Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Negative in Blue (Neville)
\'It was there
Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet
From...
May 10th, 2021 05:48 - Liar (Germanamericanchurch)
ah, forgive my Open minded questioning, ignorance
this must be the latest...
May 10th, 2021 05:37 - Make the world Greta again. (Aa Harvey)
such writes, are ever Timely and always Important
for the Awareness they...
May 10th, 2021 05:24 - Nowhere To Hide (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Time but a mask,
delusion concealed
The cover pulled back
—more...
May 10th, 2021 05:10 - Mothers Day (Jerry Reynolds)
subtle simplicity, at its indisputably: Classy, best..
such a...
May 10th, 2021 05:04 - Poetry or a book the dog doesn\'t give a hoot (Poetic Dan)
\'If we don\'t have the energy to back up what we think we know, then to...
May 10th, 2021 04:57 - The Light Of The New Day. (Goldfinch60)
\'yup, its that Trudge
through our midnight Blue\'s of discontent
that...
May 10th, 2021 04:49 - desire (Dusk arising)
\'So quickly his body responded
to her movement
the essence of her...
May 10th, 2021 04:42 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 4 (Nafis Light)
what a profound: Mission Statement for Life
you\'ve excavated
from...
May 10th, 2021 04:27 - Somewhere in Time (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Brilliant!
an exemplary demonstration of the impassioned musicality
we...
May 10th, 2021 04:14 - Meditation (Fay Slimm.)
we could spend a few hundred words, detailing
the transcendent effect we...
May 7th, 2021 07:04 - Ether (Rebmasters)
cleverly weaved,
maybe because I also have an appreciation
for...
May 7th, 2021 06:56 - Thatch (Neville)
I don\'t know, maybe not quite - thatch
but I still - reach, for...
May 7th, 2021 06:49 - The Girl I Love and Live For (Kevin Michael Bloor)
is the Artist the lucky one to find such a Muse
or the Muse, who...
May 7th, 2021 06:44 - Painting To Music. (Goldfinch60)
miles davis, Brilliance
Andy\'s soothing, words
shimmering, sunny...
May 7th, 2021 06:40 - EVERY CHILD IS A WONDER (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'he informed her like corpse just got up from the morgue.\'
...
“You...
May 7th, 2021 06:35 - My Mother (Mother\'s Day Poem) (JordanandThomas29)
a wonderfully sincere dedication,
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 06:24 - Incoherent Rendez-Vous (Dewypoetry)
wonderfully witty, yet deep
thanks for sharing..
reminded me of W. S....
May 7th, 2021 06:23 - MY BAGGAGE (Kaychee)
kinda awesome, how diverse a reading experience Poetry can offer..
really...
May 7th, 2021 06:19 - Almost broken (Aa Harvey)
if you put your last stanza\'s lyrics, to the Rocky soundtrack
you\'ll...
May 7th, 2021 06:16 - Back on top or bottom, who knows! Let the music flow (Poetic Dan)
a wonderful read, with such a memorable last line
May 7th, 2021 06:10 - In the Shadow of Flowers from My Love (Rebmasters)
we ambitious fallible petals, who
take so long to realise, our fated...
May 7th, 2021 06:08 - Telltale Signs (Kurt Philip Behm)
all I can say is - so true...
*needs to be read a few times: to...
May 7th, 2021 06:02 - Take Pride in Liking (M.E.M.)
the message alone is powerful!
maybe worth reposting next month (would...
May 7th, 2021 05:54 - Just for laughs (Rosiedm)
immersive and delicately worded, a fun read
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 05:47 - Some Things Should Not be Forgot (Neville)
as a confessed fan of your unassuming poetry\'s
unique element of subtle...
May 7th, 2021 05:42 - Shadow (Jabberwocky)
\'So our love then; a beach
we danced across,
leaving not a...
May 7th, 2021 05:27 - My Friend (Andy Hunter)
wonderful dedication, with a smooth captivating flow..
I\'m not sure,...
May 7th, 2021 05:19 - BACK LOT (Shadow424)
a vivid read, I get a yearning for a past that can never be re-lived
and...
May 7th, 2021 05:05 - First & Last Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
again, yet another wonderful dedication!
\'Hourglass hips and fairy...
May 7th, 2021 04:57 - More (Fay Slimm.)
and more than that
you not only grasped all that instinctive...
May 7th, 2021 04:52 - A recap and recount of pandemic lockdowns worldwide (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
\'It\'s better that busy humans now become photoholic
than forever...
May 7th, 2021 04:38 - Early Morning Love Noise? (Goldfinch60)
ha!
hmmmm, ah I know why I\'m frowning
instead of laughing -...
May 7th, 2021 04:31 - Dimpled Pains (Satishverma)
great Title!
