Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Hive Mind (John Prophet)
and all, by design
Hive minded = easier, to Herd
minimising...
November 16th, 2021 05:05 - How significant am I? (Jane Walker)
\'Food bought
eaten, less hurled
Food bought, eaten
less hurled
Food...
November 16th, 2021 04:52 - The Wind Knows (Garth Rakumakoe)
\'of hearts\' feeble whispers
or is it a victory to deceit?
Throughout...
November 15th, 2021 08:26 - Visit to outside (Spilleronsheet)
lol, I\'m sorry
I couldn\'t help but find humour in your wry cynicism, of...
November 15th, 2021 08:19 - dark august days (Dusk arising)
Brilliant!
November 15th, 2021 08:12 - Fight, Flight. (Kitty the naughty poet)
\'Sorrow spills from concealed ailments,
as I lay
amongst my shattered...
November 15th, 2021 07:41 - /// (Angela-a)
realisation\'s: painful curse, of a waning
imagination;
a mourning for...
November 15th, 2021 07:34 - All Love (Job Welime)
\'When your laugh, moved me
when your smile, outlined
my happiness...
November 15th, 2021 07:18 - The Novice Criminal (Rozina)
how sobering, a read
when those we Intrust
at our most, weakest
choose,...
November 15th, 2021 07:11 - Backgammon To Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
lol
such a fun rea!
loved, how you captured the tone really well
in...
November 15th, 2021 07:03 - The God of all Creation (Nicholas Browning)
Brilliant!
you\'ve so very cleverly - outlined
the hypocrisy
in our...
November 15th, 2021 06:57 - Snowfall (Beary1112)
a poetic \'Snowflake\'
of owned accountability\'s
purposed Poetry...
November 15th, 2021 06:29 - Unrequited (Melellendixon)
another sincere wording
of such relatable feelings
and I really...
November 15th, 2021 06:23 - 11/14/2021 (CLM)
yeah, I know these sentiments
very well
although I doubt, I could have...
November 15th, 2021 06:19 - Searching for Poison (Melellendixon)
\'When I eventually
came into the light, I searched
for new poison,...
November 15th, 2021 06:14 - My Story (Satishverma)
some poetry, just surpasses
whatever praise we could - ever, come up...
November 15th, 2021 05:58 - broken pieces (Jk)
of remnant fragments
that accumulate, to manifest
what warmth, we...
November 15th, 2021 05:51 - The Man of Sin (Yamen)
not sure, I even
fully comprehend
let alone - align, with your...
November 15th, 2021 05:32 - Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.)
\'in the now, we enrapture and grip
we celebrate
all the yesterday\'s,...
November 12th, 2021 06:24 - A Feeling of Betrayal (Cheyenne Smith)
manners and respect?
been a long time since I heard those words: enough...
November 12th, 2021 06:15 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards)
I like the wet paint signs
\'designed\' to blend-in
green on green
so...
November 12th, 2021 06:13 - Serene (Rozina)
an ode to serene
how serene... lol
forgive my silliness, this was such a...
November 12th, 2021 06:03 - Lovebirds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Brilliant!
November 12th, 2021 05:58 - Problems or Challenges? (Goldfinch60)
Amen!
November 12th, 2021 05:57 - I\'m thinking about you. (Job Welime)
\'While reading the phrases
you can find, A part of me
that lies:...
November 12th, 2021 05:42 - Galaxy (Miss Pain)
firstly thanks for the 🔞
and I just think, you write tighter rhymes...
November 12th, 2021 05:37 - Armistice (ForeverJesus7)
well written and informative, thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 05:33 - law of motion (Robin jayne)
great title, wonderfully penned again
thanks for sharing
\'my mind and...
November 12th, 2021 05:32 - my life is trash, i deserve a refund (AnxiousMane)
but you sure can express yourself, dear kindred soul
we\'ve all been...
November 12th, 2021 05:27 - Sparkling Passion (Cheyenne Smith)
reads like a wonderfully sincere dedication, maybe for an anniversary or...
November 12th, 2021 05:16 - Rose colored glasses (Peculiarly Lauren)
like the ingenuity in your form
a good read, thanks for sharing
(just...
November 12th, 2021 05:14 - Candles (Adventurine)
\'you never knew who i was
so you don\'t, know
how much i\'ve...
November 12th, 2021 05:09 - I shall not tether my heart to sorrow (Jeremy Leach)
love your wording and flow,
indeed, there\'s so much utility in...
November 12th, 2021 04:56 - what time is it? (Angela-a)
really well written
reads like a timely \'wake-up call\' for...
