Comments on community poems by rrodriguez



  • Self Beating (Anthony Hanible) The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing....
    April 17th, 2025 21:02
  • No3 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) This is cute... Loved it!
    April 16th, 2025 20:21
  • BUTTERFLY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Nicely done! I enjoyed your metaphor of the child and the butterfly,...
    April 12th, 2025 12:00
  • You Get Out What You Put In (Poetic Licence) Cute and clever playfulness, with a touch of wit. I liked it!
    April 12th, 2025 11:56
  • Empty Thoughts (Cassie58) Cassie, this is beautifully written. Your words glide and soar with each...
    April 11th, 2025 19:49
  • Smile (Poetic Licence) Insightful!
    April 6th, 2025 15:16
  • Too much (Sorenbarrett) Soren, your poem, \'Too Much,\' is indeed the lot we all share. But life...
    April 5th, 2025 18:03
  • Poems in the wind (Sorenbarrett) Beautiful!
    March 29th, 2025 19:57
  • () This sounds surreal. Excellent write! I\'ve read it several times to take...
    September 25th, 2024 15:51
  • () Thank you for sharing. Indeed, nature has its cycles. This line caught my...
    September 25th, 2024 15:48
  • Pastures In The Sky (Cassie58) Cassie, the title of your poem is amazing. The simile of your eyes...
    September 19th, 2024 07:46
  • What I left behind (Sorenbarrett) I want to leave a blessing. I believe you did so too. I enjoyed reading...
    September 18th, 2024 19:05
  • () Tony, I can see the lanterns floating through the night sky lighting the...
    September 18th, 2024 18:59
  • Once a mighty tree (Sorenbarrett) I love trees. Living in an island like Puerto Rico, trees are everywhere....
    September 17th, 2024 20:40
  • () This is an excellent tribute to your friend\'s dad. I enjoyed reading the...
    September 17th, 2024 20:35
  • Dark Night (Tony36) Indeed! Nerves are tight. I\'m going to move to a place like that....
    September 17th, 2024 20:27
  • () This poem is so poignant! I enjoyed reading it and thinking about its...
    September 15th, 2024 18:45
  • () Love it!
    September 15th, 2024 18:43
  • Longing (Senryu) (Rrodriguez) Thank you for your observation. Haiku deals with nature and senryu deals...
    September 8th, 2024 16:22
  • STUCK (Adnan it is) So, if you awake up, you\'ve not stuck. But if you\'re still stuck, then...
    September 6th, 2024 20:55
  • MIDNIGHT DARKNESS (Qurrathul Ain) This is one of my favorite subjects to write about, the stars. You\'ve...
    September 6th, 2024 19:50
  • Life (Rhmn_7) I enjoyed reading your poem and thought about the many times that I wanted...
    September 5th, 2024 06:43
  • A gentle presence (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) This is, indeed , a short story nicely written. The scene is marvelous and...
    September 5th, 2024 06:33
  • () Nicely done, my friend. I must step back and find a better perspective to...
    September 4th, 2024 20:42
  • () I like the rhythm and the rhyme. Thanks for sharing it.
    September 4th, 2024 20:35
  • THE MOON NEVER KNEW THE SUN (Qurrathul Ain) I enjoy the sun and the moon. I\'ve written about them, too. This piece is...
    September 4th, 2024 20:32
  • () Well, this is the place to do that. Pour out yourself in this forum...
    September 2nd, 2024 20:31
  • A LOVE LIKE KHADIJA AND MUHAMMAD\'s (Qurrathul Ain) Your comment about the poem is excellent. It could be written into a poem....
    September 2nd, 2024 20:21
  • () This is the personification of Christian values. Loved it!
    September 2nd, 2024 20:14
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    August 29th, 2024 19:34
  • () Sure is fun to enjoy nature. This was a treat. Thanks!
    August 29th, 2024 19:34
  • Mankind\'s Evolution (MendedFences27) Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t...
    August 29th, 2024 19:33
  • () Truth like clay, can be pliable, but I believe truth is an absolute. I...
    August 29th, 2024 15:58
  • NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain) Love goes farther than that. Love is limitless. This is a beautiful poem...
