Comments on community poems by Augustus
- You don\'t want to read this. (Aa Harvey)
Where do I go for my refund? Heh, heh.----- Very clever. Thoroughly...
January 6th, 2017 12:04 - Accomplish (Tony36)
Goal setting is key. Kudos.
January 6th, 2017 12:00 - All we all really need is love (Willyweed)
It is so damn simple. Makes you wonder. Maybe some are not \"human\".
January 6th, 2017 11:58 - Fired From Your Pen (Kurt Philip Behm)
High caliber pen.
January 6th, 2017 11:51 - \"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\" (Rrodriguez)
Was not that long ago man thought the sun was a God. The warmth of embrace...
January 6th, 2017 11:39 - THE TURNER PRIZE : A BRIEF SUMMATION (Michael Edwards)
I noted Gordon\'s Gin was a sponsor. Perhaps one needs to drink heavily...
January 6th, 2017 11:11 - Two Shadorma Poems (Rrodriguez)
Thanks for the Shadorma lesson. It give us a challange. Your wife and...
January 5th, 2017 15:20 - Alone (Tony36)
That your spirits be lifted and you become an intregral part of the circle...
January 5th, 2017 15:14 - the wind in the willow (Willyweed)
This is serious pillow talk.For me works well dead or alive. Nicely done.
January 5th, 2017 15:08 - Anxiety. (Quemis)
Great portrait of inner turmoil.
January 5th, 2017 15:05 - On the mend (Cynah Rae)
Stylish lady, stylish poem.
January 5th, 2017 15:02 - As You Struggle For Your Life. (Kevin browne)
And pox on the guy that takes advantage of the young addict.
Well done.
January 5th, 2017 15:00 - DADDY WORKED FROM DUSK TO DAWN (Summersounds68)
I love this, from the second of reading the title, to the last line.
January 5th, 2017 14:32 - What Could Have Been (Phoenix8523)
I often wonder about those kinds of things. If everything on earth ...
January 5th, 2017 14:30 - Defcon Zero (Kurt Philip Behm)
RodrÃguez said it all. Ibid.
January 5th, 2017 14:19 - In the dark corners (Daniel)
I see them at Walmart at 3 AM. Nicely done.
January 5th, 2017 14:15 - Sunflower Jennie (The 2 A.M Writer)
Sunflowers were used i believe to clean up nuclear radiation after...
January 5th, 2017 14:11 - A MONET HANGS ON MY BATHROOM WALL (Summersounds68)
Monet would be proud. Nicely done.
January 4th, 2017 23:56 - Merry go round (Efthimios William Cornelius)
That your prayers be answered.
Nicely done.
January 4th, 2017 22:44 - Merry go round (Efthimios William Cornelius)
That your prayers be answered.
Nicely done.
January 4th, 2017 22:44 - ladies night (Willyweed)
I bet you pulled that out of your drawers. Gave me a great belly laugh....
January 4th, 2017 22:25 - what has awakened in me (Kitkat231997)
Power of love. Nicely done.
January 4th, 2017 22:19 - Set Your Goals (Iamwoman)
I\'m working on loosing a few pounds and an attitude adjustment. Good...
January 4th, 2017 22:17 - Death Becomes Me (Kurt Philip Behm)
Becomes me. Clever. I think I got it.
You are the master!
January 4th, 2017 22:10 - Winter (The 2 A.M Writer)
This is really cool. I had to read it 3-4 times before I appreciated it....
January 4th, 2017 22:05 - Absence of Lux (Phoenix8523)
This is so cool. At first I read it as an abused wife. Then I realized who...
January 4th, 2017 21:58 - Lost identity (Notapoet)
I remember how nice my hands used to look before I ruined them working...
January 4th, 2017 21:52 - You Lead, I\'ll Follow (Jmcg)
As I read through this I think of all of life\'s problems we face. Nicely...
January 4th, 2017 21:45 - The Rain (Rrodriguez)
Amigo, tengo un granero con techo de hojalata. (Lamina metal) Me encanta...
January 4th, 2017 21:39 - PROCLITIC (Michael Edwards)
\"Witty\"! Fun.
January 4th, 2017 21:25 - Flat pack hell (Daniel)
Great idea for a poem. We have all been there. And real men don\'t read...
January 4th, 2017 21:23 - I Knew You Loved Me Right From The Start. (Kevin browne)
Love the story of love.
January 4th, 2017 21:20 - Living Shadow (John-C-Hunter)
1. As we walk through life we have certain expectations that in the end...
January 4th, 2017 09:18 - Boundless (Christina8)
Precious. Liked it a lot.
