Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Blind limits. (JamesJohnson)
James, a very intriguing poem, nicely penned.
August 3rd, 2017 17:20 - Flames (Poetboy123)
poetboy, nicely penned, a flame as metaphor of a dying love, broken...
August 3rd, 2017 17:13 - Kiss me (Aa Harvey)
Yes Aa, there is more to a kiss than meets the eye. Well said!
August 3rd, 2017 16:41 - Rain (SarahLouise)
Nice poem Sarah, and we do need the rain.
August 3rd, 2017 16:39 - The Profound Man (Adri)
Adri, you love his heart and you love his soul..........I LOVE YOUR
August 3rd, 2017 14:09 - Cook (Tony36)
Tony, I am married to a Chinese lady, and believe me, with the Chinese it...
August 3rd, 2017 14:07 - Sentiments It Found. (Kevin browne)
Great writing again Kevin, I guess you know by now that I do read every...
August 3rd, 2017 14:01 - My Father Instilled (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, while reading the poem, before seeing your answer to Kevin, in my...
August 3rd, 2017 13:51 - A Hat For That (WriteBeLight)
Never thought of it this way WBL. Now, is the poet hat just one kind, or...
August 3rd, 2017 13:44 - Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose)
P.H. this is incredible. I agree that we all should do this once, and not...
August 3rd, 2017 13:29 - Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.)
First I saw the picture and thought \'oh, a happy easy poem\'.
Started to...
August 3rd, 2017 11:58 - Walking in Space. (Goldfinch60)
A very fine poem, Goldfinch, I do like all of it, especially the ending,...
August 3rd, 2017 11:53 - That\'s Crazy Talk (Whisperingquill)
WQ, I read it, I enjoyed it, I don\'t understand it. Reminds me of the...
August 3rd, 2017 11:46 - THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards)
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power...
August 3rd, 2017 11:44 - My Small Silent Child (ShannonXx)
Shannon, you are an incredible poet. Your writing is exquisite and this...
August 2nd, 2017 13:36 - Garden Glories (Orchidee)
Now I think I know why you call yourself orchidee! No wonder with such a...
August 2nd, 2017 11:18 - Hope (Renzi)
Hope is like the sun, which, as we journey toward it, casts the shadow of...
August 2nd, 2017 10:52 - I\'ll be there when you call (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful way of saying: Don\'t worry, I\'ll be there when the next...
August 2nd, 2017 10:40 - WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES (Louis Gibbs)
Incredible poem Louis! And writing sets us free!
August 2nd, 2017 10:35 - Death (Malubotelho)
And in the end, in that light is where we all want to bathe.
August 2nd, 2017 10:14 - More Than. (Fay Slimm.)
Very well written again, Fay. You are a magician of words.
August 2nd, 2017 10:09 - Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60)
As far as I am concerned Gold, you just ponder on and share these...
August 2nd, 2017 09:54 - Entwined Under an Aster Sky (Whisperingquill)
As usual I do like your poems very much! They are high class erotica,...
August 2nd, 2017 01:36 - A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow. (Kevin browne)
I specifically liked
\'Buttered with the cream of hope smearing these...
August 2nd, 2017 01:21 - Freedom (GeraldineTaylor)
Great writing Geraldine, and yes, if you get everything you mention, you...
August 2nd, 2017 01:16 - 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
No.2: Morning and Evening were never meant to meet?
Like all three, but...
August 2nd, 2017 01:13 - Anoesis (Baylee)
Nicole you got a winner here! Beautiful poem. Had to look up the meaning...
August 2nd, 2017 01:09 - Just a remind yourself. (🌧️🌙)
Welcome to the site happy. And that someone will be there for you!
August 1st, 2017 20:43 - Change The Cycle (Gina~)
Like the writing, structure, and message.
August 1st, 2017 20:41 - Wait (NaomiRayne)
Well I guess Rayne, we just have to wait and see what will happen. Will...
August 1st, 2017 20:38 - Dear Love, (Merabelle)
Written from the heart. Yes, love can be painful, but it can also be...
August 1st, 2017 20:36 - Man I never knew (S.louise)
Beautiful writing S. It is so sad if a kid cannot get to know his/her dad,...
August 1st, 2017 20:33 - Love\\\\\\\'s Hunger Needs (HEIDIKINS)
Beautifully penned, lots of emotion, I do like it.
August 1st, 2017 20:28 - Don\'t You Know (HEIDIKINS)
Well written, kind of sad though.
