Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Endings (Fay Slimm.)
\'there
between jeweled sea and my feet
one moment of
sad surprise...
May 14th, 2021 03:59 - Room (Masking)
wonderfully worded, such a naturally rhythmic flow to your style
thanks...
May 13th, 2021 06:23 - I Only Ever Dream about Sex, Heartbreak, and Abandoned Buildings (Quemis)
\'Inserting of a whisper
Diversion of a spat
An extra dose of gratitude...
May 13th, 2021 06:20 - Vexation at self - regarding avoidable altercation... (Rew4er2nail)
Brilliant!
I think you are at your entertainingly immersive best
in...
May 13th, 2021 05:23 - one last cheer for the mighty sperm whale (ADarkerMind)
a mere 29 years away from its 200th birthday
Herman Melville\'s words,...
May 13th, 2021 05:06 - meditative - I (SureshG)
a wonderful depiction, to that meditative state - access, Nature can...
May 13th, 2021 04:49 - Capitalistic Endeavours (Lovedud)
(an important write, thanks for sharing
if you want a really clear...
May 13th, 2021 04:44 - Coursing (John Prophet)
\'in all those muddied-up traced laylines
of fateful choices, ley...
May 13th, 2021 04:20 - The battle of canvas till tonight (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder)
wonderfully intense, in its strategically layered nuance
what a delight...
May 13th, 2021 04:09 - YES! Everything Mattered To Me (TheBalladofMebo)
\'I am not vulnerable, just an emotional train wreck
with high tolerance...
May 13th, 2021 04:04 - Your Day (Tmjackson1968)
poetic self-expression is a wondrous accompaniment
to a healthy and...
May 13th, 2021 03:56 - Credit (Jerry Reynolds)
(a shorty, imbued with pin-pointedly acute brevity
and thanks for...
May 13th, 2021 03:49 - NO PLACE SPECIAL (Shadow424)
what a quaint read, liked the last stanza especially
thank you for
May 13th, 2021 03:31 - Boy (Rebmasters)
there is an intimate quality, in the relationships you depict
and however...
May 13th, 2021 03:27 - Take One (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliant!
May 11th, 2021 06:27 - Scope (John Prophet)
aren\'t we just...
May 11th, 2021 06:26 - Not Since The Last November Rain (ADarkerMind)
\'Mother of the playful pearl in her green unbottoned blouse
crawled with...
May 11th, 2021 06:24 - Journey of Tears (Neville)
\'Sublime deviations
And
Convoluted detours
In the end though
He just...
May 11th, 2021 05:43 - The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60)
\'That sound of music touched me\'
\'Taken to a world of beauty\'
\'That...
May 11th, 2021 05:30 - Quiescence Pervades Medulla Oblongata (Rew4er2nail)
\'triggering body electric
to become alert as a bloodhound
countless...
May 11th, 2021 05:17 - The Blind Date (Andy Hunter)
warmth, within words
thanks for sharing
May 11th, 2021 05:11 - Memory Beckons (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Days go forward,
nights in reverse\'
that retrograde certainty
of our...
May 11th, 2021 05:09 - orchids in the clouds (Crystal Hope)
\'a hourglass in the ocean,
a love letter of lost lessons.
a gift lifted...
May 11th, 2021 05:05 - CRUSH (Arobot)
its no wonder Voltaire, claimed
that Newton \'was buried like a King\'...
May 11th, 2021 04:58 - Life’s a river of memory and yearning. (Trenz Pruca)
\'Reread them
now and then
confirming
my existence.
Forgetting...
May 11th, 2021 04:50 - Can\'t (Rebeccasr5)
brilliant!
May 11th, 2021 04:48 - OCCUPATIONAL HAZARD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
another wonderfully woven tale, dear poet
(and thanks for inspiring my...
May 11th, 2021 04:46 - New moon (NikoKovacevic)
intriguing, maybe a lot was lost in translation
but thanks for sharing
May 11th, 2021 04:33 - Haemorrhoid Cream (AuburnScribbler)
and \'they\' say Anarchy - is dead, too...
some choice wording, for sure,...
May 11th, 2021 04:30 - Misunderstandings (Rebmasters)
that stormy uncertainty
where pulses beat with confidence
while eyes...
May 11th, 2021 04:22 - Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates. (Poetic Dan)
\'I\'ve made all my choices but moments
never stay the same,
to adapt...
May 11th, 2021 04:16 - Sandy (Jerry Reynolds)
acute characterisation detailing, in your succinct writing
helps define...
May 11th, 2021 04:13 - TRAVELERS (Shadow424)
wonderfully serene words that seep-in: soothingly, ever subtly..
reminds...
May 11th, 2021 04:08 - Perception (John Prophet)
is Steadfast - a turn? or direction?
cause, at this point: I fear...
