Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Undeserved Repose (Charlesbarrett) Very nice penmanship!
  July 23rd, 2017 14:42
• Forever (Charlesbarrett) Wonderful writing Charles! Love the last two lines!
  July 23rd, 2017 14:40
• Don’t Go (Charlesbarrett) Charles, a very thoughtful and well written poem. As a father of three and...
  July 23rd, 2017 14:38
• The Comedian (Joel-Lilian) Very well written with a strong message. We all wear masks but there comes...
  July 22nd, 2017 20:35
• Conducted (Cynthia Howarth) Welcome to the site Cynthia! What a wonderful first poem you are sharing...
  July 22nd, 2017 20:32
• raqs sashame (Heather T) I have no idea where YOU get all these ideas! Marvelous writing. \'Stoned...
  July 22nd, 2017 18:48
• Perhaps (Malubotelho) What you should not let rest is your writing! Another great poem. Thank...
  July 22nd, 2017 18:45
• Never To Dry (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) I read all, loved all, but the last stanza of the last poem is the one...
  July 22nd, 2017 15:05
• LITE (Onepauly) A perfect example of something simple that is not simple. Linear endeavor...
  July 22nd, 2017 14:57
• Endings. (Fay Slimm.) While sad, you saw so much more in the death of that bird and you said it...
  July 22nd, 2017 14:53
• Have You Ever...? (Niallprideaux) Have I ever read something like this? No Like your style!
  July 22nd, 2017 14:50
• Writing (Its Raskolnikov) Nicely penned, I too love this life!
  July 22nd, 2017 14:48
• Oh Yeah (Whisperingquill) A venerable tour de force! So many incredible lines, so many imaginative...
  July 22nd, 2017 11:57
• The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, while I don\'t know these two comics, I had a smile on my face...
  July 22nd, 2017 11:40
• Affliction (Renzi) Renzi, you are such a good writer. That last line in the first stanza says...
  July 22nd, 2017 11:25
• Unfair (Malubotelho) Malu, lovely work! I do like the comparison in every line. Though I guess...
  July 22nd, 2017 01:19
• Alone (Domi) Domi, there is so much emotion in your well written poem. This might be...
  July 21st, 2017 16:29
• boxes (Heather T) Are you talking about me Heather? Great poem, fits me to a T. Left my...
  July 21st, 2017 16:16
• Caged (Baylee) I like your short poem Nicole. Yes words do have hearts and we need let...
  July 21st, 2017 15:08
• Glinted (Whisperingquill) \'In the ruby of eternity\'s eye\' You have an incredibly vivid...
  July 21st, 2017 13:42
• Nana (ShannonXx) Thank you Shannon for a very tender and moving poem. You touched on...
  July 21st, 2017 13:40
• THE CRIPPLED (Louis Gibbs) Thank you Louis for sharing. While overall I think we have come a long way...
  July 21st, 2017 11:58
• Levels of under-standing (Avigail) Avi, I like how you challenge us to think about things we just accept and...
  July 21st, 2017 11:47
• New Pathway (Kurt Philip Behm) Great poem Kurt, do like the 5th stanza and also the repetition of \'Dying...
  July 21st, 2017 11:16
• voices (Onepauly) \'who turned out the light\", or better yet, who did not turn it on yet? I...
  July 21st, 2017 05:00
• Hypnotic. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, even though I don\'t think I could ever put a snake around my neck, I...
  July 21st, 2017 02:12
• Attempt (The 2 A.M Writer) A very well written thoughtful poem 2AM. I think we all feel sometimes...
  July 21st, 2017 02:10
• To be a Poet... (Hboo) hboo, I love your poem, but am not so sure that my mind is a very rare...
  July 21st, 2017 02:07
• Let Go (Lily_) I do like your poem, Silk. Not only because it is well written, but also...
  July 21st, 2017 02:05
• I am NOT your property (Sinai.alexandra) Welcome to the site S.! A very emotional poem, you do write well. Would...
  July 21st, 2017 02:00
• Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60) Nearly sounds like being born again Goldfinch! But I do like it a lot....
  July 21st, 2017 01:54
• Embrace (GeraldineTaylor) What great advise Geraldine! And beautifully written too!
  July 21st, 2017 01:29
• AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards) And why does your beautiful painting remind me of a flamenco?
  July 21st, 2017 01:27
• AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards) Michael, if you could see my face you would know why your poem is already...
