Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- A Ruined Date (A Country Wordsmith)
Brilliant! lmao
\'each to their own\'
when our divisive lines
are so...
October 8th, 2021 05:05 - Unfinished (Makoto Maruyama)
the difference between then and now, dear poet
is back then they read and...
October 8th, 2021 04:44 - As Autumn Comes. (Goldfinch60)
that feeling of oneness that overtakes us, at times
when nature paints...
October 8th, 2021 04:35 - a glass of sunshine (Zemde)
this is a very intimate portrayal, a wide angled view of actions and their...
October 8th, 2021 04:30 - I Rather Be Alone (Briana)
sound logic,
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:26 - [ Fly ] (Heart of Babel)
lmao!
a cute read, just in time for October\'s horror season, thanks for...
October 8th, 2021 04:25 - Through the Cracks (PoeticBiscuit)
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final...
October 8th, 2021 04:18 - In Mothers Eyes, My Sleeping Child. (ADarkerMind)
so majestic!
words to dive-in and get lost within
thanks for sharing,...
October 8th, 2021 04:15 - To the person who found me (Jenniferhjacobs)
if this is a true and personal account, I laud your bravery and...
October 8th, 2021 04:10 - Awakening (Nzbeeb)
wonderful message, like the infectious positivity..
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:02 - Struggle (Michael William Reid)
wonderful flow, thanks for sharing
keep writing and expressing yourself,...
October 8th, 2021 04:00 - Schools (Advaitha)
nowadays, schools and universities
are battle grounds for those...
October 8th, 2021 03:57 - Ghana The Grief House (Patrick Godwin)
My Brother!
It\'s so easy to forget,
when the Imperialist\'s, first...
October 8th, 2021 03:39 - Only option left is to try (Poetic Dan)
Amen!
and I will keep reading and learning
my friend,
thanks for being...
October 8th, 2021 03:13 - Captured (Fay Slimm.)
but their chores came with some unique, rewards
as there\'s no experience...
October 7th, 2021 05:32 - Bucket List (Figuring-it-all-out)
really creative, and has significant depth
a wonderfully intriguing read,...
October 7th, 2021 05:18 - Happiness\'s home? (A Country Wordsmith)
wonderfully unique, great effort!
thanks for sharing
October 7th, 2021 05:10 - The Light Of My World. (Goldfinch60)
Happy birthday, my friend 🍻
you almost brought me to tears with this...
October 7th, 2021 05:07 - Blue (IamUnicorn)
wonderful, its a rare talent to word a write, in the voice of a child for...
October 7th, 2021 05:02 - Just more a while! (IAli)
needs a little rewording, to smoothen the delivery, but your hopeful...
October 7th, 2021 04:57 - Loving you (Ajax (he/xe))
\'I know you don\'t feel the same\'
\'I know you\'re better than...
October 7th, 2021 04:41 - Autumn Night (A.H. Browning)
wonderful imagery, a good read
thanks for sharing
October 7th, 2021 04:37 - The Boy (YAD The Demon)
a good scene, I like how you built-up the suspense tension,...
October 7th, 2021 04:35 - Without Music (Jay-Lee Jane)
this was a wonderful poetic treat
and if you ever try to write in this...
October 7th, 2021 04:24 - All I Do Is Stare (Lester W)
insightful commentary, eloquently expressed!
I think we all share a sense...
October 7th, 2021 04:13 - Why? (Mari[anne])
usually, when we overextend our dependency on our partners
and feel like,...
October 7th, 2021 03:54 - Waves (Ishika Gautam)
while I get the lack of clarity is on purpose
and a portrayal of the...
October 7th, 2021 03:44 - //and you ran// (Shreyabansal)
its gory but with purpose, tiptoes
that line between vulgarity and...
October 7th, 2021 03:34 - The world is falling apart (OneMoreBreath)
then lets all move to Newark, to be safe
and start building,...
October 7th, 2021 03:27 - Sleepless (Rebmasters)
by surrendering, willingly
by choosing to believe, defiantly
by...
October 7th, 2021 03:21 - Still Love Unrecognised (ADarkerMind)
\'still, grasping at untethered Hope
still believing in Seagull...
October 7th, 2021 03:10 - Ammi (IAli)
a wonderful dedication!
clever way to bridge two languages and exemplify...
October 7th, 2021 02:52 - Twin Flames (Lukian.haid)
\'if you love them, let them go
and if it\'s true love, they\'ll find...