May 11th, 2021 03:50 - Relevant (Fay Slimm.)
\'Scent-soaked written poetry will vibrate
as this clandestine...
May 11th, 2021 03:35 - A Dance (Masking)
(an intriguing read,
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply...
May 10th, 2021 06:12 - Fo Mom, For Us (Lovedud)
\'I like to look at the mountains.
And imagine the clouds are smoke from...
May 10th, 2021 05:54 - The Another Tale (Satishverma)
Brilliant!
Guru!
As-ever: I humbly thank you, for choosing to share
May 10th, 2021 05:50 - Negative in Blue (Neville)
\'It was there
Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet
From...
May 10th, 2021 05:48 - Liar (Germanamericanchurch)
ah, forgive my Open minded questioning, ignorance
this must be the latest...
May 10th, 2021 05:37 - Make the world Greta again. (Aa Harvey)
such writes, are ever Timely and always Important
for the Awareness they...
May 10th, 2021 05:24 - A Mother’s Heart (Accidental Poet)
a wonderful dedication
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2021 05:12 - Nowhere To Hide (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Time but a mask,
delusion concealed
The cover pulled back
—more...
May 10th, 2021 05:10 - Mothers Day (Jerry Reynolds)
subtle simplicity, at its indisputably: Classy, best..
such a...
May 10th, 2021 05:04 - Poetry or a book the dog doesn\'t give a hoot (Poetic Dan)
\'If we don\'t have the energy to back up what we think we know, then to...
May 10th, 2021 04:57 - The Light Of The New Day. (Goldfinch60)
\'yup, its that Trudge
through our midnight Blue\'s of discontent
that...
May 10th, 2021 04:49 - desire (Dusk arising)
\'So quickly his body responded
to her movement
the essence of her...
May 10th, 2021 04:42 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 4 (Nafis Light)
what a profound: Mission Statement for Life
you\'ve excavated
from...
May 10th, 2021 04:27 - Nocturnal Inspirations (Accidental Poet)
wonderfully melodic and boasting
that tell-tell seamless flow, of work...
May 10th, 2021 04:22 - Somewhere in Time (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Brilliant!
an exemplary demonstration of the impassioned musicality
we...
May 10th, 2021 04:14 - Meditation (Fay Slimm.)
we could spend a few hundred words, detailing
the transcendent effect we...
May 7th, 2021 07:04 - Ether (Rebmasters)
cleverly weaved,
maybe because I also have an appreciation
for...
May 7th, 2021 06:56 - The One (Accidental Poet)
a sweet dedication
keep venturing those endlessly wide paths of Poetry\'s...
May 7th, 2021 06:52 - Thatch (Neville)
I don\'t know, maybe not quite - thatch
but I still - reach, for...
May 7th, 2021 06:49 - The Girl I Love and Live For (Kevin Michael Bloor)
is the Artist the lucky one to find such a Muse
or the Muse, who...
May 7th, 2021 06:44 - Painting To Music. (Goldfinch60)
miles davis, Brilliance
Andy\'s soothing, words
shimmering, sunny...
May 7th, 2021 06:40 - EVERY CHILD IS A WONDER (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
\'he informed her like corpse just got up from the morgue.\'
...
“You...
May 7th, 2021 06:35 - My Mother (Mother\'s Day Poem) (JordanandThomas29)
a wonderfully sincere dedication,
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 06:24 - Incoherent Rendez-Vous (Dewypoetry)
wonderfully witty, yet deep
thanks for sharing..
reminded me of W. S....
May 7th, 2021 06:23 - MY BAGGAGE (Kaychee)
kinda awesome, how diverse a reading experience Poetry can offer..
really...
May 7th, 2021 06:19 - Almost broken (Aa Harvey)
if you put your last stanza\'s lyrics, to the Rocky soundtrack
you\'ll...
May 7th, 2021 06:16 - Back on top or bottom, who knows! Let the music flow (Poetic Dan)
a wonderful read, with such a memorable last line
May 7th, 2021 06:10 - In the Shadow of Flowers from My Love (Rebmasters)
we ambitious fallible petals, who
take so long to realise, our fated...
May 7th, 2021 06:08 - Telltale Signs (Kurt Philip Behm)
all I can say is - so true...
*needs to be read a few times: to...
May 7th, 2021 06:02 - Take Pride in Liking (M.E.M.)
the message alone is powerful!
maybe worth reposting next month (would...
May 7th, 2021 05:54 - Just for laughs (Rosiedm)
immersive and delicately worded, a fun read
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 05:47 - Some Things Should Not be Forgot (Neville)
as a confessed fan of your unassuming poetry\'s
unique element of subtle...
