Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- WHY DO I (Shayl)
well, at least
you can rhyme your suffering
clear enough
for us to...
October 25th, 2021 04:34 - godless nation (Jark)
admittedly, I can\'t relate any direct correlation
between your...
October 25th, 2021 04:16 - Loves First Kiss - A Villanelle (Dove)
nice execution
liked you highlighting the core elements in your...
October 25th, 2021 04:04 - TODAY (Seo Eun Hae)
nice!
and gift-wrapped in your accessible style..
thanks for sharing
October 25th, 2021 03:53 - Beauty (Mr.luvrman)
depends, on your perspective really?
is makeup and plastic surgery, the...
October 25th, 2021 03:50 - The Harbour (Lorna)
to toast, our whispered truth
of life\'s gifted hideouts
and those...
October 22nd, 2021 05:51 - The intrinsic value of words (Bill Smith Parker Sr.)
Art came before words
and Relatability, existed before Art
and here...
October 22nd, 2021 05:40 - Listeners (Fay Slimm.)
\'on some passing ideal where
behind screens
another reality exists...
October 22nd, 2021 05:30 - A Diamond in The Making (Neville)
oh now for the real - real, deep poetry like this
I gotta save it for my...
October 22nd, 2021 05:21 - Love (Anshibee)
a little dramatic, but I really liked the imagery
thanks for sharing, a...
October 22nd, 2021 05:11 - Grandpa’s girl (Ruqaiya)
wonderful dedication
thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2021 05:09 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards)
(I see your name, my friend
and a part of me, that exists in a taut...
October 22nd, 2021 05:06 - My Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Amen!
simply beautiful, dear Poet
October 22nd, 2021 04:46 - purple skies grumble (Dusk arising)
words: as a picturesque
postcard, snap shot
of autumnal,...
October 22nd, 2021 04:43 - Flames of October, (Writteninthestars)
wonderfully immersive imagery, and overall just so well...
October 22nd, 2021 04:33 - I’d Like To Think (Scebrynski)
unassumingly subtle in delivery
but acutely succinct, in its poignant...
October 22nd, 2021 04:27 - Driver Brother #1 (Bill Smith Parker Sr.)
definitely makes me interested in reading the series of poems its...
October 22nd, 2021 04:23 - UNSCRIPTED DAYS (Shadow424)
\'silhouettes
of grayness\'..
intriguing imagery, thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2021 04:18 - Pharmaceutical Russian roulette (Lyriclitty)
I like your use of repetition, to highlight the despair element in your...
October 22nd, 2021 04:16 - What is it i feel? (Idhji)
so impressive!
you literally infused that state of confusion
into the...
October 22nd, 2021 04:06 - What keeps me up at night (Camelot)
maybe its some pent-up anger or frustration,
or some other strong...
October 22nd, 2021 03:57 - Lost or gained? (Monica Slater)
if it only took thirty seven steps, or years
then that\'s a blessedly...
October 22nd, 2021 03:47 - Roses (Ajax (he/xe))
we can Choose, to shed our thorns
and still, be that wondrously blossomed...
October 22nd, 2021 03:39 - You can\'t love another if you don\'t love yourself - (Notformymother)
well written, bravely expressed
delivering an empowering message,
thanks...
October 22nd, 2021 03:34 - Gratitude (Berto V)
thank you! for choosing to share
like the raw feel, you\'ve managed to...
October 22nd, 2021 03:30 - should i compare (Dusk arising)
\'and turning to you, here, now, my chemotherapy
my own sultry,...
October 21st, 2021 07:15 - Smile (Romain J)
really well written, thanks for sharing
October 21st, 2021 07:04 - I Hope You Don\'t Lose It (Ishika Gautam)
wonderful, although the wording and levels of description were quite...
October 21st, 2021 06:37 - Mutation (Fay Slimm.)
sumptuously worded, yet again dear Fay
such a wonderful reading...
October 21st, 2021 06:20 - I want to be sexy, not sexualized (Lola)
a poetic voice, worth cultivating
already producing mature poetry, with...
October 21st, 2021 06:11 - Rest In Peace XXXTentacion (Cheyenne Smith)
may he rest in peace
October 21st, 2021 05:56 - I\'ve Been A Good Boy Today. (Goldfinch60)
nope, sorry I can\'t relate Andy
I actually look forward to doing some...
October 21st, 2021 05:54 - Two Days into Autumn (Neville)
lmao!
yeah, ain\'t nothing like life
to get in the way
of our...
