Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Safe Harbor (Jack Cohen)
\'Day.....
They\'re all
gone,
my crew, my friends
Into the night...
October 5th, 2021 05:42 - 04/06/2015 (CLM)
an intriguing style, and a wonderful theme..
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:33 - O Thy Love (Skye Sweat)
beautiful wording,
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:31 - Maami (My Mother) (Oluwakunle Adeyemo)
the very first thing I ever scribbled, was a dedication to my mother,
so...
October 5th, 2021 05:30 - Poisoned World (G84)
\'good catch\'..
and thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:27 - Cobweb House (Figuring-it-all-out)
a clever poem, and a great read
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:24 - True Enemies (Jayy)
yeah, I know your words
as if you plucked them from my heart
and I know...
October 5th, 2021 05:21 - The Void (Lukian.haid)
\'Numbness is like a disease
Never fully satisfied, until
it consumes...
October 5th, 2021 05:12 - Now Men Come Dressed As Winter (ADarkerMind)
\'swims mercy
through the corridors
of winters prayer,\'..
we blink...
October 5th, 2021 04:58 - And The Shepherd Layed Me Down (ADarkerMind)
there\'s such a calmness, to the feel of this write
maybe anchored to...
October 5th, 2021 04:50 - before (Picklesthecat)
this is a great summarisation of the covid experience, I think
thanks for...
October 5th, 2021 04:41 - Crossing The Equator (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Journeying inward
—where near meets the far\'..
Amen!
wonderfully...
October 5th, 2021 04:39 - Gnawing Dark (Simple Tendencies)
I\'m overwhelmed by your wonderful imagery, this was beautifully written...
October 5th, 2021 04:37 - RAW YOUTH (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
I think this may need age restriction my friend,
because you\'ve woven...
October 5th, 2021 04:30 - CITIZEN \'CANE\' (PrEm Ji)
so many \'bastards\'
I guess if we call everyone bastards, eventually the...
October 5th, 2021 04:21 - THE LAW OF SPACE (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
wonderfully insightful, a poignant dedication to a genuine Poet and brave...
October 5th, 2021 04:08 - The Mysterious Lady. (The BlackShakespeare)
wonderful, really like the flow
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 03:46 - Philosophy (John Prophet)
\'Shackled by
reality.
Dancing
in a
small...
October 4th, 2021 07:12 - Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\') (Jo)
every time I come across that film, I think
there\'s no way, anyone who...
October 4th, 2021 06:59 - the girl who loved a broken hearted man (Rebmasters)
really well written, loved the way you layered your images and metaphors...
October 4th, 2021 06:42 - Keep Walking. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed, my friend..
one of my favourite film quotes, mirrors your...
October 4th, 2021 06:21 - [ Chapters ] (Heart of Babel)
its a privilege!
to read your poetic genius,
thank you! for choosing to...
October 4th, 2021 06:13 - I wish I was her again some day (AKA Living with Anxious Attachment) (Fightrhymes)
there\'s a conversation from a very sad Korean film titled, \'more than...
October 4th, 2021 06:08 - ASKING (Shadow424)
insightful observation, worded with arrowed precision to insure, those who...
October 4th, 2021 05:55 - Forever Beautiful (MendedFences27)
Amen!
brilliantly distilled reasoning and insights, thanks for sharing...
October 4th, 2021 05:34 - Laugh (Yingying)
laughter, is a very good coping method
for all the evident and dubious,...
October 4th, 2021 05:32 - The World (Mariel Ilagan)
\'In this vast, cruel world
What can a small, insignificant
Speck like...
October 4th, 2021 05:27 - 02/16/2018 (CLM)
\'Between lonely days and all the lies
You slowly broke my...
October 4th, 2021 05:21 - A secret (P.Parande)
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:16 - A-way (?) (Sibo)
loved the last two stanzas
almost operating as stand alone mirrors, of...
October 4th, 2021 05:14 - Poetical proclamation (Illia)
wonderful use of repetition or chorus, a great write..
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:08 - Stifled. (Chris Duffy)
wonderfully written, a really relatable read
thanks for sharing, dear
October 4th, 2021 05:07 - Collide (Simple Tendencies)
as a motorhead myself, I have so many memories attached
to vehicle...
October 4th, 2021 05:01 - Thoughts on Writing #1 (Simple Tendencies)
I think none of us know, really..
sometimes I read what I\'ve written...
October 4th, 2021 04:54 - Memory (Rebmasters)
\'It stalls,
that pain;
the only gain
from years with you.
It crawls...
