Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Worthy (Baylee) Only twelve words, but they say it all! It would have taken me a lot...
  July 8th, 2017 18:33
• Glow (Baylee) Hope always exists. I love the way you lead into your conclusion....
  July 8th, 2017 18:30
• Shadow Dog (Lostgirl24) A very moving poem for your departed Jack. You write well with much...
  July 8th, 2017 15:17
• dilemma (Avigail) Do as I say, not as I do! I for one don\'t see any dilemma. First of all,...
  July 8th, 2017 15:14
• of edgeless storms (Heather T) If this is \"playing around a bit..\" I cannot wait to see what will...
  July 8th, 2017 13:37
• Unreal. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, this is so beautiful, don\'t know how to say it....you used up all...
  July 8th, 2017 13:04
• friends (Onepauly) Thanks Paul, it\'s good to have you as a friend. This forum is starting to...
  July 8th, 2017 12:58
• Candy (Renzi) Renzi, growing up in Switzerland you can imagine that chocolate and sweets...
  July 8th, 2017 12:53
• Invisible (Lost Girl) A very well written cry for help. One-way street love is hard, but believe...
  July 8th, 2017 03:35
• Unspoken (SheWasTheSun) Maya Angelou is a great poet and your poem is a fitting and beautifully...
  July 7th, 2017 22:50
• Control (AshleyT) Welcome to the site Ashley! A well written first poem. Hope to read a lot...
  July 7th, 2017 22:44
• Is love selfish? (Malubotelho) What a beautiful declaration of love. We love and we would like to be...
  July 7th, 2017 20:42
• Girls Like Me (Elphaba993) You really captured the emotions, the longing and the sadness in your...
  July 7th, 2017 20:31
• My story (Anthonyguzman98) What a story, and all before the age of 18. Very well written. Forget the...
  July 7th, 2017 20:25
• Naked clown (Roudan) Love the lead-in, the visual, and the content. Great great poem!
  July 7th, 2017 20:22
• Turn Away (Lostgirl24) You do have a way with words, lostgirl, and you are so right too. Thanks...
  July 7th, 2017 20:18
• Twenty and six. (Stephen.Sapaugh) The older I get the more I know that I don\'t know anything! I do like...
  July 7th, 2017 20:14
• holy broken (Heather T) Exquisite writing, again, conjuring up all these incredible images. Thank...
  July 7th, 2017 20:10
• Confused kid (Confused kid) I think that everybody, no matter how old, feels lost sometimes, asks...
  July 7th, 2017 16:01
• The Final Call (Seek) I do like your poem. And I agree, there will be silence after death, it is...
  July 7th, 2017 15:39
• My Life (Kristy41) Kristy believe me, no matter how many times you get tired or pull away,...
  July 7th, 2017 15:31
• childhood prison (Rosebel) No little girl should have to go through this. I admire your strong will...
  July 7th, 2017 15:27
• step to step (Onepauly) Just a little rhythm you say? I would say you got a whole lot of rhythm in...
  July 7th, 2017 15:16
• Audience Of One (Kurt Philip Behm) You know why I like to talk to myself? I like to talk to intelligent...
  July 7th, 2017 13:39
• Here\'s Johnnie! (Bibbeck) Funny, silly, I like it!
  July 7th, 2017 13:38
• Multitasking or focus (Avigail) A very thought provoking poem. Amazing how much you can say while rhyming...
  July 7th, 2017 13:12
• Jelly Fish (MaddieJ) Virago your description of a jellyfish is so poetic and true. They are...
  July 7th, 2017 12:57
• OF NO CONSEQUENCE (Louis Gibbs) Thanks for this thought provoking well written poem! I happen to believe...
  July 7th, 2017 12:24
• It\'s a good day to have a good day? (Renzi) Even though your smile looks a little bit \"forced\", it\'s better then a...
  July 7th, 2017 12:07
• Regeneration. (Fay Slimm.) Love your poem Fay, especially liked the line \"Unseen Love\'s Presence...
  July 7th, 2017 11:59
• Prom (Adrianna Kjeld) A nice light well written piece. I remember my daughter\'s prom night, and...
  July 6th, 2017 23:03
• Anti social (Clairie840) There is so much truth in these few well written lines. We cannot control...
  July 6th, 2017 22:58
• house of words (Onepauly) Never thought of writing a poem about a library visit, but you pulled it...
  July 6th, 2017 21:10
• Down The Road (Noveyre) Great poem, I can see you \"enraptured in your seat\", and don\'t forget,...