October 21st, 2021 05:42 - unrest (Casper_the_ghost)
(a wonderful write, thanks for sharing and inspiring my little scribbled...
October 21st, 2021 05:35 - Why Some Roses Are Black (Satishverma)
maybe to survive, like Cleopatra?
A lady of power, at a Time
of sword...
October 21st, 2021 05:17 - Comfort In The Uncomfortable (Charisse Martin)
\'emotion\'s, as the unquantifiable overexcretions, of our...
October 21st, 2021 05:09 - Goodbye (Surfbunny)
profound!
thank you for choosing to share
October 21st, 2021 04:56 - Ashes (Dasim)
but still, living-on in these words
tasked with capturing, a Life...
October 21st, 2021 04:49 - Yes! (The BlackShakespeare)
brilliant fun, that can\'t distract from these hidden gems:
\'Yes,...
October 21st, 2021 04:45 - Peaceful Bed (Ishika Gautam)
\'The dirt you were covered with,
Messed up my explanation,
I slept...
October 21st, 2021 04:40 - The Pick (Sonoran Bard)
you\'ve developed your metaphor gradually with patience and insightful...
October 21st, 2021 04:28 - [ Odyssey ] (Heart of Babel)
\'And leave us feeling broken
But instead of ignoring them
Pretending...
October 21st, 2021 04:20 - The older man (By.anonymous)
wonderful, really smooth flow in your wording
thanks for sharing
October 21st, 2021 04:12 - Bright Lights and Roundabouts (ADarkerMind)
\'hours-glass
on the thin side of the knick-knack tree
pipes her...
October 21st, 2021 04:08 - A New Beginning (ADarkerMind)
when I was far too young, to remember age numbers,
there was a place we...
October 21st, 2021 03:59 - From Mountain To The Cage; (ADarkerMind)
\'The Fracking hands, as silent
as four winds, no stitch can...
October 21st, 2021 03:41 - I AND U (Seo Eun Hae)
cute and clever, but with purpose
thanks for sharing
October 19th, 2021 06:27 - Beautiful (Fay Slimm.)
who needs, an Astronaut\'s training or a plain ticket
to experience:...
October 19th, 2021 06:09 - Dirty Laugh (Neville)
I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond...
October 19th, 2021 06:04 - When I say I love you. (Job Welime)
if you\'re not - yet
a slam poet
its only a matter of time and poetic...
October 19th, 2021 05:53 - Gratitude (Jayasree)
indeed,
lets craft our future\'s wings, from the cobwebs we...
October 19th, 2021 05:46 - The Good In Life Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
its always a flip flop - of tipping, imbalance
on the scales of...
October 19th, 2021 05:42 - Maybe another night (Ajax (he/xe))
I just hope, for your sake
this is your expression of creativity, with...
October 19th, 2021 05:38 - You Were Within Me (Satishverma)
flowers,
imbued with the love, of those plagued
by the fate
of the...
October 19th, 2021 05:33 - Lost in Translation (HangingbyaHalo)
purposefully Bold language,
Insightfully immersive imagery,
bravely...
October 19th, 2021 05:25 - Icarus Down (Zemde)
Percy Bysshe Shelley, would have liked your poem, I think
I have no...
October 19th, 2021 05:14 - [ Authentic ] (Heart of Babel)
Brilliant!
these two verses, are my favourite from all your very best,...
October 19th, 2021 04:57 - Misunderstood (Ajax (he/xe))
indeed: no, its not
but what you make of yourself and the life ahead of...
October 19th, 2021 04:50 - Denial (Ishika Gautam)
\'Denial is what has the power,
And the easier shortcut way,
Why is it...
October 19th, 2021 04:46 - You almost made me cry (Camelot)
I too, sadly
was born with ashen deserts for tear ducts, so I...
October 19th, 2021 04:43 - My knight (V)
I prescribe you a listen of the song \'Therapy\' by the soulbird supreme,...
October 19th, 2021 04:35 - Logan (Quemis)
I consider it my good fortune and humbling honour, to have been given the...
October 19th, 2021 04:25 - Pursuit (Sonoran Bard)
\'We\' that\'s an everyone included, \'we\'
have reactionarily,...
October 19th, 2021 04:14 - No (MapleWillow)
\'but yes, for their to be togetherness
we need to all - re-learn:
the...
October 19th, 2021 04:00 - Bloodless (Paul Bell)
ha! great twist
(that\'s why in all my horror dreams
I play the role of...
October 19th, 2021 03:49 - Lost (Fay Slimm.)
