Comments on community poems by rrodriguez
- Self Beating (Anthony Hanible)
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing....
April 17th, 2025 21:02 - No3 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
This is cute... Loved it!
April 16th, 2025 20:21 - BUTTERFLY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Nicely done! I enjoyed your metaphor of the child and the butterfly,...
April 12th, 2025 12:00 - You Get Out What You Put In (Poetic Licence)
Cute and clever playfulness, with a touch of wit. I liked it!
April 12th, 2025 11:56 - Empty Thoughts (Cassie58)
Cassie, this is beautifully written. Your words glide and soar with each...
April 11th, 2025 19:49 - Smile (Poetic Licence)
Insightful!
April 6th, 2025 15:16 - Too much (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, your poem, \'Too Much,\' is indeed the lot we all share. But life...
April 5th, 2025 18:03 - Poems in the wind (Sorenbarrett)
Beautiful!
March 29th, 2025 19:57 - ()
This sounds surreal. Excellent write! I\'ve read it several times to take...
September 25th, 2024 15:51 - ()
Thank you for sharing. Indeed, nature has its cycles. This line caught my...
September 25th, 2024 15:48 - Pastures In The Sky (Cassie58)
Cassie, the title of your poem is amazing. The simile of your eyes...
September 19th, 2024 07:46 - What I left behind (Sorenbarrett)
I want to leave a blessing. I believe you did so too. I enjoyed reading...
September 18th, 2024 19:05 - ()
Tony, I can see the lanterns floating through the night sky lighting the...
September 18th, 2024 18:59 - Once a mighty tree (Sorenbarrett)
I love trees. Living in an island like Puerto Rico, trees are everywhere....
September 17th, 2024 20:40 - ()
This is an excellent tribute to your friend\'s dad. I enjoyed reading the...
September 17th, 2024 20:35 - Dark Night (Tony36)
Indeed! Nerves are tight. I\'m going to move to a place like that....
September 17th, 2024 20:27 - ()
This poem is so poignant! I enjoyed reading it and thinking about its...
September 15th, 2024 18:45 - ()
Love it!
September 15th, 2024 18:43 - Longing (Senryu) (Rrodriguez)
Thank you for your observation. Haiku deals with nature and senryu deals...
September 8th, 2024 16:22 - STUCK (Adnan it is)
So, if you awake up, you\'ve not stuck. But if you\'re still stuck, then...
September 6th, 2024 20:55 - MIDNIGHT DARKNESS (Qurrathul Ain)
This is one of my favorite subjects to write about, the stars. You\'ve...
September 6th, 2024 19:50 - Life (Rhmn_7)
I enjoyed reading your poem and thought about the many times that I wanted...
September 5th, 2024 06:43 - A gentle presence (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
This is, indeed , a short story nicely written. The scene is marvelous and...
September 5th, 2024 06:33 - ()
Nicely done, my friend. I must step back and find a better perspective to...
September 4th, 2024 20:42 - ()
I like the rhythm and the rhyme. Thanks for sharing it.
September 4th, 2024 20:35 - THE MOON NEVER KNEW THE SUN (Qurrathul Ain)
I enjoy the sun and the moon. I\'ve written about them, too. This piece is...
September 4th, 2024 20:32 - ()
Well, this is the place to do that. Pour out yourself in this forum...
September 2nd, 2024 20:31 - A LOVE LIKE KHADIJA AND MUHAMMAD\'s (Qurrathul Ain)
Your comment about the poem is excellent. It could be written into a poem....
September 2nd, 2024 20:21 - ()
This is the personification of Christian values. Loved it!
September 2nd, 2024 20:14 - ()
August 29th, 2024 19:34 - ()
Sure is fun to enjoy nature. This was a treat. Thanks!
August 29th, 2024 19:34 - Mankind\'s Evolution (MendedFences27)
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t...
August 29th, 2024 19:33 - ()
Truth like clay, can be pliable, but I believe truth is an absolute. I...
