Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- Shedding the Mortal Coil (Audrey A.)
Using regular sentence structure throughout the whole piece takes away...
April 23rd, 2023 19:52 - A Shadow of What Once Was (Ravale)
Ooops
April 23rd, 2023 18:04 - Tears (Thinkerbell)
Nice ending. Drops took on a lifelike persona I felt it. Nice piece and...
April 23rd, 2023 17:07 - My Walk of Stardom (Mrsbrown)
That was really an impactful way to date a story. I felt it deep. Nice...
April 23rd, 2023 17:04 - The Unknown (Anonymouspursuer)
The message is wise and encapsulates the biggest mystery and made me...
April 23rd, 2023 16:25 - Salutations & Dissociations (Creatistically Inclined)
Maybe a sad ending or maybe you’re just competitive and very good at...
April 23rd, 2023 04:57 - dancing in your pink cashmere. (Paperjam)
You moonlit apparition
Such a nice descriptive phrase. I prefer to think...
April 23rd, 2023 04:54 - Indiana Jones And The Horrible Sidekicks (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A review wrapped in prose that moves to a conclusion. Love it.
April 23rd, 2023 04:51 - There\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s gold in them there. (2781)
Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to...
April 23rd, 2023 04:50 - THE CORNER OF COMFORT.... (Cerry)
I think it’s understandable to seek or revisit that place and while I...
April 23rd, 2023 04:46 - Make a Choice (Peter Gates)
Is yours perhaps never? Next time I’m talking to this girl who has been...
April 23rd, 2023 04:42 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
Dig!
April 21st, 2023 16:49 - Uncertain (Bobby O)
Dig. We got this groove between us. Cool
April 19th, 2023 20:21 - Lies to Children (SweetOdodoGrass43)
Nice work. Well put together and not settling for just any phrase.
April 19th, 2023 18:33 - Purgatory (Fae Amy)
Another very brave look inward
April 19th, 2023 09:23 - Alive This Year (Fae Amy)
Introspective and honest account of personal travels. Nice I enjoyed the...
April 19th, 2023 09:22 - Roses (Msa)
I liked this piece. It’s practical and it also fancifully segues to...
April 19th, 2023 09:16 - CORRECTION (Bobby O)
Thank you for the read and for the understanding. A favor ? A while back I...
April 19th, 2023 07:29 - Acsetic (Sorenbarrett)
Certainly also a message to those who may be tempted by ill gotten gains,...
April 19th, 2023 06:57 - Endorphins (Jenny.g)
Remedying pain , indeed. But you remind us not to live in a state of...
April 19th, 2023 06:06 - Hawk (Introverted Sage)
I got lost
April 19th, 2023 04:08 - Into A Darkened Room. (Goldfinch60)
Dark room to rest , to hide giving in?
April 19th, 2023 04:00 - Pandora vs. Pride (Introverted Sage)
What do you call that system ?
Nice piece
April 19th, 2023 03:57 - Karen Anne Carpenter (March 2 1950-February 4 1983) (David Wakeling)
Such an angelic voice
April 19th, 2023 00:40 - Hanging on (Lynn Partridge)
Until the next time makes me worry that this is a dance being led by...
April 18th, 2023 23:42 - Daring Greatly (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Motion of progress implied nicely
April 18th, 2023 23:33 - Homeless (BlessedbyGod)
A happy end and a nice path ahead. Props
April 18th, 2023 23:31 - Fox News vs YouTube (Ok Waleed)
Exact
April 18th, 2023 23:29 - LIFE WITH BLUES (Shayra)
The mysterious pain. That says a million things. Nice piece. Good prose w...
April 18th, 2023 23:28 - When My Heart Hurts (Tommytoons)
When she laughs at the bridge …
Nice line. Good piece
April 18th, 2023 23:21 - 20 Hours to Memphis (MendedFences27)
What a surprise ending. He left this world happy and that fir Mr ersps the...
April 18th, 2023 23:19 - Senryus 5 (MendedFences27)
I love that last line as well as the pace and some surprising prose to...
April 18th, 2023 23:14 - Soul Mate (Jenny.g)
A very short piece I Try to convey this sentiment
COLLECTION
Triangles...
April 18th, 2023 21:26 - pyrite-technic (Arqios)
The risk , the offered kinship w the promise of more must be a goal,...
