Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
Michael, this must be one of your greatest poems! Reminded me of the Clean...
July 29th, 2017 11:13 - Summertime (Harsbars12281953)
Welcome to MPS, I like your \"summer poem\", even though where I live we...
July 28th, 2017 20:55 - Dull Blade (Brie)
Brie, like your poem. Maybe a knife sharpener might have helped, but then...
July 28th, 2017 20:53 - insight (Onepauly)
Great poem Pauly,
I am not a psychic, far from it, can never find...
July 28th, 2017 18:41 - foolish heart (Heather T)
Heather,
I admire your strength, courage, and honesty!
I know you did...
July 28th, 2017 17:08 - A Person is a Person (Jonas_marie)
Welcome to the site Jonas Marie, I do like your poem. Just wish everybody...
July 28th, 2017 15:32 - Smoke & Mirrors (Kurt Philip Behm)
First Poem: Aristotle said it, Einstein said it, and now you.... Well...
July 28th, 2017 15:29 - My MPS friends (Christina8)
Nice to see you back Christina, and thanks for the MPS poem. Nicely done!
July 28th, 2017 15:21 - Friends (Its Raskolnikov)
A very nice poem about friendship. Hang on to these friends, they are hard...
July 28th, 2017 15:17 - Basorexia/ Star Mother (Whisperingquill)
Have to agree with Diamond, love Star Mother. Am not so sure yet about...
July 28th, 2017 15:15 - I see what I\'m doing (Poetic Dan)
For your sake I hope too that you are listening!!! :-)
Sometimes the...
July 28th, 2017 15:10 - FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs)
Your poem blew me away. You say so much with so few words. The last stanza...
July 28th, 2017 13:25 - The Trial of Forgiveness (Niallprideaux)
Niall, you wrote another fine poem here. I do like the last stanza.
July 28th, 2017 13:19 - Love-Smitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely write, and so right!
While we do not have a dog anymore due to a...
July 28th, 2017 13:17 - Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60)
A very moving and beautiful poem Goldfinch. And the flowers are beautiful...
July 28th, 2017 13:11 - AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL (Michael Edwards)
Love your poem Michael. I sometimes sit at the beach and just watch the...
July 28th, 2017 13:08 - forever. ..rings and gambling (Jooles)
Nice one Julie, and the Universe knows, the Universe knows everything! :-)
July 28th, 2017 11:44 - TV ads (Avigail)
If the side effects are longer than the ingredients, stay away from...
July 27th, 2017 11:25 - Eyes—Heart (Kurt Philip Behm)
Agree completely with no.2 and no.3, Kurt, but have a comment on...
July 27th, 2017 10:10 - Enough (Charlesbarrett)
Yes, short and to the point, but with a lot of meaning and truth. I have a...
July 27th, 2017 10:04 - Uncivilized. (Fay Slimm.)
What a picture, is she bringing the candle for a night of love-making, or...
July 27th, 2017 04:51 - Decoding (Poetic Dan)
Dan, no matter how much you decode, you cannot decode the soul or essence...
July 27th, 2017 04:48 - Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes, G/F, it takes a shredder to clean up our lives. Great poem,...
July 27th, 2017 04:46 - Seethed (Whisperingquill)
Whisperingquill, I released a forgotten pyre (my name is Peyer), and found...
July 27th, 2017 04:41 - A FEW BITS AND PIECES (Michael Edwards)
Well, I don\'t know Michael, it is 11:30 pm here on Wednesday, have no...
July 27th, 2017 04:39 - Oh, the dishes you will do! (Melissam0202)
Welcome to the site Melissa!
A delightful poem, brought up memories, as a...
July 26th, 2017 13:37 - I HATE YOU DAD!! (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...)
Rachel, as a dad I feel for you, feel your hurt and your anger. You write...
July 26th, 2017 13:01 - Stand Still (LIGHT WARRIOR)
\'Pathetic tunes of self-centered ridicule\'
Jason, for a while there I...
July 26th, 2017 12:52 - Happiness...? (Azura Nightsong)
And one day you will see, and feel, and experience.....and yes,...
July 26th, 2017 12:13 - Death Never Quells (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, I love the whole poem, but the 2nd and last stanzas spoke to me even...
July 26th, 2017 12:10 - Day By Day (Tony36)
Nicely said Tony!
July 26th, 2017 12:07 - Broken Deeper (ShannonXx)
Shannon, these boots are made for walking! Great poem with a strong...