  July 6th, 2017 19:31
• Secret Love (Tony36) Unrequited love painted so well in your poem. The longing for her love...
  July 6th, 2017 19:06
• A Spring Haiku (TiffanyR) Writing a good Haiku is an art. I tried and failed. You succeeded...
  July 6th, 2017 18:44
• Cemetery Rain (Lostgirl24) If cemeteries could talk! Your well written poem reminded me that there is...
  July 6th, 2017 18:39
• Your Nature (David Grubb) This wonderful poem is a must read and pick-me-upper any day we are down,...
  July 6th, 2017 18:34
• My Pen (Confused kid) Sometimes you wonder what is more real, the world around us or the world...
  July 6th, 2017 18:30
• For Our Grandchildren (Sue.evans) As a grandpa of four, soon to be five, all I can say is: Congratulations!...
  July 6th, 2017 18:26
• You Won\'t Know (Kmerc1) Ah, for God\'s sake, tell em!!! Seriously, I like the way you structured...
  July 6th, 2017 16:19
• MOTHER\'S ENGLISH COUNTRY GARDEN (BRIAN & ANGELA) See what you did? After reading your beautiful poem I now want to become a...
  July 6th, 2017 16:09
• Screaming Loud (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) All of them are really, really, good!
  July 6th, 2017 15:56
• I forgive you (Lost-but-not-broken17) I can literally feel the pain woven throughout the lines and stanzas. Very...
  July 6th, 2017 14:09
• all of this and more (Meno1972) Meno, what you are is an ARTIST, entertainer, thought provoker, emotion...
  July 6th, 2017 13:53
• More than perfect (ShannonXx) The previous comments already said it, your poem is beautiful. But it is...
  July 6th, 2017 13:31
• My poetic side (Renzi) Thank you for your thank you! This site really is amazing. I can read...
  July 6th, 2017 13:05
• J3 (Jacob8t5) Congratulations!!!!!! You said it all. Actually, there are no words to...
  July 6th, 2017 03:12
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (2) (Michael Edwards) This is good Michael. Thank you.
  July 6th, 2017 03:09
• Better Days. (Goldfinch60) Well written poem. It is funny I wrote a poem about wisdom/experience just...
  July 6th, 2017 03:02
• Scented Solutions. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, like the quote, love the poem. There really is a lot more to love...
  July 6th, 2017 02:58
• When I\'m low (Just a girl.) I do like your poems, the way they are written, your images (...as...
  July 5th, 2017 20:48
• Not a lonely bird (Malubotelho) What was first, the picture or the poem? Your beautiful poem has longing...
  July 5th, 2017 20:35
• outdoors (Onepauly) Paul, only you could make night fishing that exciting! Now try writing...
  July 5th, 2017 20:29
• Others Think (Brandyngraham) You are different, and in a good way! Too many people are just followers,...
  July 5th, 2017 13:52
• A Cup of Tea (TiffanyR) Your so well written poem is an invitation to step back once in a while...
  July 5th, 2017 13:45
• I Don’t Give a Fuck (Stephanie Showers) One heck of a way to say when it\'s over it\'s over! The end of a...
  July 5th, 2017 13:41
• Love of my life (Stephanie Showers) After reading your latest poem I went to look at some of your earlier...
  July 5th, 2017 13:37
• Lowly (Stephanie Showers) You say a lot with few well chosen words arranged in a beautiful...
  July 5th, 2017 13:35
• Impression: Sunrise (Davmor73) Thank you for a wonderful poem. Truly enjoyed it.
  July 5th, 2017 13:31
• NO WAY (Laurell) Agree with Amanda, the changing capitalization is intriguing. Also like...
  July 5th, 2017 13:28
• Rainbow (Meno1972) And you will be. You might even find that famous pot of gold. I find it...
  July 5th, 2017 13:24
• Emptiness (Katherinem7) You captured loneliness perfectly with a haunting tale of emptiness. Love...
  July 5th, 2017 11:24
• Be yourself (Aa Harvey) A very beautiful ode to somebody very special indeed. I do like your...
  July 5th, 2017 11:18
• The Sorrows of Summer (AcaciaRose) There are a LOT of adults who cannot write as beautifully as you did here....
  July 5th, 2017 11:14
• Guide You Home (Abpoet18) Thanks for a great poem. Loved the line \"Greatness grows from dirt\" a...
  July 5th, 2017 10:38
• Suicide Thoughts (Lostgirl24) You penned a heart-wrenching cry for help. Very well written, the opening...
