Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• \'I Win\' (ShannonXx) A very well written poem to honor a very special person, and in a lifetime...
  June 28th, 2017 13:36
• When The Words Won\'t Come (Blues Poem #13) (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I did not think of Alzheimers, but now that you mentioned it, I...
  June 28th, 2017 13:31
• When The Words Won\'t Come (Blues Poem #13) (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) I agree with the other comments. The last line is the scary one. All the...
  June 28th, 2017 11:10
• As a poet (Tony36) Yes Tony, every time we publish we are letting it all hang out. A bit like...
  June 28th, 2017 11:06
• Writing: (Avigail) Avigail you captured the spark of creation beautifully!
  June 28th, 2017 10:50
• I Should Come With a Warning Label (Fragileheart) A well written cry for help. There comes a time we just have to take down...
  June 28th, 2017 10:47
• Shed (SheWasTheSun) Man, I read it three times! Personal re-incarnation! Tear yourself down,...
  June 27th, 2017 19:52
• \"Cadaver\" (PenguinPoetess) Your poem is quite graphic, but it fits. Your writing is well thought out,...
  June 27th, 2017 19:49
• Growing up (Justagirl) I am a father of three, all grown up with kids of their own. Believe me,...
  June 27th, 2017 19:42
• King of mixed signals (Justagirl) Good poem! What if you let him dangle for a change? The more you are NOT...
  June 27th, 2017 19:40
• My hell (Justagirl) It has been a long long time, but I still do remember the pressures to...
  June 27th, 2017 19:37
• Words that break walls (Avigail) This is so good, I printed it out. Mahalo!!!
  June 27th, 2017 19:26
• Regeneration (Destiny_s) Keep writing and keep praying and you WILL be restored!
  June 27th, 2017 19:20
• Two bodies contradicting (Meno1972) Meno, thank you for another really great poem. Sometimes it IS nearly...
  June 27th, 2017 19:17
• Destiny (Rayzul) Sometimes we do find ourselves in \"an empty shell I call life\" until...
  June 27th, 2017 19:14
• Mirror mirror (Poetic Dan) You say you are \"just telling your life story\". Happy are we who can...
  June 27th, 2017 19:10
• I love you (Malubotelho) Malu, what can be nicer than a bird flying by, carrying our love on its...
  June 27th, 2017 19:07
• Girl, Our Love Shines So Brightly (Brooklyn6timesplus) Beautiful love poem. I especially like the last line.
  June 27th, 2017 19:05
• You made me (Krystal Brewington) I like your poems Krystal, is there a way to turn this font into something...
  June 27th, 2017 19:04
• serenity (Onepauly) Sounds close to yoga and meditation. Going inside oneself to find peace...
  June 27th, 2017 18:59
• i believe in you. (Ruth Fadairo) Wonderfully said Ruth! And you are aptly named after Ruth, a woman of...
  June 27th, 2017 18:56
• The Things They Don\'t Tell You (Joaquin Finn) No matter where you are, no matter what you are, no matter who you...
  June 27th, 2017 18:53
• ALL TOO FAMILIAR (Kaychee) One of the best descriptions of emotional pain, very well written!
  June 27th, 2017 13:18
• What are the perks of being poetic? (Theperksofbeingpoetic) It is true, writing comes with many perks, but you listed a few more....
  June 27th, 2017 13:15
• Fear (Christina8) Thank you for a very beautiful and emotional poem. We writers should be...
  June 27th, 2017 13:13
• LIMERICK No 35 (Michael Edwards) It\'s 8am here and you just made my day! Thank you.
  June 27th, 2017 13:06
• Opus of Love (Sue.evans) I don\'t know what kind of competition that was, but I do know that they...
  June 27th, 2017 13:04
• Desire (P.X. Vexxus) Like your poem. Yes, we all want more all the time for most of our life....
  June 27th, 2017 13:01
• Abandoned (FredPeyer) Thank you everybody, it is a pleasure and honor to be a part of this
  June 27th, 2017 12:53
• how unlike we are (Stefan badham) I do love your poem Stefan. With only a few well chosen words you create...
  June 27th, 2017 11:37
• The strongest soldier. (Tynika_bent) Fine poem Tynika. Mothers are the glue that holds humanity together! Read...
  June 27th, 2017 11:32
• Mr Nice Guy (Edthepoet) Great poem. Unfortunately we cannot control the growing up part. It just...
  June 27th, 2017 11:29
• Too Much (Jessiannace) Thank you for a fine poem. You know, no matter how old we are, there are...
