Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Passion Flower (Kevin Michael Bloor)
\'She’ll go on being beautiful
while I am sound asleep.
And when I...
May 6th, 2021 04:55 - Instinctive (Fay Slimm.)
\'and with dawn\'s tinted shimmer
blue high-light\'s sky.\'
\'and I...
May 6th, 2021 04:48 - Hands (Rebmasters)
so relatable, I agree that at times
there\'s a palpable physical...
May 6th, 2021 04:44 - Ice Queen (Neville)
so clever: its kinda crazy but that \'trolleyed\' finale, is imagery
I...
May 6th, 2021 04:37 - MATHS WIZARD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
an important message - globally! excavated thoroughly
taking note of the...
May 6th, 2021 04:28 - I\'m Done (Aznsupastarr)
wonderfully creative use of repetition,
can easily see this work being...
May 6th, 2021 04:13 - Sadness (Everlong)
\'From promising starts
To hollowing hearts
Theres too much to...
May 6th, 2021 04:04 - All Through The Night. (Goldfinch60)
\'beautiful to read it
I can\'t imagine
how it must feel: to live...
May 6th, 2021 04:03 - Silver Bleeds Red (Satishverma)
\'My gold rings sit on the moon.\'
\'I don\'t claim my pain.\'
\'The end...
May 6th, 2021 03:59 - Rough Neighborhood (H.R.Powell)
stylistically paced and worded social commentary
executed really well, a...
May 6th, 2021 03:52 - A song for Pius (Tribute to Dr. Pius Nwabufo Charles Okigbo, 1924 - 2000) (Ifeanyichukwu)
\'To bow out
At the season of sleep?\'..
such a wonderful way you have...
May 6th, 2021 03:50 - (Untitled) (All In)
a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach...
May 6th, 2021 03:44 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 2 (Nafis Light)
yup, we all cluster and create, however temporary or permanent
pockets...
May 6th, 2021 03:38 - I Heard Mama Sing Again (Rrodriguez)
purposed used of repetition to evoke such an eerie feel, of tangible...
May 6th, 2021 03:32 - Kiss of Life (Kevin Michael Bloor)
wonderful, I recognise this work or maybe just the picture? not...
May 4th, 2021 06:55 - Vicious Cycle (Harry Atkinson)
an intriguing read, wonderfully paced
thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 06:37 - Invincible (Fay Slimm.)
\'enthralment
drenches repression
with selfhood\'s long needed proof...
May 4th, 2021 06:36 - The apple redeemed by blood (Makoto Maruyama)
a great read!
I\'m sure I\'m incapable of grasping the many nuances...
May 4th, 2021 06:30 - Lies (Neville)
again, ever-so subtly: brilliant! my friend..
I hate comparing your works...
May 4th, 2021 06:23 - DESTINED TO WIN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
I think, this write is on that brink, where
that age restriction button...
May 4th, 2021 06:04 - home is where the heart is . (Brianna jean zeiger)
indeed, there\'s little room for complicated details, in true love
as...
May 4th, 2021 05:47 - Paying For My Haircut! (Goldfinch60)
well, they do say a good haircut: \'takes-off years in a man,...
May 4th, 2021 05:43 - The Little Was Big (Satishverma)
\'Not dependent on poverty
of truth, time
leaves the green...
May 4th, 2021 05:21 - Alone with You (M.E.M.)
wonderful words, conveying an important message
thanks for choosing to...
May 4th, 2021 05:18 - S (Rebmasters)
\'Transfixed by all that\'s beautiful,\'
\'What if everything I am is...
May 4th, 2021 05:06 - Another Beautiful Day (Rrodriguez)
immersive: exemplified, with practised skill!
thanks for sharing dear
May 4th, 2021 05:01 - Mother dearest Harriet Harris, née Kuritsky gave up the ghost ~ May 4th, 2004 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
\'within whose womb,
this sole son born,
thus shouldered *numb*
with...
May 4th, 2021 04:58 - Blighty (Neville)
\'The distance between
A hole in the ground and old blighty\'..
\'is the...
May 4th, 2021 04:48 - RELAX (Andy Hunter)
awesome! really like how you managed to invoke
the very same \'feel\': of...
May 4th, 2021 04:32 - NIGHT CANDLES (Shadow424)
I like the crisp imagery adding to the relatability of your write
but...
May 4th, 2021 04:29 - Unrivaled (Fay Slimm.)
\'Praise be for unrivaled female dedication to
successful survival of the...
May 4th, 2021 04:23 - Musical Glory. (Goldfinch60)
I think just by listening to the choice music that you pair with your...
May 4th, 2021 04:16 - A Fieldtrip to Heaven (Daydreaming)
I couldn\'t help relate your words to the philosophy of Baruch...
