Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• () Santita, Michael got some real competition here regarding writing...
  August 12th, 2017 11:34
• LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards) Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this...
  August 12th, 2017 11:31
• My Baby girl (Des) Desiree, thank you! You mirrored my exact feelings for my baby girl, who...
  August 11th, 2017 23:32
• Flakes (Whisperingquill) Beautiful wording WQ, but for once I cannot agree with what it says. I...
  August 11th, 2017 23:28
• Words Have No Meaning (Hannabal) I hear you Hannabal. There are always a few who dominate every discussion,...
  August 11th, 2017 21:58
• Your Love is Not Enough (Dent Moses) Dent, I am probably a bit dense, but I read it a few times and am not...
  August 11th, 2017 21:53
• Kick The Bucket (Danny13) Short and to the point, danny. AP is right, and then there is also the...
  August 11th, 2017 21:48
• The sea she came (Shortyb) Welcome to MPS shortyB! And what an entrance! Love your poem and would...
  August 11th, 2017 21:46
• My Faith In Season (Kurt Philip Behm) And my faith is in you! Great writing Kurt.
  August 11th, 2017 21:30
• Stand By (SheWasTheSun) I like the first line and then it gets even better. Very nice writing.
  August 11th, 2017 21:29
• You Are Loved (Simplybeautiful) Thank you for posting this v.c. I think it should be framed and hung in...
  August 11th, 2017 16:37
• Love still (Malubotelho) Malu, this is a very beautiful way to describe soul mates!
  August 11th, 2017 16:20
• IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs) A very apt title to a very intriguing poem! Maybe the world would be a...
  August 11th, 2017 12:11
• Interference. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful depiction of fish. I see it and feel it through your words.
  August 11th, 2017 12:09
• Rioja - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) After reading this one I had to go get a glass of wine immediately! Nice!
  August 11th, 2017 11:50
• A LANTURNE (Michael Edwards) You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I...
  August 11th, 2017 11:49
• Green Waters (Baylee) Nicole, this is beautiful! I like both the writing and the metaphors.
  August 11th, 2017 11:45
• To Be Honest (Anonymous18) Great writing Anonymous, I read it aloud, real fast, and it has a great...
  August 11th, 2017 11:42
• Jupiter Farms (Malubotelho) Great fun poem Jupiter Farm girl! The picture of the Bougainvillia ...
  August 11th, 2017 11:39
• Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) I don\'t think I ever saw a nicer write about August than this one, Fay....
  August 11th, 2017 11:34
• My Time. (Goldfinch60) Great writing, great idea. I wish I could be like you, but it takes me...
  August 11th, 2017 11:31
• The Warmth/ Piecing Hope (Whisperingquill) WQ, I think I was \'in a apricot spume of joy\' when reading these two...
  August 11th, 2017 11:27
• () Very beautifully said. And did she find it?
  August 11th, 2017 00:13
• EMERGING (Michael Edwards) Michael, tis so good, had to make it a favorite!
  August 11th, 2017 00:09
• Live through darkness (Tanvir H) Short and to the point! But I have to add: Sometimes people give you pain...
  August 11th, 2017 00:07
• Supportive team (Avigail) Very nice poem Avigail! Yes, we do have to care more about each other, and...
  August 10th, 2017 23:58
• A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) Michael, all three are good. Like the first one best.
  August 7th, 2017 01:31
• drunk texts, unsent (Queer-with-a-pen) A little bit rambling, but I like it. Well written!
  August 7th, 2017 01:30
• The Glass Shadow (Brycycle) Made me think. I like it a lot. Great writing Brycycle.
  August 6th, 2017 18:20
• Loneliness (Bibbeck) Great writing, Bibbeck. I like how you alternate between low (tramp) and...
  August 6th, 2017 18:13
• Matthew 5:20 (NaomiRayne) Beautiful writing, Rayne. You are very talented.
  August 6th, 2017 15:21
• Who Needs Weeds? (WriteBeLight) WBL, the problem is that some weeds are so beautiful. And they serve the...
  August 6th, 2017 15:11
• Inimitable Inauguration (Orchidee) Your poems should be part of the service, orchidee!
  August 6th, 2017 15:06
• Don’t be so serious, seriously (Avigail) While increasing my sex appeal at my age is rather impossible, I do love...
  August 6th, 2017 15:02
• Right (Baylee) This is a great, well written poem, Nicole. With only a few well chosen...
  August 6th, 2017 15:00
• It\'s only her (Tanvir H) A very beautiful, well written declaration of love. I can see the girl you...
