Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• DARKNESS AND FIRE (SJSangeetha) Using the metaphor of light and fire love is portrayed. Very nice
  February 4th, 2025 04:49
• Night lies (Bootswiththefur) So short it seems a single tear, so powerful it seems a river. Well done
  February 4th, 2025 04:47
• Gentle But A Strong Touch (Ajon4wheels) How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul....
  February 4th, 2025 04:45
• In The Garden Of Understanding (Mohammad younus koul) Faved for its not only beautiful but urgently important message set in a...
  February 4th, 2025 04:42
• Tyler Brown (Kevin Hulme) Loved the poetic inventiveness and playfulness with the language in this...
  February 4th, 2025 04:38
• The Cricket’s Tale (MDStone) A fun read that has great rhyme and meter that carries the poem onward...
  February 4th, 2025 04:34
• The love we’ve yet to give (Meagan Adelle) Unanswered questions from a different point of view fill this piece and...
  February 4th, 2025 04:31
• They got the whole world in their hands (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Probably true but what to do with a populace as stupid and unmotivated as...
  February 4th, 2025 04:28
• Tèmítọ̀pe (Kingjamescory) Beautiful images cast in this poem with a positive message to look for the...
  February 4th, 2025 04:21
• they reside within (Aziza S) A great message sent in a great poem. Most lovely
  February 4th, 2025 04:20
• Rain (Hey!) A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely...
  February 4th, 2025 04:18
• hollow (NinjaGirl) The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that...
  February 4th, 2025 04:14
• Best Poem #3 (DaBestPoemer) Wise advice in cute words. What is that old saying that out of the mouths...
  February 4th, 2025 04:12
• WHERE AM I? (Arcane-) A mysterious feeling prevades this poem and goes unanswered. Nicely done
  February 4th, 2025 04:08
• TEMPLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I found this poem particularly beautiful in its comparison of the emotion...
  February 4th, 2025 04:05
• Poetry Shouldn\'t (Tom Dylan) A great and too often neglected message in this poem. I agree whole...
  February 4th, 2025 04:03
• untitled 575 (feathered frolick) (Arqios) Don\'t know if its the feathers, song or spring weather but this one was...
  February 4th, 2025 03:59
• Living in the Light (Orchidee) A great hymn of praise. This one seems bright and uplifting free from...
  February 4th, 2025 03:49
• At One With Nature\'s Wonder. (Goldfinch60) I too feel this unity with nature, It is musical, artistic, poetic and...
  February 4th, 2025 03:44
• Consumption (Mutley Ravishes) If that is insanity then count me in. A great write
  February 3rd, 2025 19:56
• Wet eyes (Maplespal) The pain of loss is great when it is someone you love. A sad poem
  February 3rd, 2025 15:40
• Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man (Neville) True or not it\'s a great metaphor just the same. Repression, denial,...
  February 3rd, 2025 15:35
• broken promises (Thoughtless) Loved this senryu truth in a few words
  February 3rd, 2025 12:52
• It\'s the Hunger that Drives You (Thomas W Case) Know those times when words fall in rhymes. Then they go dry for a while....
  February 3rd, 2025 12:51
• Wastelands (Kurt Philip Behm) Deep in its message and eloquently stated. Very nicely written
  February 3rd, 2025 09:34
• Unknowingly Blessed (Salvia.S) The vagueness in this poem is its charm leaving the reader wondering who...
  February 3rd, 2025 09:32
• Tha Church Clown (Tony36) Arn\'t we all clowns in some way. A wonderful poem and metaphor as well
  February 3rd, 2025 09:31
• Riordan’s First Day 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not...
  February 3rd, 2025 09:29
• Finds (Gray0328) Beautiful words building wonderful images with great metaphors. Lovely
  February 3rd, 2025 07:15
• lonely dog (Jim56) Too many homeless dogs on the streets. I know people that give them homes...
  February 3rd, 2025 07:11
• I love you (RSM0812) I xould feel this one the words were magical and that is enough for me to...
  February 3rd, 2025 07:07
• A New Sol Hereafter... (Framed Mirror) Beautiful and full of feeling the duality shifting from I to you is a...
  February 3rd, 2025 05:32
• UPON THE STREET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Take me home is what I get from the last line. Beautifully worded in verse...
