Comments on community poems by orchidee

• The First Move. (Goldfinch60) ...in fact it was worse than my singing, if one was able to \'smell\' my...
  July 3rd, 2019 01:56
• The First Move. (Goldfinch60) A good write Gold. Some - a few - may be off-putting though. I encountered...
  July 3rd, 2019 01:55
• WHEN I WERE YOUNG (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. It reminds me - are we meeting Dora Berles for...
  July 3rd, 2019 01:52
• Looking Just to See (Neville) A fine write Neville. I\'m not a blue-eyed boy for nothing ya know. Did...
  July 3rd, 2019 01:50
• Tomorrow Lost (Neville) Good write N. Yes, tomorrow is always lost for me. When it gets here,...
  July 2nd, 2019 08:19
• A FINE PEAR ! ANGELA ~ FIVE BALANCED QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) A fine poem B&A. Pears for our guinea pigs too (in the pic). Not called...
  July 2nd, 2019 08:18
• Chaos Theory (Neville) How are you N? I\'m feeling decidedly queasy, but that\'s cos I just tuned...
  July 2nd, 2019 03:04
• To Those Who Call Themselves Atheists (ForeverJesus7) Yet some atheists are maybe agnostics. Their \'faith\' is admirable in a...
  July 2nd, 2019 02:05
• FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Can we get Hovis from that new world?! Horlicks too?! I...
  July 2nd, 2019 01:43
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (15 and 16) (Michael Edwards) Good writes and pic M. Yes - and those Fire Exit doors in shops and other...
  July 2nd, 2019 01:41
• HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 338 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) Looks good! But I would faint. I get dizzy going up some ladders. Well,...
  July 1st, 2019 10:54
• No harm (Poetic Dan) A fine write and pic Dan.
  July 1st, 2019 04:06
• CHANGE. (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  July 1st, 2019 04:06
• Chaos Theory (Neville) A fine write Neville. Any chaos if I sing?! lol.
  July 1st, 2019 04:05
• Childlike Communings (Orchidee) Childlike, not childish, nor as a child being naughty.
  July 1st, 2019 01:40
• Wordiku Two (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Yes, this was so in 1066. I tried to judge the arrow\'s...
  July 1st, 2019 01:31
• Untitled - XIII (Suresh) A fine write Suresh. Yes, does love ever leave us exposed to hate?
  July 1st, 2019 01:29
• WORKS OF ART (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic Michael. Oh, sounds like a French loo - a pissoir!...
  July 1st, 2019 01:28
• GOD IS EVERYWHERE ~ AMEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Free Verse 6-6-2 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) You\'d knew I\'d like this, and with the guinea pigs (?) in the clip -...
  June 30th, 2019 07:31
• Is It Really Impossible...to Believe In Love? (Nafis Light) Yes - the second half of what Brian & Angela said! And laughter is surely...
  June 30th, 2019 07:27
• Captivating Games (Neville) A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
  June 30th, 2019 07:25
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (14) (Michael Edwards) You talking b******s?! Ahh, not you, but others! Is there Arty Berles...
  June 30th, 2019 07:22
• Big Pharm (Christina8) Hope so Christina! Some might try, advertising, etc, to get us to take...
  June 30th, 2019 01:34
• Escaping From Reality. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  June 30th, 2019 01:30
• Top Floor (Gary Edward Geraci) A fine write Gary. I looked up - but fell off the roof! doh! (heehee).
  June 29th, 2019 14:16
• I Found Myself Thinking of You (Neville) A poignant and sensitive write Neville. My insensitive version is - What...
  June 29th, 2019 11:20
• Band of men (Poetic Dan) A fine write Dan.
  June 29th, 2019 11:18
• Gutter Gardening. (Goldfinch60) Oh lol, good write Gold.
  June 29th, 2019 01:29
• HARMONIUS HARP ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4-4-4-2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thanks B&A. You got your harps out?!
  June 29th, 2019 01:28
• UK vs EUROPEAN DIET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A fine write B&A. Walkers Crisps - yuk! More like bags of salt!
  June 28th, 2019 10:53
• Tomorrow, today and always (Poetic Dan) Good write Dan. You got those teeth still?!
  June 28th, 2019 02:30
• Poppy Seeds (Neville) A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said...
  June 28th, 2019 02:29
• Hill (Suresh) There\'s no doubt I will Be liking this fine poem still Even when...
  June 28th, 2019 02:26
• HEAT. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay. Or to put it gloomily maybe - though we need rain - them...
