Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- The Aging Flame (Vickie)
\'My flame bends but no longer dances
Ashamed
It\'s beauty
...
November 2nd, 2021 04:57 - Garden (Not)
like the way you kept that sarcastic poetic voice, all the way through the...
November 2nd, 2021 04:45 - exhaustion’s hymn (Robin jayne)
\'i am tired of pretending to do backstrokes against the current of the...
November 2nd, 2021 04:36 - Kitchen Canvas (Sonoran Bard)
😨
now that\'s, what I call True Horror! lol
thanks for sharing, fun...
November 2nd, 2021 04:18 - Shared memories (Jeremy Leach)
wonderfully written, thanks for sharing
November 2nd, 2021 04:17 - You Are Not The Sea (MDStone)
wonderfully and meaningfully expressive
imbued with an important message,...
November 2nd, 2021 04:16 - Stumbling (Hyane)
this succinct write
not only works, as a stand alone immersive poem
but,...
November 2nd, 2021 04:14 - a subtle obsidian symphony (Mermaid)
\'an econobox of flint isolation
(a small car\'s spark of stifling...
November 2nd, 2021 04:06 - Storm Petrel Rising (Neville)
even all the way, from here
deep in our islander\'s, naïve existence...
November 1st, 2021 07:31 - Too Long (Fay Slimm.)
its funny, but here
in our blinkered
concrete of a curtained-off, city...
November 1st, 2021 07:23 - The Glory Of My LIfe. (Goldfinch60)
\'the greatest wisdom
is in finding the shards of beauty
amongst
the...
November 1st, 2021 06:57 - One Last Night (Scebrynski)
(read your words and my mind went back
to the music and lyrics I shared...
November 1st, 2021 06:51 - somewhere else (Dusk arising)
indeed,
its only indifference
if we first admit - our awareness;
until...
November 1st, 2021 06:44 - Question Of Existence (Satishverma)
\'You cannot take your Life, without
the witness of water.\'
(even that...
November 1st, 2021 06:37 - I HAVE YOUR SHADOW (Shadow424)
that last stanza is just beautiful, thanks for sharing
it\'s such a...
November 1st, 2021 06:29 - It’s painful (Spilleronsheet)
an impactful write, imbued with such sincerity
thanks for sharing, dear...
November 1st, 2021 06:23 - I Can\'t Tell You (Eseehcgnirts)
impassioned, to say the least..
thanks for sharing
November 1st, 2021 06:21 - Final Draft (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
be it fable, allegory or parable
its only Hubris
that has us convinced,...
November 1st, 2021 06:19 - Short Straw (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'A jazz musician
wonders back\'..
Ha! seems Autumn\'s melancholic...
November 1st, 2021 06:01 - A Last Dance (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Her steps become a
garden path
her breath a fragrance
o’er the...
November 1st, 2021 05:58 - To Rise Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
Amen!
November 1st, 2021 05:55 - Faith In The Wind (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I imagine if Walt Whitman
was to rewrite
his ode to his beloved America...
November 1st, 2021 05:53 - One-Way Mirrors (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant!
November 1st, 2021 05:45 - Mourning Dove (Kurt Philip Behm)
beautiful!
\'that Aurora, chance
of a refreshed perspective
to glean a...
November 1st, 2021 05:44 - How It Feels To Lose Your Skin (Alex Arnot)
as morbid a read as I\'ve come across, but still
what can\'t be argued is...
November 1st, 2021 05:35 - A Moment\'s Paradise (Krutarth)
really well written, thanks for sharing
November 1st, 2021 05:20 - Bronze Age (John Prophet)
I don\'t know, dear poet
if you compare the past and the present
a lot...
November 1st, 2021 05:11 - My girl (Job Welime)
bars for days, thanks for sharing
\'Poets tell of paths, that cross
and...
October 29th, 2021 06:31 - Protocol (Paul Bell)
A great write!
thanks for choosing to share,
really clever!
I can...
October 29th, 2021 06:23 - Poetry at sea (Poetic Dan)
indeed, just like your ecstatic words of rhyme
celebrating, those simple...
October 29th, 2021 06:12 - I Wrote Of You (Garth Rakumakoe)
we must dream, to find our aim
we must aim, so as to aspire
then maybe,...
October 29th, 2021 06:05 - Forced (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m still a fan of this picture, dear Fay
so menacing, so Nature: so...
October 29th, 2021 06:03 - The wrong train (Spilleronsheet)
needs a little editing, but your beautiful message is still delivered:...
