Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Out The Door (Mattyice) Lost love, regret, and a new sense of understanding, all in one very well...
  July 3rd, 2017 19:05
• May (Judy Booler) Way to go girl! Thank you for a very inspiring first poem on this site.
  July 3rd, 2017 19:02
• 2:14 AM (Iamtheeggman) Very imaginative and well written. Enjoyed it very much. Mahalo!
  July 3rd, 2017 18:58
• No Tomorrow (Seeker123) What an incredible first poem here. Thank you for sharing. Please don\'t...
  July 3rd, 2017 18:56
• Relationship=broken charger. It hurt to write this (Sadlyliving1995) A very poignant story, and I love the last sentence where you use the...
  July 3rd, 2017 18:52
• 23 (ForeverAW) Raw, emotional, and to the point. Good writing, sounds as if written by...
  July 3rd, 2017 18:40
• upon a page (Heather T) I know I have a big mouth, but for once words are beyond me. The first...
  July 3rd, 2017 17:35
• Scars (Malubotelho) First of all, thanks for the picture showing the pink hibiscus, Hawaii\'s...
  July 3rd, 2017 17:29
• THIS TIME AROUND (Louis Gibbs) Love your poem. You are saying A LOT in these nine short lines. Every...
  July 3rd, 2017 12:50
• They would say (ShannonXx) Shannon, your poem is incredible. Not only very well written, but the way...
  July 3rd, 2017 12:29
• Shattered (Meno1972) Meno, you so beautifully wrote what many people go through, but cannot...
  July 3rd, 2017 12:20
• Pain💔 (Lost Girl) A very emotional and well written poem. Congratulations and welcome to our...
  July 3rd, 2017 02:59
• Do Try - (Fay Slimm.) Fay, most people just see a fly and get rid of it. You see beauty and a ...
  July 3rd, 2017 02:49
• a father\'s love. (Ruth Fadairo) Ruth you do have a gift for writing. With such a sad subject matter you...
  July 2nd, 2017 23:04
• salvation (Onepauly) Paul, a very emotionally charged poem. I do like it, well written. In your...
  July 2nd, 2017 23:01
• Inner perspectives (Avigail) Short and to the point. A well written point I might add. Too often we...
  July 2nd, 2017 18:12
• Asphyxiated. (Niallprideaux) I might have said: If you gotta go you gotta go. But you said it so much...
  July 2nd, 2017 18:05
• insufficient funds (Jake_your_pick) To regret late is better than to not regret at all. If you cannot fix this...
  July 2nd, 2017 18:02
• The Moment Self Taught (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) I do like both of them! Mahalo
  July 2nd, 2017 17:59
• Fishing For Me (Seek) We need poems like yours to remind ourselves to change our ways. Great...
  July 2nd, 2017 17:54
• Stuck In The Bubble (Edthepoet) They say that the only difference between a rut and a grave is depth....
  July 2nd, 2017 17:49
• A Hunger (Lucaso) And still we amble on..... I do like your poem. Thank you.
  July 2nd, 2017 17:39
• The Runner (Bibbeck) Bibbeck you won! Great Poem! I used to run cross country and distance...
  July 2nd, 2017 17:36
• Give and Take (Whoami) An incredible description of a break-up. Want to read more from you! And...
  July 2nd, 2017 16:47
• Their Warnings (ElenaGrace) Outback is right. \"They\" are not important. Listen to the voice inside...
  July 2nd, 2017 16:44
• What is love? (Xd_Blade) You are right, love does not have to be romantic, and you CAN feel it...
  July 2nd, 2017 16:35
• tears of men (Heather T) Thank you Heather for this beautiful love poem. Wish somebody would write...
  July 2nd, 2017 15:15
• Want to be silly or witty (Meno1972) I am pretty sure that this is the FIRST time Bambi, Poe, Picasso, and...
  July 2nd, 2017 14:25
• For the sake of ourselves (Malubotelho) Malu, this is the most poetic, most eloquent, most beautiful, and most...
  July 2nd, 2017 14:19
• Time spent (Renzi) Renzi, when you talk with yourself remember the reason: You like to talk...
  July 2nd, 2017 13:43
• Things Nearest. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, people who think Dandelions are a weed should read your poem!...
  July 2nd, 2017 13:24
• no pain (Onepauly) Paul, I think we all can learn from this poem, both writing and content....
  July 1st, 2017 19:42
• only me (Heather T) Heather, I already wrote what I wanted to say in my answer to Gary\'s...