  June 28th, 2019 02:23
• That Day When..... (Goldfinch60) A poignant write Gold. Thinking of you both.
  June 28th, 2019 02:21
• Time Beaten Path (Suresh) Good write Suresh.
  June 27th, 2019 11:43
• BREAK OUT. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna fly then, feel me feet leaving the ground!
  June 27th, 2019 03:15
• A Sound for Sore Eyes (Neville) An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He...
  June 27th, 2019 03:13
• MY SECRET GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A 66666 TRIGINTA XXX ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) A good write B&A. I\'m gonna be horribly negative - \'When one door shuts,...
  June 27th, 2019 03:12
• Way-Fair (Gary Edward Geraci) Nice write Gary.
  June 27th, 2019 01:44
• Red Lorry, Yellow Lorry? (Goldfinch60) Oh lol, good write Gold. Was there this confusion in 1066?!
  June 27th, 2019 01:43
• GUILTY ~ OF NOT BEING GREEN ENOUGH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4442 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) And furthermore - hey, I\'ve gone green - my face has. I knew I never...
  June 26th, 2019 04:24
• GUILTY ~ OF NOT BEING GREEN ENOUGH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4442 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thanks A &B. Urgh, a gross way to save - some don\'t flush public toilets...
  June 26th, 2019 04:23
• ARE WE ? (Fay Slimm.) Dunno - the last lines. I got shipwrecked! No! Enough frivolity. lol. A...
  June 26th, 2019 04:19
• Yoda ish (Poetic Dan) Erm, it\'s a pity the only Yoda I seem to know is the one in Star Wars!...
  June 26th, 2019 04:17
• Dance (Neville) What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks,...
  June 26th, 2019 04:16
• Two Brothers. (Goldfinch60) Were we brothers in 1066? Standing together? Or falling apart, the moment...
  June 26th, 2019 02:08
• Two Brothers. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  June 26th, 2019 01:56
• Serenity (Suresh) By this fine poem, serenity captured!
  June 25th, 2019 13:12
• ORANGE & LEMONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DOUBLE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) A fine write B&A. Now Brian - why near Colleges, Universities, etc, are we...
  June 25th, 2019 06:33
• FERTILITY. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay. In some woods they clear branches, grass, etc, but we...
  June 25th, 2019 06:31
• Best Before See Date (Neville) Aww, why they call you out of date? Or you mean me?! heehee.
  June 25th, 2019 06:29
• Art into Words. (Goldfinch60) A fine write and pic Gold.
  June 25th, 2019 01:37
• Will I ever? (Sylviasearcher) Fido, me watchdog, can be a bit too keen. He might bark at the minimum...
  June 24th, 2019 09:39
• UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.) A good write Fay.
  June 24th, 2019 03:50
• There Are No Graves (Neville) Oohh I\'ll come over and cheer ya up. I\'ll be singing, mind ya. Ya could...
  June 24th, 2019 03:49
• EUROPE ~ MOST DIVERSE CONTINENT ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A VIGINTI QUINQUE (5 6 11 3 !) (ANGELA & BRIAN) Oohh a viginti-wotsit. I know them well! I\'m afraid Fido started barking...
  June 24th, 2019 03:47
• white laced panties (Leaaa) Ooh, best mark this 18+. Woof, woof, that\'s my \'watchdog\' barking! lol.
  June 24th, 2019 01:37
• Miracles Exist. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold lol. We had a \'Prayers for Healing\' service, but you...
  June 24th, 2019 01:36
• THE MINIMALIST MANTRA (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. Miss Berles only keep what she needs? No extra...
  June 24th, 2019 01:33
• Shower You With Flowers. (Kevin browne) A fine write Kevin.
  June 23rd, 2019 12:28
• Ache (Neville) Would I swoon if I enquired further? lol.
  June 23rd, 2019 12:27
• Curtain call (Andrew Charles Forrest) You had one too many, with that title of this fine poem?! I\'m shure you...
  June 23rd, 2019 07:49
• My Spirit. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. It is the person of the Holy Spirit living in hearts...
  June 23rd, 2019 01:27
• TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. My walk along tracks in an Art Trail become an...
  June 23rd, 2019 01:24
• Untitled - XX (Suresh) A fine write Suresh. Here\'s a poem-story: \'Once upon a ti……...\'...
  June 22nd, 2019 10:56
• Human soup (Andrew Charles Forrest) A fine write Andrew. My soup\'s not like all the rest. It\'s oxtail and...
  June 22nd, 2019 10:55
• Keep going (Poetic Dan) I\'ll blame you - I\'ll keep on singing then. Arrgghhh , they say! lol.
