Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Take a shot (Achilles)
\'You take
while knowing
you can never teach, your hands
what it...
November 23rd, 2021 04:35 - Second Visit (Paruku)
really well written
unique use of simile, imagery
an interesting read,...
November 23rd, 2021 04:23 - Woman Of Color (Garth Rakumakoe)
\'It has run the length
of a tomorrow\'s expectations
It has journeyed...
November 23rd, 2021 04:15 - We Were Only Youths (Cheyenne Smith)
\'Full of a high level of ignorance
We were only youths
We also were...
November 22nd, 2021 08:02 - Haunted (James Alexander)
well written
reads like a snapshot
of a lamented life
from the pages...
November 22nd, 2021 07:53 - somehow something (Dusk arising)
somehow Dusk, something in your
choice wording
has me agreeable to all...
November 22nd, 2021 07:50 - Swansong for a Skoda Octavia (Solar Impulse_1912)
\'And who is it hammering inside the bonnet?
And when did the pistons...
November 22nd, 2021 07:45 - Trust in thyself (Spilleronsheet)
a faultless message
championing, self-accountability
and acceptance
to...
November 22nd, 2021 07:42 - Days Like These (Nicholas Browning)
\'How subtle the plummeting waves,
Their grace still loud enough
To...
November 22nd, 2021 07:33 - Alluring Figures Copulate. (Kitty the naughty poet)
its quite hard
to poetically, portray
sensual arousal: alongside...
November 22nd, 2021 07:30 - A few lonely souls (Anna_noday)
really like the way you captured
the \'feel\' of the \'moment\';
there...
November 22nd, 2021 06:59 - An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville)
love your accessible wording
and blunt - poetic transparency, dear...
November 22nd, 2021 06:49 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
\'Bound by hilly heathers
this gentlest of valleys, strikes
tired...
November 22nd, 2021 06:36 - A Man Of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant!
\'A pint, maybe two
to wash down
a simple, repast.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:28 - BEAUTY OF NATURE (Isha Debnath)
\'sparkle in gardens\'
\'petals dazzling colours\'
\'buzzing of...
November 22nd, 2021 06:25 - Closed Chapter (HangingbyaHalo)
\'You could see all the times I revisited marked pages. Some present with...
November 22nd, 2021 06:18 - Unfinished work (Makoto Maruyama)
Brilliant!
I can offer you, no greater praise
than letting you know
for...
November 22nd, 2021 06:13 - November 17th morning (Makoto Maruyama)
wonderful depiction of seasonal preparedness
capturing, the event-like...
November 22nd, 2021 06:00 - All The Dreams (Satishverma)
Poetry, depicting
the grapevine of outed: Trust
betrayal\'s whispers, in...
November 22nd, 2021 05:42 - Spontaneous Combustion (MDStone)
firstly, your overall metaphor is apt
and intensely vivid,
I also really...
November 22nd, 2021 05:32 - PAIN AND LOVE (Seo Eun Hae)
\'when we *lose* someone
who is precious to us
hate is born.\'
but...
November 22nd, 2021 05:20 - The bed. (The BlackShakespeare)
the concept alone, had me chuckling
\'if our bed\'s, could talk...\'...
November 22nd, 2021 05:09 - I tripped over her memory yesterday. (Lathen Griffiths)
beautiful poetry!
great - relatable, imagery
but I personally...
November 22nd, 2021 05:04 - Age of the Zombie II (Eugene S.)
pointed observations, that capture the core essence of injustice
that,...
November 22nd, 2021 05:00 - Unsincerely Yours (Neville)
I don\'t know, dear Poet
if life has taught me anything,
its to...
November 19th, 2021 05:24 - SILENCE !!! (Vamsi Sudha)
its not silence
if it\'s: Purposed..
more like, potent
expectancy and...
November 19th, 2021 05:11 - Freedom Abounds. (Goldfinch60)
I like how you kept the details, more generic
less specific, and in...
November 19th, 2021 05:01 - Warning (Christina Elizabeth)
safety and home
are concepts that are becoming
divorced
with alarming...
November 19th, 2021 04:45 - Stairway To The Stars (Krutarth)
\'as I break through the atmosphere,
after climbing millions of feet,
I...
November 19th, 2021 04:37 - Miserable (L.R.A)
well written,
and I agree its always hard
to manoeuvre through...
November 19th, 2021 04:32 - Daintily I weep (Petrus Gerardus)
intriguing, to say the least
thanks for sharing
November 19th, 2021 04:13 - Summer\'s song (AnAlpaca)
reading this in London, on the brink
of winter\'s grip
is a surreal...
