Comments on community poems by orchidee
- FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
You know that (not so well known) hymn \'Hail, Festal Day\' by Fortunatus?...
January 22nd, 2019 03:09 - The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kevin. I might discover love if I ever get past the swooning...
January 22nd, 2019 02:49 - FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael. Erm, is this subtitled: \"No.769 in \'The...
January 22nd, 2019 02:47 - ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards)
That Eve Ning going OK?!
January 21st, 2019 14:36 - I\'ve Ran Over Water. (Kevin browne)
That\'s a lot to do. Did you do all that one day?! lol.
January 21st, 2019 10:55 - My Death (Cynthia)
Ooh I should hold on, and have a happy birthday soon - hopefully!
January 21st, 2019 10:53 - Enlightenment (Neville)
A fine write N. Some calls their partners dinosaurs these days, if they...
January 21st, 2019 05:43 - OH WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. I\'m gonna croon / sing now! heehee.
January 21st, 2019 05:42 - The Death of Planet Earth (Joanna Garrido)
A good write as a poem Joanna. Well, on a spiritual/Christian plane,...
January 21st, 2019 04:21 - EARLYNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. You seeing those mornings dawning a little more now?...
January 21st, 2019 04:18 - Every Little Thing (Psychofemale)
A fine write P/F.
OK, I\'ll get me spade then. What ya doing in that...
January 21st, 2019 03:27 - Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60)
Ahh lovely write Gold. RSPCA adverts on telly can\'t be watered down...
January 21st, 2019 03:22 - Story of Eternity (Blessednloved)
I had an idea I would like this before I read it! It is that we don\'t...
January 21st, 2019 03:02 - ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes and pic Michael. That rubber dust - Oohh it reminded me I must...
January 21st, 2019 02:57 - The Surgery (BoxMyHeart)
I will probably faint if you say what happened in those 15 or 16 seconds!...
January 20th, 2019 09:16 - TO MANY JESUS IS STILL AN ENIGMA ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well, that\'s enough for me to believe B&A! I do tend to be a bit \'blind...
January 20th, 2019 09:10 - TO MANY JESUS IS STILL AN ENIGMA ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That cat playing Monopoly?
January 20th, 2019 09:07 - Painfully Yours (Neville)
This could be swoony in one sense. Is this the \'pain\' sense you meant?...
January 20th, 2019 09:05 - Cry Through The Pain. (Kevin browne)
Good write Kevin, with some swirling effect in the layout of the poem. The...
January 20th, 2019 03:44 - Promise Vows (Rayray2)
Good write Ray.
January 20th, 2019 03:33 - Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60)
A good write Gold. I don\'t have coffee much, but tea without milk is like...
January 20th, 2019 03:17 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes and pic Michael. What to do to*ay? I ha* *eci*e* to write a...
January 20th, 2019 03:15 - WINTER APPROACHES (Michael Edwards)
How\'s the Eve Ning going?!
January 19th, 2019 14:18 - Stable City Skylines (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
You very old too, like I am?
The answer to the Bible...
January 19th, 2019 13:23 - MY GREAT AWESOME GOD ! ANGELA : A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
January 19th, 2019 06:46 - Proclamations To Paralytic - Mark\'s Gospel (3b) (Orchidee)
Thanks M. Do we put things like \'!\' or \'?\' actually within the speech...
January 19th, 2019 06:42 - Before Leaving (Neville)
More swoons! lol.
January 19th, 2019 04:21 - Proclamations To Paralytic - Mark\'s Gospel (3b) (Orchidee)
How do you find the speech marks (\".....\") in the poem? I tend to leave...
January 19th, 2019 03:29 - Wealth of Self (RiverJordan)
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I...
January 19th, 2019 03:13 - Wealth of Self (RiverJordan)
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I...
January 19th, 2019 03:13 - Would They Lock Me Up? (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. I was going to do a poem of similar title, relating to...