October 7th, 2021 02:49 - Moonbaiting. (Fay Slimm.)
eloquence, decorated
with such mesmeric, imagery jewels
yet again...
October 7th, 2021 02:38 - I am your daughter (Jay-Lee Jane)
true artistic talent
arrowed with purposed intent, to portray and...
October 5th, 2021 06:34 - Letting Go of You (Accidental Poet)
beautiful, so much detail
yet the message is so universal..
thanks for...
October 5th, 2021 06:27 - Red (Rebmasters)
\'“I know what I want is impossible. If I can make my language flat...
October 5th, 2021 06:23 - I Fell in Love (IamUnicorn)
the beginning of this write reminded me of a song by the soulful
Tina...
October 5th, 2021 06:06 - Music To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
\'The wonder of the music
Taking me with it,
To infinity,
To infinity...
October 5th, 2021 05:49 - Safe Harbor (Jack Cohen)
\'Day.....
They\'re all
gone,
my crew, my friends
Into the night...
October 5th, 2021 05:42 - 04/06/2015 (CLM)
an intriguing style, and a wonderful theme..
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:33 - O Thy Love (Skye Sweat)
beautiful wording,
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:31 - Maami (My Mother) (Oluwakunle Adeyemo)
the very first thing I ever scribbled, was a dedication to my mother,
so...
October 5th, 2021 05:30 - Poisoned World (G84)
\'good catch\'..
and thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:27 - Cobweb House (Figuring-it-all-out)
a clever poem, and a great read
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 05:24 - True Enemies (Jayy)
yeah, I know your words
as if you plucked them from my heart
and I know...
October 5th, 2021 05:21 - The Void (Lukian.haid)
\'Numbness is like a disease
Never fully satisfied, until
it consumes...
October 5th, 2021 05:12 - Now Men Come Dressed As Winter (ADarkerMind)
\'swims mercy
through the corridors
of winters prayer,\'..
we blink...
October 5th, 2021 04:58 - And The Shepherd Layed Me Down (ADarkerMind)
there\'s such a calmness, to the feel of this write
maybe anchored to...
October 5th, 2021 04:50 - before (Picklesthecat)
this is a great summarisation of the covid experience, I think
thanks for...
October 5th, 2021 04:41 - Crossing The Equator (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Journeying inward
—where near meets the far\'..
Amen!
wonderfully...
October 5th, 2021 04:39 - Gnawing Dark (Simple Tendencies)
I\'m overwhelmed by your wonderful imagery, this was beautifully written...
October 5th, 2021 04:37 - RAW YOUTH (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
I think this may need age restriction my friend,
because you\'ve woven...
October 5th, 2021 04:30 - CITIZEN \'CANE\' (PrEm Ji)
so many \'bastards\'
I guess if we call everyone bastards, eventually the...
October 5th, 2021 04:21 - THE LAW OF SPACE (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
wonderfully insightful, a poignant dedication to a genuine Poet and brave...
October 5th, 2021 04:08 - The Mysterious Lady. (The BlackShakespeare)
wonderful, really like the flow
thanks for sharing
October 5th, 2021 03:46 - Philosophy (John Prophet)
\'Shackled by
reality.
Dancing
in a
small...
October 4th, 2021 07:12 - Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\') (Jo)
every time I come across that film, I think
there\'s no way, anyone who...
October 4th, 2021 06:59 - the girl who loved a broken hearted man (Rebmasters)
really well written, loved the way you layered your images and metaphors...
October 4th, 2021 06:42 - Keep Walking. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed, my friend..
one of my favourite film quotes, mirrors your...
October 4th, 2021 06:21 - [ Chapters ] (Heart of Babel)
its a privilege!
to read your poetic genius,
thank you! for choosing to...
October 4th, 2021 06:13 - I wish I was her again some day (AKA Living with Anxious Attachment) (Fightrhymes)
there\'s a conversation from a very sad Korean film titled, \'more than...
October 4th, 2021 06:08 - ASKING (Shadow424)
insightful observation, worded with arrowed precision to insure, those who...
October 4th, 2021 05:55 - Forever Beautiful (MendedFences27)
Amen!
brilliantly distilled reasoning and insights, thanks for sharing...
October 4th, 2021 05:34 - Laugh (Yingying)
laughter, is a very good coping method
for all the evident and dubious,...
October 4th, 2021 05:32 - The World (Mariel Ilagan)
\'In this vast, cruel world
What can a small, insignificant
Speck like...
