Comments on community poems by orchidee
- Gospel Growth - 1 Thessalonians Series (1) (Orchidee)
In last verse, poetic licence - \'faith\' and \'days\' do not rhyme, but...
February 22nd, 2019 03:26 - Ice Cream Shop (W c)
A tasty write w c.
February 22nd, 2019 03:17 - A WEEK OF HAIKU ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Oohh work every day then. Then we wouldn\'t be bothered...
February 22nd, 2019 03:15 - Contentment. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Andy.
A guy goes to Doc and says \'I keep feeling...
February 22nd, 2019 03:12 - MORE 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
A fine write Michael. I thought you was stuck in that building yesterday -...
February 22nd, 2019 03:09 - Strength (Natasha_J_Bella)
A fine write Natasha. We can get used to carrying burdens, even ones that...
February 21st, 2019 09:50 - WORDLESS. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
February 21st, 2019 09:43 - Heathen (Neville)
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was...
February 21st, 2019 05:14 - Dance the Tango. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
February 21st, 2019 03:38 - Someone\'s Eye. (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kev. Dunno why some people complain - some days we can have...
February 21st, 2019 02:52 - turn back the clock (Dusk arising)
A fine write DA. I can\'t understand some folk. We all had an extra...
February 21st, 2019 02:35 - MORE 575 SMILES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Miss Berles have vindaloo?
February 20th, 2019 10:48 - Good Teacher (W c)
A good write w c.
February 20th, 2019 10:43 - what makes a poet? (Dusk arising)
A fine write D A.
February 20th, 2019 10:42 - FUSIONS WERE FUN ! AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Wii I swoon if I light your fusion?!
February 20th, 2019 04:51 - Some Sort Of Dipity (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A good write Andrew. Also - There are those who will sing again - me,...
February 20th, 2019 03:59 - ENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine tribute Fay.
February 20th, 2019 03:57 - What Do You Drive (Neville)
Where did she go? Was she related to Boadicea? Oh, that was yesterday\'s...
February 20th, 2019 03:57 - Honour Unfounded. (Goldfinch60)
There was a pic of the PM \'chatting\' to a dog (probably Fido) outside a...
February 20th, 2019 02:59 - MORE 575 SMILES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol good writes M. I try to get them to save money too - add water to...
February 20th, 2019 02:56 - Armadillo (W c)
A lovely write w c.
February 19th, 2019 11:35 - Spring Starts. (Goldfinch60)
Did they have Spring in 1066, or was it cancelled?!
February 19th, 2019 06:57 - I didn\'t know what to call this (A)
Erm, call it \'This\'ll hurt your eyes!\' (that yellow/orange!) lol.
Or -...
February 19th, 2019 06:53 - DECISIVE. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. Reminds of \'Do we have proper rain?\' Or will it be...
February 19th, 2019 06:48 - Shield Maiden (Neville)
Oohh what\'s she up to there, battling on? She certainly \'gets out more\'...
February 19th, 2019 04:25 - TRANSFORMED BY SEASONS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A DODECET FLOW POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I thought I might have to swoon, seeing \'naked\' in this poem! Ahh, you...
February 19th, 2019 03:35 - The MOUSETRAP (FineB)
A fine write Fine. And the person who dunnit was...… I was gonna be a...
February 19th, 2019 03:17 - Spring Starts. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold. Our hedge is showing signs of Spring. Some small...
February 19th, 2019 03:14 - MORE 575 SMILES (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol, good writes and pic Michael. I been trying to get out of this...
February 19th, 2019 03:12 - Foxes Are Special (W c)
A lovely write w c.
February 18th, 2019 15:38 - Tripping over J.S. Bach’s “Fantasia & Fugue in G Minor” (Gary Edward Geraci)
It\'s a \'towering\' piece if it\'s the one I think it is. If it\'s not...
February 18th, 2019 15:37 - Unfeeling (Sylviasearcher)
And yet \'nothing\' is \'some-thing\' in itself, Yes?! Unless it\'s some...
February 18th, 2019 11:17 - WORKIN\' NINE TO FIVE ~ BRIAN ~ A RHYMING DODECET ~ Including DOLLY PARTON VIDEO ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks B&A. A couple of other things on this notice were:
* Request must...
