Comments on community poems by orchidee

• A Plan (Devin Ryne) Good write D.
  June 10th, 2022 11:34
• Organ donor card (Blueledge) Good write Blue.
  June 10th, 2022 11:33
• spiral noose (Arqios) Good write CB. Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day....
  June 10th, 2022 11:31
• “001” (Gary Edward Geraci) Good write Gary. Ahhh, not about the first James Bond. lol.
  June 10th, 2022 11:28
• Don’t Give Up! (Serlina Rose) Good write S. I was not gonna give up. But I took so long deciding not to...
  June 10th, 2022 05:52
• Forgiveness (Serlina Rose) Good write S.
  June 10th, 2022 05:50
• I just wanna write (Samprikta Paul) And now you\'ve done this fine write! :)
  June 10th, 2022 03:11
• Yield (Fay Slimm.) I yield, and give in, surrender, lay down my life (no need to go that far,...
  June 10th, 2022 03:10
• Hypothetically Yours (Neville) I truly un-hypo-wotsit say - good write N. \'Un-hypo-wotsit\'?? I sound...
  June 10th, 2022 03:07
• Nightmare dreams (Kitty the naughty poet) It\'s only Sir hiding in the bushes! Doh! that\'s killed off the tension...
  June 10th, 2022 02:07
• Not just a dog (Lisa Gibson) Ah yes, man\'s/woman\'s best friend?!
  June 10th, 2022 02:03
• Many Rivers To Cross (ForeverJesus7) Good write Forever. You in Dover?!
  June 10th, 2022 02:02
• Three For A Girl. (Goldfinch60) Agghh! I keep seeing one on its own. It\'s sorrow all right - for others...
  June 10th, 2022 02:01
• Anxiety (Draven) Maybe just a phase? Better days to come? Or - I told ya not to listening...
  June 9th, 2022 10:45
• Lovers tree (Kitty the naughty poet) They been there too long! They will fall to pieces. lol.
  June 9th, 2022 10:44
• THE DIVINE PROPORTION (Robert Tilleard) Erm, you lost me at about the second line. Then something about the 618...
  June 9th, 2022 08:00
• Awayness (Fay Slimm.) I have come back-ness to this site (that\'s not a word, Orchi. lol) to say...
  June 9th, 2022 05:41
• Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville) We can only hope - even if sounding un-Christian, or un-spiritual. I have...
  June 9th, 2022 05:39
• Bird Orchestra (Fearless Leo) Good write Leo. Was you fearless of that bird, or did it peck you?! lol.
  June 9th, 2022 05:36
• Ride the Waves? (Draven) It happened to St Paul (Acts Chapter 27). He had some spiritual knowledge...
  June 9th, 2022 01:33
• gems inside (Arqios) My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we...
  June 9th, 2022 01:30
• Four Together. (Goldfinch60) Yes, good write Gold. Some are bothered by anxiety? guilt? sense of...
  June 9th, 2022 01:28
• Gone (Fay Slimm.) I\'m glad this fine poem\'s not gone! Where do poems go when...
  June 8th, 2022 10:16
• Over and Out (Neville) Good write Neville. i got a mad picture - the mind boggles - of ya...
  June 8th, 2022 10:14
• Prayer Persevering (Orchidee) Thanks Milind.
  June 8th, 2022 10:11
• Prayer Persevering (Orchidee) I\'m gonna oft sing this! Arrgghh! lol.
  June 8th, 2022 02:15
• HER LAST RESTING PLACE (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. Miss Berles got a mattock?
  June 8th, 2022 02:07
• Importance In Life. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  June 8th, 2022 02:03
• crocus buds (Arqios) Good write CB.
  June 8th, 2022 02:02
• THEPLAGIARIST (Pearcemelville 兎敏) They who pinch other\'s words will incur the wrath of the original...
  June 7th, 2022 08:06
• here (Arqios) Good write CB. I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not...
  June 7th, 2022 08:02
• It’s All in The Seeing (Neville) I\'ve seen some of them gals. Should I see more of them?!
  June 7th, 2022 08:00
• Came The Days. (Goldfinch60) There is a quote \'Live so as to be missed [when you\'re gone]\'. Ain\'t...
