Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- I Now Pro-nonce You (Not My King) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I looked it up and by using that exactly correct wording like Picard ye...
May 6th, 2023 03:31 - Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry (Neville)
It so flows
Omnidirectional keeping readers transfixed w contents and...
May 6th, 2023 03:28 - Trusting In The Truth (Orchidee)
Interesting format and seems handled easy w your pen.
May 6th, 2023 03:22 - Drunken Moth (Jaxxie)
Of never making it far- a tale w caution mixed with the exacting journey...
May 6th, 2023 00:53 - THE GARDEN OF LIFE (That writer Bree)
A winner I compare the chosen words and style to Smokey Robinson who is...
May 6th, 2023 00:32 - Greed for power (NafisaSB)
Like the message and the content and what I really think was brilliant was...
May 6th, 2023 00:12 - old friend (Ashley Rae)
It’s a great read. Hits home.
May 6th, 2023 00:07 - Increasing Angst (Satishverma)
I got lost. Stratosphere laughs andThe moon to touch in inclement weather...
May 5th, 2023 20:40 - When I break (Bella.26)
Reasonable request and conveyed w believable honor. Nice. I liked it.
May 5th, 2023 20:36 - The modern man (Pocev_Gjoshe)
This is way slanted and does not represent views of anyone I know. Very...
May 5th, 2023 18:54 - ....LET WOMEN SPEAK.... (D-P-W)
You are EXACT?
May 5th, 2023 18:52 - Help (Jordan)
Nice verse , may I say that that motion and energy in this piece makes me...
May 5th, 2023 16:43 - Yes it\'s risky (Hzugman)
It’s refreshing to read your work knowing that it’s from your heart...
May 5th, 2023 15:16 - Overwhelmed by all this stress (Blessedkayla7)
It was nice. Brave and honest is the best skill set to start with and if...
May 5th, 2023 15:14 - To Say the Least (PaperFlowerFields)
That’s some deep upon deep introspective. Shouting out is cathartic and...
May 5th, 2023 13:13 - Viva La Vida (The Evil Twin)
A story of a page turning and a different chapter begins. Regrets ? But...
May 5th, 2023 11:20 - Johnnie Walker (Arqios)
That’s cool. One question ? Red, Black , or Blue
May 5th, 2023 11:17 - TRAVELS (Bobby O)
I certainly did not invent it. I believe it was a format under the broader...
May 5th, 2023 08:30 - A Bud of Rose (Ayatocka)
Impatient but knowing.
May 5th, 2023 06:04 - TRAVELS (Bobby O)
Cool. It was the challenge to be able submit within the format and I was...
May 5th, 2023 04:58 - A generation Z fairytale (EvenwheniLie)
May 5th, 2023 04:44 - Endless Sadness (Philipp luft)
Endless sadness. Nice awakening to a certain day to day reality. I was...
May 5th, 2023 04:40 - Kremlin Attacked, Fact? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Nice way to advise to look and not jump and buy the white elephant...
May 5th, 2023 04:37 - Undertow (Fay Slimm.)
From the reddened undertow….caught…sightless obedience
Really vivid...
May 5th, 2023 04:32 - The Sins of Us (Parisab)
We play roles
I’m no saint
Those announcements declare a closeness...
May 5th, 2023 03:10 - Echoes Seldom Lie These Days (Neville)
Though perhaps written under guise as a cautionary tale , it didn’t fool...
May 5th, 2023 02:57 - A.I. (James Michael)
It might even be worse than that??
May 5th, 2023 02:51 - Waves (Lane.rowe)
Sorta up and down and scattered in direction and no plan?
May 5th, 2023 02:49 - Another Day Started. (Goldfinch60)
The optimistic keep churning w more energy nice change v many here that...
May 5th, 2023 02:47 - Night-Time Nigh-Time (Orchidee)
It was a nice read.
May 5th, 2023 02:46 - Strong (2781)
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43 - Flight (Parisab)
Severance for all pain they felt and caused
This line set me to ponder...
May 5th, 2023 00:49 - Flight (Parisab)
Severance for all pain they felt and caused
This line set me to ponder...
May 5th, 2023 00:48 - Pomegranate (Parisab)
It’s so BRAVE to claim desired and deserved fun using the word SHAME and...
