Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- The Devils Hand (K.K)
It creates a vision that comes alive as I read and it makes me believe in...
January 12th, 2024 03:55 - Majestic Marvellings (Orchidee)
I read your stuff through my mother’s eyes as her faith provided a...
January 12th, 2024 03:53 - May Barker Richardson (David Wakeling)
It was fun to read but it was “real “ to be aware that you got knicked...
January 12th, 2024 03:49 - Echoes Dont Tell Lies 🤍 (Neville)
Really proud to know you , there is no faking it in your persona and that...
January 12th, 2024 03:46 - Deliciously Loving You (Thomas W Case)
It’s a challenge to me to think I could make that trade though I honor...
January 12th, 2024 03:40 - Stop the warmongers and aggressors (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I might be in the minority with this observation but offering truth is...
January 8th, 2024 01:52 - It Matters (Thomas W Case)
PICK ONE
a, A spontaneous criminally driven burst of violence doesn’t ...
January 8th, 2024 00:31 - It Matters (Thomas W Case)
PICK ONE
a, A spontaneous criminally driven burst of violence doesn’t ...
January 8th, 2024 00:31 - SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY? (Bobby O)
Don’t trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a...
January 3rd, 2024 19:07 - Line Dancing. (Goldfinch60)
I’m very glad that you take time to teach the youngsters that the ...
January 3rd, 2024 03:04 - Without a word (Nicole Pritchard)
The touch …,that you will catch me
I love the sensinle departure from...
January 3rd, 2024 01:57 - Without a word (Nicole Pritchard)
The touch …,that you will catch me
I love the sensinle departure from...
January 3rd, 2024 01:57 - The Past. (David Wakeling)
And the memories deliver us inaccuracy that hides , maybe, unbeknownst we...
January 3rd, 2024 00:17 - The Past. (David Wakeling)
And the memories deliver us inaccuracy that hides , maybe, unbeknownst we...
January 3rd, 2024 00:00 - Cascade (James Michael)
“Into ashes of time”, really clever to tap into such an absolute to...
January 2nd, 2024 23:53 - poem for a mother (Vividvoid14)
Perfect topic and a heartfelt tribute and you can keep this and keep...
January 2nd, 2024 23:42 - for good (Seventeen)
You write and I feel deep flurries of emotion. I’m grateful for you. I...
January 2nd, 2024 04:10 - The Great Record (Rocky Lagou)
It is a perfect endeavor that I employ to clear my foggy brain. Just to...
January 2nd, 2024 04:07 - Haiku 4 Having Me She Said (Neville)
I smiled and would not be able to explain how for the first time ever I...
January 2nd, 2024 04:04 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
This strongly indicates your awareness is so well tuned to the angles of...
January 2nd, 2024 04:01 - Cruise Snobs (Neville)
Bad bling bad manners and bad taste in music , brings to mind two...
January 2nd, 2024 03:58 - Locker Room Logic (Thomas W Case)
Other than that , you look forward to the visits?
December 30th, 2023 02:56 - Not Guilty as Charged (Neville)
That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all....
December 29th, 2023 22:21 - Don’t judge a book by its cover (Vividvoid14)
Your comment about your poem is wise. You mostly did succeed. I won’t...
December 29th, 2023 18:31 - I am Wondering (Cedrick)
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any...
December 28th, 2023 06:30 - Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab)
Any system that waits until it’s too late to reveal its most important...
December 28th, 2023 03:25 - Horns (2781)
It’s historical and timely and mysterious ??
December 27th, 2023 23:56 - I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR (Bobby O)
The very fact that I could be affected deeply and twist a bit w raw...
December 27th, 2023 23:46 - I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR (Bobby O)
Thanks ,Hard to keep up with the freight Trane that you are though.
December 27th, 2023 16:53 - You Don\'t Rub the Back of My Head Anymore (Thomas W Case)
In this case and those that may be similar I do indeed differentiate from...
December 27th, 2023 05:19 - Dreaming On. (Goldfinch60)
You bring to the front such logic and it mirrors exactly the thought...
December 27th, 2023 05:13 - I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR (Bobby O)
So, I’ve been singing Barbra Streisand songs all day , “memories light...