  June 22nd, 2019 10:54
• SHOPLIFTING ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes, I always pay for Fido\'s bones!
  June 22nd, 2019 10:52
• SHOPLIFTING ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN) There\'s no one on the tills sometimes, e.g .small corner shop, one person...
  June 22nd, 2019 10:52
• Word Choice. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. Wish I had not uttered those words in 1066 - you know...
  June 22nd, 2019 01:10
• MY VILLAGE (Michael Edwards) Oh lol, good write and pic M. When\'s our turn on the idiot rota?!
  June 22nd, 2019 01:09
• BLUE BLESSINGS ~ DEDICATED TO MARIJOY ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ ABCDarian (ANGELA & BRIAN) A colourful write B&A.
  June 21st, 2019 10:52
• VIBES. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay.
  June 21st, 2019 02:14
• Old Sea Walls (Neville) A fine write Neville. I got as far as Bognor or Clacton. Are they near...
  June 21st, 2019 02:13
• Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60) Yes, and \'No one is perfect - except me\' we may say! The we need to eat...
  June 21st, 2019 02:11
• THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2) (Michael Edwards) Yes, even \'I woz ere\' carved or written on tree trunks! You seen Mr...
  June 21st, 2019 02:10
• THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (Michael Edwards) Oh no, he saw it - woof, woof, woofity-woof - a poetic woof there. No end...
  June 20th, 2019 13:27
• Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth (Poetic Dan) Meanwhile - don\'t listen to my singing. if you\'re on a roller-coaster of...
  June 20th, 2019 03:02
• Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth (Poetic Dan) Good write Dan. As I say though, I don\'t build my life ONLY on feelings....
  June 20th, 2019 03:01
• Life Before Bar-codes (Neville) Good write Neville. Yes, I was in a supermarket then. We had price-label...
  June 20th, 2019 02:59
• IN THE PINK ! ANGELA ~ An ABCDarian Poem ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thanks B&A. Now where did I put my pink handbag?! Oohh.
  June 20th, 2019 01:57
• Life\'s Choices. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. Is thinking dangerous? Or too much of it? Well, it was,...
  June 20th, 2019 01:55
• THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (Michael Edwards) A fine write Michael. Poetry might be about B& B (Bed & Breakfast); but...
  June 20th, 2019 01:53
• Falling (Sylviasearcher) That\'s the question - Did he fall or was he pushed?! oohh.
  June 19th, 2019 11:13
• Erigeron (Neville) I thought you meant Fleabag! heehee. A fine write Neville.
  June 19th, 2019 02:07
• Peaceful Providence (Orchidee) Can you help? In verse 5 I have use \'cease\' twice. I need another word...
  June 19th, 2019 01:53
• THIS OLD HOUSE ~ BRIAN ~ A SPOOKY SAGA (ANGELA & BRIAN) A fine write B&A.
  June 19th, 2019 01:39
• EARTH (Michael Edwards) A good write and pic M. You crumbling? Another Berles - Crum Berles!
  June 19th, 2019 01:38
• Word Struggle. (Goldfinch60) Oh lol, a fine write Gold.
  June 19th, 2019 01:37
• BALANCED DIET = BALANCED LIFE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) A fine write A&B.
  June 18th, 2019 10:45
• Fret Not To Do Evil (Orchidee) A fluster I said, not a hot flush! Though I am very old, and may need to...
  June 18th, 2019 02:07
• More Often Than Not. (Kevin browne) A fine write Kevin. I was gonna do a verse with the same title (was I...
  June 18th, 2019 01:57
• Coffee or Tea? (Nafis Light) Good write J. Cold tea or coffee - yuk! heehee.
  June 18th, 2019 01:51
• Past and Future - Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. That you on that horse?! We were on horses in 1066.
  June 18th, 2019 01:50
• Let’s Call That Day a Week (Neville) If you\'re gonna talk about those things, I\'m gonna swoon! heehee.
  June 18th, 2019 01:49
• MY STAFF (Michael Edwards) A nice write and pic Michael. I dunno - I thought of the song \'My faith...
  June 18th, 2019 01:48
• of Elspenore pt 3 (Dusk arising) I don\'t know these guys - and gals? of Elspenore. Is it near Clacton?!
  June 17th, 2019 10:18
• Again & Again (Poetic Dan) I thought that thingy at the top was an eye test! Dunno about me soul,...
  June 17th, 2019 05:03
• Out of Sight (Neville) You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me...
  June 17th, 2019 05:02