Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Yellow flowers (Thehippiepoet)
Had to look up what the word \"betwixt\" means. Somebody once said that a...
June 23rd, 2017 18:14 - mirage (Heather T)
Heather, after reading this, I think you should not \"write a little\" as...
June 23rd, 2017 18:08 - What if you can? (Roudan)
Roudan, this is a great poem. I certainly would love to read more.
June 23rd, 2017 18:04 - dessert (Heather T)
I absolutely love it! One of my mantras is: Live is unpredictable, dessert...
June 23rd, 2017 14:45 - spirit over matter (Avigail)
Your poem spoke to me. A long long time ago my friends wanted to go out, I...
June 23rd, 2017 14:39 - My One Hundred and Seventy Year old house...1847 (P.H.Rose)
I like it, well written. Following your poems Grandmother and Grandfather,...
June 23rd, 2017 14:35 - Its Scar Now Yours To Love (Blues Poem #12) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A great thought provoking piece. Unfortunately too many of us scratch the...
June 23rd, 2017 14:32 - Fantasy (Tony36)
Made me think that even in our world we never know what is hiding just...
June 23rd, 2017 14:26 - Cayla (Brandyngraham)
Nice! Unfortunately some people wait all their lives.
June 23rd, 2017 14:24 - Acting as hypocrites (Malubotelho)
Malu, you very nicely expressed what all of us do every day: acting. At...
June 23rd, 2017 14:22 - Sleeping Beauty (FredPeyer)
Thank you all for your very much appreciated comments. It is kind of nice...
June 23rd, 2017 14:03 - Trust in Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, a beautiful description of trust. Reminded me of the trust a...
June 23rd, 2017 12:21 - We Belong With Each Other (Krystal Brewington)
Krystal, nice write. I think the only together pair you left out is...
June 23rd, 2017 12:19 - KISSING DAY IN UK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Maybe we should start a movement to have kissing day at least once a week!
June 23rd, 2017 12:15 - Runaway Train (Edthepoet)
Ed, I really like your poem. It is very well written. You seem to be a...
June 23rd, 2017 12:11 - Flourish (Baylee)
I read this one today, then before commenting I looked at your other...
June 23rd, 2017 12:06 - Even Between (Baylee)
Very nicely said, great poem. And yes, broken just means it is not whole...
June 23rd, 2017 12:03 - Graveyard (Baylee)
This is so good! Four lines, one sentence really, and I was immediately...
June 23rd, 2017 11:58 - Sleeping Beauty (FredPeyer)
Thank you! I love watching her sleep.
June 23rd, 2017 11:55 - Close minded elderly (Fayeisabee1)
Fayeisabee, I said it in my last comment to you and have to say it again:...
June 23rd, 2017 11:53 - Grandfather Green... (P.H.Rose)
Just read Grandfather Green as you recommended. Never thought of trees as...
June 23rd, 2017 11:31 - Channel (Jabberwocky)
Nice poem, love the ending. Don\'t know what kind of channel I would be, ...
June 22nd, 2017 18:51 - Grandmother White..... (P.H.Rose)
This must be the most beautiful description of clouds I have ever read.
June 22nd, 2017 18:47 - Been writing (Meno1972)
This is what a writer is all about, what every writer hopes for. It is not...
June 22nd, 2017 18:43 - within throughout (Onepauly)
Your well written poem reminds me of tai chi, or eastern meditation. Thank...
June 22nd, 2017 18:41 - The one with two faces (ShannonXx)
A very nice poem about a jekyll and hyde type of person. Unfortunately...
June 22nd, 2017 18:37 - Demon (Renzi)
Renzi, an incredible poem again. You are so eloquent, your rhyming is...
June 22nd, 2017 16:08 - This Damn Town. (Cara)
Your writing sounds like a call for help, a deep desire for a change that...
June 22nd, 2017 14:24 - Lost Mum. (Goldfinch60)
You captured in a few words the whole sadness, despair, and pain dementia...
June 22nd, 2017 14:18 - Ghost (Poetboy123)
Love your poem. To see through the eyes of a ghost. And yes, the ending is...
June 22nd, 2017 14:12 - DESERTED GRAVEYARD (Michael Edwards)
I really liked the poem and the watercolor is beauiful too.
June 22nd, 2017 14:08 - Gazing at the Stars (P.X. Vexxus)
A beautiful poem. I especially like the part where he disappears. We all...
June 22nd, 2017 14:06 - Anya (Brandyngraham)
They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder. So is perfection I think....
June 22nd, 2017 13:12 - Wild flower (Grant Degnan)
Beautiful poem, great imagination, wonderful choice of words...you got...
June 22nd, 2017 13:09 - Crazy Horse Calls (Kurt Philip Behm)
I may be wrong, but what I see in your beautifully written poem is what is...
June 22nd, 2017 13:04 - LADIES DAY ASCOT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, you got your Acrostic Sonnet down pat! Love the picture, and you...
June 22nd, 2017 12:57 - These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU! (FredPeyer)
Thank you! Even though writing is a solitary art, I do not feel alone...
June 22nd, 2017 12:43 - Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer)
Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
June 22nd, 2017 02:03 - In love with me? (Anora_aragon)
Anora, I don\'t know if you are writing from experience or about an...