May 4th, 2023 22:20 - Midnight Flight (Parisab)
If the perfunctory science that Einstein first felt true as thought...
May 4th, 2023 22:16 - Dear Sister By Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234)
Smart to admit love brings us a world greater than one can see. I had TO...
May 4th, 2023 12:41 - MISSED TAKES ( alternate version) (Bobby O)
Thanks. Wondering how the other version hits you. It’s more exoteric and...
May 4th, 2023 00:24 - My White Monster (Vanna R.P)
Really like this piece
May 2nd, 2023 15:32 - I Miss When... (Fyra)
April 30th, 2023 21:30 - Flutey Silence (Satishverma)
I feel a certain gravitas embodied by a well executed plan and my faith...
April 30th, 2023 21:05 - serendipity (Waynechester)
Think good and hold value as you seek chapter two of this adventure.
April 30th, 2023 18:07 - Tomorrow\'s Vow (Kurt Philip Behm)
Each line had strong individual message but they weren’t woven,...
April 30th, 2023 18:04 - PERHAPS (Bobby O)
PUSH
PULL
PERFORM
I thought it was gonna be like that!!
April 30th, 2023 17:34 - Steel Doors (Natalya)
I don’t know how it is and I won’t pretend I can even picture the path...
April 30th, 2023 17:23 - Tears (Sorenbarrett)
The well you dipped also left you w a landmark to guide
April 30th, 2023 17:03 - Glory to thermodynamics in general... (Rew4er2nail)
Really long. Do you trust the attention spans in this digital age?
April 30th, 2023 16:25 - Keeping it “Untitled.” (Paperjam)
I was able to easily give w this piece. Like no smokey sings
“Cause if...
April 30th, 2023 16:20 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
Nice.
April 30th, 2023 15:13 - Mother\'s Love (Oni Lana)
I wrote a piece recently that speaks to feelings when I lost my mom....
April 30th, 2023 10:53 - To people who help us survive (_lonely__side)
Nice piece. I felt the pathos.
April 30th, 2023 10:44 - PERHAPS (Bobby O)
Dig !
April 30th, 2023 10:12 - Get smart (Hzugman)
I salute you sir by helping prove the old American adage , you can be what...
April 30th, 2023 09:21 - Get smart (Hzugman)
I salute you sir by helping prove the old American adage , you can be what...
April 30th, 2023 09:20 - Where’s our mind? (Lex <3)
My much mystery here. I guess it had potential though?
April 30th, 2023 08:26 - Shelf life (Arobot)
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may...
April 30th, 2023 07:54 - Silent Reverie (Berkflagg)
I have a critique. And a tip to share that was passed on to me. With your...
April 30th, 2023 05:06 - Internal state & clothes from two years ago (Anni.Grace)
More skin more scars more maturity
That line offers direction and more...
April 30th, 2023 01:33 - The Days of Rock and Roll. (David Wakeling)
The awkward flight of teenage romance
A cool line that allows us all to...
April 30th, 2023 01:13 - An Ego That Wouldn’t Relent (Oscar Auliq-Ice)
It was so much fun I reread it immediately. Nice job to move through self...
April 30th, 2023 00:30 - Control (Jjulia)
Raise the caliber of your ideals.
What a great line and exact to the...
April 29th, 2023 21:56 - A Ugly Lullaby (Lex <3)
Read the poem and really liked it and then noticed I would not have been...
April 29th, 2023 17:57 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
Perhaps that “episode “ could birth style akin to Cecil Taylor ,...
April 29th, 2023 16:50 - Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing (Neville)
If you gotta tell them it’s usually too late.
April 29th, 2023 14:19 - Jazz Liberation (Parisab)
As the music flows to chance …
Such mellifluous imagery. Perhaps a...
April 29th, 2023 02:03 - Green eyed (Domilla)
For that power to shake you it could only mean that you were authentic ...
April 28th, 2023 22:17 - Revenge (Shakiee)
Unusual topic but it reads well and has a story it tells. I like it. I’d...
April 28th, 2023 22:13 - The brother You Know (Hollow Enigma)
It really ended cool. In the middle o had to regroup and work a little cuz...
April 28th, 2023 20:55 - Bathroom Stall (NinjaGirl)
Honest and personal yet universal in message and offers shire that reminds...