  August 6th, 2017 14:56
• Sitting at Heavens Door. (Goldfinch60) You said it so well, Goldfinch. What else could be there to make us happy?...
  August 6th, 2017 14:47
• Leap (Whisperingquill) The whole poem is full of incredible word constructions, but the one that...
  August 6th, 2017 14:45
• My unknown lover (Kesha) Kesha, this is a very beautiful poem, full of pain, but also hope. Very...
  August 6th, 2017 14:42
• LIMERICK No40 (Michael Edwards) I just love limericks, one of these days I guess I will have to try my...
  August 6th, 2017 14:39
• Take One. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem, incredible rhyming, nice structure, I don\'t think it can...
  August 6th, 2017 03:26
• SELFISH (Onrique.Latodd) Welcome to the site, Onrique. Written from the heart! If this is your...
  August 5th, 2017 22:49
• Heard it but never felt it...until now. (Sammertheone) Again, a very strong, emotional poem. In the last line, \'....than the...
  August 5th, 2017 22:46
• Lie (Sammertheone) You express the pain and longing perfectly. Good writing!
  August 5th, 2017 22:44
• level 4 happiness (Gary Edward Geraci) Gary, that Schnauzer monk does go well with your great poem! I really...
  August 5th, 2017 22:41
• Not forgiven (NaomiRayne) Rayne, I like the writing and the structure. The way you go from the other...
  August 5th, 2017 22:33
• Midnight Hauntings (Azura Nightsong) Beautifully written, Azura. Like \'Stillness conceived by swirling...
  August 5th, 2017 22:30
• Innocence lost (Dulcinea91) Like your last poem, well written, with powerful emotions. The reader gets...
  August 5th, 2017 19:24
• These pills (Dulcinea91) Strong emotional writing Dulcinea, well written. But is this really the...
  August 5th, 2017 19:22
• I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt) Edward, I comment on a lot of poems, not because of who wrote them, or who...
  August 5th, 2017 19:17
• I can, therefore, I am (Eyeamsoule) Nicely written.....and you ARE the greatest possible version of yourself!
  August 5th, 2017 17:11
• Autumnal (Bibbeck) You are painting a vivid word picture of autumn, I do like it. Brings up...
  August 5th, 2017 17:09
• Venezuela: Land of Grace (Rrodriguez) This is a beautiful poem, and I am sure the Spanish version was even...
  August 5th, 2017 17:06
• So-Called Land of The Free (Kimberly Culpepper) Welcome to the site, Kimberly, your writing is excellent! And, despite...
  August 5th, 2017 16:57
• I love you (Tanvir H) Welcome to the site, tanvir. A very nice declaration of love.
  August 5th, 2017 15:01
• Thank you for raping me (NikkiiADTR) Nikkii, I admire your strength and resolve. Your writing is very powerful,...
  August 5th, 2017 14:46
• Just Nice (Thewildfire) There is a lot of emotion in your poem, Ariana, and you do write...
  August 5th, 2017 14:36
• Assuming (Anonymous18) ...and sometimes plain wrong! Love your shorty!
  August 5th, 2017 14:26
• Alone in your head (Roudan) Sometimes it takes a lot to convince somebody that what they need is...
  August 5th, 2017 14:25
• The Problems Of Yesterday (Caherine N. C.) Welcome to the site, Catherine. Yesterday is done, tomorrow we don\'t...
  August 5th, 2017 14:21
• All Washed Up (WriteBeLight) Great sponge/cleaning/throwing out/shopping poem. Am sure that with just a...
  August 5th, 2017 13:09
• Morning Ritual (Night Owl) I guess only a Night Owl could look at a smoothie this way. Love it!
  August 5th, 2017 13:04
• Healing Helps (Orchidee) What an uplifting and happy, feel good poem! Thank you.
  August 5th, 2017 13:02
• The resolution of cleaning (Avigail) Great poem. I should take it as a metaphor for my life....don\'t worry...
  August 5th, 2017 12:59
• The Festive Spirit (JamesJohnson) ....and Christmas should be every day!
  August 5th, 2017 12:55
• As she desired (Malubotelho) Malu, there are times when any and all of us would like to let go, petal...
  August 5th, 2017 12:41
• Too Long. (Fay Slimm.) Lately there were several poems with rain as subject matter. Yours...
  August 5th, 2017 12:30
• BACA (Crazycatlady) I checked it on the internet and I think orchidee is right, it should be...