January 19th, 2019 03:11 - History. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
January 19th, 2019 03:07 - WINTER APPROACHES (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael. I thought it had been here for about a month...
January 19th, 2019 03:06 - The Lion that visits the cave (Netashi)
A fine write T.
January 18th, 2019 14:37 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
Oops can\'t meet her then!
January 18th, 2019 14:34 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
Heehee! But yes, I might meet her, without the ciggies. Is she Fag-ash...
January 18th, 2019 10:53 - HUSBANDRY. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
January 18th, 2019 10:47 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
Swoony enough for me! lol.
January 18th, 2019 10:45 - Until Death (Netashi)
A nice write T.
January 18th, 2019 02:41 - For The Homeless (W c)
A fine and true write w c.
January 18th, 2019 02:37 - Moments in Words. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Gold. As I say, some days I have no moments, with no poems. Then...
January 18th, 2019 02:36 - 747 (Michael Edwards)
Yes, you sorted out those syllables well. Did Miss Berles help you with...
January 18th, 2019 02:34 - TWO 575s (Michael Edwards)
Ohh, let\'s all go in the tub and relax then - erm, separately, or else I...
January 17th, 2019 10:53 - Turquoise (Neville)
A fine write N. I was gonna write something similar. Erm, I held me breath...
January 17th, 2019 10:48 - WHY ? (Fay Slimm.)
Another fine write and pic Fay.
January 17th, 2019 04:18 - MORE HERBS & SPICES ~ BRIAN ~ An ABC Rhyming Acrostic ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A tasty write B&A.
January 17th, 2019 04:17 - TWO 575s (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes Michael. how\'s that evening? Oops it\'s miles away yet (hours...
January 17th, 2019 03:08 - My character (Heather Harrisson)
Ohh I dunno. She\'s not all that splendid to me. She made me feel sickly -...
January 17th, 2019 02:51 - Teddy Man. (Goldfinch60)
Oh a preacher used to carry a teddy with him wherever he went. He came to...
January 17th, 2019 02:46 - TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
January 16th, 2019 13:07 - The Weavers Knot (Neville)
A swoony write N.
January 16th, 2019 13:05 - The Lantern (Netashi)
A good write T.
January 16th, 2019 13:00 - Immaculate Heart of Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. I suppose I differ somewhat with my Protestant...
January 16th, 2019 03:07 - Score for Words. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. I\'ll give ya scores for singing too. Words that is,...
January 16th, 2019 03:04 - A WHISKY MAC (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael.
January 16th, 2019 03:02 - Borrowed Characters (Neville)
Me singing is a waste of space (lol), let alone some people being like a...
January 15th, 2019 06:48 - PRECOCIOUS.. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write again Fay.
January 15th, 2019 06:45 - ANGELA ~ MY HAPPINESS ~ BRIAN ~ Poeme d\'Amour ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ahh lovely write B&A.
January 15th, 2019 06:43 - Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60)
A fine yet sad write too Gold. \'Thinking\' even came into a telly soap. A...
January 15th, 2019 03:12 - LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards)
What they up to, stoking them coals of fiery love there?! Is it a...
January 15th, 2019 03:10 - Bearded Gospel Men (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
January 14th, 2019 13:29 - Street Art (Neville)
Doh! I\'m keen. I said it twice, I said \'I said it...โฆ\' Wish I would...
January 14th, 2019 13:27 - Street Art (Neville)
You using that dystonia as an excuse, or maybe as a way to stop me...
January 14th, 2019 10:55 - The Woman (Aislinn Wilson)
A fine write Aislinn.
January 14th, 2019 10:46 - The Mask (The Retired Bloke)
A fine write RB. Yes, ugh, who wants to be like \'celebs\'?!
January 14th, 2019 08:19 - MOVES. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
January 14th, 2019 08:18 - Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60)
Yep, let\'s trust \'em? For a change?
January 14th, 2019 05:13 - We are all on this show (Poetic Dan)
You mean the 15 minutes of fame on telly, that we all supposedly have?!...