July 26th, 2017 11:27 - Bondage (Malubotelho)
Malu, a strong, but good write! Reminded me of 50 shades of grey.
July 26th, 2017 10:41 - Glass Half Empty (Charlesbarrett)
Beautiful poem Charles, sometimes I felt as if my family did not just fill...
July 26th, 2017 10:35 - DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs)
So true Louis, we are all actors in this great performance we call our...
July 26th, 2017 10:32 - Deep inside I have wings (Avigail)
Well said Avigail, sometimes just a little push in the right direction is...
July 26th, 2017 10:17 - A Bad Combination (HAIKU) (Niallprideaux)
You don\'t have to mix it, you drink enough of the one, you get enough of...
July 26th, 2017 10:11 - Ethereal Medicine (Whisperingquill)
Whisperingquill, I herewith declare you the official medicine man of this...
July 26th, 2017 10:09 - Making Sense. (Fay Slimm.)
....and now you are lost with scrambled brain, confused, mystified, and...
July 26th, 2017 04:20 - Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer)
Thanks so much Kat, grew up with an alcoholic, and met lot of them.
July 26th, 2017 04:13 - Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, Goldfinch, first we have to recognize them, then treasure them.
July 26th, 2017 04:12 - ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards)
I can smell the air, the toast, the coffee aroma and picture myself...
July 26th, 2017 04:08 - Weeping Willow (Unique)
What a beautiful poem, Unique. I can see that tree standing tall!
July 25th, 2017 22:32 - Paper girl (_madefromthestars_)
Welcome to the site, Elle.
Very nice writing. Would like to read more...
July 25th, 2017 22:24 - My Body (NaomiRayne)
Another very strong poem, Rayne. Honest and from the heart.
July 25th, 2017 18:47 - Liberals (free from restraint) (NaomiRayne)
Rayne, I do like your writing, even though I may not understand...
July 25th, 2017 18:43 - Starvation (NaomiRayne)
Rayne, you are not alone. All of us are selfish and cowards, maybe not all...
July 25th, 2017 18:38 - Every word I see or hear (Poetic Dan)
Dan, wonderful writing, straight from the heart or even the gut. It is...
July 25th, 2017 17:51 - The Artist (Its Raskolnikov)
Very well written, excellent!
July 25th, 2017 14:50 - lamentation (Heather T)
Heather, thank you for a very moving tribute to these mothers. Losing a...
July 25th, 2017 14:47 - Willful Intentions. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, great write, love the line: Feathered by the weight of wings...
July 25th, 2017 12:37 - better places (Onepauly)
After reading your answer to Kevin, I now understand your poem better....
July 25th, 2017 12:20 - River-Speak. (Fay Slimm.)
Incredible poem, incredible metaphors, incredible writing.
Fay, you are...
July 25th, 2017 12:16 - Beautiful Danger (Charlesbarrett)
Very beautiful poem Charles, since it is beautiful, is it also...
July 25th, 2017 12:10 - Hoops Of Dirae (Whisperingquill)
What a way to write about female demonic spirits, comatose ghosts.
You do...
July 25th, 2017 12:08 - Thalassophobia (HAIKU) (Niallprideaux)
Great Haiku Niall, could it also mean fear of deep commitment, fear of...
July 25th, 2017 12:04 - What is stored in your beliefs closet? (Avigail)
So true Avigail, our belief closet does need to be cleaned out every once...
July 25th, 2017 11:54 - Cosmic Cruise (Seek)
Seek, as you said it is long, but I think worth reading. Halfway through I...
July 25th, 2017 02:48 - Diet starts Monday (Rubers76)
Rubers, your excellent poem described my week perfectly!
July 25th, 2017 02:24 - No One Hears Me... (Des)
Welcome to the site Desi!
Your poem is so well written. First you show...
July 25th, 2017 02:03 - Soldier and the Tree (PowerPoetry)
Powerpoery, welcom to the site.
This is quite a strong first poem, nice...
July 25th, 2017 01:59 - dreams come true you know? (Unseengirl)
Welcome to the site, unseengirl!
You were eaten alive when you woke up? I...
July 25th, 2017 01:56 - Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
That is so beautiful, Goldfinch! Writing a poem for your own sons wedding...
July 25th, 2017 01:52 - HAROLDS LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
Well, in prison they tell you never to pick up your soap.
July 25th, 2017 01:49 - Presidential Job Description (Seek)
Great poem Seek, you described our president in three lines...
July 25th, 2017 01:46 - Precious (Wackyheartache4)
Nice writing, very tender, full of love and hope.