April 18th, 2023 21:19 - Night Wanderings (Firefall)
Seems like a tribute to someone who might be fun to know?
April 18th, 2023 21:05 - Your own single Audience. (Moogli)
Nice to read and to think abiut
April 18th, 2023 21:04 - ~horror is the removal of masks~ (Jan_Yin)
Filling in fantasy as reality maybe isn’t doom each time , but your real...
April 18th, 2023 20:45 - Aces and spaces of hatters with tea platters (Eclisse)
The White Rabbit of course. Here’s an interesting Jazzy version that’s...
April 18th, 2023 20:39 - Solomon\'s Rhyme (Kurt Philip Behm)
Liked the poem. To be honest, I’m not quite grasping the full meaning of...
April 18th, 2023 19:56 - Free But in Chains (Iva Hotko)
Hits harder than my first impression of the circumstance described and the...
April 18th, 2023 18:40 - Academic Validation (Ajax (he/xe))
It reads well as both a literal restraint on your freedom and as a tongue...
April 18th, 2023 18:36 - Gone too Soon By Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234)
Heartfelt. My best wishes and thoughts as you reconcile w his loss.
April 18th, 2023 17:15 - Commiting to Music (Mr. Not)
Tangle
Enter twine
Entangle molecular acid
Are you loving , wrestling ,...
April 18th, 2023 17:13 - Your own single Audience. (Moogli)
Nice to read and to think abiut
April 18th, 2023 16:53 - QUARREL IN THE GRAVEYARD (Nothing)
I must of missed something. Were you dealing w self? Or was it more if...
April 18th, 2023 16:48 - Adapt (SweetOdodoGrass43)
The last line is a worthy culmination of all that is above - Don’t...
April 18th, 2023 16:46 - Rage (Jenny.g)
It hits exactly as yiu said.
Simpatico
April 17th, 2023 18:45 - The Fall is Okay (Hollow Enigma)
Pet you request for suggestions :
After you write a piece , always plan...
April 16th, 2023 18:09 - Another (Vera Podell)
Enticed to read it twice. Nice angles dome gentle and a few w an edge as...
April 16th, 2023 02:11 - The Fall is Okay (Hollow Enigma)
Nice piece it moves. Points to a moment, and then declares capability.
April 16th, 2023 02:04 - Jesus, Jesus, Jesus (Gary Edward Geraci)
I would play if I could. I understand the genre and direction w emphasis...
April 16th, 2023 01:54 - A Sinner\'s Confession (Haiden Xandria)
Nice symbolism and the prose was balanced and not pompous w certain words...
April 16th, 2023 01:43 - please (Blueandgrey)
Rough read. You’re talking to someone who isn’t there and the people...
April 16th, 2023 01:38 - It\'s not your fault ! (Iqra Khan)
I got lost. Is it a conversation or is it a commentary?
April 16th, 2023 00:42 - Soliloquy of a Songbird (Thinkerbell)
Why is it a wonderful world.? Maybe it’s more powerful if you set up...
April 15th, 2023 22:02 - Destruction (Jenny.g)
And if felt good. That metaphor is so descriptively perfect as our need...
April 15th, 2023 19:16 - The Unsaid of Ever Consuming Stress (Sussanwrites2025)
Stuck with the mess of stress that made me guess. Strong line w a good...
April 15th, 2023 11:28 - Battle Worn. (CAAParks)
She never relinquishes
From the style of this piece I get the feeling...
April 15th, 2023 09:59 - My Candy Shop (Eclisse)
You sold me and built anticipation. Dialing now though risky entanglement...
April 15th, 2023 08:08 - Discouraged (Randy6)
Timely and lessons for all who care to look, absorb and rally the courage...
April 15th, 2023 07:59 - DEPTH (LIZ)
It’s like you maintain a kindness rather than risk compromise to others...
April 15th, 2023 07:31 - And the Fishes Flew (Peter Gates)
I’m a fan.
“Clearest glasslike crystal hue “
It’s an art to...
April 14th, 2023 19:31 - anxiety (Peter Gates)
The words move and the dual purpose of the curves of a woman is a nice...
April 14th, 2023 18:57 - Taste the Soup (Tommytoons)
A literal episode one might remember for a long time
April 14th, 2023 18:54 - The Battle (Miss Mystic)
I can really relate to your style and enjoyed the use of non complicated...