October 29th, 2021 05:57 - Inconsequential Gulls (Neville)
.. and all
chasing crumbs
leaching off, of
society\'s...
October 29th, 2021 05:47 - a low life (Dusk arising)
I relate so well with your words
as a child, I was a sickly kid
and had...
October 29th, 2021 05:38 - I Paid For That! (Goldfinch60)
its a catch-22, kinda situation
as I understand it, either the...
October 29th, 2021 05:25 - I Am Woman (Rozina)
Beautiful!
sing your Truth
thanks for sharing, such an empowering read
October 29th, 2021 05:14 - City (KarvelD)
really well written, with imagery empowered to bring to life the nightmare...
October 29th, 2021 05:12 - I\'ve already been; (HannahElisabeth)
(when reading such raw and powerful poetry, sometimes
all I can do is try...
October 29th, 2021 05:07 - Heart Sickness (Doll in Wonderland)
suffering is contagious, so be careful
of what you invite into your...
October 29th, 2021 04:41 - Home (Lil_Angel2021)
that home we\'re all seemingly searching for..
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:39 - But He Wasn\'t Real (Cali Kittana)
such a detailed and stark accounting of a seemingly monumental,...
October 29th, 2021 04:33 - only nature shall survive (SureshG)
well written,
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:28 - JOURNEY OF WORDS (Shadow424)
what a wonderful ambience you\'ve managed to build, in such a short...
October 29th, 2021 04:26 - Nobody. (Kitty the naughty poet)
sometimes, when climbing
our mirage abyss of all-things bleak
in a long,...
October 29th, 2021 04:20 - Sometimes, on windy days, one needs to find more stuff to weigh down trash cans (Gary Edward Geraci)
\'A, technology
Spring clean, in gusty Autumn
your, new...
October 29th, 2021 04:08 - Drowning (Scebrynski)
strong imagery,
maximised that classic metaphor really well..
thanks...
October 29th, 2021 04:01 - The Hungry Beast (Jack Cohen)
showcased that eternal dialogue, poetic voice
really well, the duality of...
October 29th, 2021 03:51 - A Dew On the Petal (Krutarth)
wonderful read, really like the title
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 03:47 - Mouth My Name Slow (Neville)
or count to 3 and allow me to create distance,
so as to step, back...
October 28th, 2021 04:49 - Enlightenment #2 (Neville)
sadly, its only when we witness
the truly good, among us
leave - behind,...
October 28th, 2021 04:43 - BRUSHSTROKES (T. Boston)
well written,
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 04:25 - Making Plain (Fay Slimm.)
what a captivating first line
as our enticing introduction,
to a...
October 28th, 2021 04:12 - Friend or Foe (Romain J)
like the distilled simplicity, well written
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 04:07 - Good Times FIB (Goldfinch60)
great fun, Andy
a wonderful showcasing of your poetic range
October 28th, 2021 04:05 - Tell her,, (Job Welime)
again, just a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 04:02 - I: Waking (Doll in Wonderland)
belonging, is a tricky concept
when we think we\'ve found our place,...
October 28th, 2021 04:00 - We heal one another (Lyriclitty)
that melted gold of goodness
bridging the gaps in our fallible...
October 28th, 2021 03:50 - We Live in a Wicked world. (The BlackShakespeare)
I kinda think its pathetic
this pick-n-mix ethics
we\'ve collectively,...
October 28th, 2021 03:37 - heart2 (Jark)
good read, not sure I have the required IQ to understand it all though,...
October 28th, 2021 03:18 - Soft (H.R.Powell)
seeking a mode of escape
is natural,
utilising the concept of shedding...
October 28th, 2021 03:14 - To my best friend (By.anonymous)
beautiful, thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 03:05 - Humane (SureshG)
sadly, we are what we are
but at least
we have some, choice
in what we...
October 28th, 2021 03:01 - I love you, and I\'m sorry. (Zyphril)
I laud the vulnerable veracity of your accessible wording,
and brave...
October 28th, 2021 02:57 - Lullaby (Krutarth)
I like your concept
blending in nature\'s nocturnal sounds
as a...
October 28th, 2021 02:49 - Dwell (Sonoran Bard)
\'To dwell by the river and watch it pass.
To sit on the bank and find...
October 28th, 2021 02:42 - Peace (Eugene)
well written and poignantly paced, thanks for sharing
(especially like...
October 28th, 2021 02:37 - Realising Who I Was (Cheyenne Smith)
good for you!
love the self owned, positivity
shine bright, sister
do...