May 4th, 2021 04:10 - UNTOLD STORY OF A TEAR-DROP (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'Who cares for moth
while sitting inside a huge...
May 4th, 2021 03:52 - Not Again (JWKP98)
\'I bullied the other person for a month and attempted suicide twice.\'
I...
May 3rd, 2021 08:35 - Ramblings of who I am (Poetic Dan)
\'dogs have no egos to check. Just an unbalanced energy or behaviour...
May 3rd, 2021 08:03 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 1 (Nafis Light)
yup as Jerry highlighted, the relatability in your write is what stands...
May 3rd, 2021 07:38 - When Once Through The Chapters Of Your Skull (ADarkerMind)
\'in towns of coloured porcelain with horns of thistles myth
am beyond...
May 3rd, 2021 07:33 - That Journey. (Goldfinch60)
can\'t word any comment more sincere than doggerel dave has already...
May 3rd, 2021 07:24 - KINGDOM OF GOD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
‘Stupid! This world will remain capitalistic until money dies... What to...
May 3rd, 2021 07:18 - Dark (John Prophet)
(indeed, how unerringly accurately you pinpoint
that poetic vision for...
May 3rd, 2021 06:35 - Intoxicated (Mister V)
firstly, thank you for what is a hauntingly revealing
and bravely honest...
May 3rd, 2021 06:20 - The Painter (Michael Anthony)
(a truly beautiful dedication, thanks for sharing!)
\'near an eastward...
May 3rd, 2021 05:59 - My Life in the Stars (M.E.M.)
utilising purposed imagery and detailed - clarity, to produce poetry...
May 3rd, 2021 05:36 - Three Flowers for Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
(a write of actualised, humane ideal\'s
that anyone should be able to...
May 3rd, 2021 05:27 - Land of Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Poetry - exemplifying: quintessential, understated British - brilliance!...
May 3rd, 2021 05:03 - the screaming (Dusk arising)
acute surgical - poetry, worded: so intuitively relatable
clarifying...
May 3rd, 2021 04:30 - Worried Days. (Goldfinch60)
\'indeed, its the small realisations
that accumulate, to curate
our...
April 30th, 2021 04:51 - Observations # 61 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
yup, that belated realisation
when we\'re all gifted with limitless...
April 30th, 2021 04:46 - with all that was never enough (ADarkerMind)
\'purple blood somewhere where lava flows
where no man lands with hands...
April 30th, 2021 04:36 - BROKEN HEART (Shadow424)
(a wonderfully worded read!
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled...
April 30th, 2021 04:25 - Teetering (John Prophet)
(its by getting it-off our chest, with write\'s like yours
we get a...
April 30th, 2021 04:13 - love lines (Kevin Michael Bloor)
a wonderful dedication
depicting that painful discontent, experienced...
April 30th, 2021 03:30 - Sound (Fay Slimm.)
with a dramatically - timely picture
and triumphantly melodious words:...
April 29th, 2021 05:57 - MOURNING STAR (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
“Just one! And now also: JUST ONE!”
that proud exclamation of the...
April 29th, 2021 05:47 - The Massive Glory (Satishverma)
so deep, even excavated line by line
this worded fountain of insightful...
April 29th, 2021 05:24 - Imagination (Jordan)
relatable, and yet - worded so succinct, a remarkable fit of wordsmith...
April 29th, 2021 05:09 - A Decision re: grad school (Liam Power)
\'She simply pointed
with her questions\'
*while snapping away - at...
April 29th, 2021 04:57 - Mane (AuburnScribbler)
\'I hope that you and your hair are \"getting on\"\'..
sets the tone, for...
April 29th, 2021 04:44 - Holy Alphabet (Kevin Michael Bloor)
different, for sure - but intriguingly-so (for me)
challenging, kinda...
April 29th, 2021 04:33 - CANDLES NEVER WORRY ABOUT THEIR LIVES (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
“Now, anyone can tamper with the crest jewel of art!”..
\'Look deep...
April 29th, 2021 04:24 - Light Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
yup, witty commentary is a timeless recipe my friend
thanks for the fun...
April 29th, 2021 03:38 - Haiku- 47 (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder)
indeed, all that hoopla about the oppression of wearing masks, when in...
April 29th, 2021 03:36 - Twas fortnight before inspection 2021..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I was completely lost from start to finish, what a literary ride!...
April 29th, 2021 03:23 - butterflies probing weeds (Noah Malice)
a great read, witty and light-hearted in tone but with real depth
thanks...
April 29th, 2021 03:13 - Swimming at Lahinch (Liam Power)
beautiful flow and tone, a wonderfully subtle read
thanks for sharing
April 27th, 2021 05:12 - THE LAST NUCLEAR PLANT (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'It doesn’t just kill now, it kills later, and it could kill centuries...