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2021 05:43 - 5-5-21 (Wilted)
lol, yeah we all been there
usually between that initially numbing effect...
May 6th, 2021 05:42 - Long in the tooth male doth recount, reflect, reimagine... his woebegone damn dental daze today May 5th, 2021 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
\'(managed by gumpshun,
whereby eons hyperbolically
toted beyond...
May 6th, 2021 05:35 - Alone in the Woods (M.E.M.)
I would classify this as an impassioned poet\'s latest step
towards...
May 6th, 2021 05:14 - COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond) (Andy Hunter)
a clever twist
with some 6ft-deep - hidden, acute commentary to...
May 6th, 2021 05:07 - Passion Flower (Kevin Michael Bloor)
\'She’ll go on being beautiful
while I am sound asleep.
And when I...
May 6th, 2021 04:55 - Instinctive (Fay Slimm.)
\'and with dawn\'s tinted shimmer
blue high-light\'s sky.\'
\'and I...
May 6th, 2021 04:48 - Hands (Rebmasters)
so relatable, I agree that at times
there\'s a palpable physical...
May 6th, 2021 04:44 - Ice Queen (Neville)
so clever: its kinda crazy but that \'trolleyed\' finale, is imagery
I...
May 6th, 2021 04:37 - MATHS WIZARD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
an important message - globally! excavated thoroughly
taking note of the...
May 6th, 2021 04:28 - I\'m Done (Aznsupastarr)
wonderfully creative use of repetition,
can easily see this work being...
May 6th, 2021 04:13 - Sadness (Everlong)
\'From promising starts
To hollowing hearts
Theres too much to...
May 6th, 2021 04:04 - All Through The Night. (Goldfinch60)
\'beautiful to read it
I can\'t imagine
how it must feel: to live...
May 6th, 2021 04:03 - Silver Bleeds Red (Satishverma)
\'My gold rings sit on the moon.\'
\'I don\'t claim my pain.\'
\'The end...
May 6th, 2021 03:59 - Rough Neighborhood (H.R.Powell)
stylistically paced and worded social commentary
executed really well, a...
May 6th, 2021 03:52 - A song for Pius (Tribute to Dr. Pius Nwabufo Charles Okigbo, 1924 - 2000) (Ifeanyichukwu)
\'To bow out
At the season of sleep?\'..
such a wonderful way you have...
May 6th, 2021 03:50 - (Untitled) (All In)
a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach...
May 6th, 2021 03:44 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 2 (Nafis Light)
yup, we all cluster and create, however temporary or permanent
pockets...
May 6th, 2021 03:38 - I Heard Mama Sing Again (Rrodriguez)
purposed used of repetition to evoke such an eerie feel, of tangible...
May 6th, 2021 03:32 - Kiss of Life (Kevin Michael Bloor)
wonderful, I recognise this work or maybe just the picture? not...
May 4th, 2021 06:55 - Vicious Cycle (Harry Atkinson)
an intriguing read, wonderfully paced
thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 06:37 - Invincible (Fay Slimm.)
\'enthralment
drenches repression
with selfhood\'s long needed proof...
May 4th, 2021 06:36 - The apple redeemed by blood (Makoto Maruyama)
a great read!
I\'m sure I\'m incapable of grasping the many nuances...
May 4th, 2021 06:30 - Lies (Neville)
again, ever-so subtly: brilliant! my friend..
I hate comparing your works...
May 4th, 2021 06:23 - DESTINED TO WIN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
I think, this write is on that brink, where
that age restriction button...
May 4th, 2021 06:04 - home is where the heart is . (Brianna jean zeiger)
indeed, there\'s little room for complicated details, in true love
as...
May 4th, 2021 05:47 - Paying For My Haircut! (Goldfinch60)
well, they do say a good haircut: \'takes-off years in a man,...
May 4th, 2021 05:43 - The Little Was Big (Satishverma)
\'Not dependent on poverty
of truth, time
leaves the green...
May 4th, 2021 05:21 - Alone with You (M.E.M.)
wonderful words, conveying an important message
thanks for choosing to...
May 4th, 2021 05:18 - S (Rebmasters)
\'Transfixed by all that\'s beautiful,\'
\'What if everything I am is...
May 4th, 2021 05:06 - Another Beautiful Day (Rrodriguez)
immersive: exemplified, with practised skill!
thanks for sharing dear
May 4th, 2021 05:01 - Mother dearest Harriet Harris, née Kuritsky gave up the ghost ~ May 4th, 2004 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
\'within whose womb,
this sole son born,
thus shouldered *numb*
with...
May 4th, 2021 04:58 - Blighty (Neville)
\'The distance between
A hole in the ground and old blighty\'..
\'is the...