December 27th, 2023 02:59 - Martyr Manifest (Orchidee)
Brutality w a graceful stroke.
December 27th, 2023 00:29 - Stronger (13LaurenD)
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the...
December 27th, 2023 00:21 - BACK AND BETTER THAN EVER (Rocky Lagou)
That’s great news my brother.
December 27th, 2023 00:18 - Blown (Introverted Sage)
Step forward…..
That last line is defiantly perfect. Enjoyed the whole...
December 27th, 2023 00:17 - Abbie talks to a stranger at the beach. (David Wakeling)
It’s different each read. Great writing. I usually never ask but it is...
December 26th, 2023 23:42 - Flow (Introverted Sage)
Silence to sharpen the tune - a perfectly clear juxtaposition
December 26th, 2023 23:37 - Don’t Suppose You Remember (Neville)
In the parlance of happenstance a great plan is to love when it comes...
December 26th, 2023 23:12 - My Cat Is High, and So Am I (Thomas W Case)
I get it. Some impolite mf’s think it’s funny changing stuff around...
December 26th, 2023 23:11 - The Game We Love. (Goldfinch60)
Yo Fincj, nice write. BTW, this guitar has a sound like the bc Ventures.
December 16th, 2023 07:19 - Elegy to an Illusion (Katdream)
I got a question ?
When fantasy escapes …..emptiness seems opposed to...
December 16th, 2023 00:02 - An anticlimactic sexual event... (Rew4er2nail)
You can write and express with style but maybe enlist a trusted friend...
December 15th, 2023 20:36 - Kings and Queens Die, While I Train Kittens (Thomas W Case)
You show moxie and agility as you juggle juxtapositions of the critical...
December 15th, 2023 19:23 - To her with love (Job Welime)
Sometimes it’s a style that is dictated by content and mood but other...
December 15th, 2023 10:23 - Benevolent (NicoleM85)
Loved the ending.
December 15th, 2023 09:50 - Giving up on god. (Lil)
I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m...
December 15th, 2023 09:49 - Boundaries (MessyHead)
Nice job. A completed scenario in just a few lines
December 15th, 2023 09:30 - The Sublime Joy of Disagreement (GeekSusie)
Sarcasm as a shield.
Strong symbolism. Nice
December 15th, 2023 08:16 - A fresh start (Chiki1601)
In the tapestry of dawn , dreams restart.
What a powerful and hopeful...
December 15th, 2023 08:13 - Sure Seeking (Orchidee)
This had roots that brought real to the surreal
December 15th, 2023 08:10 - EXITING (Bobby O)
Exactly
December 14th, 2023 04:21 - EXITING (Bobby O)
I was praying ?
December 14th, 2023 02:57 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
You made it real. Your style is powerful my friend.
December 14th, 2023 00:56 - I Need To Visit France (Thomas W Case)
Visualize before you realize
December 14th, 2023 00:55 - EXITING (Bobby O)
Thanks very much
December 14th, 2023 00:35 - childhood dreams (Seventeen)
I read this twice. It’s excellent and speaks w emotion w a purpose and a...
December 13th, 2023 21:27 - EXITING (Bobby O)
Very kind. You’ve been on a roll. Finished the whole book. Strong...
December 13th, 2023 21:17 - A LOOK AT FOREVER (Bobby O)
I admire your ability to self edit
December 4th, 2023 23:23 - No More Eden (Thomas W Case)
This is really good I read it twice and it got better. Nice job. Good...
December 1st, 2023 02:10 - Salvation Through The Son (Orchidee)
My mother was devout and would cherish your writes. I read from her point...
November 30th, 2023 21:02 - AVARICE. (David Wakeling)
It’s speaks different with each read. That in itself is laudable,...
November 30th, 2023 20:58 - Candlewitch you tube version (Peto)
Do You Like Apples?
November 27th, 2023 23:50 - Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men (Thomas W Case)
An interesting mechanism for the fly on the wall ?it’s commentary and...
November 24th, 2023 23:56 - Acid Days (Neville)
This piece and your planned saunter have the harmony of a chorus
November 23rd, 2023 21:39 - Death is Stalking Me (Thomas W Case)
I believe I possess no retrospective or introspective that can sneak past...