  June 27th, 2017 11:26
• The Last Mark (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Age is only a number though just embrace it or let it go! Great poems...
  June 27th, 2017 11:21
• Bethany (Tony36) Well written. Tony I am sorry for your loss. The pain will never go away,...
  June 27th, 2017 11:04
• My Mother (Renzi) Enjoyed every line of your ode to your mom. Now I know where you got your...
  June 27th, 2017 10:19
• The other you the other me. (Roudan) Roudan, I think I have to read it a few more times to get the deeper...
  June 26th, 2017 23:17
• Moon Candy (FredPeyer) Thanks so much everybody! I think no matter what we should keep on...
  June 26th, 2017 21:53
• beneath sickles of moon (Heather T) Heather I loved reading it. Especially like the last four lines! Wish I...
  June 26th, 2017 18:40
• distance (Onepauly) Well said, we all need to go to this special place once in a while!
  June 26th, 2017 18:33
• i inspire me. (Ruth Fadairo) Beautiful! Sometimes it is so much easier to write than to talk. When we...
  June 26th, 2017 18:30
• The void of happiness (JayR19) Nice, would like to read more from you.
  June 26th, 2017 14:37
• Is It Wrong (Kristy41) A beautifully written poem about conflict. You are damned if you do and...
  June 26th, 2017 14:27
• Tiny Little Soldier (PenguinPoetess) Thank you for a great poem. We do sometimes forget that kids are like...
  June 26th, 2017 14:21
• Birthday thoughts (Malubotelho) Happy Birthday!
  June 26th, 2017 14:16
• How Can One Be So Cruel (Krystal Brewington) Bless your heart. You are doing the right thing. The number one job for...
  June 26th, 2017 14:13
• Telling My Story (SilverXball) You do write well, so please continue! I do hope that you will overcome...
  June 26th, 2017 13:41
• hiding in the shadows (Tynika_bent) Tynika, you do write well. Do we miss something we don\'t know? Maybe just...
  June 26th, 2017 11:55
• Last Mojo Child (Blues Poem #14) (Kurt Philip Behm) Please forgive me Kurt, I know what Mojo means, but don\'t get the love...
  June 26th, 2017 11:46
• Never knew (Meno1972) Well said Meno. I am white, my wife is chinese. I just see a woman (and a...
  June 26th, 2017 11:40
• Screwed (Whisperingquill) Whisperingquill you DO have way with words. Wonderful free play of...
  June 26th, 2017 11:37
• BLINK!!! (Tynika_bent) I just read the other comments and yours as well where you say that you...
  June 25th, 2017 20:21
• Alone (Fragileheart) Well written and very intriguing. Why do you want to be alone? Maybe you...
  June 25th, 2017 19:10
• Moral conscience..... (P.H.Rose) Beautiful writing. Sometimes we do the best work when we feel that there...
  June 25th, 2017 19:08
• treasure (Onepauly) Another well written poem with a good message. We are all rich in many...
  June 25th, 2017 19:03
• To my ex step father. (Pierce_The_Ky) Even though I don\'t know you, I am proud of you! I hope he will see this...
  June 25th, 2017 18:53
• me, myself and i. (Ruth Fadairo) Ruth, I like your poem. You can be alone, yet not lonely at all, and you...
  June 25th, 2017 12:36
• In love (Meno1972) Meno, new love is always scary. It\'s like walking a tight rope without a...
  June 25th, 2017 12:31
• Memories (McKinsey Rose Lynn) No more memory, no more writing! You may not want to remember something,...
  June 25th, 2017 12:22
• Lord of Oblivion (Grant Degnan) Your mastery of the language is amazing. But....Oblivion? There are...
  June 25th, 2017 12:17
• All Scepters Disowned (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt I do like your writing a lot! And you are your own man, not bowing to...
  June 25th, 2017 12:08
• Wicked Witches (Abpoet18) You write well, and you definitely have some valid points, but I am more...
  June 25th, 2017 12:02
• She Put Her Trust In You (Brooklyn6timesplus) Very nicely written! Sometimes I wonder what we poets would write about if...
  June 25th, 2017 11:59
• Hurt (Duckykingy) One way love is hard, really hard. Your poem shows that raw emotion. Good...
  June 25th, 2017 11:55
• THE ARTIST RESPONDS (Michael Edwards) I agree with you that an artist should sometimes challenge what is wrong...
  June 25th, 2017 04:51
• What Do You Say? (Krystal Brewington) The absolute worst thing that can happen to a parent is to loose his/her...