November 12th, 2021 04:51 - Girl in the Dark (Anna Colette)
sadly, you\'re not the first
nor will you be the last to utilise
books...
November 12th, 2021 04:48 - OREGON SNOW (Cecily)
a wonderful ode to Snow
thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 04:42 - INFATUATED (Andy Hunter)
great flow, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 04:29 - Sappho\'s Song of Peace (Kevin Michael Bloor)
more than your wonderfully rhythmic poetry
the level of detail and...
November 12th, 2021 04:27 - What if (Florence J)
\'The ‘what if’s’ of unrequited love.\'
sounds like a great title...
November 11th, 2021 05:35 - Attercop IV (Solar Impulse_1912)
distilled wisdom, in poetic form!
thanks for sharing, loved
your...
November 11th, 2021 05:32 - No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville)
\'white/blank space = opportunity
making its presence, felt...\'
a great...
November 11th, 2021 05:29 - I Speak (Satishverma)
I only wish I had the ears
to glean even half of your wisdom...
thank...
November 11th, 2021 05:18 - Shining Brightness. (Goldfinch60)
reads like a hymn, devoid of religious connotations,
a prayer of hope...
November 11th, 2021 05:03 - Dandelion (Spilleronsheet)
strange time of the year to read about Dandelions
but then again, the...
November 11th, 2021 04:43 - We Laugh. (The BlackShakespeare)
what Andy said!
a fun read, and thanks for sharing the positivity
a rare...
November 11th, 2021 04:37 - Come unto me (Jesse G.)
this is an antivirus cure
for those, who\'ve lost faith
in the meaning...
November 11th, 2021 04:34 - I’m an Airedale don’t you know (Jane Walker)
thank you for sharing,
simply a beautiful reading experience..
\'long,...
November 11th, 2021 04:18 - Fate #1 (Saxon Crow)
what\'s really pretentious
is knowing all of this
and still
Choosing,...
November 11th, 2021 04:11 - Once upon a dream (Miss Pain)
love the subtext beyond the narrative
for me, this is what female...
November 11th, 2021 04:04 - i don’t know you (Robin jayne)
Brilliant!
really appreciate how centred you poetic voice is becoming, a...
November 11th, 2021 03:58 - b. (Angela-a)
Brilliant!
(thank you, for choosing to share)
November 11th, 2021 03:40 - Rope. (Kitty the naughty poet)
less poetry, more
instruction manual
but still, undoubtedly
eloquently...
November 9th, 2021 05:53 - Left A Memory. (Goldfinch60)
through your poetry, I get to borrow
your perspective of life
even, if...
November 9th, 2021 05:40 - Revelations of 1945 (TheEnV)
not complicated at all,
don\'t worry about readers understanding \'your...
November 9th, 2021 05:38 - my time (Robin jayne)
\'and i have so much of it\'
I promise you, it only seems - that...
November 9th, 2021 05:29 - Escape (James Michael)
a wonderful read,
you poetry seems to have captured that oneness with...
November 9th, 2021 05:16 - Your own personal garden (Mae Spragg)
wonderful imagery, clever utilisation of form and poetic license
a great...
November 9th, 2021 05:11 - My life (Jayb_garang)
really well written, thanks for sharing
November 9th, 2021 05:08 - Unfinished work (Makoto Maruyama)
\'Eternity of *Serenity
It is the sea
mixed, with the sun\'..
each...
November 9th, 2021 05:06 - BIRTHDAY INSIDE AN EXPRESS TRAIN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'Alarm, set in the mobile phone,
started ringing exactly at 3 am....
November 9th, 2021 04:56 - Through The Battle (MDStone)
\'The landscape of my mind
Now and forever marred
You can’t unsee...
November 9th, 2021 04:37 - No one sees (EthanMac)
I understand these feelings you\'re expressing, so bravely
but, the most...
November 9th, 2021 04:34 - For Theo (Piggystardust)
a wonderfully expressive dedication, thanks for sharing
November 9th, 2021 04:20 - War is Not for Lovers (Neville)
what a brilliant bridge, between
narrative and commentary
in a single...
November 9th, 2021 04:14 - Tuesdays (Meg)
\'Feel like shit,
can\'t cope,
won\'t drink,
Can\'t smoke.
Who...
November 8th, 2021 08:05 - In Company of Angels (Accidental Poet)
a wonderfully warming read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 8th, 2021 07:51 - Blue Eyes (Lorna)
\'A gaze with a hook
That reeled me in
And a lasso round my heart
The...
November 8th, 2021 07:49 - The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay (Garth Rakumakoe)
an important write!
anything to reduce
our custom built cocoon of...
