Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Erotica (Phantom bride) You know how to write effectively Amber, using your words to paint a vivid...
  July 17th, 2017 16:36
• Cold Heart Dream (Domi) Very well said Domi, there is a lot of emotion in your writing.
  July 17th, 2017 16:29
• Wont come out (Lost in Murphy) There are times when the weather outside is just so bad we don\'t want to...
  July 17th, 2017 16:25
• Darkness (Lost-but-not-broken17) l-b-n-b, this is dark, and you paint a vivid picture. Very well...
  July 17th, 2017 16:15
• the damage of the adults (Mocuisle) Mocuisle, your well written poem brought up a point more parents should...
  July 17th, 2017 13:18
• Until Eyes Close (Kurt Philip Behm) If I close my eyes, I can hear your song, and maybe finish it.
  July 17th, 2017 13:11
• Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx) Ah Shannon, the sweet innocence of childhood memories! Beautifully...
  July 17th, 2017 13:03
• Copacabana (Malubotelho) What a piece of work Malu, so well written, a metamorphosis from ugly...
  July 17th, 2017 13:01
• Symbiotic Stigmata (Whisperingquill) Igniting the Japanese and English knights, only you could come up with...
  July 17th, 2017 12:36
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) Thank you Louis for a wonderful poem and also for being there for these...
  July 17th, 2017 12:30
• Pepsi Cola (Niallprideaux) Niall, like how you use that sugar addiction to describe a love addiction....
  July 17th, 2017 12:24
• Connectors (Avigail) Love it Avigail! You touched on a fundamental truth. These lowly...
  July 17th, 2017 12:09
• I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.) So well written Fay.....and the ultimate winner is: Fay
  July 17th, 2017 11:58
• Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi) Renzi, here is how that song goes: Monday, Monday, so good to me because...
  July 17th, 2017 11:50
• OPHELIA (Michael Edwards) Michael, this time I have to admit I was captured by your painting quite...
  July 17th, 2017 03:53
• Coffee First! (Goldfinch60) Hey G.. coffee is the elixir of life. Nuff said!
  July 17th, 2017 03:33
• The Closet (Domi) Domi, I can read the pain and anguish between the lines. You write so...
  July 16th, 2017 16:51
• Body dysmorphic me (Renzi) Renzi, you are really letting it all hang out here. I love the writing,...
  July 16th, 2017 16:05
• funny or sad (Avigail) Avigail, love your poem!!!! I actually did write a poem called \"Morning...
  July 16th, 2017 15:43
• For I Can\'t Help Falling In Love With You. (Niallprideaux) Strong images and great imagination. I do like this poem Niall!
  July 16th, 2017 14:56
• Nightmarish (Baylee) I think I did not have a nightmare since I was a kid, but I do have...
  July 16th, 2017 02:50
• Memories (Ron parrish aka wordman) A very tender poem. While talking about fading memories, I also read it as...
  July 15th, 2017 21:58
• Scars and tears and such (Lost in Murphy) Excellent poem, excellent subject, excellent rhyming.
  July 15th, 2017 20:57
• Another me,Another you (L.S.L) Sorry about the name. When I opened the poem it said \"babo\", now it is...
  July 15th, 2017 20:47
• Another me,Another you (L.S.L) Welcome to the site babo. You wrote a very emotional poem, well written...
  July 15th, 2017 20:44
• Reality? (ElenaGrace) Elena, love your shorty! Who says that fantasy cannot be real, and...
  July 15th, 2017 18:41
• Meditative Meanderings (Orchidee) Orchidee, I have not commented on many of your poems, not because they are...
  July 15th, 2017 18:17
• Hear Then Speak (Kurt Philip Behm) Incredible Kurt, the act of creation in six lines. But there is more I...
  July 15th, 2017 18:08
• Death (Domi) Welcome to the site Domi! You are a good writer and you tackled a, in my...
  July 15th, 2017 18:02
• The Inside (Moonwriting) I am glad you wrote a comment for this poem moonwriting. I usually try to...
  July 15th, 2017 17:56
• Ouránia Melodía (Whisperingquill) I don\'t think one can say \'I love you\' any more mystical than that....
  July 15th, 2017 17:45
• good (Onepauly) Pauly you are full of surprises (good ones I might add) and you are...
  July 15th, 2017 17:37
• mourning light (Heather T) Heather, Fay just said it all already! An incredible poem. Your mind is...
  July 15th, 2017 14:02
• Growing Pains (2017) (WhiteGirl1503) Aloha Megz, welcome to the site. No matter how old, we are all survivors!...