January 14th, 2019 05:12 - DATING 2019 ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ahh a lovely write B&A.
January 14th, 2019 03:10 - Street Art (Neville)
Something about backs arching? Whoops! I would not know about this, of...
January 14th, 2019 03:09 - Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60)
Well, it\'s said the church is, as one thing, \'The Tory Party at...
January 14th, 2019 03:08 - TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards)
Good writes and lovely pic M. Spirit and water in your glass? Psstt! I\'m...
January 14th, 2019 03:04 - Street Art (Neville)
Anything swoony in this if I read between the lines?! heehee.
January 14th, 2019 03:00 - Blind but no fool (Netashi)
Theta (T) knows and appreciates these things, as in this fine write.
January 14th, 2019 02:59 - Their Witness His (Gary Edward Geraci)
Ooh mentations. Ahh, mental thoughts. No wonder I don\'t have many - me...
January 13th, 2019 13:28 - Tonight (Heather Harrisson)
I\'m feeling tired tonight, now there\'s no more time left to write, cos I...
January 13th, 2019 10:47 - LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards)
Could this be Rick Limmer? Surname first - Limmer, Rick?
January 13th, 2019 10:43 - Keep These Broken Shards (Neville)
I didn\'t get the hang of this. I sat on a shard instead, then sang high!...
January 13th, 2019 10:41 - Carbon Dust (Syd)
Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire...
January 13th, 2019 10:40 - My Life (The Retired Bloke)
A fine write RB.
January 13th, 2019 07:09 - PEACE IN THE VALLEY ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely and meditative write B&A.
Hills and valleys - it\'s also started...
January 13th, 2019 03:40 - No Signalling Day. (Goldfinch60)
Ahh, a dangerous day. We best not go out that day, risking life and...
January 13th, 2019 03:36 - LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol, a fine write Michael. Did she fit wheels to the egg?
As for the...
January 13th, 2019 03:32 - Warning (Aislinn Wilson)
I\'m a bit woozy reading the first two lines here. The theme to me seems...
January 13th, 2019 03:29 - if you but take a bite of this forbidden fruit... (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. We don\'t know if it was an apple. Many say it was!
January 13th, 2019 03:25 - The age of branding (Netashi)
Hi T. Can I call you T? As long I don\'t call you Q, or whatever?!...
January 13th, 2019 03:24 - Altar\'s Tears (Crystal Hope)
A fine write Crystal.
January 13th, 2019 03:21 - A First Line, Please (DesertWords)
Well, I often put the title in last - over 90% of the time!
January 12th, 2019 12:04 - Leave the Buttons on Your Blouse Undone (Neville)
Well, some peoples are still having fun on \'ere. I\'m glad to hear it!...
January 12th, 2019 05:46 - GO TO WORK ON AN EGG ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A tasty write B&A. Now, did Job like eggs? See Job 6 v.6. Maybe he only...
January 12th, 2019 05:45 - Morning Sun in the mountains (Crystal Hope)
A fine write Crystal.
January 12th, 2019 03:18 - One soft kiss (Joanna Garrido)
I should \'get out more\', and get some soft kisses! Myself I mean.
January 12th, 2019 03:09 - Explain To A Child (ForeverJesus7)
A fine write Forever.
January 12th, 2019 03:04 - FARMYARD DARTS (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael. lol. Miss Berles play darts?
January 12th, 2019 03:03 - Wonderful Life. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold.
January 12th, 2019 03:01 - Mirrors and candles (Netashi)
Is Theta (T) a candle? Well, the poem lights up as a fine write!
January 11th, 2019 11:06 - Students (Neville)
A fine write N.
January 11th, 2019 10:58 - MELT-DOWN (Fay Slimm.)
A lovely write Fay.
January 11th, 2019 04:00 - Wild (Joanna Garrido)
A fine write Joanna.
January 11th, 2019 03:10 - Separations (Lorna)
A fine write Lorna. Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go. You won\'t be sad.
January 11th, 2019 02:58
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