October 4th, 2021 05:27 - 02/16/2018 (CLM)
\'Between lonely days and all the lies
You slowly broke my...
October 4th, 2021 05:21 - A secret (P.Parande)
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:16 - A-way (?) (Sibo)
loved the last two stanzas
almost operating as stand alone mirrors, of...
October 4th, 2021 05:14 - Poetical proclamation (Illia)
wonderful use of repetition or chorus, a great write..
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:08 - Stifled. (Chris Duffy)
wonderfully written, a really relatable read
thanks for sharing, dear
October 4th, 2021 05:07 - Collide (Simple Tendencies)
as a motorhead myself, I have so many memories attached
to vehicle...
October 4th, 2021 05:01 - Thoughts on Writing #1 (Simple Tendencies)
I think none of us know, really..
sometimes I read what I\'ve written...
October 4th, 2021 04:54 - Memory (Rebmasters)
\'It stalls,
that pain;
the only gain
from years with you.
It crawls...
October 4th, 2021 04:17 - My Sega Genesis (Randyjohnson71)
I could relate with your write, on so many levels
like: that sense of...
October 4th, 2021 04:02 - The Field (Rebmasters)
\'And, as we crossed,
forever at cross purposes,
I wondered where you...
October 1st, 2021 04:36 - 02:48:11 (Lonelyraccoon)
this is a wonderful read,
stylistically, somewhat reminiscent of Emily...
October 1st, 2021 04:25 - Reinforced Love. (Goldfinch60)
this feels so intimate, feels like a I\'m reading an eloquently worded...
October 1st, 2021 04:21 - Twin Suns (Zemde)
Beautiful!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 1st, 2021 04:15 - A GOOD SUMMER (Shadow424)
a poignant scene, worded so vivid..
there\'s a sense of displacement that...
October 1st, 2021 04:10 - Thoughts #7 (MendedFences27)
just silently nodded my head in agreement with every one..
thanks for...
October 1st, 2021 04:06 - Zen state of mind (Lyriclitty)
\'choose peace over chaos\'
Amen!
thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 04:01 - Titled (Illia)
while my IQ is too low for me to understand,
I can still appreciate how...
October 1st, 2021 03:59 - with my hand (DVA)
\'blood still blooms in the kettle
children still dance for the...
October 1st, 2021 03:55 - The Drop\'s Love (Ishika Gautam)
beautiful!
a rain drops, stream of consciousness..
thanks for sharing, a...
October 1st, 2021 03:50 - Words on happiness (Michael William Reid)
wonderful positivity! thanks for choosing to share
October 1st, 2021 03:46 - Our young one wants an Iphone. (Chris Duffy)
I imagine this was a necessary, therapeutic write for you, lol
loved the...
October 1st, 2021 03:44 - Circa October 7th 2020 papa passed away (Rew4er2nail)
sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
October 1st, 2021 03:35 - Soon Grandma (CJKrieger)
this beautifully balanced, paced and worded
I\'m sorry if your write is...
October 1st, 2021 03:33 - Little Prayer - 2 (Nafis Light)
I didn\'t want a second write to pass-by without commenting, on a series...
October 1st, 2021 03:29 - Fault Line (Kurt Philip Behm)
had to read this two or three times and contemplate, why it gripped me...
October 1st, 2021 03:26 - Rain Drops. (The BlackShakespeare)
I like your use of familiar metaphors to insure ease of relatability and...
October 1st, 2021 03:15 - us (Picklesthecat)
reads, very sweet
that rarity of serene simplicity, where everything...
October 1st, 2021 03:11 - Hourglass (Benjie the salad)
raw emotionality, expressed with impassioned imagery
a memorable read,...
October 1st, 2021 03:08 - A familiar place (Catt)
sincerity, is beautiful in all its various forms
thanks for choosing to...
October 1st, 2021 02:48 - It May Take Taking A Chance (Jo)
Ha!
and still some walk around with their hands outstretched brazenly,...
September 30th, 2021 05:15 - Fields (John Prophet)
but still,
we get to have a lotta fun
on the way
a spontaneous...
September 30th, 2021 05:09 - A Most Unusual Journey (Adeola Akande)
a wholesome and wonderful read,
thanks for sharing
September 30th, 2021 05:03 - Bluets (Rebmasters)
Brilliant!
September 30th, 2021 05:01 - Ultima Ferria (Sibo)
\'My mornings are kissing with others
And cones me again on the...
September 30th, 2021 04:47
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