October 4th, 2021 04:17 - My Sega Genesis (Randyjohnson71)
I could relate with your write, on so many levels
like: that sense of...
October 4th, 2021 04:02 - The Field (Rebmasters)
\'And, as we crossed,
forever at cross purposes,
I wondered where you...
October 1st, 2021 04:36 - 02:48:11 (Lonelyraccoon)
this is a wonderful read,
stylistically, somewhat reminiscent of Emily...
October 1st, 2021 04:25 - Reinforced Love. (Goldfinch60)
this feels so intimate, feels like a I\'m reading an eloquently worded...
October 1st, 2021 04:21 - Twin Suns (Zemde)
Beautiful!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 1st, 2021 04:15 - A GOOD SUMMER (Shadow424)
a poignant scene, worded so vivid..
there\'s a sense of displacement that...
October 1st, 2021 04:10 - Thoughts #7 (MendedFences27)
just silently nodded my head in agreement with every one..
thanks for...
October 1st, 2021 04:06 - Zen state of mind (Lyriclitty)
\'choose peace over chaos\'
Amen!
thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 04:01 - Titled (Illia)
while my IQ is too low for me to understand,
I can still appreciate how...
October 1st, 2021 03:59 - with my hand (DVA)
\'blood still blooms in the kettle
children still dance for the...
October 1st, 2021 03:55 - The Drop\'s Love (Ishika Gautam)
beautiful!
a rain drops, stream of consciousness..
thanks for sharing, a...
October 1st, 2021 03:50 - Words on happiness (Michael William Reid)
wonderful positivity! thanks for choosing to share
October 1st, 2021 03:46 - Our young one wants an Iphone. (Chris Duffy)
I imagine this was a necessary, therapeutic write for you, lol
loved the...
October 1st, 2021 03:44 - Circa October 7th 2020 papa passed away (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
October 1st, 2021 03:35 - Soon Grandma (CJKrieger)
this beautifully balanced, paced and worded
I\'m sorry if your write is...
October 1st, 2021 03:33 - Little Prayer - 2 (Nafis Light)
I didn\'t want a second write to pass-by without commenting, on a series...
October 1st, 2021 03:29 - Fault Line (Kurt Philip Behm)
had to read this two or three times and contemplate, why it gripped me...
October 1st, 2021 03:26 - Rain Drops. (The BlackShakespeare)
I like your use of familiar metaphors to insure ease of relatability and...
October 1st, 2021 03:15 - us (Picklesthecat)
reads, very sweet
that rarity of serene simplicity, where everything...
October 1st, 2021 03:11 - Hourglass (Benjie the salad)
raw emotionality, expressed with impassioned imagery
a memorable read,...
October 1st, 2021 03:08 - A familiar place (Catt)
sincerity, is beautiful in all its various forms
thanks for choosing to...
October 1st, 2021 02:48 - It May Take Taking A Chance (Jo)
Ha!
and still some walk around with their hands outstretched brazenly,...
September 30th, 2021 05:15 - Fields (John Prophet)
but still,
we get to have a lotta fun
on the way
a spontaneous...
September 30th, 2021 05:09 - A Most Unusual Journey (Adeola Akande)
a wholesome and wonderful read,
thanks for sharing
September 30th, 2021 05:03 - Bluets (Rebmasters)
Brilliant!
September 30th, 2021 05:01 - Ultima Ferria (Sibo)
\'My mornings are kissing with others
And cones me again on the...
September 30th, 2021 04:47 - Jazz Was Back. (Goldfinch60)
that reminds me
I need to go catch some live jazz, someday soon
(a...
September 30th, 2021 04:39 - Hiding Beneath a Mask (Ajax (he/xe))
personally, I feel none of us are \'a stupid mistake\'
maybe, we\'ve been...
September 30th, 2021 04:29 - Lost Angel, lost time, and my work boots (Fightrhymes)
\'The hand of the angel had scars not felt by the touch\'
an intriguing...
September 30th, 2021 04:17 - To Love Someone (MendedFences27)
Brilliant!
in a write I\'ve shared previously I theorised love was the...
September 30th, 2021 04:12 - Me, My Tears, and the Rain (Crossmanw)
let it all out, in words
begin to heal, renew your zeal for life,
or...
September 30th, 2021 04:06 - Ash In Eyes (Satishverma)
\'Do you
think a triangle of love can be made?\'
sometimes, and...
September 30th, 2021 04:02 - I Love You Anyway (Daydreaming)
I really liked how you utilised repetition with purpose,
and as I\'ve...
September 30th, 2021 03:47 - None other than Yourself (Samer Amin)
(thanks for sharing and inspiring my little scribbled reply)
yeah,...
