Comments on community poems by Gary Edward Geraci

• Sandman (Mandi) \"Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.\" Twyla...
  September 12th, 2017 22:22
• Time (Elizabeth Locorriere) Your poem\'s final line sums up, quite classically, the paradigm of the...
  September 11th, 2017 23:04
• Hero (Liberty_Shadows) Nice end rhyme and dominant heptameter in this sweet sestet. The prophetic...
  September 11th, 2017 22:44
• Free (Jooles) Regrettably and historically, the utopian ideology of socialism and...
  September 10th, 2017 23:02
• Strings Of Sanity (Groovypotato) You\'ve discovered the therapeutic outlet to your insomnia Groovypotato....
  September 10th, 2017 22:51
• Depressed, beauty (Rosa Lesperance) Great that your poem seeks out the human dignity of the oppressor (beauty)...
  September 10th, 2017 22:44
• Scholarly Wanderers (WL Schuett) Or you\"ll place men and women laborers on ladders hand pollinating with...
  September 10th, 2017 22:38
• Pretty (Invisible Scars) Catholicwarriors.com Spiritual Warfare Prayers
  September 10th, 2017 22:32
• Pretty (Invisible Scars) Fortunately, we are not the final arbiter regarding our own self-worth....
  September 10th, 2017 22:30
• The Shaman in Us (Germanamericanchurch) Indeed God\'s design is written in every heart. As the popular saying goes...
  September 10th, 2017 22:19
• Stranger in the Dark (Roseintime18) I\'m all for praying people...I count fourteen lines, the traditional...
  September 8th, 2017 23:00
• My Universe (Preciosa Martin) I\'m grateful for these lines of expressiveness this evening Preciosa....
  September 4th, 2017 22:57
• Love (Invisible Scars) Your poem points to the lofty pursuit of sacramental marriage. There love...
  September 4th, 2017 22:50
• Doubtful (AudieSaige) Your poem rightly relegates the troubling premise of the one night stand...
  September 4th, 2017 22:41
• Be Still & Know (Christina K) Bravo, your poem about hope found in silence. The Power of Silence...
  September 4th, 2017 22:31
• Reflection #1 (Alejandro R.) A reflection of the transcendentals from the tip of your pen. Nice work!
  September 4th, 2017 22:27
• Just Peachy, (Dancepersecution) The ending has always been the same with utopian socialism and Marxist...
  September 4th, 2017 22:23
• Life is a video game. (Hboo) Nice analogy as you pull the reader into the gameplay of life. An...
  September 4th, 2017 22:13
• Empty picture frames (AudreyB) Life without a Lover is like a black white photo that has fallen out of...
  September 4th, 2017 22:06
• Losing Faith (Lanaevans) That bullet would be an affront to the Creator whom alone decides when our...
  August 31st, 2017 22:56
• ??????????????????? (BigTomm) The formatting here might have skewed your attempt at a true acrostic ...
  August 31st, 2017 22:48
• The Sting (Mira-kitsu) Whether it\'s true or not, I\'d like to imagine that that which is...
  August 31st, 2017 22:29
• A Broken Old Man (Mandi) Love is the cure to brokenness, old age, and well - darn near any other...
  August 26th, 2017 22:56
• Poem 60 (Disrespectfully nice) I enjoy the rhythm and the premise that you are marrying this girl for...
  August 26th, 2017 22:38
• Dear Anxiety (MeganRose) Nice first write Megan. You write well of the crippling horrors of that...
  August 26th, 2017 22:32
• Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett) Your fourth stanza - simply brilliant! The crescendo of wheres works and...
  August 26th, 2017 22:22
• Listen To Your Mother\'s Voice (Brooklyn6timesplus) Our Lord gave us his mother at the Cross and told mankind (represented in...
  August 26th, 2017 22:10
• The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60) The lone tree and silence; how the world could use a little silence to...
  August 26th, 2017 21:38
• Calm Before The Storm (Hidden) I enjoy the interesting paradoxes that you propose: going to the store as...
  August 26th, 2017 21:31
• Awaking Reality (Roudan) Sex as the be all, end all to our being and identity is the greatest...
  August 14th, 2017 22:58
• Last Bet (Kurt Philip Behm) The anaphora \"waiting to die\" is indeed an inescapable reality; the...
  August 14th, 2017 22:48
• My once known soul mate. (Jul) There\'s hope yet! True love will be indissoluble and protected within the...
  August 14th, 2017 22:39
• Little Sister (CSS20013) Beautiful testimony of your love for your sister - she is lucky to have a...