  June 25th, 2017 04:46
• From Here to There. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch you nailed it. There are two kinds of people. The ones who...
  June 25th, 2017 04:37
• Tears of Agony (P.X. Vexxus) Very well written, kind of reminds me of Joan of Arc. Thanks for sharing!
  June 25th, 2017 04:24
• Where does she wake (Chris frank) Chris, this is beautifully written. I love it. \"Neither alone they are...
  June 25th, 2017 04:01
• Lets run (Roudan) We all would like to run away sometimes, we just don\'t have your so...
  June 25th, 2017 03:40
• Crescented Magic. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I read this poem and have to admit that it went way over my head....
  June 25th, 2017 03:37
• Gary (Renzi) Just found that ejit is Irish for a \"fool or idiot\". So who is this...
  June 25th, 2017 03:34
• Gary (Renzi) Renzi you lost me on this one. Who the heck is thon Gary? I tried to...
  June 25th, 2017 03:32
• The Light, The Trees, and The Weeds (Worn Sleeve-Heart) You are so right, love and kindness is what we need now to make this world...
  June 25th, 2017 03:28
• The Shaking (PenguinPoetess) Alyssa, this is a very moving poem. Reminds me of 9/11 in the States....
  June 25th, 2017 03:24
• The heart of all things (David) Incredible imagination. The heart is us and we cannot control it. It just...
  June 25th, 2017 03:21
• never give up the fight! (Wanderlust) A very eloquent way of bringing the point across to never give up! I am...
  June 24th, 2017 18:50
• why? (Ruth Fadairo) Good, short, and to the point! Only I don\'t agree with the last line, I...
  June 24th, 2017 18:47
• Love and its siblings (Avigail) I do like your poem. Never thought of love this way. It seems I am...
  June 24th, 2017 18:42
• Music (Meno1972) Music and poems have much in common. They both can evoke powerful emotions...
  June 24th, 2017 18:39
• My Green Hoodie (ShannonXx) What a wonderful poem. Full of love, intimacy, longing. A shared hoodie as...
  June 24th, 2017 18:35
• Home (Kjb) Nice poem. Just imagine a 100 year old house. There would probably be a...
  June 24th, 2017 18:29
• Stress Free (Bfrench7) Good advice for a stress-free life
  June 24th, 2017 18:25
• Let\'s all bake today...... (P.H.Rose) After reading your very imaginative and funny poem this is what popped...
  June 24th, 2017 18:22
• Too old? (FredPeyer) Thanks Louis, you are right, age is only a number, at least up to a...
  June 24th, 2017 12:40
• Too old? (FredPeyer) Thanks Robert! I love Einstein, did not hear the one about the socks yet....
  June 24th, 2017 12:37
• Never Again (Baylee) Short and to the point. You did it again, judicious choice of words,...
  June 24th, 2017 11:58
• IN GRANDEUR (Michael Edwards) I used to be an art publisher in a former life. Beautiful watercolor. And...
  June 24th, 2017 05:10
• Raindrops (Clairie840) The word that comes to mind when reading your great poem is:...
  June 23rd, 2017 22:44
• Half the world enslaved (Emile Dubois) Unfortunately, since man started to make records, history was always...
  June 23rd, 2017 22:36
• An Ending. (Cara) I have to agree with the other comments that this would be a great...
  June 23rd, 2017 22:31
• Degenerate (BloodPho3nix) After reading this the first time I went back to read your other three...
  June 23rd, 2017 20:58
• emotional therapy (Onepauly) Paul, poets are optimists. To be in a place like you describe would be...
  June 23rd, 2017 20:49
• Why we can only exist in the figments of my imagination. (Inexplicablyme) Imagination is such a powerful force. Just think, everything man-made that...
  June 23rd, 2017 20:42
• I will wait (Caley03) I like you poem, it shows that even though we know that something might...
  June 23rd, 2017 20:36
• Twin Flames (Salem_B911) I like your love poem, especially the last four lines with the \"empire of...
  June 23rd, 2017 20:29
• Fight with me (Renzi) Cogito ergo sum (I think, therefore I am). In your case it should be: I...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:32
• Is midnight (Meno1972) Meno, thank you, we all have nights like that where reality rears its ugly...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:25
• THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs) Thank you for sharing this with us, Grant. I can imagine that it has not...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:22
• Wilt (Grant Degnan) Grant, you are very gifted. And Robert is right...Beautiful
  June 23rd, 2017 18:17