November 19th, 2021 04:10 - forgiveness is a scam (Angela-a)
all is forgivable, until
that featherweight tape
of Trust
is fractured...
November 19th, 2021 04:05 - evergreen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
love the imagery
and great to see you showcasing your poetic...
November 18th, 2021 06:39 - Who (Fay Slimm.)
\'Who visits this seductive peninsula\'
\'Who covets this ocean-coved...
November 18th, 2021 06:35 - Gutter/Stars (Rebmasters)
\'Back home
(our home)
alone,
but together;
no longer a spectre
to...
November 18th, 2021 06:31 - there (Dusk arising)
firstly, I admire the creativity
of your aesthetically pleasing...
November 18th, 2021 06:23 - Narcissistically Speaking (Neville)
great title, lol
I think you managed to capture
the hypocritical...
November 18th, 2021 06:08 - The Greatest Gift. (Goldfinch60)
Amen!
oh wise Poet,
how simple, this world
draped in that genius
of...
November 18th, 2021 06:03 - Have you ever wondered? (Belladonna)
a good read, thanks for sharing
if you\'re just trying poetry for the...
November 18th, 2021 05:47 - Tell This To Our Guests (ThePhoenix)
What an exemplary utilisation of Poetry\'s ability for sharing and...
November 18th, 2021 05:36 - Bound Beneath (Jack Cohen)
Outstanding!
Keep on climbing, aspiring
dear Poet
as the trail,...
November 18th, 2021 05:26 - Thoughts Abandoned (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 05:12 - Beat The Clouds (Satishverma)
\'It was waiting to
fall, the colossus under the
rains of silent...
November 18th, 2021 04:48 - COTTAGE LANE (Shadow424)
an intriguing read, like your choice wording
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 04:42 - Lost You (AnAlpaca)
like the tight rhyme and flow, and especially love
the t-shirt in your...
November 18th, 2021 04:40 - Compulsive Engagement (OllyPlease)
if this is your first ever, creative write
then I don\'t doubt it will...
November 18th, 2021 04:38 - Chromatic Succubus (Melellendixon)
love the wordplay dialectic
between your bravely brazen, title
and the...
November 18th, 2021 04:25 - Feelings (Japot)
complex subject, handled
with nuanced tenderness
an informative, poetic...
November 18th, 2021 04:15 - The Dream (James Alexander)
really well written
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 04:08 - Kingdom Of One (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant!
that first stanza, should be memorialised, sculpted
on a...
November 18th, 2021 04:06 - May we meet again (Mahluli Dubase)
Beautiful, reads like a Love hymn
and loved the final three lines,
a...
November 18th, 2021 03:59 - spelling (Dusk arising)
lol
\'spell check, ruined it for all of us\'
ahh the regression,...
November 16th, 2021 07:24 - Dove In A Cathedral (Garth Rakumakoe)
love the imagery, not quite sure I\'ve grasped the meaning fully
bust...
November 16th, 2021 07:22 - Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville)
when, we can admire
and respect, feat\'s of prowess
aside, beauty\'s -...
November 16th, 2021 07:20 - Walking With Trees. (Goldfinch60)
truly idyllic, feels like we\'re walking
in a movie scene...
November 16th, 2021 06:29 - Time to Breakup? (Nikita03)
tight, end rhymes
and a lovely free flowing read
thanks for sharing
November 16th, 2021 06:27 - The First Time I Played Croquet With My Dad (Saxon Crow)
fun read, thanks for sharing
should link to Andy\'s write, to add context
November 16th, 2021 06:25 - I Confess. (Job Welime)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
I couldn\'t help but compare and...
November 16th, 2021 06:12 - Lawnsome (Neville)
we need to find a way to heal your feud with that plague of a \'haiku\'...
November 16th, 2021 05:59 - Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville)
(another great,
thought provoking shorty, dear Poet
couldn\'t resist...
November 16th, 2021 05:57 - Keep your heart in the hustle (Edthepoet)
almost a cathartic, reading experience
I laud, the empathy you imbued...
November 16th, 2021 05:25 - Let Us Walk Holding Hands (Trenz Pruca)
scenic enough, to be counted
as a cherished memento postcard
of...
November 16th, 2021 05:22 - Your Journey (Satishverma)
\'Upgrading clock
was not a wise decision.
Who will read the...
November 16th, 2021 05:19 - The Lie That Failed (R3ddyhandz)
a great read, thanks for sharing
November 16th, 2021 05:09 - Hive Mind (John Prophet)
and all, by design
Hive minded = easier, to Herd
minimising...