  July 1st, 2017 17:55
• Semicolons (Rebecca g.) Rebecca, how can somebody who writes poetry so well, and rhymes even...
  July 1st, 2017 17:42
• Morning Constitutional Imagination.... (P.H.Rose) Great and funny poem P.H., reminds me of the times when the kids were...
  July 1st, 2017 13:47
• When God Woke up One Day. (Kevin browne) Kevin, there is so much in your writing that speaks to me, but it would...
  July 1st, 2017 13:31
• The magic of poetry (Malubotelho) Malu, you are weaving magic here with your poem. Beautifully said!
  July 1st, 2017 13:24
• Ignored (ShannonXx) As Neil Sedaka said long before your time: Breaking up is hard to...
  July 1st, 2017 13:21
• Here I stand (Meno1972) Meno I love this poem, not only because it is well written, but because it...
  July 1st, 2017 12:45
• Worth it (Jezzer) Jessa, you put a lot of heart into this poem and it shows. In one of your...
  July 1st, 2017 12:34
• My demon. My companion. (Renzi) Renzi, if only you could master that demon as well as you master writing...
  July 1st, 2017 12:25
• Our Mysterious World (Miss Xtraordinary) Love your poem Miss X, great imagination, great writing. Each stanza could...
  July 1st, 2017 12:15
• Day\'s Eye. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem Fay, the second stanza just blew me away. We have these...
  July 1st, 2017 12:06
• trouble in paradise (Rebecca g.) What a beautifully written poem, and the rhyming is excellent. Am looking...
  June 30th, 2017 21:28
• Goodbye (Krystal Brewington) There is so much emotion in these few words, the pain nearly visible. And...
  June 30th, 2017 21:23
• Letters I never mailed : you don\'t know my name (Bella cortez) How could a man (or woman) not be intrigued, flattered, and ultimately...
  June 30th, 2017 18:39
• Sunshine and Rainbows (Theperksofbeingpoetic) And reading this just made the sunshine come out from behind the clouds...
  June 30th, 2017 18:15
• a moment at the end (Naomiix) Great poem. A cry from the innocent caught in battles not of their own.
  June 30th, 2017 17:09
• Scars (Shadiamond Gonzalez) Your poem is so well written, I can feel the urge, but also feel the will...
  June 30th, 2017 17:05
• A Beautiful Smile (Lanejamesc) Beautiful poem. It can be very difficult if a friend at least in your mind...
  June 30th, 2017 17:01
• A Poem about a Poem (Fayeisabee1) Great! Your poems are made of more than meets the eye.
  June 30th, 2017 15:24
• A mug of support (Fayeisabee1) Thank you Faye, made me think. Especially the two lines \"Listen to the...
  June 30th, 2017 15:20
• Distant memories of a friend (Fayeisabee1) Beautifully expressed, great writing. Love the \"I tried you didn\'t, I...
  June 30th, 2017 15:16
• not a poem for andy (Heather T) Such a beautiful tribute. I am sure he is smiling down on you, maybe even...
  June 30th, 2017 15:08
• those tiny things (Avigail) You are so right, and as usual express it very eloquently. We absorb much...
  June 30th, 2017 15:01
• Can we (Meno1972) Yes, yes, yes, Meno, lets do all this, and also follow the lead of my...
  June 30th, 2017 12:17
• Results. (Fay Slimm.) Faye you transported me back to my childhood. I can still feel the warm...
  June 30th, 2017 12:05
• desperate (Onepauly) Well written, Paul, it vividly conveys the hard times we sometimes have to...
  June 30th, 2017 12:00
• Portrait (Malubotelho) Beautiful writing! You paint such a powerful picture with your words, I...
  June 30th, 2017 11:55
• Vaster (Baylee) Kind of a tongue in cheek thank you here. Thank you for opening my eyes....
  June 30th, 2017 11:47
• Enemies (Baylee) How do you do it, to pack so much meaning into so few words? I really,...
  June 30th, 2017 11:43
• Back in the Sixties. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, every age has its beauty. I agree, the 60\'s were great, and as...
  June 30th, 2017 04:26
• Something to look forward too (Renzi) I am so honored to be the first to comment (means I had to stay up to past...
  June 30th, 2017 04:21
• Sweet baby (Krystal Brewington) A very emotional poem. For a parent to love a child is the worst, the...
  June 30th, 2017 04:08
• for the love of night (Heather T) Comment to your comment regarding making up words. As far as I know,...
  June 30th, 2017 03:57
• Out of luck (Jezzer) Well written Jessa. And you will never be stuck, and never be out of...