August 1st, 2017 20:25 - Come With Me (Its Raskolnikov)
Well Ras, since you ask so nicely, I would come with you, am afraid though...
August 1st, 2017 20:21 - angel smoke (Heather T)
Very beautiful scenery, great wording like \"temples of deep August\", or...
August 1st, 2017 20:18 - My House (Anonymous18)
Interesting poem, well written, showing how it feels to reach bottom. But...
August 1st, 2017 18:48 - Day on my stage (Poetic Dan)
Dan, love to read about your bike, decided that tomorrow I will publish my...
August 1st, 2017 18:45 - Wild! (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, your poem is wild! Seriously, I really enjoyed it, and you are...
August 1st, 2017 18:39 - Seasons of Life (TiffanyR)
Tiffany, I could read this all year long, all throughout the seasons!
A...
August 1st, 2017 14:12 - The Outing (WriteBeLight)
So well written WBL. I won\'t touch on the topic again since hopefully it...
August 1st, 2017 12:31 - What\'s In A Bin (WriteBeLight)
So true, WBL, the trash and recycling we throw out does say a lot about...
August 1st, 2017 12:23 - I Feel Better (WriteBeLight)
WBL, I love your writing. Need to go into the archives to read some more!
August 1st, 2017 12:17 - Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose)
PH you might have posted it previously, but I never read it before, so we...
August 1st, 2017 12:09 - There Was A Girl (Tia Davis/テイア)
Tia, you wrote a beautiful poem with a strong message.
August 1st, 2017 11:59 - The Quiet Ones. (Niallprideaux)
Good poem, good subject, Niall.
While, as Heather said, quiet ones can be...
August 1st, 2017 11:44 - One cent psychology: (Avigail)
Met one who was very tight
thinking she was always right
The loose one...
August 1st, 2017 11:38 - AUGUSTUS (Louis Gibbs)
Don\'t know. And yes, you could replace the word \'soldier\' with the word...
August 1st, 2017 11:24 - Today. (Fay Slimm.)
Fabulous! What a way to start the day! Beautifully written as always. I...
August 1st, 2017 02:26 - liar liar (Queer-with-a-pen)
Welcome to the site Sebastian. Wow, that is quite a piece of work you...
August 1st, 2017 02:03 - THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
Michael, your writing astonishes me. These three senryus are great. And...
August 1st, 2017 01:57 - Second Chances For Sole Orb / Vim (Whisperingquill)
Trees with auras, tickling the brain, coaxing the fracture of my own star...
August 1st, 2017 01:53 - A Soldier of the Great War. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, it is great that you chose to write a poem, and a good one I...
August 1st, 2017 01:45 - Rarity (Baylee)
Very very nicely said Nicole.
July 31st, 2017 22:02 - gone ghost. (Thepoetnomad)
Written pretty much from the heart.
Nice penmanship. And take it from an...
July 31st, 2017 18:55 - the gate (Onepauly)
Great writing. I have been knocking, but a lot of times there is no...
July 31st, 2017 17:19 - Little love sayings (Malubotelho)
All I can say Malu is that when your pen flies, our hearts dance!
July 31st, 2017 17:18 - Forwards In Return. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, they are all good lines, but the last one spoke to me real loud....
July 31st, 2017 14:13 - five candles (Heather T)
\'I wept to wet her wings\', yes we parents do that, and then we weep...
July 31st, 2017 14:04 - Little moments of attention we give and receive (Avigail)
Avigail you are right on. In today\'s world of cellphones and texting it...
July 31st, 2017 14:00 - POISON FRUIT (Louis Gibbs)
You hit the nail on the head with this beautifully written poem.
July 31st, 2017 12:39 - Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, thank you, thank you, thank you!
From now on whenever I have...
July 31st, 2017 12:36 - Yin to my yang (Poetic Dan)
Thanks Dan for this beautiful way of saying \'I love you\'!
July 31st, 2017 12:33 - Early Morning Troubles. (Goldfinch60)
So true, time seems to fly when writing. And bringing tea to your wife...
July 31st, 2017 12:17 - Naze Oniya/Cherokee Rose (Whisperingquill)
Wonderful writing! One problem though, how do you improve on perfection?
July 31st, 2017 12:14 - WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
As are the thoughts popping up at inopportune moments!
Great on-liner...
July 31st, 2017 12:10 - Before You (Baylee)
You write so well Nicole. And you do what a writer is supposed to do,...
July 31st, 2017 12:06 - chant (Onepauly)
My guess......????????????????