  June 7th, 2022 01:29
• Came The Days. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. That must have been 50 million years ago when the...
  June 7th, 2022 01:26
• Wild Winds - Forever Wayward (Rocky Lagou) Good write Rocky.
  June 6th, 2022 12:26
• Recalling (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  June 6th, 2022 08:56
• Him & I... extended (Kitty the naughty poet) A fine write Katie.
  June 6th, 2022 08:54
• Midnight Rendezvous (Arqios) Ooohh, I dunno! What\'s all these goings-on at midnight? I gotta get to...
  June 6th, 2022 03:48
• I miss you (B.rod) A terrible thing to experience, surely. The strangeness of being alive...
  June 6th, 2022 03:22
• Semi-Precious Summers (Neville) Good write Neville. I recovered after that petit mort thingy. Fido don\'t...
  June 6th, 2022 03:15
• Little White Pills (Vaughn Walker) Have the blunt edge of the blade if I was you.
  June 6th, 2022 01:59
• Emotive Art. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  June 6th, 2022 01:58
• Inerrancy (Gary Edward Geraci) Liking this Gary.
  June 5th, 2022 14:37
• Passing Through (Paul Bell) Good write Paul.
  June 5th, 2022 14:36
• Petite Mort #2 (Neville) Bit of French there? I\'ve swooned now. That\'ll teach me to translate...
  June 5th, 2022 02:10
• Petite Mort #2 (Neville) Bit of French there? I\'ve swooned now. That\'ll teach me to translate...
  June 5th, 2022 02:10
• Money Greed. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  June 5th, 2022 02:08
• thoughts of an overthinker (Fairly_random_poetry) Good write FRP. Welcome to MPS. Erm, I spent so much time thinking about...
  June 4th, 2022 09:36
• Him & I (Kitty the naughty poet) Another adventure for Kitty and Sir? No, you say - all for me! heehee.
  June 4th, 2022 09:35
• Sea Swell (Fay Slimm.) Good write and pic Fay.
  June 4th, 2022 07:41
• IF YOU CAN’T TELL (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. Using 20 words when 5 will do - lavishly,...
  June 4th, 2022 07:39
• Music of the Shore, St Andrews, Scotland (Morwenna) A fine write M.
  June 4th, 2022 02:11
• Fixing Focus (Orchidee) Hello Gold. This was a poem unposted. It was near some Ch..... poems, but...
  June 4th, 2022 02:10
• Why Does It Happen? (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. lol.
  June 4th, 2022 02:00
• Reed Song (Neville) Good write N. But only you and I are perfect! lol.
  June 4th, 2022 01:59
• Have You Noticed (Gary Edward Geraci) Good write Gary.
  June 3rd, 2022 13:35
• Snakeskin (Rocky Lagou) Good write Rocky.
  June 3rd, 2022 13:33
• The Falling Snow (Paul Bell) Good write Paul.
  June 3rd, 2022 06:52
• Rome (Tom Wood) Yep, this is quite effulgent! *gets out dictionary to check what I\'m on...
  June 3rd, 2022 02:13
• drifting and daydreaming (Noah Malice) Good write Gon. Ohhh, you\'ll look up and see me. I\'ll always be there....
  June 3rd, 2022 02:11
• Life Is Wonderful Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  June 3rd, 2022 02:07
• about dreams (Languale) Good write L. Nope, that\'s not me looking in for many of those 28 views...
  June 2nd, 2022 12:12
• Lightning Amidst Clear Skies (Rocky Lagou) A descriptive poem Rocky.
  June 2nd, 2022 10:36
• a lullaby (Arqios) I\'m asleep now. Sleep-typing this! Good write CB.
  June 2nd, 2022 08:14
• Not A Royalist Poem (Saxon Crow) Erm, you\'ve not reduced it to something I read: \'A couple of days off,...
  June 2nd, 2022 05:42
• Where Recollections Reside (Neville) A fine write N. You meeting any of these lassies lately? Could I meet some...
  June 2nd, 2022 02:36
• Platinum Prosperity (Orchidee) An additional few lines - the last half of the final stanza.
  June 2nd, 2022 02:35
• Jack n coke (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Well, I never knew this modern version of Jack and Jill!. They were sweet...