  July 5th, 2017 10:34
• THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs) Well written Louis! And it is true that both positive and negative events...
  July 5th, 2017 10:28
• The Fear Within. (Stephen.Sapaugh) A strong poem describing that feeling perfectly. Like it, especially the...
  July 5th, 2017 10:25
• Front tooth (Renzi) Nice little thing you wrote here. And judging from the picture you don\'t...
  July 5th, 2017 10:07
• Blood Isn\'t Always Thicker Than Water (Kendra_dawnn) Beautiful writing and a point well taken. Blood doesn\'t mean anything....
  July 5th, 2017 03:47
• Before I... (Lost-but-not-broken17) Thank God I read burning-embers comment before starting to write here. I...
  July 5th, 2017 03:35
• Oranges (Adrianna Kjeld) After reading your fun poem, I may never look at an Orange the same way...
  July 5th, 2017 03:31
• Perfect Imperfections (Lost Girl) Lost Girl, one: YOU ARE GOOD ENOUGH Your writing shows that. two:...
  July 5th, 2017 03:19
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) Love it, love it, love it!
  July 5th, 2017 03:13
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Just to get it out of the way: Your watercolor is incredible! Now to your...
  July 5th, 2017 03:11
• The Truth that I Love You (GeraldineTaylor) Geraldine, as far as I am concerned, this is a blockbuster of a...
  July 5th, 2017 03:03
• We (Krystal Brewington) So far so good. Where does it lead? What is the point? Is there an...
  July 5th, 2017 03:00
• I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.) Have to agree with Michael, this is one of your best. One question though:...
  July 5th, 2017 02:57
• Dead Sara (Edthepoet) What an incredible description and an even more incredible name. And the...
  July 4th, 2017 22:09
• Keeping Up With The Reality (Niallprideaux) I do not watch reality TV, hardly watch TV at all. Your rant was...
  July 4th, 2017 22:02
• Flow Without Flow (Emile Dubois) Ina quest to feel something I over thought.... We over think, we over do,...
  July 4th, 2017 21:30
• being fit (Onepauly) As a \"senior\" who feels quite a bit younger inside, your poem really...
  July 4th, 2017 20:42
• Bound By Love (Seeker123) Beautiful poem. The last line says it all!
  July 4th, 2017 05:25
• THE WIND BLOWS (Michael Edwards) Sorry Michael, love the drawing better than the poem, even though the poem...
  July 4th, 2017 05:23
• If Our Tears Could Build A Stairway (Krystal Brewington) You express in a beautiful way what most people who have to go through...
  July 4th, 2017 05:21
• Our Angel In Heaven (Krystal Brewington) Krystal, I do believe that the worst thing that can happen to a parent is...
  July 4th, 2017 05:18
• The Other Side of the Road (GeraldineTaylor) Geraldine, you handled this very complicated situation extremely well....
  July 4th, 2017 05:15
• Let me out (Dent Moses) Beautiful writing. I am trying, I am tryingf to figure out the meaning of...
  July 4th, 2017 05:10
• Reprogramming (Poetic Dan) Dan, I do like your poem! We have to reprogram our lives all the time....
  July 4th, 2017 05:02
• What is Lettuce ? (Joaquin Finn) Hate to tell you this, but Hungarians actually come from a different...
  July 4th, 2017 04:47
• Dear Dad (Lost Girl) Lost girl you are a \"Hang Ten\" as we say here in Hawaii for somebody who...
  July 4th, 2017 04:33
• What is Death? (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, this is a great poem. I am all with you! On paper I am a...
  July 4th, 2017 04:29
• When one is unwell (Anoldwoman) To anoldwoman from an old man: I love your poem. You are so right, and you...
  July 4th, 2017 04:25
• Not Again. (Fay Slimm.) Faye, first of all, where do you get these beautiful pictures? Second,...
  July 4th, 2017 04:19
• What If (FredPeyer) Thanks Dan. The past is the past, we cannot change it, so it doesn\'t...
  July 4th, 2017 04:13
• The Four Haikus of Edgar Schnapps - a dog (Erinna) These Haiku are great, and I like the dog perspective rather than you...
  July 4th, 2017 00:03
• From He to She (Little lay lay) Bianca, thank you! You just described my wife of 40 years perfectly! Very...
  July 3rd, 2017 21:35
• Through my eyes (Just a girl.) Well written! You know beauty really is in the eye of the beholder. I...
  July 3rd, 2017 21:31
• just dreams (Onepauly) You did it again. Had a big smile when reading it. It\'s amazing how many...
  July 3rd, 2017 21:28