... \' but not - defiantly!
my lost sense of self\'...
(many caged,...
October 18th, 2021 07:39 - I Envy (Spilleronsheet)
the truly absurd fact, is when you eventually get to realise
those very...
October 18th, 2021 07:26 - Insanity (Blakesager)
indeed, I recognise the struggle you depict with uneasy, clarity..
thank...
October 18th, 2021 07:21 - Breathe (Neville)
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride,...
October 18th, 2021 07:19 - Brotherly love (Jeremy Leach)
this is so poignantly heart-breaking,
I have stated many times
my...
October 18th, 2021 06:48 - Fire and Wood (Lorna)
your depiction of that ill-fated romance, displays a lot of...
October 18th, 2021 06:43 - An Individual Is A Community. (Goldfinch60)
so very True, dear poet
thanks for sharing your wisdom
October 18th, 2021 06:41 - CANDLE IN THE WIND (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'She has to
\'groom\'
herself, to face any tough situations
in...
October 18th, 2021 06:39 - MUSIC (Seo Eun Hae)
wonderful!
thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 06:19 - Fire drill (Ajax (he/xe))
wonderful depiction, a brave portrait of self discovery
\'when you...
October 18th, 2021 06:18 - Falling (James Michael)
... \'and when the pain recedes, enough
maybe even dare another: shaky...
October 18th, 2021 06:11 - Empyrean (John Prophet)
\'Universal
knowledge.
Learning.
Bungee
bounce back.
Back to
the...
October 18th, 2021 06:04 - From Thoughts To Thoughts (Satishverma)
Brilliant!!!
I read and learn: Guru
(the First Poet, was the first...
October 18th, 2021 05:34 - Antler (Panurgosss)
intriguing and well written, I liked your imagery and the fact that you...
October 18th, 2021 05:16 - A Lonely Thread (Nicholas Browning)
Brilliance, like this poem
needs no explanation,
it can only detract...
October 18th, 2021 05:10 - think of me as you would think of yourself ... (Cosmacpan)
there is nothing more underestimated, than \'simplicity\'
it takes a lot...
October 18th, 2021 05:04 - The Consequence of Existing (Charisse Martin)
its funny, we concuss ourselves trying to please
listening, to those
we...
October 18th, 2021 04:51 - Maybe He is the One (Mrharrell)
even devoid of any religious alignment,
I appreciate how well this is...
October 18th, 2021 04:38 - OPEN HEART (Michaelm)
good for you! its a hard choice to make to live life so bravely..
thanks...
October 18th, 2021 04:35 - Life Light (HangingbyaHalo)
wow!
let me first, thank you for choosing to share your brilliant...
October 18th, 2021 04:33 - InComplete (Jayy)
its crazy, how much our experience of life can differ
for example, some...
October 18th, 2021 04:24 - That time has come (Escaped Raven)
a surreal depiction, inducing us to traverse a unique reading...
October 18th, 2021 03:58 - Life (Perspectical)
indeed, then lets have fun
being the Sherlock, in our lives...
thanks...
October 15th, 2021 05:28 - TODAY I AM . . . (Lradcliffthomas5)
well written, I look forward to reading more of your work
thanks for...
October 15th, 2021 05:26 - Meeting (John Bostock)
great flow, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
October 15th, 2021 05:25 - You & I (Karen Lonabaugh-Hartley aka Sundance)
a sweet dedication,
thanks for sharing
October 15th, 2021 05:24 - Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower (Neville)
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22 - Mind Frame (CoreyHart22)
a unique reading experience,
really like how you flowed at the start to...
October 15th, 2021 05:09 - She Was My Sun. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful!
it must be wonderful, to look up
and see and feel,
the...
October 15th, 2021 04:59 - Esperanza (Daydreaming)
I laud your capacity to share yourself so...
October 15th, 2021 04:46 - Lost belonging (Spilleronsheet)
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful...
October 15th, 2021 04:30 - Keep a Positive attitude! (The BlackShakespeare)
loved the simple truth in these lines:
\'I speak life throughout the day...
October 15th, 2021 04:13 - Spiral🌀 (Cheyw)
really like the style and flow, there\'s a layer of desperation reinforced...
October 15th, 2021 04:10 - I’m Too Tired (KatMW)
indeed, some tiredness even sleep can\'t fix
that\'s where terms like...
October 15th, 2021 04:04 - Heart break (Perspectical)
poetry doesn\'t have to be that complicated,
if its genuine and written...
October 15th, 2021 03:59
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