  February 3rd, 2025 05:29
• I SEE YOU FALLING (Mysty Monroe) Poetic this poem leads one on a journey with another only to find that the...
  February 3rd, 2025 05:21
• The Trap (Poetic Licence) Choices we make take us to where we are today and this may not be where we...
  February 3rd, 2025 04:14
• Grim Tidings part two (Dan Williams) Still dark this poem\'s shadow falls hard. Metaphor after metaphor it...
  February 3rd, 2025 04:07
• sound of a day, precluded (Arqios) Everything felt on hold in this poem, frozen in time on the brink of but...
  February 3rd, 2025 04:03
• Midwinter Vacation (Tristan Robert Lange) Now days children get out of school for snow days. We never had that when...
  February 3rd, 2025 04:00
• Whispers Of The Heart Senryu. (Goldfinch60) This one is very nice it speaks with peace, love and a sensuousness with a...
  February 3rd, 2025 03:58
• Protection Pleas (Orchidee) Good hymn Orchi there must have been a lot of enemies in those days since...
  February 3rd, 2025 03:56
• Unjust (Teddy.15) Sad and touching all that we are is our memories and to loose them is to...
  February 3rd, 2025 03:54
• Rock Bottom (Mutley Ravishes) A thought for the reincarnationists and one that I have had before put...
  February 2nd, 2025 18:56
• Adeus (Poetaldo) sorry for the snow. I grew tired of it years ago and moved farther south....
  February 2nd, 2025 16:43
• world is not perfect (Demar Desu) Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A...
  February 2nd, 2025 14:16
• world is not perfect (Demar Desu) Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A...
  February 2nd, 2025 14:16
• Of Mary Jane and Space Brownies...Later, Maybe (Cheeky Missy) I have to say Chic you outdid yourself this time. My favorites are the...
  February 2nd, 2025 14:14
• I Say Your Name (Cassie58) Celebrating all that is of worth. A most lovely write
  February 2nd, 2025 12:51
• The cabin. (Ginny jayne) Beauty is a wonderful place to be. Nice images here
  February 2nd, 2025 12:46
• Civil War (RSM0812) Sad enough to shead a tear. Moving and powerful
  February 2nd, 2025 08:54
• My Journey (Tony36) A most positive message sent ot trust, belief and taking advantage of the...
  February 2nd, 2025 08:53
• A familiar Yard (Thoughtless) A great poem with that superb twist at the end that gives new meaning. Its...
  February 2nd, 2025 07:54
• I\'ll Remember It (Gray0328) Familiar to most of us. Just last week I went to the store to get one item...
  February 2nd, 2025 07:51
• we all age (Jim56) A statement of truth and so poetically said. Very nice Jim
  February 2nd, 2025 07:49
• Heart Disease (Tristan Robert Lange) Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should...
  February 2nd, 2025 07:47
• THE BOOKS I HAVE BEEN INTO THROUGH THE YEARS. (Swarovski20) Impressive! I have read some of these does the second part to come include...
  February 2nd, 2025 07:16
• MAN IN THE TOWER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A great line \"About his head a crown of words\" That line alone deserves...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:39
• Time\'s a Riddle (Salvia.S) This one although said in a humorus manner is a great line and deserves a...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:37
• Candlemas Celebration (Orchidee) This hymn jumps out and sings. It is a core to Christian belief. Nicely...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:34
• where time stood still (Arqios) Beautifully written it holds a bit of respect with its aged nature. I...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:32
• 1,2, &  3  from 575s and 57577s (Michael Edwards) Oh dear Fibonacci numbers, mining for bit coin? lol This one has more...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:26
• The Six Nations. (Goldfinch60) Most interesting how sport can interest a man of any age. It has been so...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:13
• Grim Tidings, part one. (Dan Williams) This begins with a Dante epic type feel. The first stanza starts with a...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:07
• Cock Soft (Thomas W Case) Vivid and powerful as a thumb between hammer and nail. It screams.
  February 2nd, 2025 04:58
• Riordan’s First Day! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with...
  February 2nd, 2025 04:54
• The Complaint Experiment (Gray0328) A great message in a poem. I am a firm believer in the idea of instead of...
  February 1st, 2025 14:22
• The Secret Tale of the Tooth Fairy (Matthew R. Callies) A great retelling of a child tale. Loosing one\'s teeth can be traumatic...