  August 5th, 2017 03:22
• Cleansing Rain. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, such a nice metaphor that rain washes away our worries. I think...
  August 5th, 2017 02:58
• Half Tear So Alive (Whisperingquill) WQ, this is not only a very beautiful well written poem, I also like the...
  August 5th, 2017 02:56
• SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE (Michael Edwards) Michael this is a beautiful poem, you succeeded admirably. And the...
  August 5th, 2017 02:54
• Smile (Jaylee85) Welcome to MPS, Jaylee. There is so much emotion in your writing. Well...
  August 4th, 2017 21:24
• Grow With Despair. (Kevin browne) Read it, like it, nuff said! I like the line \'Sitting on benches left...
  August 4th, 2017 21:14
• A Letter You Can Never See (Ettolrahc) What you did C. is good, how you wrote about it is even better! Family IS...
  August 4th, 2017 21:10
• Dream Totem (Night Owl) Beautiful language night owl, like \'riding the waves of the unconscious\'...
  August 4th, 2017 21:05
• a recipe for my alergy (Avigail) Avigail, I like your poem. Your happy juice is not only a recipe for S...
  August 4th, 2017 20:59
• Summer Came (Alf W) Beautiful writing, Alf. I miss the seasons (at least sometimes), but do...
  August 4th, 2017 20:55
• A Lady Standing By A Gate (Alf W) A very well written and intriguing poem, Alf. It is amazing how many...
  August 4th, 2017 20:52
• The Graveyard Of Your Heart (Alf W) Beautifully written poem. I like how you treat the subject matter by...
  August 4th, 2017 20:40
• Nicotine Testicles (Joel Carpenter) ....and then there are days like that! Joel, this is hilarious, fun, kind...
  August 4th, 2017 16:32
• \\\\\\\"RIGHT HAND\\\\\\\" (GravelNGrief) Powerful writing. As a left-hander I am not sure which hand is the...
  August 4th, 2017 16:26
• BANA (Adri) Thank you Adri for a very moving, very true, and very well written poem!
  August 4th, 2017 16:18
• Loveless (Bibbeck) Well written Bibbeck, one does get the feeling of two ex-lovers, now more...
  August 4th, 2017 16:07
• Look Both Ways (WriteBeLight) Look both ways....no train......but you missed the truck in front of...
  August 4th, 2017 15:00
• Cooling Comforts (Orchidee) Great writing as usual, orchidee. \'Peace abiding in our soul\'....peace...
  August 4th, 2017 14:54
• Her (Tony36) I once read a poem about a gal gone away I like it a lot It\'s my...
  August 4th, 2017 14:48
• Wrapping around me (Kesha) Welcome to the site Kesha! What a beautiful poem, so full of tenderness,...
  August 4th, 2017 13:52
• Incubating (Malubotelho) Great metaphor here, Malu. Even though we guys obviously do not have the...
  August 4th, 2017 13:34
• GRANDFATHERS (Louis Gibbs) As a grandfather of 4 1/2 (one on the way) your beautiful poem made me...
  August 4th, 2017 13:29
• Not A Doubt. (Fay Slimm.) The picture and the poem do compliment each other, both are very beautiful...
  August 4th, 2017 13:17
• The Undarkened House. (Goldfinch60) Great poem Goldfinch, I sometimes wonder how much electricity we squander...
  August 4th, 2017 13:03
• Tropical Rain (FredPeyer) You are making me blush! So stop it! But thank you anyway for your kind...
  August 4th, 2017 00:46
• Degermanation/ Melted (Whisperingquill) The first one is a gem, the second one is beautifully written. Don\'t know...
  August 4th, 2017 00:45
• DROWNED IN SORROW (Michael Edwards) Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the...
  August 4th, 2017 00:42
• Fade (Baylee) I do love this one Nicole. Change is a constant in our lives and you...
  August 4th, 2017 00:40
• Blink (Frankie Ross) Welcome to the site Frankie, and for a five minute piece it \"ain\'t...
  August 3rd, 2017 21:46
• Selfish (Kelli_lynn) Welcome to the site kelli_lynn, one sentence and you are up and running....
  August 3rd, 2017 21:43
• Sugar daddy (CaitEva) Laralove, your poem lays the truth right into the open. I like how it...
  August 3rd, 2017 21:41
• Hope (Georgiarous101) Your nice poem goes from loss and sadness to strength and hope. The hope...
  August 3rd, 2017 21:37
• jealousy. (Ruth Fadairo) You got right to the point here, I like the way you write. And I...
  August 3rd, 2017 17:22