  August 14th, 2017 22:28
• I Will Seek Your Face (GeraldineTaylor) All glory to God! Geraldine what a courageous and daring example of true...
  August 14th, 2017 22:19
• Intake. (Fay Slimm.) Swelling with bounty and grace; your words paint a sensual feast for the...
  August 14th, 2017 22:10
• LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards) Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
  August 12th, 2017 17:35
• Jack the little yellow Dinosaur (FredPeyer) Enjoyed your poem Fred. I understand Dr. Seuss poems were written in...
  August 11th, 2017 21:35
• GOD (Julianogollo) Revealed, scripture aside for the moment, we also see the hand of God all...
  August 11th, 2017 21:26
• vines of eden (Heather T) Vibrant and colorful diction directed by a steady and commanding meter;...
  August 9th, 2017 22:49
• IN SPITE OF (Louis Gibbs) I missed it too but would have been riveted and pulling for her like you...
  August 9th, 2017 22:45
• Reply (Gary Edward Geraci) Thank you Louis!
  August 9th, 2017 15:27
• Reply (Gary Edward Geraci) And it was your poem Diamond that inspired it. Check your \"replies\" for...
  August 9th, 2017 15:07
• Vividly Versed (WriteBeLight) Just a word? What do you know...and now you\'re at 255 - way to go!
  August 8th, 2017 23:10
• The Stinging Withdrawl (Satishverma) What is your philosophical bend satish?
  August 8th, 2017 22:59
• Sutured (Baylee) Many \"sutured hearts\" out there in today\'s culture Nicole. Fortunately,...
  August 8th, 2017 22:56
• The Beginning More Important.... (Kurt Philip Behm) Your singular \"beginning\" parallels the singular creation event of our...
  August 8th, 2017 22:46
• Searching Through Stillness (Augustus) So exhilarating to write that which only you were created to write...
  August 7th, 2017 23:10
• Blue Elephants (Kimberly Culpepper) The challenge is to reach deep inside oneself; silent periods of...
  August 7th, 2017 21:53
• What Is Love? (Angelene.nicole) True love is a foretaste of the love of God for us...
  August 6th, 2017 15:14
• Last Flight (FredPeyer) Got to love those gecko \"insect control\" commandos - for both...
  August 6th, 2017 09:54
• Rarity (Baylee) Rare indeed yet I\'m certain we are all called, every last one of us, to...
  July 31st, 2017 21:15
• futile attempts (Rosey_hills22) Nice end line rhyme convention throughout. You conclude with an important...
  July 31st, 2017 21:12
• chant (Onepauly) I just wrote one under the same title a few weeks ago...Coincidence?
  July 30th, 2017 22:57
• Before You (Baylee) Baylee you have the power to lift people up with your words. Glorifying...
  July 30th, 2017 22:53
• Sweet Manic High (Poetry_Of_The_Unknown) Your lines aptly describe the indescribable \"bliss\" of the \"bi\", in...
  July 30th, 2017 22:46
• Society... (Unseengirl) Your poem involves a line of questioning from one whom is seeking real...
  July 30th, 2017 22:41
• I\'ve got you (RebelX) Great write RebelX. I enjoyed the creative way you framed your poem as a...
  July 30th, 2017 22:34
• Moma (AudieSaige) The love that she showed is now the love that you show. Your poem is a...
  July 30th, 2017 22:26
• Suffer With Me (TychotheObserver) Your couplets of rhyme exactly express the utter hell and dead ends of...
  July 22nd, 2017 20:03
• Good Marks (Gary Edward Geraci) Fixed it.....
  July 22nd, 2017 15:43
• Good Marks (Gary Edward Geraci) Thanks for your read and comment Kindred Spirit. Yes, reverence to our...
  July 22nd, 2017 15:24
• The threads unwinding. (Stephen.Sapaugh) \"Bees live and feed on bitter food when making their honey; in the same...
  July 20th, 2017 06:53
• Love entropy (Malubotelho) Love resurrected.
  July 19th, 2017 21:57
• technically heartbreak (Prudence) Suicide is never the answer, too many victims left in its wake. NAMI...
  July 19th, 2017 21:55
• Maybe It\'s Just The New Hat (Parsons222) A child is not an entitlement, most definitely not a fashion accessory,...
  July 19th, 2017 20:32
• A Pastoral (Ethan) Great write. This one conveys beauty and emotion. I\'m not familiar with...
  July 19th, 2017 20:26
• Part alienated, part connected. (CaitEva) This poem aims for truth; the Great story of Creation; Genesis. Nice...