June 22nd, 2017 00:00 - Tudor Trail (GeraldineTaylor)
Geraldine, this is not only an astonishing work of art, but also a history...
June 21st, 2017 21:05 - Computerised Smiles (Fayeisabee1)
Fayeisabee, this is why you are writing such beautiful poems. It is true...
June 21st, 2017 20:53 - Battle Lines. (Fay Slimm.)
Every sunset is like a little death and every sunrise like a new birth....
June 21st, 2017 20:46 - Anything Is Possible (Brooklyn6timesplus)
We should read this every time we sit down at the computer to write.
June 21st, 2017 20:33 - Summer Games Seducing Celestial Nights (WhisperingGlints)
Blew me away. Just wish I could write like that.
June 21st, 2017 20:32 - Oh Baby! (Bibbeck)
It is a little bit dark, but good. And don\'t worry, I don\'t know where...
June 21st, 2017 20:29 - Only If... (The Broken Vessel)
And you should hold your head high, turning adversity into victory!
June 21st, 2017 20:26 - good times (Onepauly)
Yes, we are all living in the same boat, stuck into this little corner of...
June 21st, 2017 20:20 - HEAT WAVE UK ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian I can feel your pain
Thankfully today we had some rain
Otherwise...
June 21st, 2017 15:49 - Whirlpools. (Cara)
Short and to the point. Well written!
June 21st, 2017 15:25 - He Wouldn\'t Make Room For Me (ApolloEnjolras)
Great poem, very nicely written. Just remember, for every door you close,...
June 21st, 2017 15:23 - As a poet (Tony36)
What you put so nicely into words is exactly what is inside all of us....
June 21st, 2017 14:22 - Darkest corners (Renzi)
Renzi, thank you for this poem. As an answer I need to quote one of my...
June 21st, 2017 14:15 - They say (Crow.)
Klokat, you wrote a beautiful and very thought provoking poem. I...
June 21st, 2017 14:08 - Just write. (Bella cortez)
Bella, Charles Bukowski said this when he wrote about writing:
“unless...
June 21st, 2017 13:37 - Poison (P.X. Vexxus)
An apt, uncomfortable, but possibly true description of our future if we...
June 21st, 2017 13:27 - God\'s Words. (Goldfinch60)
A very thoughtful poem. And you are right, all the words we write do come...
June 21st, 2017 13:24 - My Forgotten Dream (Magic Maker)
Your name is apt, you are creating magic with this poem. Nice writing, and...
June 21st, 2017 13:13 - Got to Move On (Writingismything)
Writing should be your thing! It is not easy to express deep feelings and...
June 21st, 2017 13:09 - GILLIAN\'S MOOD SWING 1969 (Terry Collett)
A great story, told very poetically, with an unexpected but great ending.
June 21st, 2017 11:13 - To be you (Meno1972)
I do like your poem. \"Wondering what it would be to be you\", isn\'t that...
June 21st, 2017 11:00 - A Changing Stew (Kurt Philip Behm)
A beautiful way to describe the changes we go through as we get older....
June 21st, 2017 10:36 - The innocent never survive (Mybigmouth2017)
Good poem with thought provoking content. I need to read more from you.
June 21st, 2017 10:33 - A BAD REVIEW (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, it is amazing that both you and Edthepoet happened to address the...
June 21st, 2017 10:23 - Take Another Look Around (Edthepoet)
Once in a while we do wake up, look at the French revolution for example....
June 21st, 2017 10:14 - Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer)
Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject...
June 21st, 2017 10:02 - Karen... (P.H.Rose)
A powerful declaration of love. I do like it.
June 20th, 2017 23:33 - My Life (1) (Krystal Brewington)
Krystal I read all your poems and they moved me. I do hope you can work...
June 20th, 2017 21:50 - Cherry Tree (Jabberwocky)
I like it. It reminds me so much of when as kids we \"raided\" the...
June 20th, 2017 18:43 - Crazy Irish queen (Renzi)
You may be crazy (even though that is more in the eye of the beholder),...
June 20th, 2017 12:33 - Living for Loving (Renzi)
Perfect, no other comment!
June 20th, 2017 12:29 - Grab it (Renzi)
Short and to the point again! You have an amazing gift.
June 20th, 2017 12:21 - Happy feet (Renzi)
I am blown away Renzi, you succeeded to make me happy with only four short...
June 20th, 2017 12:18 - Love? (WG7)
You expressed your emotions so much better than I could. Yes, love can be...
June 20th, 2017 11:56 - It\'s changing... (WG7)
WG7, your beautifully written poem describes the woes of this world very...
June 20th, 2017 11:50 - Late years (Malubotelho)
I like the way you write, and there are certainly days I feel the same....
June 20th, 2017 11:41 - Abandoned (FredPeyer)
Thank you Jeff and Harvey! Your encouragement helps to overcome all the...
June 20th, 2017 11:31 - Fuel (Jeff)
Jeff, many artists do their best work when deeply troubled. Somehow it...
June 20th, 2017 11:28 - Alone Again (Jeff)
That old saying that we have to hit rock bottom before we see the light is...
June 20th, 2017 11:21 - Tomorrow\'s Dreams (Jeff)
The more I read from you the more I like it. Your strong message is...
June 20th, 2017 11:13 - All I Need (Jeff)
Your well written poem sends a very powerful message about how important...
June 20th, 2017 11:08
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