November 16th, 2021 05:05 - How significant am I? (Jane Walker)
\'Food bought
eaten, less hurled
Food bought, eaten
less hurled
Food...
November 16th, 2021 04:52 - The Wind Knows (Garth Rakumakoe)
\'of hearts\' feeble whispers
or is it a victory to deceit?
Throughout...
November 15th, 2021 08:26 - Visit to outside (Spilleronsheet)
lol, I\'m sorry
I couldn\'t help but find humour in your wry cynicism, of...
November 15th, 2021 08:19 - dark august days (Dusk arising)
Brilliant!
November 15th, 2021 08:12 - Fight, Flight. (Kitty the naughty poet)
\'Sorrow spills from concealed ailments,
as I lay
amongst my shattered...
November 15th, 2021 07:41 - /// (Angela-a)
realisation\'s: painful curse, of a waning
imagination;
a mourning for...
November 15th, 2021 07:34 - All Love (Job Welime)
\'When your laugh, moved me
when your smile, outlined
my happiness...
November 15th, 2021 07:18 - The Novice Criminal (Rozina)
how sobering, a read
when those we Intrust
at our most, weakest
choose,...
November 15th, 2021 07:11 - Backgammon To Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
lol
such a fun rea!
loved, how you captured the tone really well
in...
November 15th, 2021 07:03 - The God of all Creation (Nicholas Browning)
Brilliant!
you\'ve so very cleverly - outlined
the hypocrisy
in our...
November 15th, 2021 06:57 - Snowfall (Beary1112)
a poetic \'Snowflake\'
of owned accountability\'s
purposed Poetry...
November 15th, 2021 06:29 - Unrequited (Melellendixon)
another sincere wording
of such relatable feelings
and I really...
November 15th, 2021 06:23 - 11/14/2021 (CLM)
yeah, I know these sentiments
very well
although I doubt, I could have...
November 15th, 2021 06:19 - Searching for Poison (Melellendixon)
\'When I eventually
came into the light, I searched
for new poison,...
November 15th, 2021 06:14 - My Story (Satishverma)
some poetry, just surpasses
whatever praise we could - ever, come up...
November 15th, 2021 05:58 - broken pieces (Jk)
of remnant fragments
that accumulate, to manifest
what warmth, we...
November 15th, 2021 05:51 - The Man of Sin (Yamen)
not sure, I even
fully comprehend
let alone - align, with your...
November 15th, 2021 05:32 - Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.)
\'in the now, we enrapture and grip
we celebrate
all the yesterday\'s,...
November 12th, 2021 06:24 - A Feeling of Betrayal (Cheyenne Smith)
manners and respect?
been a long time since I heard those words: enough...
November 12th, 2021 06:15 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards)
I like the wet paint signs
\'designed\' to blend-in
green on green
so...
November 12th, 2021 06:13 - Serene (Rozina)
an ode to serene
how serene... lol
forgive my silliness, this was such a...
November 12th, 2021 06:03 - Lovebirds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Brilliant!
November 12th, 2021 05:58 - Problems or Challenges? (Goldfinch60)
Amen!
November 12th, 2021 05:57 - I\'m thinking about you. (Job Welime)
\'While reading the phrases
you can find, A part of me
that lies:...
November 12th, 2021 05:42 - Galaxy (Miss Pain)
firstly thanks for the 🔞
and I just think, you write tighter rhymes...
November 12th, 2021 05:37 - Armistice (ForeverJesus7)
well written and informative, thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 05:33 - law of motion (Robin jayne)
great title, wonderfully penned again
thanks for sharing
\'my mind and...
November 12th, 2021 05:32 - my life is trash, i deserve a refund (AnxiousMane)
but you sure can express yourself, dear kindred soul
we\'ve all been...
November 12th, 2021 05:27 - Sparkling Passion (Cheyenne Smith)
reads like a wonderfully sincere dedication, maybe for an anniversary or...
November 12th, 2021 05:16 - Rose colored glasses (Peculiarly Lauren)
like the ingenuity in your form
a good read, thanks for sharing
(just...
November 12th, 2021 05:14 - Candles (Adventurine)
\'you never knew who i was
so you don\'t, know
how much i\'ve...
November 12th, 2021 05:09 - I shall not tether my heart to sorrow (Jeremy Leach)
love your wording and flow,
indeed, there\'s so much utility in...
November 12th, 2021 04:56 - what time is it? (Angela-a)
really well written
reads like a timely \'wake-up call\' for...
November 12th, 2021 04:51 - Girl in the Dark (Anna Colette)
sadly, you\'re not the first
nor will you be the last to utilise
books...
November 12th, 2021 04:48
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