  February 1st, 2025 14:18
• Poetic Quotes (Teddy.15) There is a lot to think about in this but the underlying theme seems to be...
  February 1st, 2025 14:12
• What is Love (Kiamiz) To me love is all things. A lovely poem with great images
  February 1st, 2025 09:47
• The Man I Cannot Hear (Tristan Robert Lange) The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it...
  February 1st, 2025 09:46
• Anchor in the Storm (Amandatoriii) A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter...
  February 1st, 2025 09:08
• End (RSM0812) Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
  February 1st, 2025 09:02
• The superhero (Tony36) Are we speaking of our immune system? A fanciful poem about a real issue.
  February 1st, 2025 08:58
• Dirty mistakes (Domilla) A sense of regret prevades this work and gives the feeling that one wishes...
  February 1st, 2025 08:57
• Queria viver (Poetaldo) The feeling of change and the gifts given not always being what we want....
  February 1st, 2025 08:52
• I Say Your Name (Cassie58) There are feelings of pain but also nostalgia and the bitter sweet feeling...
  February 1st, 2025 08:47
• love is just a word (Jim56) Another bright poem Jim to lighten the day and carry one on their way
  February 1st, 2025 06:48
• The Holy Shadow (Ajon4wheels) A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A...
  February 1st, 2025 06:47
• A Canvas Of Reflections (Salvia.S) To those that love no color is important. A most beautiful write with a...
  February 1st, 2025 06:45
• One More Breath (Across_world_with_u) Ah the tenacious hold on life so nicely expressed in this marvelous poem....
  February 1st, 2025 05:47
• Sussing the Pot Plant (Neville) And so we all weep in our lonelyness. Separated by species, gender, social...
  February 1st, 2025 05:43
• no one like him (Sheta) A wonderful write personifying an ideal that does not exist. None of us...
  February 1st, 2025 04:46
• The Rain MidNight Serenades (Reynaldo Casison) This poem speaks of inoxication and an altered state of mind that carries...
  February 1st, 2025 04:44
• The Shepherds :- An ode to the Gurung community (Gaurav Gurung) Pride of one\'s roots and place of origin comes through in this poem. It...
  February 1st, 2025 04:42
• FROZEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem written in a cascading form like a waterfall carries one over...
  February 1st, 2025 04:38
• Night life (Ginny jayne) Clever and cute this poem has a child like innocence to it. Short but fun...
  February 1st, 2025 04:20
• No.2 from JANUARY WRITES (Michael Edwards) I see or rather C or is it sea. Another of your most marvelous worded...
  February 1st, 2025 04:18
• The Pirates Of Penzance. (Goldfinch60) Andy this is a fun and fanciful read. It sounds as if you had a very good...
  February 1st, 2025 04:15
• speak to them (Arqios) Communication the key to a relationship. So nicely stated in poetic from...
  February 1st, 2025 04:08
• The little atoms of light (Demar Desu) Now there is something to think about. Once again short and sweet and to...
  February 1st, 2025 04:06
• Confident Calling (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn Orchi. Tell me Orchi why it seems that most hymns...
  February 1st, 2025 04:04
• Sunrises through the blinds (Eliaskayne) Loved the line \"ghost laughter on my lips\" a great line that conjurs up...
  January 31st, 2025 21:38
• Juxtaposed Justice (NinjaGirl) Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
  January 31st, 2025 21:36
• Ben vindo (Poetaldo) This is a poem of the seasons and of life with its gratitude and dislikes....
  January 31st, 2025 20:27
• Love (Raye) Strong words and hard questions in this powerful poem. Nicely done
  January 31st, 2025 19:51
• Enduring Love. (Jan bach) Love ties strong bonds that keep a person captive. Abuse is not to be...
  January 31st, 2025 19:50
• Brought up with fairies (Gewar) Here the difference between fantasy and reality is starkly presented in...
  January 31st, 2025 19:45
• Pathetic! Little…Me (Tkatie118) Irony in this poem stands out from the narrator calling for love and...
  January 31st, 2025 19:43
• What words can do (Kaelyn Jade) To be one self is one\'s strongest weapon. A great message in this poem...
  January 31st, 2025 19:38
• When the pain takes over (Arcane-) The message alone deserves a fave in this poem of unity. Nicely worded as...
  January 31st, 2025 19:35
• A I (2781) If I were AI I would understand. Most interesting
  January 31st, 2025 19:32