February 18th, 2019 11:06 - Not 21 Again?! (Orchidee)
How is Scrab, M? You seen him much these days?!
February 18th, 2019 11:01 - WORKIN\' NINE TO FIVE ~ BRIAN ~ A RHYMING DODECET ~ Including DOLLY PARTON VIDEO ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. And yet - it can be more like 8 to 6 in some places...
February 18th, 2019 04:30 - Becoming Great (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. Opposite to the worlds\' system - \'Serve yourself; put...
February 18th, 2019 03:19 - REMEMBERING. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. They\'ll shoot me though - I keep adding water to their...
February 18th, 2019 03:17 - Away With Words (Neville)
Yes, those pesky words - they are cads, bounders, jolly bad shows, eh?!
February 18th, 2019 03:03 - Smoke Filled Days. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and clip Gold. I gave up smoking about age 13, with my first...
February 18th, 2019 03:01 - HIS INFLUENCES (Michael Edwards)
That\'s all OK then, if her advances were sanctified. Would be very swoony...
February 18th, 2019 03:00 - Troubles Gone (W c)
A good write w c.
February 17th, 2019 15:13 - Oblivion (Clark)
Good write Clark.
February 17th, 2019 08:49 - Heavy Vinyl (Syd)
A fine write Syd. Well, I only asked for a DVD tape in a shop, and they...
February 17th, 2019 08:44 - Writer\'s Block (DesertWords)
Yep, can\'t understand these \'writer\'s blocks\' poems, cos by the time...
February 17th, 2019 08:42 - Embu (Neville)
I could do with an embu, seeing as I\'m 21 again tomorrow, N. lol. I do...
February 17th, 2019 08:39 - Welcome (SheWasTheSun)
A fine write Sun. I thought you was doing Tai Chi (Chai)! lol. Well, it...
February 17th, 2019 03:31 - Shadows to Light. (Goldfinch60)
A fine and true write Gold.
February 17th, 2019 03:08 - LOVE OF GOD ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Yes - end of John\'s Gospel too - \'If all Jesus did was...
February 17th, 2019 03:07 - I AM, I WILL BE (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. But - Who am I? Am I \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'?...
February 17th, 2019 03:04 - CORN & CRAB CHOWDER ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 5 6 4 5 DODECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
February 16th, 2019 11:31 - Radical Adventure (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
February 16th, 2019 11:30 - A Handful of Ghosts (Neville)
A fine, maybe swoony write N.
February 16th, 2019 07:52 - Nightiming (Netashi)
Good write T.
February 16th, 2019 03:24 - Serving The Homeless (W c)
A fine write w c. - very commendable.
February 16th, 2019 03:05 - Newspaper Chatting. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Yes, I can\'t recall any mobile phones in 1066 - can...
February 16th, 2019 03:04 - MONOSTICHS BY THE SEVERAL (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes Michael. That explains it - I been mucking about for two hours...
February 16th, 2019 03:02 - SECRET SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards)
Couple of new people on \'ere? Mr McBrian and Ms McPlastica! They fiends...
February 15th, 2019 10:35 - every now and again (Dusk arising)
A fine write dusk.
February 15th, 2019 04:24 - RECOLLECTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Eloquent recollections Fay.
February 15th, 2019 04:23 - When I am Far (Neville)
I best not ask what\'s going on there. Someone having fun? If so, I\'m...
February 15th, 2019 03:51 - VALENTINE ACROSTIC FOR ANGELA : ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What more could you want, than something like this...…?! Ahh lovely...
February 15th, 2019 03:04 - Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold. I would probably end up singing to folk. They would...
February 15th, 2019 02:42 - SECRET SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards)
Good write M - a bit swoony! lol.
February 15th, 2019 02:40 - Red robin (Shakerite)
Good write S.
February 14th, 2019 14:28 - My Heart and I (Jeffrey T. Hilliard)
A fine write J.
February 14th, 2019 14:21 - We Were Fishers (W c)
Good write w c.
February 14th, 2019 14:20 - RELIANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
A good write Fay.