  June 2nd, 2022 02:23
• My Life Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Was I in the concert too? They would all have up and...
  June 2nd, 2022 02:21
• What is poetry? (Kitty the naughty poet) I never knew there was, and is, so much in poetry - well, I know now!...
  June 1st, 2022 03:46
• a sort of poet (Kevin Michael Bloor) I sort of like this. Well, I more than sort of like it! lol.
  June 1st, 2022 02:30
• Salvation Security (Orchidee) Hello Gold. You will recognise the hymn as one we had, when you came to KP...
  June 1st, 2022 02:28
• The Game is On (Noah Malice) Good write Gon - reading it with a magnifying glass! lol.
  June 1st, 2022 02:21
• steadfast chestplate (Arqios) You got that \'breastplate of righteousness\' on in that spiritual battle,...
  June 1st, 2022 02:20
• New Life To Come. (Goldfinch60) Yes, some swans nesting by a riverside too, that we can see, fairly...
  June 1st, 2022 02:15
• There Is an Old Weed in my Garden (Quemis) I was the gardener in the garden! Or was I the weed?! lol.
  June 1st, 2022 02:14
• Snow globe of me. (Kitty the naughty poet) Good write Katie. I thought I saw snow flakes today! No, not the people...
  May 31st, 2022 13:05
• Readdressing Rarities (Rocky Lagou) Good write Rocky. I was gonna try all these, but number 4 happened first....
  May 31st, 2022 13:02
• Out of Nowhere. (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  May 31st, 2022 09:32
• Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days (Neville) Nope, I don\'t recall the A309, but I know a bit of the A310. You anywhere...
  May 31st, 2022 02:30
• Persevering Plea (Orchidee) Sorry about that Gold - reference to Ch........ Can\'t say the word until...
  May 31st, 2022 02:12
• ode to the ferry pilot (Arqios) Me ignorance is not bliss. lol *Gets out dictionary for \'diorama\'* - an...
  May 31st, 2022 02:03
• Last Journey? (Saxon Crow) Good write SC. But, heehee, don\'t the rivers go back to where they came...
  May 31st, 2022 01:59
• Sitting With Natures Realm. (Goldfinch60) I can\'t say reincar-wotsit this time of the morning, even if I did...
  May 31st, 2022 01:56
• Preacher (Vaughn Walker) Happy Birthday Vaughn there, I see! Good write. It is only some American...
  May 31st, 2022 01:53
• LIMERICK 120 (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. Miss Berles all alone?
  May 31st, 2022 01:51
• Reinvention (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  May 30th, 2022 02:55
• Walking To Infinity. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Where ya going?! Does the No.7 bus got to infinity?
  May 30th, 2022 01:46
• Yet Another poor soul (JudyStella) A horrible evil. Child killers will receive severe punishment, unless...
  May 29th, 2022 13:22
• report card demolition (Arqios) Good write CB.
  May 29th, 2022 13:20
• Marathon of Poetry (MendedFences27) I never knew there was so much to writing a poem. Well, I know now!...
  May 29th, 2022 01:57
• Be Positive In Life. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Yep, I stay positive even after 7,473 singing lessons -...
  May 29th, 2022 01:52
• LIMERICK 119 (Michael Edwards) Oh lol, good write and pic M. Erm, is the seat warm for Miss Berles\'
  May 29th, 2022 01:51
• when roses bloomed (Arqios) Good write CB.
  May 28th, 2022 08:52
• My apologies (FallenAngel1🕊) Yes, best wishes :)
  May 28th, 2022 08:51
• Examining the Status Quo. (Goldfinch60) Not some of the \'too-modern\' rubbish of today?!
  May 28th, 2022 01:20
• Sensing. (Fay Slimm.) I met a gal, but rather ruined things. In the middle of saying sweet...
  May 27th, 2022 05:58
• Lust-filled fantasies (Kitty the naughty poet) Yep, another adventure of Kitty. lol.
  May 27th, 2022 05:56
• thread diving (Arqios) I shan\'t forget this entire fine poem. I shall memorise it! heehee.
  May 27th, 2022 04:46
• Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane (Neville) I swoon when I pass that Lane. lol.
  May 27th, 2022 04:45