May 4th, 2021 04:48 - RELAX (Andy Hunter)
awesome! really like how you managed to invoke
the very same \'feel\': of...
May 4th, 2021 04:32 - NIGHT CANDLES (Shadow424)
I like the crisp imagery adding to the relatability of your write
but...
May 4th, 2021 04:29 - Unrivaled (Fay Slimm.)
\'Praise be for unrivaled female dedication to
successful survival of the...
May 4th, 2021 04:23 - Musical Glory. (Goldfinch60)
I think just by listening to the choice music that you pair with your...
May 4th, 2021 04:16 - A Fieldtrip to Heaven (Daydreaming)
I couldn\'t help relate your words to the philosophy of Baruch...
May 4th, 2021 04:10 - UNTOLD STORY OF A TEAR-DROP (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'Who cares for moth
while sitting inside a huge...
May 4th, 2021 03:52 - Not Again (JWKP98)
\'I bullied the other person for a month and attempted suicide twice.\'
I...
May 3rd, 2021 08:35 - Ramblings of who I am (Poetic Dan)
\'dogs have no egos to check. Just an unbalanced energy or behaviour...
May 3rd, 2021 08:03 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 1 (Nafis Light)
yup as Jerry highlighted, the relatability in your write is what stands...
May 3rd, 2021 07:38 - When Once Through The Chapters Of Your Skull (ADarkerMind)
\'in towns of coloured porcelain with horns of thistles myth
am beyond...
May 3rd, 2021 07:33 - That Journey. (Goldfinch60)
can\'t word any comment more sincere than doggerel dave has already...
May 3rd, 2021 07:24 - KINGDOM OF GOD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
‘Stupid! This world will remain capitalistic until money dies... What to...
May 3rd, 2021 07:18 - Dark (John Prophet)
(indeed, how unerringly accurately you pinpoint
that poetic vision for...
May 3rd, 2021 06:35 - Intoxicated (Mister V)
firstly, thank you for what is a hauntingly revealing
and bravely honest...
May 3rd, 2021 06:20 - The Painter (Michael Anthony)
(a truly beautiful dedication, thanks for sharing!)
\'near an eastward...
May 3rd, 2021 05:59 - My Life in the Stars (M.E.M.)
utilising purposed imagery and detailed - clarity, to produce poetry...
May 3rd, 2021 05:36 - Three Flowers for Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
(a write of actualised, humane ideal\'s
that anyone should be able to...
May 3rd, 2021 05:27 - Land of Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Poetry - exemplifying: quintessential, understated British - brilliance!...
May 3rd, 2021 05:03 - the screaming (Dusk arising)
acute surgical - poetry, worded: so intuitively relatable
clarifying...
May 3rd, 2021 04:30 - Worried Days. (Goldfinch60)
\'indeed, its the small realisations
that accumulate, to curate
our...
April 30th, 2021 04:51 - Observations # 61 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
yup, that belated realisation
when we\'re all gifted with limitless...
April 30th, 2021 04:46 - with all that was never enough (ADarkerMind)
\'purple blood somewhere where lava flows
where no man lands with hands...
April 30th, 2021 04:36 - BROKEN HEART (Shadow424)
(a wonderfully worded read!
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled...
April 30th, 2021 04:25 - Teetering (John Prophet)
(its by getting it-off our chest, with write\'s like yours
we get a...
April 30th, 2021 04:13 - love lines (Kevin Michael Bloor)
a wonderful dedication
depicting that painful discontent, experienced...
April 30th, 2021 03:30 - Sound (Fay Slimm.)
with a dramatically - timely picture
and triumphantly melodious words:...
April 29th, 2021 05:57 - MOURNING STAR (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
“Just one! And now also: JUST ONE!”
that proud exclamation of the...
April 29th, 2021 05:47 - The Massive Glory (Satishverma)
so deep, even excavated line by line
this worded fountain of insightful...
April 29th, 2021 05:24 - Imagination (Jordan)
relatable, and yet - worded so succinct, a remarkable fit of wordsmith...
April 29th, 2021 05:09 - A Decision re: grad school (Liam Power)
\'She simply pointed
with her questions\'
*while snapping away - at...
April 29th, 2021 04:57 - Mane (AuburnScribbler)
\'I hope that you and your hair are \"getting on\"\'..
sets the tone, for...
April 29th, 2021 04:44 - Holy Alphabet (Kevin Michael Bloor)
different, for sure - but intriguingly-so (for me)
challenging, kinda...
April 29th, 2021 04:33 - CANDLES NEVER WORRY ABOUT THEIR LIVES (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
“Now, anyone can tamper with the crest jewel of art!”..
\'Look deep...
April 29th, 2021 04:24 - Light Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
yup, witty commentary is a timeless recipe my friend
thanks for the fun...
April 29th, 2021 03:38
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