February 14th, 2019 14:19 - VALENTINE\'S DAY 14TH FEBRUARY (FineB)
A good write Fine.
February 14th, 2019 14:16 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
I drag on and on....… I\'m known for it (I expect so!) heehee. Woo......
February 14th, 2019 14:14 - The 7 Colours Of Light. (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kevin. Me genie went \'Pffftt! Well, I wanted more than 3...
February 14th, 2019 03:10 - Love Limitless (Orchidee)
Woof! Not now Fido! Not the sort of \'faint\' you mean - verse 4. heehee.
February 14th, 2019 03:08 - SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Did you ever meet Val (Valentine) as Gold and I...
February 14th, 2019 03:00 - Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold.
February 14th, 2019 02:59 - CLOSE ENCOUNTER WITH BRIAN : ANGELA : A DOBLE DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely write A.
February 14th, 2019 02:58 - Analytical Ambivalence (JaydeVictoria)
Cooeee! I\'m here too! Erm, not that I do a fine analysis of it as you...
February 13th, 2019 10:39 - Cusp (Neville)
A fine write N. But what\'s going on, on that beach? Will Fido bark at...
February 13th, 2019 05:20 - Word Search (FineB)
A fine write Fine. I get bored with Sudoku - can\'t even do the easy ones...
February 13th, 2019 04:13 - A VALENTINE CARD ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely write B&A, along with the very old song (heehee) from 1958. I...
February 13th, 2019 03:00 - Our Buddy (W c)
A good write w c.
February 13th, 2019 02:45 - JOINED. (Fay Slimm.)
A good write Fay.
February 13th, 2019 02:45 - YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards)
Erm yes, correct! It\'s started me off on the 1965 song \'Yesterday, all...
February 13th, 2019 02:44 - The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold. Let\'s croon!
February 13th, 2019 02:40 - PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards)
How\'s that evening? Tomorrow evening it will be yesterday\'s evening -...
February 12th, 2019 14:14 - Withholding (ColeyCam)
OK I\'ll leave then! lol.
February 12th, 2019 14:13 - RIOJA WINE ~ SUPERIOR ! BRIAN ~ A PHILOENIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Eh> My google does not know \'philoinic\'? Summat about Philo and...
February 12th, 2019 05:58 - RIOJA WINE ~ SUPERIOR ! BRIAN ~ A PHILOENIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. I must have some Rioja. It\'s the only time I can say...
February 12th, 2019 05:56 - INVITING. (Fay Slimm.)
A lovely write Fay.
February 12th, 2019 04:16 - More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
It\'s too much for me, of course - swoon! lol.
February 12th, 2019 03:42 - Self Harm (Neville)
Oohh the subject makes me shudder - and not out of swooniness (is that a...
February 12th, 2019 03:41 - Ready For His Return - Mark\'s Gospel (17) (Orchidee)
Well I been around since 1066 or earlier, and it\'s not happened yet! (??)
February 12th, 2019 03:35 - Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60)
A good write Gold. This seems so for some (many?). Yet some oldies can...
February 12th, 2019 03:14 - PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. I wanted nectarous flow, so I went to Sainsburys...
February 12th, 2019 03:11 - Insanity of a Sentence (ColeyCam)
A fine write C. I knows this - me singing will reduce ya to rubble....
February 11th, 2019 15:13 - 487 (Aislinn Wilson)
Fine write A.
February 11th, 2019 15:11 - Moon (Jointedace)
Good write J.
February 11th, 2019 11:05 - A Long Time Ago- Longing For Home (Pldabbs)
A fine write C.
February 11th, 2019 11:03 - Save the Elephant 🐘 (Joanna Garrido)
A thoughtful write Joanna. There\'s that \'creature\' too - she who kills...
February 11th, 2019 11:00 - Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine write A. Is that your house after gale force winds - blew the roof...
February 11th, 2019 10:56 - STATUS QUO ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ohh, I\'m uneducated or uncultured - gausian? Ahh, I know it now.
Heehee....
February 11th, 2019 05:53 - Mirrors Cracked (Neville)
A fine write N. I\'m not saying I\'m ugly, but I\'ve had a million years...
February 11th, 2019 05:50
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