April 14th, 2023 18:43 - The Dark Whisperer (People Say)
Maybe change the sentence structure here and there and convey w suggestion...
April 10th, 2023 20:08 - Our minds are burning trees, and thoughts the ashen leaves (Eclisse)
Eyes narrowed
Nice to indicate w strong prose and to create that...
April 10th, 2023 19:47 - Memories (Fay Slimm.)
Limestone luminescence.
Such a descriptive phrase.
Nice
April 10th, 2023 16:52 - Visitor (Dakota)
Stark recognition indicates the chance to capture seemingly unreachable...
April 10th, 2023 16:28 - A gift you give each other (Dakota)
My heart goes out to you if you had to actually live through that. The...
April 10th, 2023 16:25 - Until All\'s Undone (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky , Dude, you write well. Better than most and I’m enjoying diving...
April 10th, 2023 14:29 - My Angel of Love (Accidental Poet)
I feel that and that makes it perfect.
April 10th, 2023 10:19 - Our Love (Peter Gates)
The prose snd rhyme was pleasant but I’m nowhere near confident enough...
April 10th, 2023 05:48 - What is Love? (Adventuressmalik)
We sure think differently on the subject. But aside from preconceptions I...
April 10th, 2023 05:45 - BACK IN THE DAY (Randy6)
I respect your point of view but my instincts tend to not finding the past...
April 10th, 2023 05:40 - Fantasy Thoughts About Him (Alana6789)
Kept me interested
April 10th, 2023 04:02 - When The Rains Stop (Satishverma)
To stitch again my gaze
Really clever ways to express ideas w creative...
April 9th, 2023 21:21 - END OUT (Bobby O)
Exact
April 8th, 2023 09:51 - Periodically (Dakota)
Just as momentum builds it slips when standard phrase lacks metaphor or...
April 8th, 2023 09:03 - The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling)
Maybe change the form of your sentence structure here and there...
April 8th, 2023 08:57 - The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling)
Maybe change the form of your sentence structure here and there...
April 8th, 2023 08:56 - Longing (Lorna)
Doing hard stuff is hard
Doing nothing is NOTHING
April 8th, 2023 08:46 - Unsung (Fay Slimm.)
The salve is to be treated respectfully so it cannot be expected to be...
April 7th, 2023 13:34 - PERHAPS (Randy6)
I like the questions but it’s screaming for an authors impression , even...
April 7th, 2023 13:27 - Of Guilt and Despair (W. Charlie Martineau, Jr.)
Like a hamster on that wheel , effort
April 7th, 2023 13:25 - The Interview (Anaisabel89)
I’ve become a fan
April 7th, 2023 13:23 - My crazy neighbour (Anaisabel89)
A descriptive trip describing a known syndrome , not w sympathy or chagrin...
April 7th, 2023 12:58 - A dream (Anaisabel89)
So much fun to read aaand there’s that whole suspense thing created...
April 7th, 2023 12:53 - A dame that surrenders (Anaisabel89)
Liked it on the first read. Read it again and liked it more because it...
April 7th, 2023 12:49 - Deeper Fundamental (John Prophet)
I don’t get it
April 7th, 2023 08:13 - Save me - Daisie-Lyn Fuller (Daisie-Lyn Fuller)
Starkly honest and inspires an almost visceral enjoined participation even...
April 7th, 2023 04:26 - A Rhythm That We All Must Meet (Oscar Auliq-Ice)
Ok, it’s like you said here’s the facts, but left unsaid was the...
April 7th, 2023 04:02 - Maybe Abuse Of Power (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
Self reflection that shouts to others “be aware “
Nice
April 7th, 2023 03:20 - Dad (Anaisabel89)
Like a riddle on repeat. I love that line, it says a million things in...
April 7th, 2023 03:14 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
Many thanks. You ,I believe , are a really good sport.
April 7th, 2023 02:58 - Peggy Bundy & My Heart (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Love the topic love the tongue in cheek yet authentically painted real...
April 7th, 2023 02:50 - i wont (MaggieRaven)
I felt the personal attachment you unselfishly resisted placing as a...
April 7th, 2023 02:46 - Speed (Lorna)
It surprisingly hit me w authentic truth. Surprisingly , because ABBA...
April 7th, 2023 02:38
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