  July 15th, 2017 13:43
• Spray (Daisychain) Welcome to the site Daisy, Living on an island with waves all around I...
  July 15th, 2017 13:37
• My Lost Life (Kaden Hudson) Good poem Kaden, It makes a good point that a strong person will always...
  July 15th, 2017 13:35
• Slap my wrist (Renzi) No wrist slapping from me Renzi, don\'t wanna spill your drink! But watch...
  July 15th, 2017 12:28
• SHOOTING STAR (Louis Gibbs) Thank you Louis for a very moving and well written tribute to that Doctor....
  July 15th, 2017 12:15
• Sleazy lover (Malubotelho) I like it Malu, reminds me of the days when we lie on the beach in the...
  July 15th, 2017 12:09
• HIM. (Ali.louise) What an incredible first line! I do like your poem ali.louise Feed us...
  July 15th, 2017 04:06
• Movement. (Fay Slimm.) There is only one person I know who can write like this: You! Thanks for...
  July 15th, 2017 04:04
• Loving Fire (Its Raskolnikov) I think this is your first poem here, so welcome! I like how you compare...
  July 15th, 2017 04:01
• One Hundred Miles In Fifteen Feet (M. Mohon) M. this is one of the sweetest poems I have read. The last stanza just...
  July 15th, 2017 03:52
• WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I love it Brian. The way you feel about yachts (or boats, or ships) I feel...
  July 15th, 2017 03:34
• K9 teaching (Poetic Dan) PD, I do like this poem. Am still trying to absorb it all though. Not an...
  July 15th, 2017 03:29
• The 7 (Niallprideaux) And I am the mother pig of them all!
  July 15th, 2017 03:21
• Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, this is genius! Just think, if we could switch from one to...
  July 15th, 2017 03:20
• WORK IN PROGRESS (1) (Michael Edwards) Thank you so much Michael for sharing the way you work and develop your...
  July 15th, 2017 03:16
• Illusion (Baylee) Very very nicely written Nicole! I do like it.
  July 14th, 2017 23:01
• Boundaries (Adri) A very intriguing poem Adri, with a great message. Well written too! It...
  July 14th, 2017 20:55
• Hard Rain (Adri) Adri, this is a great poem! Love it! I always like the rain. Not so much...
  July 14th, 2017 20:47
• Shooting Star (Adri) Well written with a great message. Love that last line \"be bare\", these...
  July 14th, 2017 20:42
• Without You (Myself and me) Between the well written lines I can feel the longing....
  July 14th, 2017 17:53
• The girl on the sand (Hopey_xx) What a beautiful poem and picture! They say a picture is worth a 1000...
  July 14th, 2017 17:50
• Speaking in tongue (Poetic Dan) Dan, great poem, love the \"Rules upon rules\" part. Here is something...
  July 14th, 2017 17:02
• Hello, Hey (Brie) And what a beautiful story it will be! Thanks for a very tender poem.
  July 14th, 2017 15:48
• We Are All Blind, For We Are Human (Poetboy123) PB, very good writing about a very difficult theme. You did Mr. Longfellow...
  July 14th, 2017 15:47
• The Star That Never Dimmed (Moonwriting) Welcome to the site moonwriting! Judging from your moniker, you must have...
  July 14th, 2017 15:33
• Veracious To Lay (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, you put me into a dilemma! Cannot decide which one of the two really...
  July 14th, 2017 15:24
• Ocean, Dear Ocean (MissileOfUncertainty) Beautiful poem with an even more beautiful ending. There is hope after...
  July 14th, 2017 15:19
• Ghost of Atlantis (Nicholas Browning) Nicholas, for me your poem conjured up a lonely man in a lifeboat drifting...
  July 14th, 2017 15:08
• Silver Linings (Rita_ehn) Rita this is a lovely poem that goes well with the picture you posted. And...
  July 14th, 2017 15:05
• Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60) My heart goes out to you Goldfinch! Since we both work, there is a...
  July 14th, 2017 13:17
• Epiphany (Malubotelho) Malu, you said it all with so few words. We are all vibrating: According...
  July 14th, 2017 12:50
• THE WHO I AM (Louis Gibbs) Louis, I am so glad I was sitting when reading your excellent poem,...
  July 14th, 2017 12:38
• Asleep under the bed (ShannonXx) Shannon, this great well written poem hammers at the reader relentlessly...
  July 14th, 2017 12:27
• Holiday Season (Renzi) Renzi, talk about coming back with a bang! Great pictures and even greater...