October 26th, 2021 06:17 - SPACE (T. Boston)
well written, thanks for sharing
October 26th, 2021 06:16 - Language of Nature (Vamsi Sudha)
that extensive insight of a poet,
distilling: succinct
the ubiquitous...
October 26th, 2021 06:06 - Dad\'s Back. (Goldfinch60)
beautiful, message!
indeed, if we choose to live our life
draped, in...
October 26th, 2021 06:00 - Grey (Andrew5yungk)
you have a wonderful gift for free flowing rhythm,
thanks for sharing, a...
October 26th, 2021 05:52 - The Night\'s Play (Krutarth)
wonderful and clever
a good read, thanks for sharing
October 26th, 2021 05:48 - Exit (Krutarth)
really well written,
thanks for choosing to share
October 26th, 2021 05:47 - Footsteps (Aniahmator)
wonderful use of accessible imagery,
thanks for sharing
October 26th, 2021 05:41 - Green Eyes (Scebrynski)
yeah, I too think its all in eyes
our passageway to a meaningful...
October 26th, 2021 05:37 - Forgiveness (Notformymother)
indeed, that\'s when all the healing
can begin!
thanks for sharing
October 26th, 2021 05:35 - eat the rich (Jark)
when we refuse ourselves
our capacity for self awareness,
all anyone...
October 26th, 2021 05:34 - Lovebirds (Jay-Lee Jane)
wonderfully fun, thanks for sharing
October 26th, 2021 05:31 - \"Unworthy\" (Berina)
let it all out
just like a skin, you need to shed
so as to insure your...
October 26th, 2021 05:25 - I Need No Eye (ADarkerMind)
\'not for the sellers arm, left right or tooth,
can I walk unaided,...
October 26th, 2021 05:17 - Three Kicks The Mule (ADarkerMind)
wonderfully fun!
reminding us, that before we thought-up
Sci-Fi\'s...
October 26th, 2021 05:11 - When Every Thing Was All (ADarkerMind)
I hope the lady you\'re celebrating in this ode, is worthy of your...
October 26th, 2021 05:03 - Sing Loud The Counted Day\'s (ADarkerMind)
\'breathless men in glass-house womb
more wounded than the sky;
where...
October 26th, 2021 04:54 - When Autumn Breathed Her Silence (ADarkerMind)
\'each day I walk, as blind
as veins to the watermark,
tinned-torso...
October 26th, 2021 04:46 - whine (Robin jayne)
and like fine Wine
your words, dance
on the tips of our poetic taste...
October 26th, 2021 04:28 - Friends to lovers (can we be just friends?) (Ajax (he/xe))
Be!
the Best, friend you can be
to that person,
which means, allowing...
October 26th, 2021 04:19 - New Life. (Paul Bell)
Brilliant!
\'She cut the ties
The good, The bad
The...
October 26th, 2021 04:15 - Sad Clown (Sad Clown)
sadness, outlined and emoted
as clear, as it can be..
thanks for sharing
October 26th, 2021 04:00 - The gaze still remains (The_leaf008)
like how open and honest you are
thanks for sharing,
(Why can\'t *I* see...
October 26th, 2021 03:44 - The autumn in me (SriVi)
wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing
October 25th, 2021 07:03 - Wish upon (Spilleronsheet)
even devoid of theological alignment;
this is a brilliantly...
October 25th, 2021 06:41 - Breakfast Rituals (Neville)
so like, this intoxicating feeling - here
we\'re experiencing
after...
October 25th, 2021 06:39 - Soaking in Silence (Thejaswini)
well written,
thanks for sharing
October 25th, 2021 06:29 - People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60)
its all lost in the: \'meaning\'...
we are seeing the consequences f this...
October 25th, 2021 06:26 - AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards)
I am a huge fan
of form, being utilised to accentuate an aspect
of the...
October 25th, 2021 06:09 - FIRST LIGHT CONTEMPLATION (Vamsi Sudha)
love the Vivacious positivity!
thanks for sharing
October 25th, 2021 05:04 - No straight lines (Jeremy Leach)
loved the way you centred the \'sigh\'
aesthetically inventive, but...
October 25th, 2021 05:02 - Holiday Season (Scebrynski)
yeah, those seemingly minuscule actions
we harper back to, in the...
October 25th, 2021 04:58 - Bridge Collapses (Satishverma)
milk of our Truth\'s
as sinew threads, bridging
our nightmares and...
October 25th, 2021 04:42
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