  July 21st, 2017 01:27
• Happiness (Its Raskolnikov) A great declaration of love. Well written.
  July 21st, 2017 01:25
• Somewhere else (Katherinem7) You just perfectly described the place we all would like to be. Beautiful...
  July 20th, 2017 18:31
• Soul To Repast (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt you are so good a writer, I just keep repeating myself from one poem...
  July 20th, 2017 18:28
• mourning sickness (AAA) Well written AAA if it is something that happened to you. Extremely well...
  July 20th, 2017 18:21
• exspand (Onepauly) Pauly, well written! \"Give me what I need to know\".....Input, Input,...
  July 20th, 2017 18:10
• Sometimes I Call My Mother A Whore (ElenaGrace) Elena, I think you said it all, very eloquently. I am no expert, but I...
  July 20th, 2017 18:04
• Childish head (Malubotelho) Very cute and funny. Nearly sounds like a children\'s rhyme! Well done.
  July 20th, 2017 17:54
• Eden is here (Avigail) I agree with you Avi, look at ants or bees, they could not function...
  July 20th, 2017 17:53
• To Be Beautiful (MissileOfUncertainty) MofU, you just wrote the blueprint of how a man should treat the woman he...
  July 20th, 2017 13:56
• Control (Renzi) Magic writing Renzi. Your \'me\' is controlled by your \'self\'. So now...
  July 20th, 2017 13:52
• Interdependence. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, only you could look at a spider web and come up with such a beautiful...
  July 20th, 2017 13:45
• Fading (Whisperingquill) I can only agree with Kat. Your style captivates me.
  July 20th, 2017 13:42
• Sit and Think (Its Raskolnikov) I do like your poem. There is a great difference between thinking about...
  July 20th, 2017 13:39
• I Danced (MissileOfUncertainty) Great, great poem MofU, live every day as if it is your last day!
  July 20th, 2017 04:02
• HE NEVER DINED (Michael Edwards) He never had my wife cook for him, that\'s why. I rest my case!...
  July 20th, 2017 03:59
• Kestrel - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) These birds are amazing, and so is your Haiku! Personally I am very fond...
  July 20th, 2017 03:57
• Fantasy (Baylee) Nicole, the first stanza is a question we all like to ask our partners....
  July 20th, 2017 03:54
• Liberate Me Ex Inferis (Whisperingquill) Just wonder if this poem has something to do with Zao and Dante\'s Inferno...
  July 20th, 2017 03:52
• We don’t see it all (Avigail) Love your poem Avigail, just one questions about blind spots: What are...
  July 19th, 2017 12:28
• Love entropy (Malubotelho) Malu, I like this one a LOT! Love the layout too.
  July 19th, 2017 12:22
• DON\'T LOOK BACK (Louis Gibbs) Louis, your four lines say a lot more than a whole novel sometimes...
  July 19th, 2017 12:17
• Remind Yourself: (Niallprideaux) Niall, thank you! There are days when we have to look at ourselves EXACTLY...
  July 19th, 2017 12:16
• Wednesday\'s child (Renzi) Saturday! And proud of it (don\'t know why though) Love your poem Renzi!
  July 19th, 2017 12:14
• focus (Onepauly) \'looking into the heart of things\' isn\'t that what we do here? Great...
  July 19th, 2017 12:11
• Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.) Yes Fay, it is real dark in the hole one is trying to dig out of, but once...
  July 19th, 2017 12:08
• Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60) FDR: Only thing we have to fear is fear itself. Great poem Goldfinch!
  July 19th, 2017 12:04
• IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards) Michael, after reading your poem I wished I could write. after seeing...
  July 19th, 2017 12:01
• Clouds (Doglover30) ...or they get blown away! We have trade winds. One minute you have...
  July 18th, 2017 21:14
• Verses Deboned (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, you are one of the few who can say something simple like \"one...
  July 18th, 2017 21:11
• i am deeply rooted in you. (Ruth Fadairo) What a great declaration of love!
  July 18th, 2017 21:06
• A Safari (MissileOfUncertainty) MofU, reading your excellent poem made me all itchy! No seriously, I do...
  July 18th, 2017 21:03
• Happiness (Q) Hope you don\'t mind Q, printed it out and it is hanging on my wall of...
  July 18th, 2017 15:27
• Amber Melodies (Phantom bride) And are we people not the same? Beautiful poem Amber!