May 7th, 2021 05:42 - Shadow (Jabberwocky)
\'So our love then; a beach
we danced across,
leaving not a...
May 7th, 2021 05:27 - My Friend (Andy Hunter)
wonderful dedication, with a smooth captivating flow..
I\'m not sure,...
May 7th, 2021 05:19 - BACK LOT (Shadow424)
a vivid read, I get a yearning for a past that can never be re-lived
and...
May 7th, 2021 05:05 - First & Last Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
again, yet another wonderful dedication!
\'Hourglass hips and fairy...
May 7th, 2021 04:57 - More (Fay Slimm.)
and more than that
you not only grasped all that instinctive...
May 7th, 2021 04:52 - A recap and recount of pandemic lockdowns worldwide (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
\'It\'s better that busy humans now become photoholic
than forever...
May 7th, 2021 04:38 - Early Morning Love Noise? (Goldfinch60)
ha!
hmmmm, ah I know why I\'m frowning
instead of laughing -...
May 7th, 2021 04:31 - Dimpled Pains (Satishverma)
great Title!
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2021 05:43 - 5-5-21 (Wilted)
lol, yeah we all been there
usually between that initially numbing effect...
May 6th, 2021 05:42 - Long in the tooth male doth recount, reflect, reimagine... his woebegone damn dental daze today May 5th, 2021 (Rew4er2nail)
\'(managed by gumpshun,
whereby eons hyperbolically
toted beyond...
May 6th, 2021 05:35 - Alone in the Woods (M.E.M.)
I would classify this as an impassioned poet\'s latest step
towards...
May 6th, 2021 05:14 - COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond) (Andy Hunter)
a clever twist
with some 6ft-deep - hidden, acute commentary to...
May 6th, 2021 05:07 - Passion Flower (Kevin Michael Bloor)
\'She’ll go on being beautiful
while I am sound asleep.
And when I...
May 6th, 2021 04:55 - Instinctive (Fay Slimm.)
\'and with dawn\'s tinted shimmer
blue high-light\'s sky.\'
\'and I...
May 6th, 2021 04:48 - Hands (Rebmasters)
so relatable, I agree that at times
there\'s a palpable physical...
May 6th, 2021 04:44 - Ice Queen (Neville)
so clever: its kinda crazy but that \'trolleyed\' finale, is imagery
I...
May 6th, 2021 04:37 - MATHS WIZARD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
an important message - globally! excavated thoroughly
taking note of the...
May 6th, 2021 04:28 - I\'m Done (Aznsupastarr)
wonderfully creative use of repetition,
can easily see this work being...
May 6th, 2021 04:13 - Sadness (Everlong)
\'From promising starts
To hollowing hearts
Theres too much to...
May 6th, 2021 04:04 - All Through The Night. (Goldfinch60)
\'beautiful to read it
I can\'t imagine
how it must feel: to live...
May 6th, 2021 04:03 - Silver Bleeds Red (Satishverma)
\'My gold rings sit on the moon.\'
\'I don\'t claim my pain.\'
\'The end...
May 6th, 2021 03:59 - Rough Neighborhood (H.R.Powell)
stylistically paced and worded social commentary
executed really well, a...
May 6th, 2021 03:52 - A song for Pius (Tribute to Dr. Pius Nwabufo Charles Okigbo, 1924 - 2000) (Ifeanyichukwu)
\'To bow out
At the season of sleep?\'..
such a wonderful way you have...
May 6th, 2021 03:50 - (Untitled) (All In)
a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach...
May 6th, 2021 03:44 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 2 (Nafis Light)
yup, we all cluster and create, however temporary or permanent
pockets...
May 6th, 2021 03:38 - I Heard Mama Sing Again (Rrodriguez)
purposed used of repetition to evoke such an eerie feel, of tangible...
May 6th, 2021 03:32 - Kiss of Life (Kevin Michael Bloor)
wonderful, I recognise this work or maybe just the picture? not...
May 4th, 2021 06:55 - Vicious Cycle (Harry Atkinson)
an intriguing read, wonderfully paced
thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 06:37 - Invincible (Fay Slimm.)
\'enthralment
drenches repression
with selfhood\'s long needed proof...
May 4th, 2021 06:36 - The apple redeemed by blood (Makoto Maruyama)
a great read!
I\'m sure I\'m incapable of grasping the many nuances...
May 4th, 2021 06:30 - Lies (Neville)
again, ever-so subtly: brilliant! my friend..
I hate comparing your works...
May 4th, 2021 06:23 - DESTINED TO WIN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
I think, this write is on that brink, where
that age restriction button...
May 4th, 2021 06:04 - home is where the heart is . (Brianna jean zeiger)
indeed, there\'s little room for complicated details, in true love
as...
May 4th, 2021 05:47
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