    August 28th, 2024 20:23
  • THREAD AND NEEDLE (Qurrathul Ain) I like the first stanza. Let\'s work to mend this broken world. We can do...
    August 28th, 2024 20:20
  • Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude ) (MendedFences27) Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.
    August 28th, 2024 19:55
  • () This is nicely written, and the rhythm is spot on. Excellent!
    August 28th, 2024 19:44
  • () I agree with you. I also pray. This world can be so cruel. I enjoyed...
    August 28th, 2024 19:41
  • Ten Very Small Poems (MendedFences27) So, poetry can be found in a flea market. This Sunday I\'m going to the...
    August 27th, 2024 20:26
  • () Great poem! The Lord is our strength!
    August 27th, 2024 15:32
  • () Don\'t burn out, my friend. Love endures. Don\'t let your light dim out,...
    August 27th, 2024 08:20
  • () Since I love the rain, these lines are true to me, \"Rain from those that...
    August 27th, 2024 08:16
  • Society (Tony36) Indeed! We live in an America that has lost its bearing. Excellent...
    August 27th, 2024 08:13
  • () This is a beautiful elegy. I\'m a grandpa and I love my grandchildren. So,...
    August 26th, 2024 19:11
  • () Why be stingy; just give it all. This is so nicely done I enjoyed reading...
    August 25th, 2024 18:14
  • () Your poem is a work of art. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing
    August 25th, 2024 17:57
  • () Indeed! Life is tough, but God has given us the strength to endure and...
    August 25th, 2024 17:53
  • () This is a beautiful poem. The title is a poem by itself. I enjoyed...
    August 25th, 2024 17:52
  • Roots (Sorenbarrett) This is something to think about. Thou shall not judge, but we do it...
    August 23rd, 2024 20:21
  • Homework (Tony36) I enjoyed it. I remember all the reading I had to do, but it was worth it....
    August 23rd, 2024 20:18
  • () It is not only you... I love the rain, too. I\'ve written many poems about...
    August 21st, 2024 19:48
  • () Excellent write. I, too, enjoy the winter months, especially when the snow...
    August 21st, 2024 19:42
  • Why? (Rrodriguez) Thank you for reading my poem. I was musing about different things, and I...
    August 21st, 2024 19:41
  • () We all have dreams that keep us wishing for and striving for them. This is...
    August 21st, 2024 18:33
  • () Nicely done! Loved the rhyme scheme. Thank you for sharing.
    August 20th, 2024 20:19
  • L.O.V.E. (Love) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Nice done. I see you do acrostics, too. Check out the one I did with the...
    August 19th, 2024 20:47
  • () I don\'t like the fact that if I want to share a poem, there\'s a string...
    August 18th, 2024 17:41
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    August 18th, 2024 17:40
  • () Yes, love never fails. To excellent piece, Tony. Be blessed.
    August 18th, 2024 17:40
  • () This is quite a nice written poem. As you\'ve noticed, I enjoyed writing...
    August 18th, 2024 17:39
  • () Tell her, don\'t wait. Life won\'t jwait fo you. Be blessed. Excellent...
    August 18th, 2024 17:37
  • () I hope this poem is just a poem, not any experience you lived. This is...
    August 18th, 2024 15:09
  • Blame is on Me (Diana .) Don\'t blame yourself, things happen. It\'s not your fault. Be gentle to...
    August 11th, 2024 02:42
  • () Nicely done, my friend. How poetic your verses are. I read your poem with...
    August 10th, 2024 21:01
  • () Yes, this is the way God designed marriage. You may not have meant that,...
    August 10th, 2024 17:32
  • () Yes, this is the way God designed marriage. You may not have meant that,...
    August 10th, 2024 17:32
  • () Indeed, you will. Excellent job. I enjoyed its flow and message.
    August 10th, 2024 15:42
  • Gratitude (Cassie58) Excellent! Poignant message! Thank you for sharing. Be bleseed!
    August 7th, 2024 20:26
  • To My Sister: 姐姐 (Olive Anderson) I can relate to your poem. I have three sisters, and I do have many...