November 8th, 2021 07:41 - Rosy shades (Spilleronsheet)
this is how best to utilise, your capacity
for insightful empathy, dear...
November 8th, 2021 07:24 - intimacy (Dusk arising)
(after those few, nervous
first few time\'s
we soon forget, just how...
November 8th, 2021 07:13 - Misbehave. (Kitty the naughty poet)
a fun read, sensual
but light-hearted and playful
thanks for the 🔞,...
November 8th, 2021 06:55 - Tribute to a POET !!! (Vamsi Sudha)
.. \'with *Their* garnish\'..
let\'s choose: to be proactively...
November 8th, 2021 06:53 - Cooking Curse. (Goldfinch60)
yup, as a fellow foody
and intuitive enthusiast, in the kitchen
I too...
November 8th, 2021 06:45 - Acid Rainmaker (Arborb)
really well written, melodic poetry
and that\'s before, its been put to...
November 8th, 2021 06:29 - My poetic side. (The BlackShakespeare)
testimony: I fully concur!
thanks for sharing
(hope you see this,
November 8th, 2021 06:08 - Gifted Pain (Satishverma)
\'from the love
I entrusted
into, your once: forgiving hands\'..
(came,...
November 8th, 2021 06:03 - restless (Emptysundaze)
some, throw away the physical evidence
before dealing
with those...
November 8th, 2021 06:00 - Oh clock upon the wall (Ady123)
a wonderfully succinct, rhythmic write
thanks for sharing
November 8th, 2021 05:52 - Fear. (Chanel T.)
really well expressed and excavated;
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
November 8th, 2021 05:49 - When A Vagabond Loves (Pacifique Niyitanga)
simply, Brilliant!
what a wonderful fusion, of empathetic Poetic...
November 8th, 2021 05:47 - Dark Tides (Jack Cohen)
Brilliant!
what a polished work
of poetic first person, narrative...
November 8th, 2021 05:43 - Unfinished (Makoto Maruyama)
I would label this
\'an unruly: modern Tanka\'..
I love the sparse...
November 8th, 2021 05:29 - what i’ll do (Robin jayne)
people like that
are often, gifted and burdened
with that deepest...
November 8th, 2021 05:10 - The Truth (Sad Clown)
before we ever, tell a lie
we Must, first
convince ourselves of its...
November 8th, 2021 04:58 - Green (Lorna)
always enjoy it, when I read
about season\'s, the total opposite
of what...
November 8th, 2021 04:54 - Rest (James Alexander)
beautiful dedication, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
November 8th, 2021 04:50 - What\'re The Mazers Doing Next Door? (Eugene S.)
\'in a world so rejectful of the past.\'
\'Really, a gathering, of like...
November 8th, 2021 04:47 - The Sand And The Sea (Paul Bell)
we All live, a little
in-between,
between the waves of change
and our...
November 5th, 2021 06:05 - Linked (Fay Slimm.)
there\'s something comforting, knowing
this cycle of seasons we depend...
November 5th, 2021 05:57 - Unfinished (Makoto Maruyama)
yup, over time
some see their walls
get drowned out
by all those...
November 5th, 2021 05:45 - What\'s Beautiful (Mystic_isles)
concepts of Beauty
can only interfere in your life
if you yearn, for...
November 5th, 2021 05:33 - Spring Asunder (Nicholas Browning)
intriguing questions and theories, enjoyed the read, thanks for...
November 5th, 2021 05:24 - Little Jack Frost (Saxon Crow)
wonderfully penned,
such free flowing tempo and rhyme
a great read!...
November 5th, 2021 05:09 - Come Outside. (Goldfinch60)
those rare gifts in life
where with one, invading note
or a passage of...
November 5th, 2021 05:06 - ALL YOU NEED (Florence Red)
Beautiful!
and great use of repetition
with purposed meaning;
thanks...
November 5th, 2021 04:38 - Air (Haleyalexis)
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped -...
November 5th, 2021 04:34 - A Lit Up Sky (Krutarth)
\'welcoming tonight\'s orchestrated liberation,
And Expecting
the...
November 5th, 2021 04:28 - To love and to hurt (Disrespectfully nice)
firstly I love your pseudonym!
and thanks for sharing
a blunt depiction...
November 5th, 2021 04:23 - Gnarly Little Things (John Prophet)
Deep! dear poet
beware indeed,
they\'re in our bedroom\'s and mind\'s,...
November 5th, 2021 04:18 - FIRST BREATH (Shadow424)
intriguing, love the pacing
thanks for sharing
November 5th, 2021 04:12
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