No clue what it means or stands for, but...
July 31st, 2017 12:00 - Maybe (Its Raskolnikov)
Ras, your very well written poem opens up a pandora\'s box of questions. I...
July 31st, 2017 11:56 - mortal (Heather T)
I absolutely had to make this one a favorite! Waxen ships, spectral moons,...
July 31st, 2017 11:49 - All Is Now Never Blinks (Whisperingquill)
I agree with Heather, Cat, and Kevin. Couldn\'t have said it any better...
July 31st, 2017 11:42 - Who are you? (Poetic Dan)
Awesome poem Dan! Yes, sometimes it feels as if we were naked, letting it...
July 31st, 2017 11:40 - How can we eliminate violence with non-violence? (Avigail)
Agree completely with this beautifully written poem, Avigail. BUT am...
July 31st, 2017 11:32 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
The sky changing from day to night is one of the most beautiful of...
July 31st, 2017 11:23 - Valyria (Niallprideaux)
Niall, it does feel nice to wake up alone sometimes. Unfortunately never...
July 31st, 2017 11:21 - Books? (Goldfinch60)
Well said Goldfinch, that is exactly why I prefer books to movies!
July 30th, 2017 03:24 - Forgotten (P.X. Vexxus)
A powerful yet sad poem, and so well written!
I really like the last...
July 30th, 2017 02:24 - To Be A Slave (Anonymous18)
As you say in your comment, this IS a very powerful poem. Everything you...
July 30th, 2017 02:20 - Today\'s Panic Attack (ThisVivian)
Had to look up Encephalitis on the net before being able to...
July 30th, 2017 01:48 - My Amazing Family (ThisVivian)
What a beautiful declaration of love for one\'s own family. My wife is...
July 30th, 2017 01:40 - Alone (ThisVivian)
Very well written Vivian! I love your poem, except for the second to last...
July 30th, 2017 01:37 - TOO MUCH WOMAN (AAA)
Behind every successful man there is a strong woman. I really like your...
July 30th, 2017 01:25 - Ancient Pyramids (GeraldineTaylor)
Beautifully written ode to the world\'s ancient wonders. Great poem...
July 30th, 2017 01:22 - Poetic Song (Phantom bride)
Amber, what a beautiful declaration of love! And believe me, you WILL get...
July 30th, 2017 00:06 - LATE JULY (Michael Edwards)
Michael you created a beautiful July scene here. Such a pleasure to...
July 30th, 2017 00:03 - Life of a smile (Roudan)
Nicely written roudan. And the life of a smile is.......eternal.
July 29th, 2017 23:58 - The Fury Of A Patient Man (Edthepoet)
Ed, I really like your poem and the title \"the fury of a patient man\'...
July 29th, 2017 23:55 - Predator (BananaMayonnaise)
Welcome to MPS, this is a good first poem, let\'s see what you can do...
July 29th, 2017 20:39 - I see you, I know you (Brie)
Brie, I do like the way you structured this poem with all the repetitions....
July 29th, 2017 20:36 - L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another great poem by the master of Acrostic poems.
Never thought of it...
July 29th, 2017 19:32 - Ridiculous Renditions. (Kevin browne)
Kevin you are not only the king of poetry as Kat pointed out, you are the...
July 29th, 2017 19:23 - The Girl Who Cried While Brushing Her Hair (DarkX.O.X)
Welcome to the site, Light. (kind of funny how that sounds)
I do like the...
July 29th, 2017 19:08 - My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose)
P.H., wonderful writing and absolutely true! I have one grand-daughter,...
July 29th, 2017 14:52 - Drowning (Baylee)
Very well written Nicole, sometimes silence is best, even if it feels like...
July 29th, 2017 14:49 - Launch Pad (Charlesbarrett)
Charles, this is a great poem with a subject matter that applies to my...
July 29th, 2017 14:47 - Things that I delay (Avigail)
In my case, to be honest, I guess I would have to say: laziness!
But...
July 29th, 2017 12:47 - Will (Whisperingquill)
Whisperingquill, I faithfully read all of your poems, but this one is way...
July 29th, 2017 12:45 - ahoy! (Onepauly)
One heck of a way to wake up! You described that relieved feeling of...
July 29th, 2017 12:43 - Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem Fay, and we do have some sunsets that look exactly like the...
July 29th, 2017 12:30 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem Goldfinch! Personally I do like the BP, but only for about 10...
July 29th, 2017 12:29
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