  July 18th, 2017 15:23
• Trials (Lost-but-not-broken17) l-b-n-b, this is a very beautiful poem, and I am sure it will make a lot...
  July 18th, 2017 15:17
• song of the hollow house (Heather T) Well Heather, I can see, smell, and feel these old houses in your...
  July 18th, 2017 15:13
• Extension Cord Necklace (Stumped) If your drawing is as good as your writing, you will have no problem to...
  July 18th, 2017 13:03
• ME + YOU = US. Equation for life! (Sue.evans) I just love the way you wrote this. Starting with \'me\', bringing in...
  July 18th, 2017 13:00
• Nicotine ™ (Jen?) Welcome to the site, Jen. Very well written poem. Yes, love can be an...
  July 18th, 2017 12:55
• Trusting Times (Orchidee) Orchidee, the way you write these hymn-poems is amazing. I do love to read...
  July 18th, 2017 12:36
• Rose Pedal (Domi) Very beautiful poem Domi, love how you describe your fish. I even...
  July 18th, 2017 12:23
• The Chamber Of Dead Dreams (DyingDreams) Welcome to the site DD! Yes, your first poem here shows that you have...
  July 18th, 2017 11:47
• Cinderella Dream (Weird Alien) Welcome to the site, Hailey! While I have to agree with DS/KS about the...
  July 18th, 2017 11:43
• I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36) Tony, this may be a little bit off from what you are saying in your...
  July 18th, 2017 11:27
• Sooner (Baylee) Nicole, this is soooo good! Sometimes it does take a while before we...
  July 18th, 2017 11:07
• Ammunition (Niallprideaux) Nice one Niall, like the first two lines, it makes for a great opening.
  July 18th, 2017 10:25
• Solution (Malubotelho) Malu, I do understand where you are coming from. I guess you could say we...
  July 18th, 2017 10:20
• When stars don’t shine on you (Avigail) Thanks Avigail, this is some really good advise cloaked into a nice poem....
  July 18th, 2017 10:08
• Littleness. (Fay Slimm.) Like the subject, love the writing!
  July 18th, 2017 10:04
• lofty (Onepauly) Don\'t know why, but your excellent poem conjured up a dream-like feeling....
  July 18th, 2017 10:00
• That time of the week (Renzi) Can\'t speak, racing heart, contemplating running, taking deep...
  July 18th, 2017 09:56
• HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian I love your Haiku\'s. We did have drums in the church a long time...
  July 18th, 2017 03:11
• Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60) Indeed, what would you aim for? You do have a problem Goldfinch, it\'s...
  July 18th, 2017 02:06
• Sleep In Your Exhale (Whisperingquill) Wow! Like the whole thing, but absolutely love this one: Rembrandt...
  July 18th, 2017 02:01
• We March (Its Raskolnikov) Inspiring poem, well written. What is nice is my kids went to high-school...
  July 18th, 2017 01:58
• A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) They are all really good, do like the one about cooking the best.
  July 18th, 2017 01:56
• The power of love (David) Very well written - the true meaning of love.
  July 17th, 2017 23:35
• Monster (Its Raskolnikov) Excellent R., and two words in your poem seem to apply to a lot of us...
  July 17th, 2017 23:33
• Minnesota Verdure (Nicholas Browning) Nicholas, judging from your well written poem you did enjoy your vacation...
  July 17th, 2017 23:21
• Shy (SorrowfullyHappy) To shy to comment No really, I do like your work!
  July 17th, 2017 19:15
• Beauty Is This Life. (Kevin browne) Great writing. Every line makes one think. Takes a long time to read and...
  July 17th, 2017 19:13
• WORK IN PROGRESS (2) (Michael Edwards) Thanks so much Michael, for letting us follow your creative process.
  July 17th, 2017 19:10
• Clinks of Shamans (Whisperingquill) I do like your eloquent writing!
  July 17th, 2017 19:08
• Motley. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, unfortunately I don\'t know G. Manley, but I like your poem....
  July 17th, 2017 19:05
• Again (Its Raskolnikov) Nice, and maybe it doesn\'t have to end.
  July 17th, 2017 19:03
• time off (Onepauly) And what a fine way to express: Just relax!
  July 17th, 2017 18:59
• Wall of Power. (Goldfinch60) Nice writing! Love that expression: Wall of skill.
  July 17th, 2017 18:57