    August 7th, 2024 20:23
  • Trapped (Tony36) Tony, many people feel that way. The modern world is full of strife and...
    August 7th, 2024 20:20
  • Blue Song at Night (MendedFences27) This is quite a tale that can be transformed into a micro-story. I liked...
    August 7th, 2024 20:16
  • () I enjoyed it very much. The message you shared was spot on. Excellent.
    August 6th, 2024 08:03
  • To Know your Heart (𓆩Mase𓆪) This poem sounds philosophical. I enjoyed reading it It sounds so...
    August 5th, 2024 12:02
  • () This poem reminded me of Psalm 51. Excellent!
    August 5th, 2024 06:47
  • Perfect (Sorenbarrett) Indeed! Perfect! I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
    August 1st, 2024 19:20
  • () Cute!
    July 28th, 2024 19:59
  • () This poem is captivating. I enjoyed reading it and thinking about its...
    July 28th, 2024 17:14
  • After throwing a smooth pebble in the lake (Rrodriguez) Thank you for your kind comments. I labored quite a bit to put it...
    November 28th, 2022 22:53
  • With the one that I love (Crowns4Christ) With the one I love I remember the day when two hearts linked two...
    November 22nd, 2022 09:36
  • Weathering the Storm (Crowns4Christ) I enjoyed reading your poem. It brought to mind Jesus\' words, \"I have...
    November 22nd, 2022 09:02
  • Centipede scare (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
    November 10th, 2022 15:02
  • Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
    November 10th, 2022 14:57
  • Just One Great Thing (ForeverJesus7) Awesome! You\'ve expressed what I\'d like to do. I want to make an impact.
    October 8th, 2022 16:59
  • Moonlit Night (Dr. Soma) Excellent! I enjoy the moonlit nights, too. Thank you for sharing.
    September 23rd, 2022 12:09
  • Questions About the Rain (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) I enjoyed your rain poem. I want to invite you to read Please Don\'t Stop...
    September 16th, 2022 15:01
  • Egg On Your Face (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) How do I like my eggs? Well, that\'s a good question. You certainly did an...
    September 15th, 2022 14:07
  • After a Long Weekend Blues (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) This is fun to listen and to watch video. Thank you for sharing.
    September 15th, 2022 14:04
  • Swan Lake (Bella Shepard) Very thoughtful of you to write this fine piece. Bravo!
    May 21st, 2022 15:23
  • Coffee (Rozina) I\'m sitting here drinking my exquisite cup of coffee pondering my next...
    May 17th, 2022 07:58
  • Try To Remember (Bella Shepard) Excellent flow and thought pattern. Thank you for sharing it with us.
    May 13th, 2022 14:16
  • Be still (Crowns4Christ) Thank you for your faith full poem. These are times when we need messages...
    April 12th, 2022 18:41
  • Can\'t Sit Still! (Christina8) Enjoy vacay and have lots of fun while at it 😜.
    April 12th, 2022 15:11
  • portrait of grandpa (Dahlia) Loved it. I\'m a grandpa and I can relate to being asleep in la-la land....
    April 11th, 2022 18:13
  • tulip\'s twilight (Crystal Hope) This is so rhythmical and the images it invokes are so compelling. Thank...
    April 11th, 2022 18:10
  • Within us (Crowns4Christ) WE need that light to be shining always in our lives. Thank you for your...
    April 11th, 2022 18:07
  • Shining Love. (Goldfinch60) Wow, this reminded me of how love encompasses every aspect of our life...
    April 11th, 2022 13:25
  • Judas\' Journeying (Orchidee) Excellent rendition of the betrayal of history. Thank you for sharing....
    April 11th, 2022 13:22
  • The Day Has Come (Crowns4Christ) I sure want to be on the right side. The world situation is fast...
    March 25th, 2022 15:52
  • Only One Light (Elizabeth Vitale Stories) Would somebody get more lights for Elizabeth? Maybe a flood light will do....
    March 25th, 2022 13:22
  • Nameless (Fay Slimm.) This is quite a poem. It reminded me of In Flanders Fields by John McCrae....
    March 25th, 2022 12:41
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