  July 19th, 2017 20:21
• Modern Slaves of society (Denxse) I was \"Chanting\" along these same lines the other night ... you\'re...
  July 18th, 2017 06:33
• Hearts (Q) Nice rhythm and rhymes and the existential essence no one will ever tire...
  July 17th, 2017 22:53
• Beauty Is This Life. (Kevin browne) You\'ve got that wonderful, care free style of a beat poet here - great...
  July 17th, 2017 22:36
• Too late (Justagirl) \"Whomever\" with a capital \"W\"? To me, this can only come from one...
  July 17th, 2017 22:26
• Twilight (Poetboy123) You\'re a warrior to keep this beast cornered for \"the millionth\" time -...
  July 17th, 2017 22:12
• Meaning. (Stumped) You seek light after your trauma; one fellow seeker of light to another....
  July 17th, 2017 22:07
• Not The Same Anymore (Bunny1996) Sooner or later we all seem to fall short of another\'s expectations....
  July 17th, 2017 22:03
• Wanted (Nori_B) The \"universal\" call of love that our Lord speaks to each and every one...
  July 17th, 2017 21:52
• Chant (Gary Edward Geraci) Good that you and I have faith traditions to \"fall back\" into. How about...
  July 15th, 2017 20:22
• Final Visitation (M. Mohon) Sorry no safe spaces or trigger warnings here T. There will be suck-ups...
  July 11th, 2017 09:05
• Glass Marbles (Bagel) My son suffers in a similar way Bagel; he sticks to his medication and he...
  July 10th, 2017 22:33
• Final Visitation (M. Mohon) Dude you let the demon win out in the end! That is sad indeed. Why so...
  July 10th, 2017 21:59
• Not my problem... (GODisreal) You hate to admit it, when people scoff at the testimony of your God given...
  July 10th, 2017 21:49
• Demons Of Darkness (Poetic Justice) By jumping your character concedes her temporary, material problems for...
  July 9th, 2017 22:53
• The Struggle (Rpgiii) Staying clean is worth the struggle. Writing is a good step in the...
  July 9th, 2017 22:22
• My name is on a list (Gary Edward Geraci) I celebrate your chastity my friend! Thank you for your read and your...
  July 8th, 2017 21:34
• My name is on a list (Gary Edward Geraci) Thanks CK for your read and comment. Heather T, in her comment above,...
  July 8th, 2017 14:45
• The Fear Within. (Stephen.Sapaugh) I was just slightly distracted by your neologism \"atearing\" but to see...
  July 8th, 2017 12:13
• THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs) Spot on! Bravo! For me, your last two lines \"We shall see...we shall...
  July 8th, 2017 11:50
• Taking The World By Storm (Brooklyn6timesplus) A happy 4th of July to you Brooklyn - as will everyone who reads your poem...
  July 4th, 2017 19:55
• CYNIC (David Grubb) Nice first write. Among all that makes us full of cynicism are bright...
  July 4th, 2017 19:53
• CAN YOU HEAR ME (Kenzie2.0) I hear you too my friend. Several in my family are survivors - getting the...
  July 4th, 2017 19:48
• Through my eyes (Just a girl.) God knew you before creation when he formed you in his image. Whether...
  July 3rd, 2017 22:01
• Adrift (Lost in Murphy) Great rhyme and meter for your inaugural night on the water; I don\'t...
  July 2nd, 2017 23:16
• Equality (Saphira) All should be loved as God loves. All should be free to condone unhealthy...
  July 2nd, 2017 23:01
• a father\'s love. (Ruth Fadairo) Your poem encapsulates the maturity of a soul that sees another soul as...
  July 2nd, 2017 22:52
• W A T E R F A L L S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) I enjoyed reading your poem Brian. Water is one of God\'s most important,...
  July 1st, 2017 19:07
• only me (Heather T) Ladies, for the benefit of the site\'s younger viewers (under 18) please...
  July 1st, 2017 17:07
• Prayer Ponderings (Orchidee) \"In that love relationship grow\" and if one would learn to know, to...
  July 1st, 2017 16:19
• Sweet baby (Krystal Brewington) A heartbreaking poem to have to write. Sounds like your friends are part...
  June 29th, 2017 22:57
• You Have Made That Child (Brooklyn6timesplus) And do it with as much love and patience as you can physically muster ......
  June 29th, 2017 22:40
• Ritualism (Satishverma) In my own faith tradition, this would be a lovely poem written to Our
  June 29th, 2017 22:37
• When His Pen Runs Out Of Ink. (Kevin browne) Nice work KB. My favorite line: \"wisdom crawls in the sky with the...
  June 29th, 2017 06:47