January 3rd, 2017 21:48 - Life or Death (Prose Poem) (Notapoet)
That is sad perhaps scary to realize part of you is gone. Where does the...
January 3rd, 2017 21:29 - Jewels of Love (Gerrylegister)
This is so incredibly beautiful. I love it!
January 3rd, 2017 13:43 - Broken (Gencruz)
Loss is hard. Sometimes it is with you forever. nicely done.
January 3rd, 2017 13:40 - Ashes Upon My Skin (Omgoli)
Appropriate for the new year. Very well done. Good luck.
January 3rd, 2017 13:25 - Happy Fuckin New Years (Mads)
Wow! Never been arrested but should have been. Enjoyed.
January 3rd, 2017 13:19 - And in Conclusion of my Life (JerryBolton)
Welcome, Jerry. I\'v really messed a lifetime with a soul mate for,doing...
January 3rd, 2017 13:09 - fortunate one (Willyweed)
Lovely.
January 3rd, 2017 13:03 - Beach Walk (Rrodriguez)
Could relate to every part of this poem. Was crying as I read it. Nicely...
January 3rd, 2017 13:00 - Searching for home... (Camille)
At some time in our lives we all need to take that trip through the...
January 3rd, 2017 12:53 - Adventure Abounds (Tony36)
Living life to the fullest. Something most learn too late. Awsome.
January 3rd, 2017 12:17 - Hull. City of Culture 2017..Poets corner (P.H.Rose)
what a lovely idea and poem to honor it. Wish I could be there.
January 3rd, 2017 12:14 - When All Else Fails: Punt (WriteBeLight)
Ouch! Won\'t be messing with you kid. Light and fun. (And violent, plus...
January 3rd, 2017 12:08 - P A N D A S are P R E C I O U S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Never seen a live Panda. 40 pounds is incredible.
January 3rd, 2017 12:03 - Trust isnt everything,love isnt enough! (Nicolerobinson)
Sounds like you still love him. I\'m not sure what it is about the male...
January 3rd, 2017 12:00 - Covetous (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I learn so much about life reading your poems, so rich in content and...
January 3rd, 2017 11:53 - IN UMBRIA (Michael Edwards)
I hate our suburban sprawl here in the US. I see a beautiful valley with...
January 3rd, 2017 11:37 - A Saddened Tear. (Kevin browne)
Have done lots of crying lately, both on what I cherish and the awful...
January 3rd, 2017 11:25 - Release (John-C-Hunter)
I believe you are referring that existencial dilemma we often face when we...
January 3rd, 2017 10:33 - As I lay amongst the tall grass (Daniel)
I have worn the mask my whole life. It is difficult to be real. There is...
January 3rd, 2017 10:23 - Bird Free (Projectbeing)
Welcome. I always feel sad for the animals in cages. Especially so when...
January 3rd, 2017 00:25 - When a poet writes a poem (Willyweed)
Sorry, Got here late. Idea!
When a poet sometimes is late
And the...
January 2nd, 2017 23:00 - the denier~ (Kira)
I loved the line of the burned memories scattered around.
January 2nd, 2017 22:49 - Hurts (Phoenix8523)
Sweet. I like it.
January 2nd, 2017 22:45 - Bleed and Break (Izzi Lynn)
Your message is sad but hopeful. Sometimes denial of our aliments is not...
January 2nd, 2017 22:38 - Sleeping Dogs Lie (SabreLi)
You tell em sister. Well done.
January 2nd, 2017 22:18 - Pay Attention (Seeker)
As a fellow septuagenarian I can relate. This is beautifully done.
January 2nd, 2017 22:16 - This Moment Now (Kurt Philip Behm)
Holy Jesus. I can\'t believe it. This brings tears to my eyes. I walked...
January 2nd, 2017 22:00 - Eternal (Christina8)
Makes it hard to understand how some couples just don\'t make it. You and...
January 2nd, 2017 21:53 - don\'t ask me (Willyweed)
I always wanted to live to be a 100 and be shot by a jealous husband....
January 2nd, 2017 21:50 - After The Pouring Rain (Tony36)
Short and sweet. You don\'t mess around. I\'m still looking forthe pot of...
January 2nd, 2017 21:48 - E L E P H A N T S ARE BEAUTIFUL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
There used to be huge elephant hunts in the 1800\'s and early 1900\'s with...
January 2nd, 2017 21:46 - He Is In Love (WriteBeLight)
I don\'t know how you did it but you had someone following me. Flexing my...