August 29th, 2024 15:58 - NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain)
Love goes farther than that. Love is limitless. This is a beautiful poem...
August 28th, 2024 20:23 - THREAD AND NEEDLE (Qurrathul Ain)
I like the first stanza. Let\'s work to mend this broken world. We can do...
August 28th, 2024 20:20 - Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude ) (MendedFences27)
Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.
August 28th, 2024 19:55 - ()
This is nicely written, and the rhythm is spot on. Excellent!
August 28th, 2024 19:44 - ()
I agree with you. I also pray. This world can be so cruel. I enjoyed...
August 28th, 2024 19:41 - Ten Very Small Poems (MendedFences27)
So, poetry can be found in a flea market. This Sunday I\'m going to the...
August 27th, 2024 20:26 - ()
Great poem! The Lord is our strength!
August 27th, 2024 15:32 - ()
Don\'t burn out, my friend. Love endures. Don\'t let your light dim out,...
August 27th, 2024 08:20 - ()
Since I love the rain, these lines are true to me, \"Rain from those that...
August 27th, 2024 08:16 - Society (Tony36)
Indeed! We live in an America that has lost its bearing. Excellent...
August 27th, 2024 08:13 - ()
This is a beautiful elegy. I\'m a grandpa and I love my grandchildren. So,...
August 26th, 2024 19:11 - ()
Why be stingy; just give it all. This is so nicely done I enjoyed reading...
August 25th, 2024 18:14 - ()
Your poem is a work of art. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing
August 25th, 2024 17:57 - ()
Indeed! Life is tough, but God has given us the strength to endure and...
August 25th, 2024 17:53 - ()
This is a beautiful poem. The title is a poem by itself. I enjoyed...
August 25th, 2024 17:52 - Roots (Sorenbarrett)
This is something to think about. Thou shall not judge, but we do it...
August 23rd, 2024 20:21 - Homework (Tony36)
I enjoyed it. I remember all the reading I had to do, but it was worth it....
August 23rd, 2024 20:18 - ()
It is not only you... I love the rain, too. I\'ve written many poems about...
August 21st, 2024 19:48 - ()
Excellent write. I, too, enjoy the winter months, especially when the snow...
August 21st, 2024 19:42 - Why? (Rrodriguez)
Thank you for reading my poem. I was musing about different things, and I...
August 21st, 2024 19:41 - ()
We all have dreams that keep us wishing for and striving for them. This is...
August 21st, 2024 18:33 - ()
Nicely done! Loved the rhyme scheme. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2024 20:19 - L.O.V.E. (Love) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Nice done. I see you do acrostics, too. Check out the one I did with the...
August 19th, 2024 20:47 - ()
I don\'t like the fact that if I want to share a poem, there\'s a string...
August 18th, 2024 17:41 - ()
August 18th, 2024 17:40 - ()
Yes, love never fails. To excellent piece, Tony. Be blessed.
August 18th, 2024 17:40 - ()
This is quite a nice written poem. As you\'ve noticed, I enjoyed writing...
August 18th, 2024 17:39 - ()
Tell her, don\'t wait. Life won\'t jwait fo you. Be blessed. Excellent...
August 18th, 2024 17:37 - ()
I hope this poem is just a poem, not any experience you lived. This is...
August 18th, 2024 15:09 - Blame is on Me (Diana .)
Don\'t blame yourself, things happen. It\'s not your fault. Be gentle to...
August 11th, 2024 02:42 - ()
Nicely done, my friend. How poetic your verses are. I read your poem with...
August 10th, 2024 21:01 - ()
Yes, this is the way God designed marriage. You may not have meant that,...
August 10th, 2024 17:32 - ()
Yes, this is the way God designed marriage. You may not have meant that,...
August 10th, 2024 17:32 - ()
Indeed, you will. Excellent job. I enjoyed its flow and message.
August 10th, 2024 15:42 - Gratitude (Cassie58)
Excellent! Poignant message! Thank you for sharing. Be bleseed!