November 23rd, 2023 20:03 - Amen (Neville)
Bigly smled, he watched the
Manchurian candidate dress nary a smile...
November 21st, 2023 02:45 - Starving in the Whiteness (Thomas W Case)
I say this only because I know it was your intention . My contention is...
November 18th, 2023 04:18 - PINCH ME (Bobby O)
Picture my quiet nod acknowledging that I may be judging the Vegas odds...
November 17th, 2023 22:05 - AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
Could be that you see it correctly
November 17th, 2023 05:02 - AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
Like an English Olive Oil merchant. Perfect!
November 17th, 2023 03:53 - AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
Inspiration abounds !
November 17th, 2023 03:12 - I REMEMBER (LIZ)
Everyone ran but you stayed around. That’s a forever attachment and I...
November 17th, 2023 03:04 - Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter (Neville)
Expression that is vibrant need not be chaste , especially perfect when...
November 17th, 2023 02:50 - Reunited (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
It makes sense and wraps up w satisfaction. Is there any symbolism to all ...
November 17th, 2023 02:48 - Corner-Stone (Orchidee)
I liked this one . Advice based on optimistic reordering
November 17th, 2023 02:45 - AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
Thanks O for the nice words
November 17th, 2023 02:39 - Limited (Thomas W Case)
We are all both, I don’t remember who said but”never meet your...
November 16th, 2023 22:35 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
I feel this. Whether by happenstance, circumstance or perhaps injustice...
November 16th, 2023 21:15 - Shallow Cuts Too Deep (Neville)
Three dimensional w the actuality pang and metaphorically delivering the...
November 13th, 2023 06:13 - A Feathered Stone (Thomas W Case)
Reminds of Les Nessman and WKRP in Cincinnati
November 13th, 2023 06:03 - Deliverance Days (Orchidee)
Handel would be proud
November 13th, 2023 06:01 - Hold It, Swill Then Swallow (Neville)
A Proper salute reminds of fortune and I felt this and what better...
November 13th, 2023 05:18 - An Analysis Of Sleep Paralysis (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It mind over matter. Whatever we may find in hereafter (?) I just don’t...
November 8th, 2023 02:36 - Nature Reminds Me (Thomas W Case)
Nice write. I’m gonna blame my latest EXPLICIT piece for this mindset...
November 7th, 2023 22:56 - Eye Dance (Introverted Sage)
It says many things and that needs to be saluted On my second read I...
November 7th, 2023 22:53 - Song for a toddler (David Wakeling)
I salute the various ways you use your pen. You equally adept at noting...
November 7th, 2023 22:46 - When the Balance Wheel is Broken (Neville)
I love the phrasing and how the message spins but am personally a bit...
November 7th, 2023 04:28 - Dealing for The Mob (Bobby O)
Cool. Tried to bridge the gap tween a story and a poem. Read some Kipling...
November 3rd, 2023 09:09 - Siked (Introverted Sage)
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that...
November 3rd, 2023 00:37 - Sorry don’t read (Vividvoid14)
Much wisdom here to read and hear
October 31st, 2023 18:54 - Tu Es Tout Pour Moi (Neville)
The frown hanging there adds a weight to my shoulders, it’s cumbersome...
October 31st, 2023 18:46 - KNOW THY PLACE (Bobby O)
Peyote?
October 31st, 2023 14:02 - Candlewitch you tube version (Peto)
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10 - Carried Away By My Dark Obsession (Thomas W Case)
Oscillation / Meandering
Seems the profanity wasn’t born of anger...
October 31st, 2023 04:18 - Little gods (Thomas W Case)
anthropomorphism, I love it’s use here. That tiny dust covered momento...
October 30th, 2023 18:29 - BIAS KILLS (Bobby O)
Means a lot but you’re still the monster poet. You’ve got hundreds,...
October 30th, 2023 17:26 - Nations (2781)
We do share one common belief.,
Good prose and gentle rhyme csn sell a...
October 30th, 2023 13:59 - CONCISE EXCELL (Bobby O)
Dig!
October 30th, 2023 04:35 - This is Us .. (Neville)
A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both
October 30th, 2023 00:05
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