July 24th, 2017 20:01 - Waiting For Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, you caught the futility of war perfectly.
July 24th, 2017 19:58 - Nature (Lakiea)
Maybe even the forest is not quiet enough to hear your quiet voice.
July 24th, 2017 19:55 - Looking forward (Rubers76)
And you just did, rubers! Welcome to the site. I like your poem and agree,...
July 24th, 2017 19:51 - Dimensional Queries. (Kevin browne)
Kevin I have no idea where you take the time from to imagine, think about,...
July 24th, 2017 19:49 - For too long (Mellowman)
Excellent! That is exactly where we all want to end up: \'the limitless...
July 24th, 2017 18:34 - Red (Gina~)
Welcome to the site.
Your first poem here is making quite an impression....
July 24th, 2017 18:30 - A New Ice Age (Pete the Petulant Poet)
At 69 been there, done that. But you are the first to put it into such...
July 24th, 2017 18:26 - Thoughts (Lost Girl)
Very well written and thought provoking. There are days like that, and I...
July 24th, 2017 18:22 - I Saw It (Tia Davis/テイア)
I know what I see, I saw it right here: A beautiful poem!
July 24th, 2017 16:27 - \"Two Lovers\" (Micalina)
Very well written Micalina.
July 24th, 2017 16:25 - I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho)
Good writing Malu, as usual, but the ending surprised me. I thought you...
July 24th, 2017 16:21 - Blue Skies (Daisychain)
Nicer writing, I like how you brought in the seagulls. Sometimes they look...
July 24th, 2017 16:17 - Today||Tomorrow (ElenaGrace)
...and the moon gave her an inspiration to write another poem tomorrow,...
July 24th, 2017 16:15 - Disposable (Stephanie Showers)
Very well written Stephanie, you are right, we are insignificant when...
July 24th, 2017 16:08 - Great weather (Renzi)
Envy you, here in sunshine land it is raining today. And we don\'t eat...
July 24th, 2017 12:21 - Mask upon Masks (Whisperingquill)
And \'cerebral enhancement\' I got, need to read it a few more times...
July 24th, 2017 12:17 - ALEXIS (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, your love for this baby practically leaped off the page (or screen)...
July 24th, 2017 12:13 - Home (Charlesbarrett)
Charles, you said it all, and very nicely I might add.
July 24th, 2017 11:54 - being me (Onepauly)
Like the concept, the rhyming, the conclusion. It made me think. Great...
July 24th, 2017 11:46 - New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you have a way with words, and there is \'not a sign of regret\' for...
July 24th, 2017 11:42 - THE LIFE AHEAD (Michael Edwards)
The sketch is outstanding, and the poem is great! But sometimes I do think...
July 24th, 2017 03:05 - Reading Man. (Goldfinch60)
I do like this one Goldfinch. You don\'t know how many times I was that...
July 24th, 2017 03:02 - Flames (Niallprideaux)
You got it right Niall!
July 24th, 2017 03:00 - Broke my promise (Renzi)
Renzi, the picture looks like an Irish bagpipe. Heard they make great...
July 24th, 2017 02:35 - Cassy (Krazee Poetry)
Welcome to the site Lisa! Very beautiful and powerful writing. Emotion,...
July 23rd, 2017 15:25 - Begging Down on Broken Knees. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, I do love to read your words, even if I usually have to read them...
July 23rd, 2017 15:19 - Who is the MMM? (Avigail)
Avigail, I always wondered about that. Figured my MMM must be a clown, or...
July 23rd, 2017 15:12 - Got Your Soul (Whisperingquill)
Before reading Cat\'s comment, I wanted to mention the same few lines!...
July 23rd, 2017 15:10 - Causes (Its Raskolnikov)
Why indeed? Great Haiku Ras!
July 23rd, 2017 15:04 - mirror talk (Onepauly)
Pauly, you are now officially authorized to relax and you will not be...
July 23rd, 2017 15:01 - Another (Baylee)
Well written and food for thought. Love your use of the word \'choate\'.
July 23rd, 2017 14:56 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem again, Fay. And you chose a good picture to go with it.
July 23rd, 2017 14:51 - Ewig. (Goldfinch60)
A very nice tribute to your favorite singer. Do you think our poems will...
July 23rd, 2017 14:48 - When Glitter Becomes Glass (Niallprideaux)
Niall, I like this one a lot. You may have the scars, but you also have...
July 23rd, 2017 14:46
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