  June 30th, 2017 03:50
• No longer able to swim (Sr2017) I do like your writing. Your poem epitomizes the struggles we all go...
  June 30th, 2017 03:46
• You (Emotional girl) Wonderful expression of heartache. I do like your writing. As for the...
  June 30th, 2017 03:43
• Clandestine (Shakerite) Fine poem, and the last four lines are exactly why it isn\'t worth it.
  June 29th, 2017 22:11
• Color of Skin (Tony36) It is sad that we have to be told, but little children never have any...
  June 29th, 2017 22:10
• A Frigid Death (Lucaso) Very beautiful and imaginative. You do write well!
  June 29th, 2017 22:06
• You Have Made That Child (Brooklyn6timesplus) To make a child is easy, to be a good parent not so. Thanks for reminding...
  June 29th, 2017 22:04
• Curved thoughts (Malubotelho) How to explain creation? I don\'t think there is any logical explanation, ...
  June 29th, 2017 22:02
• \"Cycles\" (MaddieJ) Virago, Love your poem! Remembered a definition of life I wrote quite a...
  June 29th, 2017 19:55
• Words That Before I Failed to Speak (Trruffin) Beautiful poem with a strong message.
  June 29th, 2017 19:47
• Another Important Note. (Kevin browne) After reading your incredible piece of penmanship I started thinking on...
  June 29th, 2017 19:45
• Sweet Synergy (Edthepoet) Ed, you do have the gift!
  June 29th, 2017 19:32
• Timeless task (Poetic Dan) Beautifully written poem. The last two lines reminded me of how it feels...
  June 29th, 2017 19:21
• springtime (Onepauly) Paul, thanks for the memories! I love spring and remember it in...
  June 29th, 2017 19:14
• My Two Funny Cuties (ThisVivian) Your poem is so well written, I can just see the two of them. Good job!
  June 29th, 2017 14:35
• we the explorers (Avigail) Really, really like your poem. Aren\'t we writers all explorers? Trying to...
  June 29th, 2017 14:32
• Unnamed (EitherFeline) Magnifique! Your beautiful writing made me hear the music. Would love to...
  June 29th, 2017 14:05
• Fat (Renzi) Renzi, how you can say something important so beautifully and clearly in...
  June 29th, 2017 13:55
• Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.) Being surrounded by ocean, your beautiful poem speaks to me, in both the...
  June 29th, 2017 13:47
• Whose Problem. (Goldfinch60) Another one to print out and hang on the wall, or better yet, carry in the...
  June 29th, 2017 13:35
• To you, who knows me (David) What a beautiful love poem. Need to show this to my wife! (And I won\'t...
  June 29th, 2017 13:31
• YOU AND ME (Michael Edwards) Thank you Michael! Take your time, beauty and quality cannot be rushed!
  June 28th, 2017 20:26
• Higher Truth (Rshafran) What a great poem. Now just add Chaos Theory and you have it all!
  June 28th, 2017 20:18
• To See Light (Poetboy123) Very nicely said. We all are straining to reach the light!
  June 28th, 2017 20:15
• Confession (AJ) I really like how you use double negatives, making them positives.
  June 28th, 2017 20:11
• Prelude To An Ending Pt. 1 (Cara) What a great first sentence for a short-story or even a novel. Grabs the...
  June 28th, 2017 20:02
• Words (Sue.evans) Thank you Sue for so eloquently reminding us of our responsibility. We are...
  June 28th, 2017 19:57
• memoria (Stefan badham) You really caught the right mood, painted the right picture of the regret...
  June 28th, 2017 19:40
• A TRIBUTE TO WOMANHOOD (Louis Gibbs) And SHE is the only one who can elevate you from mere man to be a father!
  June 28th, 2017 19:36
• thank you for being you. (Ruth Fadairo) Ruth, you penned a beautiful friendship/love poem.
  June 28th, 2017 19:30
• teaser (Onepauly) You are right it is puzzling, but that is a good thing! I guess if you...
  June 28th, 2017 19:28
• To Jillian (Augustus) Great Great Poem! Thank you. I am a Grandfather too to four, soon to be...
  June 28th, 2017 14:15
• Ectasy (Meno1972) What are you doing? It\'s only 9am here and your poem is leading my mind...
  June 28th, 2017 14:03
• Nice girls finish first (Clairie840) Well said. Yes, there is a little Jekyll and Hyde in all of us!
  June 28th, 2017 13:54
• Today is the day (Renzi) Your pain and emotions leak through every line and nothing we say will...
  June 28th, 2017 13:47