April 28th, 2023 17:05 - Departed (Berkflagg)
I get the joy that I’d uncovered by these honest words. Nice and...
April 28th, 2023 17:02 - Eighteen (Kinsey Peterson)
Two sides to all events. It’s a privilege to join as the parts entered...
April 28th, 2023 16:58 - Healed (Mark Tha Phenomenon)
Grateful barely covers it. Exuberance ??
April 28th, 2023 16:48 - Friendships break (Someone who wants to heal)
I feel the brusises
April 28th, 2023 11:37 - Yolo (Sophenia)
You do truly deserve. Honest writing w substance is on official merit...
April 28th, 2023 07:35 - Rain rhythms (G REMADEVI)
Really nice. Too many great aspects to list. It felt real and also like...
April 28th, 2023 07:31 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
Thank you much for granting my request. It’s the piece that took me...
April 28th, 2023 07:13 - Trilogy (Bobby O)
Yes. Was trying to see together in symbolic way. Thanks. You’re fun
April 28th, 2023 06:46 - SKIP THE. SELFISH. ROAD (Bobby O)
Your comments are cool and indicate a generosity of spirit. Soft and warm...
April 28th, 2023 06:02 - In So Few Words Gone (Neville)
Well and truly gone. I’m still mulling that end but can report w glee...
April 28th, 2023 05:17 - Girl With a Blue Vase (Neville)
Sunlight caught, played, the silver buckles, descriptive style stays...
April 28th, 2023 04:35 - PORTRAIT (Nephilim56)
A voice to echo still.
April 28th, 2023 04:21 - Phenomenal Women ([email protected])
Anthem like. It’s very giving and I’m hoping many w open arms...
April 28th, 2023 03:23 - MISSING AUNT CAROL (Bobby O)
Wow! Sadly I find well thought out commentary on the rare side on this...
April 28th, 2023 03:02 - The Ghost of My Self That Was (Neville)
I felt the heartfelt reminiscence.
April 28th, 2023 02:32 - Signals? (Goldfinch60)
Literal! It could easily metaphorically expand to comment on selfish...
April 28th, 2023 01:21 - The Joys Of Watching Trailer Park Boys (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
We’re yiu ever a member?
April 28th, 2023 01:17 - The secret of art (Domilla)
So many great phrases here
“A balm to my weary soul” hearing this...
April 26th, 2023 14:29 - ... (Lumpydawg)
Stealing a title from Kipling is wrong at every level. It’s worse than...
April 25th, 2023 17:48 - I Really Truly Love You... (Jaimeleigh)
Needs one more stanza
April 25th, 2023 17:43 - Plagiarism of Hermes (Sorenbarrett)
The word “we” does not apply, that is an inaccurate supposition, ...
April 25th, 2023 10:18 - do u love me? (Ace_)
To extend the thought logically
Love is BRAVERY so what is described...
April 25th, 2023 10:04 - The last words of Amber Watson (David Wakeling)
Love it. Especially because you moved the story w symbolic elements while...
April 25th, 2023 00:57 - SKIP THE. SELFISH. ROAD (Bobby O)
Really cool to use the very words that describe my thoughts. Good incite...
April 25th, 2023 00:54 - The Lonely Road (Vhawlalawream)
This needs a rewrite. Solid sentiment but it seems that you wrote down...
April 25th, 2023 00:43 - Here With you - for sisters (Raven Forevermore Est.1995)
Shout that out everyday.
April 25th, 2023 00:18 - The Train. (Beans2206)
Such great use of metaphor and it also builds a tension which caused me to...
April 24th, 2023 23:22 - ESCAPABLE TARGETS (Bobby O)
Speak loud and true.
April 24th, 2023 07:03 - The Window (CreativelyUninspired)
It has s factor of encouragement that speaks
April 24th, 2023 04:26 - Deathwish (PurpleGlasses)
I used to think knowing truth, awareness of that dangerous place indicated...
April 24th, 2023 04:21 - I Dreamed a Dream (Injoy828)
That’s a DEFCON 4 kind of warning not just not just a chronicle of...
April 24th, 2023 03:28 - COLLECTION (Bobby O)
I don’t follow ? I take notes
April 23rd, 2023 21:27
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