behm)
That’s freaking insightful. I too have an issue with segments of...
September 19th, 2023 19:13 - THE ELUSIVE LADY (Amy Michelle Mosier)
I enjoyed this. It’s fantasy and it’s mythical. It could also describe...
September 19th, 2023 18:58 - CRAZED and CONFUSED (Bobby O)
It’s all made up. I just pretended that a woman dumped me as hard as...
September 19th, 2023 04:15 - American superstar (EvenwheniLie)
Nice. I was at the old Stadium the day of that funk when he looked at Dr....
September 19th, 2023 02:39 - Step (Introverted Sage)
Take a stand and now and I write that not to quote but rather to suggest...
September 19th, 2023 02:29 - Emotions Expressed (Orchidee)
The power of envy as suggested in the 5th commandment.
September 19th, 2023 02:26 - Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep. (David Wakeling)
A lament that I’m guessing he knew about but chose to pretend he...
September 19th, 2023 02:24 - Too Many Maybe’s (Neville)
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20 - A Summer Affair (MendedFences27)
It’s a story many may be familiar with but you relay it with an...
September 18th, 2023 11:43 - THE VOICE WITHIN (LIZ)
This is not a test, blacks are mines, fall a few times
Those visual and...
September 18th, 2023 06:52 - The Joy Of Children. (Goldfinch60)
Their laughter pulls at me
And then you really opened it up with a...
September 18th, 2023 06:39 - The Joy Of Children. (Goldfinch60)
Their laughter pulls at me
And then you really opened it up with a...
September 18th, 2023 06:38 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
I felt this on several levels. As always you craft a story well. I enjoyed...
September 18th, 2023 06:36 - SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O)
No, I was at a party and some kids were freestyling Rappin’ and when...
September 18th, 2023 04:13 - Mary (Neville)
Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
What a great way to paint...
September 18th, 2023 03:16 - SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O)
The kids are always surprised that an old man can hold his own in that...
September 17th, 2023 23:29 - A NEW WIND IS BLOWING (Felicia)
Resolve. It is perhaps the greatest trait. It speaks to one who is brave...
September 17th, 2023 22:58 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
How cool is your critique.
September 16th, 2023 03:03 - I\'ll never understand (Poetic Dan)
It’s both. I like how you were brave enough to admit the current reality...
September 15th, 2023 23:05 - Fragments of a shattered mind (Niki Oz)
I really like this. Anticipation builds energy but open a tiny space for...
September 15th, 2023 22:58 - Our Secret (Introverted Sage)
That second heartbeat after the tension pause is loud like a snare on...
September 15th, 2023 22:56 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
I get used to patterns and am making efforts to try different approach....
September 15th, 2023 16:23 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
A departure from accustomed style. Trying to be braver and not so...
September 15th, 2023 10:07 - Slippery Slanderings (Orchidee)
Religion inspires just one side always told as if the counterbalance of...
September 15th, 2023 06:45 - Hand in hand, me and you... (Anonymous_Poet)
You plead she sings and then a shriek answered by your yell and then...
September 15th, 2023 06:30 - Delights (Peto)
If she is worth that fanciful dance then that Horace Greeley quote applies...
September 15th, 2023 06:23 - Rambo: Last Blood (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
And he did it w Richard Crenna otherwise assigned.
September 15th, 2023 06:15 - Four In Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
That is a cathartic outlook that serves the heart and soul. Very wise Mr...
September 15th, 2023 02:09 - The Grieving Silence of An Empty House (Neville)
Judgement from outside or unfamiliar can’t touch with sense of purpose
September 15th, 2023 02:06 - Original (2781)
Who gives the songs? Maybe what matters how the gifted if song places them...
September 15th, 2023 00:20 - God\' Unfortunate Man (Serhat Doğan)
Fake it til you make it
September 14th, 2023 22:53 - whose side are you on? (Hzugman)
Dig that!
September 14th, 2023 22:52 - I Have Wondered... (DesertWords)
Nice last line. It’s a personal pronouncement and yet it’s for all of...
September 14th, 2023 22:51 - The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue. (David Wakeling)
A bus is humbling to some a reminder a yesteryear to others, almost always...
September 14th, 2023 17:37 - MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O)
She has that touch doesn’t she. Thanks for the read and grace
September 14th, 2023 15:02 - Magic (Peto)
A walk turns to run a pebble removed
I said, damned not Coyle or...
September 14th, 2023 13:39 - In The Hallowed Halls of Yesterday (Petrichor of Love)
I’m always in love w your phrase and the journey of the pieces....
September 14th, 2023 13:33 - CROOKED EYES (Bobby O)
Just
A. Tiny bit.
September 13th, 2023 23:56 - CROOKED EYES (Bobby O)
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w...
September 13th, 2023 17:23 - CROOKED EYES (Bobby O)
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w...
September 13th, 2023 17:22 - Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O)
I was going for that homey kinda title, like when an old guy tells a kid...
September 11th, 2023 10:58 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
I think good but then I talk myself into stuff l using logic perfectly...