April 27th, 2021 05:11 - Life Has Become A Constant (Satishverma)
\'The roots are spiking
up to talk to the sun.\'
a constant, where...
April 27th, 2021 04:55 - Monster Born By Night (Sugiura Asuna)
\'woosah\', take it slow dear poet
life still has a lot to throw your...
April 27th, 2021 04:46 - Depression (Andy Hunter)
Doggerel Dave: said it best!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 27th, 2021 04:32 - since you went away (Kevin Michael Bloor)
beautifully worded - yet again, a great read dear poet
April 27th, 2021 04:30 - Break (Rebmasters)
\'ain\'t those the memories, that distil
the pure nectar: of love\'s...
April 27th, 2021 04:27 - Telling (Fay Slimm.)
\'earth\'s ready music vibrating\'..
yet again, you\'ve gifted us a write...
April 27th, 2021 04:22 - I AM LOVE – 2 (Nafis Light)
poetry, at least for me: is so many things
but mostly, it represents that...
April 27th, 2021 04:09 - Only The Lonely. (Goldfinch60)
so these lyrics inspired the spine to your worded anguish, Andy
caught...
April 27th, 2021 04:03 - WOUNDS OF SPRING - THE LAST DAY OF ROMANOVS (PrEm Ji)
fantastic detail, sadly however thorough your background study I fear...
April 27th, 2021 03:32 - Sixty Taps in an Olde Swamp (Eugene S.)
what a wonderfully intimate last stanza, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 26th, 2021 06:25 - Matty Mattel Doll circa MCMLXV (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
a fun read, as ever dear poet
(but the mention of your sister, reminded...
April 26th, 2021 06:23 - Bench Made (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'then fight to steal His throne
Devotion pledged
in false...
April 26th, 2021 06:17 - 3 things in common (Kaunisdiana)
\'Some people have a gift to see a Rigel\'..
stylistically poetic,...
April 26th, 2021 05:53 - What Can It Be That Draws Me Back To Here? (ADarkerMind)
\'perhaps we are the cotton reel who now sleeps beneath a...
April 26th, 2021 05:44 - Not a poem but life in motion (Poetic Dan)
\'when student and teacher are one in the same.
We can slowly understand...
April 26th, 2021 05:33 - Mad Tea-Party (Makoto Maruyama)
definitely a fun read, thanks for the smiles
a fitting tribute
April 26th, 2021 05:24 - Blossom (Pacifique Niyitanga)
quirky!
a fun quick read
though I was more intrigued
by the structure...
April 26th, 2021 05:22 - Hypnotic (Fay Slimm.)
sorry, but this is one write I can\'t relate with, in terms of...
April 26th, 2021 05:18 - Twenty twenty life went on pause! (Sue.evans)
this is such an intriguing read
showcasing your practised nurturing: of...
April 26th, 2021 05:15 - SILENT SIGNS (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
‘Anxiety, thy name is Mom!’ I told myself.
.
.
.
‘No my boys......
April 26th, 2021 05:10 - Rebellion (Rebmasters)
\'Pieces falling into
place, swept away
by past pain in your eternal,...
April 26th, 2021 04:39 - Broken # 2 Maybe (Neville)
another wonderfully intimate write, my friend..
I really like how you...
April 26th, 2021 04:34 - Missing (Fay Slimm.)
funny, how we miss-out
on that eye-to-eye connection
to all things -...
April 23rd, 2021 06:59 - a glass of her (Dusk arising)
boorish, and proudly-so
a realistic depiction of how drunk we posture...
April 23rd, 2021 06:52 - Queen of Beauty (Kevin Michael Bloor)
beautiful! what a wholehearted dedication
April 23rd, 2021 06:44 - Love #2 (Rebmasters)
\'the resonance,
my senses attuned to each one of yours,
flowing into...
April 23rd, 2021 06:42 - Making Islands (Neville)
brilliant!
(your words have inspired me to surpass my feeble limits, so...
April 23rd, 2021 06:40 - Virtual Event. (Goldfinch60)
I like the play on words Andy,
although your words cut a little too close...
April 23rd, 2021 06:24 - Gauntlet (John Prophet)
indeed, we\'re all
just a \'clicked, power button - of choice, away\'...
April 23rd, 2021 05:58 - Just Another Vegas Night (Andy Hunter)
reads like the country music of poetry
thanks for sharing
April 23rd, 2021 05:54 - Bury me alone (Masking)
\'There\'s a cold here I feel slightly,
Just as I close my weary eyes.
I...
April 23rd, 2021 05:51 - A Moment (MrNobody40)
wonderful tone and flow, measured vulnerability depicted skilfully
thanks...
April 23rd, 2021 05:48 - drunk on sun (Rebmasters)
immersive, to say the least
heated: pulsation, within words of magnetic...
April 23rd, 2021 05:46
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