August 7th, 2024 20:26 - To My Sister: 姐姐 (Olive Anderson)
I can relate to your poem. I have three sisters, and I do have many...
August 7th, 2024 20:23 - Trapped (Tony36)
Tony, many people feel that way. The modern world is full of strife and...
August 7th, 2024 20:20 - Blue Song at Night (MendedFences27)
This is quite a tale that can be transformed into a micro-story. I liked...
August 7th, 2024 20:16 - ()
I enjoyed it very much. The message you shared was spot on. Excellent.
August 6th, 2024 08:03 - To Know your Heart (𓆩Mase𓆪)
This poem sounds philosophical. I enjoyed reading it
It sounds so...
August 5th, 2024 12:02 - ()
This poem reminded me of Psalm 51. Excellent!
August 5th, 2024 06:47 - Perfect (Sorenbarrett)
Indeed! Perfect! I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
August 1st, 2024 19:20 - ()
Cute!
July 28th, 2024 19:59 - ()
This poem is captivating. I enjoyed reading it and thinking about its...
July 28th, 2024 17:14 - After throwing a smooth pebble in the lake (Rrodriguez)
Thank you for your kind comments. I labored quite a bit to put it...
November 28th, 2022 22:53 - With the one that I love (Crowns4Christ)
With the one I love
I remember the day when two hearts linked
two...
November 22nd, 2022 09:36 - Weathering the Storm (Crowns4Christ)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It brought to mind Jesus\' words, \"I have...
November 22nd, 2022 09:02 - Centipede scare (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02 - Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57 - Just One Great Thing (ForeverJesus7)
Awesome! You\'ve expressed what I\'d like to do. I want to make an impact.
October 8th, 2022 16:59 - Moonlit Night (Dr. Soma)
Excellent! I enjoy the moonlit nights, too. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 12:09 - Questions About the Rain (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
I enjoyed your rain poem. I want to invite you to read Please Don\'t Stop...
September 16th, 2022 15:01 - Egg On Your Face (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
How do I like my eggs? Well, that\'s a good question. You certainly did an...
September 15th, 2022 14:07 - After a Long Weekend Blues (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
This is fun to listen and to watch video. Thank you for sharing.
September 15th, 2022 14:04 - Swan Lake (Bella Shepard)
Very thoughtful of you to write this fine piece. Bravo!
May 21st, 2022 15:23 - Coffee (Rozina)
I\'m sitting here drinking my exquisite cup of coffee pondering my next...
May 17th, 2022 07:58 - Try To Remember (Bella Shepard)
Excellent flow and thought pattern. Thank you for sharing it with us.
May 13th, 2022 14:16 - Be still (Crowns4Christ)
Thank you for your faith full poem. These are times when we need messages...
April 12th, 2022 18:41 - Can\'t Sit Still! (Christina8)
Enjoy vacay and have lots of fun while at it 😜.
April 12th, 2022 15:11 - portrait of grandpa (Dahlia)
Loved it. I\'m a grandpa and I can relate to being asleep in la-la land....
April 11th, 2022 18:13 - tulip\'s twilight (Crystal Hope)
This is so rhythmical and the images it invokes are so compelling. Thank...
April 11th, 2022 18:10 - Within us (Crowns4Christ)
WE need that light to be shining always in our lives. Thank you for your...
April 11th, 2022 18:07 - Shining Love. (Goldfinch60)
Wow, this reminded me of how love encompasses every aspect of our life...
April 11th, 2022 13:25 - Judas\' Journeying (Orchidee)
Excellent rendition of the betrayal of history. Thank you for sharing....
April 11th, 2022 13:22 - The Day Has Come (Crowns4Christ)
I sure want to be on the right side. The world situation is fast...
March 25th, 2022 15:52 - Only One Light (Elizabeth Vitale Stories)
Would somebody get more lights for Elizabeth? Maybe a flood light will do....
March 25th, 2022 13:22 - Nameless (Fay Slimm.)
This is quite a poem. It reminded me of In Flanders Fields by John McCrae....
March 25th, 2022 12:41
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