September 30th, 2021 03:43 - Slow Walker (Mariel Ilagan)
I relate with this write on a lot of levels, especially the introspective...
September 30th, 2021 03:28 - bliss (Picklesthecat)
I\'m sorry for your loss,
thanks for sharing
September 30th, 2021 03:22 - Sneaky Footsteps (Ishika Gautam)
an intriguing read, some unique word choices and although I couldn\'t...
September 30th, 2021 03:18 - Love of a mother (Rozanne)
a wonderful dedication
an important message, thanks for sharing
September 30th, 2021 03:10 - The Dolphin\'s Lament (Len Varley)
that\'s a wise Dolphin
and an even wiser person, who\'s cultivated the...
September 30th, 2021 03:07 - A message to my love (Michael William Reid)
a wonderful dedication,
thanks for giving us all a good head start on...
September 30th, 2021 03:02 - Above The Beyond (Something For Laura) (Kurt Philip Behm)
so very true
(makes sense that we originally created music, before
we...
September 30th, 2021 02:58 - Let me 🥰 (Job Welime)
nice, there\'s a maturity to the love you\'re depicting
more about Us,...
September 28th, 2021 05:26 - Disguised (Ishika Gautam)
you poignantly worded that bleak hopelessness we sometimes have to face...
September 28th, 2021 05:22 - Withdrawal (Rebmasters)
\'Numb tastes so sweet, arriving ahead of trailing pain, like dusk
but -...
September 28th, 2021 05:02 - The Rest Is History. (Goldfinch60)
a fun read, thanks for sharing Andy
September 28th, 2021 04:50 - [ Allegiance ] (Heart of Babel)
\'It\'s been a while since the holocaust
Maybe time to script a...
September 28th, 2021 04:40 - My brother\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s coffin (Cottonevie)
(he \'decided\' to die)?
this is a disturbing line,
from what appears to...
September 28th, 2021 04:28 - Lies2 (John Prophet)
(thanks for sharing, and for inspiring my scribbled reply, dear poet)...
September 28th, 2021 04:16 - Three AM. (Trenz Pruca)
Brilliant!
so life affirmingly, empowering!
thanks for sharing, dear...
September 28th, 2021 03:59 - The Angel’s Words (Crossmanw)
Amen!
a great write!
(when, we can cherish
those \'simple\' gifts of...
September 28th, 2021 03:56 - Bent Straight (Kurt Philip Behm)
what exactly is \'Bent?\'
is it curved or folded
do tips, align?
or...
September 28th, 2021 03:44 - Feast (Sibo)
Brilliant!!!
\'Welcome, craving one
May our court
Be springing thine...
September 28th, 2021 03:31 - Live Life Moment by Moment (AiR - Atman in Ravi)
\'There is only one way to live,\'???
who knows, but it\'s kinda crazy...
September 28th, 2021 03:28 - WW1 women trapped in houses (Frost and Lbrittain)
wonderfully unique, thanks for sharing
September 28th, 2021 03:24 - Rain (Michael William Reid)
yeah, some days
you just look out and get a glimpse
of all that...
September 28th, 2021 03:22 - My Excitement – Day 1 (Nafis Light)
Beautifully, sincere!
soar, free and proud
thanks for sharing
September 28th, 2021 03:18 - The Promise of Future\\\\\\\'s Paradise (Kayeman74)
indeed, a great message
thanks for choosing to share..
we can but try,...
September 28th, 2021 03:16 - Do You Like Me? (Jo)
yeah, been there got the t-shirt
burnt-it to a crisp, after
tenderly...
September 27th, 2021 06:49 - Addiction (Rebmasters)
\'head-first, into your meaningful words...\'
that\'s where, I shall ever...
September 27th, 2021 06:41 - There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60)
indeed! but then there are also
Unique people, like You: Andy
who...
September 27th, 2021 06:23 - Hectic Kite Episodes (Hyane)
without context, sadly
I lack the intellect to unravel and appreciate...
September 27th, 2021 06:10 - 111 (Bleedingsm)
\'they\' having a rock n roll party: in me head
\'me\' taking headache...
September 27th, 2021 06:07 - Untitled. (InfamousKarma)
I shall read this again, later
whilst listening to India\'s
\'The Heart...
September 27th, 2021 06:03 - You Know How To Bleed (Satishverma)
\'It is not possible to remain
human. Primitiveness rules. Rivers
of...
September 27th, 2021 05:58 - [ A Decision of Love ] (Heart of Babel)
Brilliant!!!
September 27th, 2021 05:54
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