January 2nd, 2017 21:42 - The Land Of Hope But Not Quite. (Kevin browne)
As I read your poem I get the feeling that things don\'t seem the same any...
January 2nd, 2017 21:18 - Babylonia : Part two - Noah\'s walk (Aa Harvey)
Good message. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 21:10 - The Break Up (John Lee)
Well done. Like the photo. My favorite line is the film role.
January 2nd, 2017 21:05 - THE SHEPHERD (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully written saying so much in a compact package. Old photos and...
January 2nd, 2017 20:57 - The Door (The 2 A.M Writer)
This was serious Karma. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 01:26 - Beyond A Future Heaven Loaned (Kurt Philip Behm)
I just had a thought. Will I take your poems with me to eternity? Happy...
January 2nd, 2017 01:17 - Forest Walk (Rrodriguez)
What this reminds me of is whenever I was stressed, a walk in nature was...
January 2nd, 2017 01:08 - Hot currant scone day... (P.H.Rose)
We had a Frenchman in New Orleans who made great scones. But with tea?...
January 2nd, 2017 01:04 - Let Love Begin (Moontigerntn)
Some Englishman really got to ya, huh? Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 01:01 - Whiskey Sunset (Trinhead)
This is so beautiful and describes so well the ambivalence of loving...
January 1st, 2017 13:42 - Love Hides Within (Notapoet)
I believe many can relate to this poem. You describe so well the anxiety...
January 1st, 2017 13:34 - My love amplified (Christina8)
Met my wife 22 years ago on New Years. Very nice.
January 1st, 2017 13:27 - Pleasurable Dream (Shahla Latifi)
Very nice. Very readable, soft, flowing, effortless, pure joy.
January 1st, 2017 13:24 - the lady in the white dress (Willyweed)
Lovely, sad, touching. Enjoyed.
January 1st, 2017 09:12 - Babylonia : Part one - Noah the Kangaroo (Aa Harvey)
Why not? Love it.. Happy New Year! Look forward to next edition.ps love...
January 1st, 2017 09:10 - The Upper Echelon (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Rich elitists running our lives. Wow! Very powerful and soooo elegantly...
January 1st, 2017 09:05 - Water (WriteBeLight)
We are having a lot of it this week in Louisiana. This is so beautifully...
January 1st, 2017 08:59 - When You Told Me Twice Before. (Kevin browne)
Same headlines for years. When do we change, learn. Nicely done.
January 1st, 2017 08:50 - THANK GOD FOR 2017 ~ A NEW YEAR ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, nicely done. Happy New Year.
January 1st, 2017 08:42 - IN PRAISE OF AIR (Michael Edwards)
Light and fun. Happy New Year to you too.
January 1st, 2017 08:39 - Closet Musings #1 (The 2 A.M Writer)
Enjoyed.
January 1st, 2017 08:32 - New Year (Christina8)
Nicely done. Happy, happy!
January 1st, 2017 08:24 - i have changed (Kitkat231997)
I love the \"hello me\", like you are rediscovering yourself. Nicely done.
January 1st, 2017 08:21 - 2017 ~ A NEW PATH TAKEN ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like that path of the saints. \"When the saints go marching in\"-- one...
December 31st, 2016 14:13 - What A Soul Needs (Marie Braden)
Soulful, spiritual. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2016 14:06 - New Year\'s wish (SharonMoemise)
Here\'s to your optimism that \"Hope to vanish the crosses....\" I bear a...
December 31st, 2016 14:03 - Into The Light (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely poetry
December 31st, 2016 13:56 - The Ankh of Memory (Quemis)
I can imagine the amount of work in this. This is epic. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2016 13:07 - Sand (Abu Aeesh)
Beautiful from just grains of sand. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2016 00:18 - Deflating (Jmcg)
That is truly deflating defined in poetic style. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2016 00:15 - Stop the Night. (Zwitterion)
Wow. Food for thought. I\'ve been on dates that I did not want the dawn to...
December 31st, 2016 00:13 - I was... Born.....Raped....Lost......Reborn (P.H.Rose)
I am happy for you brother. The subject of abuse in a way does not deserve...
December 30th, 2016 19:08 - Don\'t Judge Me (Gencruz)
This is such a beautiful tirade. That being said, if you are interested in...
December 30th, 2016 19:01 - Eternity\'s Glow (Kurt Philip Behm)
Hope (and pray) you are right. Very nicely done.
December 30th, 2016 18:53
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