September 11th, 2023 04:23 - Unspoken Words (SHELLY)
This suggestion came from a super talented poet and master ofjazz piano...
September 11th, 2023 01:50 - Unspoken Words (SHELLY)
May I humbly suggest a technique?
September 10th, 2023 23:40 - All men (Sorenbarrett)
This is really great. Not as critique but as proof of inspiration from...
September 10th, 2023 22:51 - human (Seventeen)
The ruins of my own desires
That line epitomizes the whole piece
I’m...
September 10th, 2023 18:02 - Just Like That, We Have To Start All Over (13LaurenD)
Great motion that leads to a very satisfying finish. Lots of work and...
September 10th, 2023 14:57 - Hate (KDawg)
FUCKING flat out!
September 10th, 2023 13:35 - Last Shot (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
STALKING and SEIZED moving to Crosshair detention. Descriptively...
September 10th, 2023 13:33 - Mask Off (Introverted Sage)
It finishes and it soars and it could be worthy of chapter 2?
September 10th, 2023 13:27 - Our Issue In Life. (Goldfinch60)
My bane resides in the chocolate covered Boston Crème. It’s got this...
September 10th, 2023 09:45 - Figurative paralysis laid waste body electric of mine (Rew4er2nail)
It’s so long
September 10th, 2023 09:41 - The one who lanced the maiden\'s heart with his sagacious philosophy (LYNXZELL)
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals for this one. For years I believed...
September 10th, 2023 07:51 - Clear (Peto)
Ritz to the Pawn
Crease in the fold
Reading the phrasing you choose...
September 10th, 2023 07:41 - The Timid And The Brave (Duggantherhymer)
Perspective comes alive
September 10th, 2023 05:03 - Red hot chili pepper poker face... (Rew4er2nail)
I got lost it started with a path I could follow but just past halfway I...
September 10th, 2023 02:23 - Plucked Elegance (Rebecca Drimmel)
My insider acumen fails me here , I was along and had my way with the poem...
September 10th, 2023 02:19 - With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly (Neville)
Nice message.
September 10th, 2023 02:14 - What game is this (David Wakeling)
Tumultuous and opposite.
Bizarro
September 10th, 2023 00:41 - \"A Grin Without A Cat\" (Kurt Philip Behm)
A freaking clever and great math poem w action and axiomatic plot turns....
September 10th, 2023 00:06 - Why (A.m.ni)
That’s heavy. There is often hidden plan that offers more than you might...
September 9th, 2023 23:26 - Mirror (Bliss)
I liked it but I’ll offer a one view that may be easily set aside. I...
September 9th, 2023 20:50 - TELL ME WHY MAMMA (Auroric enchantress)
Despondency and labyrinth are two of me favorite words. This was so good I...
September 9th, 2023 20:40 - When You Know You Are Blessed (Neville)
When it’s your day then rejoice be it blessed or luck or mathematical...
September 9th, 2023 06:44 - Open (Peto)
I will build you a castle with the tower so high it reaches the moon...
September 9th, 2023 06:38 - Rambo: First Blood (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
But if you’re gonna send in 100 men after Rambo , yiu better bring a lot...
September 9th, 2023 06:34 - Pinocchio, deep in thought (Teddy.15)
I don’t get it?
September 9th, 2023 03:07 - Skinny (Miss_Dreamer)
You have seen the effect of undue and unfair societal expectation and thus...
September 9th, 2023 02:32 - Scars (Miss_Dreamer)
Memories with weapons that invade. How perfect the description that draws...
September 9th, 2023 02:29 - Glass (Miss_Dreamer)
Out loud is a good plan, perhaps it exposes the foe that wriggles though...
September 9th, 2023 02:26 - Empty (Miss_Dreamer)
Such a tight metaphor. I walked thru the house through your description...
September 9th, 2023 02:22 - Thank You Dad. (Goldfinch60)
It’s the greatest gift that you see in that mirror. Poignant and...
September 9th, 2023 01:24 - Black Girl Magic (Marywritesx)
Nice entry. It sends and speaks of confidence and power
September 8th, 2023 23:40 - Goodbye (David Wakeling)
Great read. I read it again and reached inside and found an inner power...
September 8th, 2023 21:56 - Rabat is a black pearl (Amy Michelle Mosier)
I like this piece it’s playful and historical w hidden metaphor. Really...
September 8th, 2023 21:14 - change&growth (Vividvoid14)
That’s really good. Whoever is helping w your style , please send him my...
September 8th, 2023 18:45 - Those Tears on Her Cheeks (Petrichor of Love)
A silent observer
With brilliant power of observation
Nice write hood...
September 8th, 2023 18:43 - Message To Myself (RSH)
Hoping you are visited by a cathartic peace that often finds the writer of...
September 5th, 2023 18:59 - TRUE SIMPLE HEART (Bobby O)
That’s a great review and it indicates valuable introspective.
September 5th, 2023 14:48 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
I accept but you might conff so under having a few as no one person fills...
September 5th, 2023 12:36
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