  July 14th, 2017 11:55
• recess (Onepauly) Pauly, love this one. That first line sounds like a voice from heaven. You...
  July 14th, 2017 11:48
• Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, this is beautiful. And where does a line like \"trailing indigo...
  July 14th, 2017 03:34
• undress my mind (Bella cortez) Bella, that expression \"undress my mind\" is out of this world (well you...
  July 14th, 2017 03:28
• A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Michael I love these couplets. Too bad that hardly any of today\'s youth...
  July 14th, 2017 03:23
• Not the Broken One (MissileOfUncertainty) I apologize, I wanted to comment, but I just cannot find the words. Your...
  July 13th, 2017 22:18
• Together (MissileOfUncertainty) This is just great, describes me and my wife perfectly. Ah yes, you...
  July 13th, 2017 22:09
• To the Next Woman (MissileOfUncertainty) Very well written, one can feel the pain when reading. I understand where...
  July 13th, 2017 22:05
• A Sad Poem (EnderGirl) Endergirl this really is a sad poem, well written, but I was hoping there...
  July 13th, 2017 19:32
• Roman Reign (GeraldineTaylor) Geraldine, this is an awesome epic poem. Must have taken forever to...
  July 13th, 2017 19:28
• Dark days (Myself and me) Welcome to the site myself and me, Your poem is very well written, it...
  July 13th, 2017 19:21
• White light (Ali.louise) Welcome to the site ali.louise. A very nice first contribution here,...
  July 13th, 2017 19:18
• Tainted (Brie) Brie, I really, really like your poem (repetition of really done on...
  July 13th, 2017 18:34
• A Dream Is Lost. (Kevin browne) Kevin, I did read every line (do I get a star?), and I just hope nobody...
  July 13th, 2017 18:27
• hatter mad (Heather T) Tell me Heather, did you have a little nip \"hiccup\" while writing this?...
  July 13th, 2017 18:19
• His Canvas (Baylee) Another very well written poem Nicole, I especially like how you use the...
  July 13th, 2017 18:13
• Have you ever ... (Nyoko_beautiful moon) Good poem Nyoko, makes me wonder how many more things I could have done,...
  July 13th, 2017 14:53
• It\'s So Quiet Now (M. Mohon) Tsukasa, I like it, a well written and rhymed poem. It is tough being...
  July 13th, 2017 14:49
• Recipe for the End (Rpgiii) rpgiii you wrote a very strong poem. I like the way you structured it,...
  July 13th, 2017 14:14
• Affirmation of Love (Rita_ehn) Rita, what a beautiful and imaginative way to look at love. I do like the...
  July 13th, 2017 14:00
• It\'s not if... It\'s when... (Avigail) Avigail, your title says it all, and you are absolutely right. There is a...
  July 13th, 2017 13:12
• Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration (Whisperingquill) The word Desiderata in your title rang a bell, a little one though, I...
  July 13th, 2017 03:16
• Memory\'s Pearl. (Fay Slimm.) Faye, you did it again! How many of these beautifully written poems to you...
  July 13th, 2017 03:04
• what? why? (Kpomeroy4119) kpomeroy, welcome to the site. A good poem. What I see here is a hospital...
  July 13th, 2017 02:56
• at random (Onepauly) Pauly, this is not something just cooked up, this is a gourmet meal!
  July 13th, 2017 02:51
• the past me (Katy Alvarez) Katy, I do hope the title is accurate! Good writing, I could feel the...
  July 13th, 2017 01:14
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) Sorry, forgot to mention: I love your garden, mine looks more like a...
  July 13th, 2017 01:04
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) Michael, in my humble opinion that last stanza made it so much better!
  July 13th, 2017 01:04
• Once Denied (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, beautiful! Words can kill, hurt, but also heal! I just had to mark...
  July 12th, 2017 22:39
• Lamplight (Nicholas Browning) Nicholas, this oeuvre of yours is impressive! So well written. I think you...
  July 12th, 2017 22:26
• Relax (Adam) Welcome to the site Adam. From the way you write this wonderful poem, it...
  July 12th, 2017 22:16
• letter burning (Heather T) Heather, compared to your writing, my poems look like kindergarden...
  July 12th, 2017 21:47
• Outgrown (Baylee) Baylee, this little 4-liner is exquisite. The last line though could be...
  July 12th, 2017 21:41
• Real Football Players.... (P.H.Rose) Great poem P.H.! And yes, I do remember Brillcreme, used it myself a few...
  July 12th, 2017 13:17