Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• The World We Live In (Kaden Hudson) Kaden, well written, and when you are right you are right. We can and we...
  July 12th, 2017 13:06
• For The Master (Whisperingquill) Even though my knowledge of the martial arts is very limited, I kind of...
  July 12th, 2017 12:55
• A kiss (Malubotelho) Malu I really like the opening. A kiss can be a journey, both in the way...
  July 12th, 2017 12:48
• As sweet as ever (Malubotelho) Malu, very lovely \"dreamlike\" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I...
  July 12th, 2017 12:33
• THE LIGHT YOU PROVIDED (Louis Gibbs) Great poem Louis, The \"you\" could refer to Dad, older Brother, Jesus,...
  July 12th, 2017 11:46
• Starry Night (Rita_ehn) Welcome to the site Rita! I do like your poem. You are so right. If we...
  July 12th, 2017 11:38
• candle light (Onepauly) A simple poem you say? NOT I do like the line \"now warming my lips\"....
  July 12th, 2017 11:04
• Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.) Love your poem Fay, you are right, there is so much more to us than just a...
  July 12th, 2017 10:53
• THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards) Michael, after reading it I fully understand why you like it yourself....
  July 12th, 2017 10:45
• Normal (Kaden Hudson) Welcome to the site Kaden. Your well written poem nicely touches on an...
  July 11th, 2017 22:45
• Destined to fly (Lost-but-not-broken17) Wow, an incredible poem lost-but-not-broken! I could feel the despair at...
  July 11th, 2017 22:25
• daughter (Heather T) Heather, the way I understand it this is your poem you wrote as a response...
  July 11th, 2017 20:38
• people never change (Mocuisle) Mocuisle, this is a very insightful well written poem. And no, they will...
  July 11th, 2017 18:42
• Our Love was the Forest (Baylee) Baylee, using the forest as a metaphor for your love is very beautifull...
  July 11th, 2017 18:33
• LOST IN CREATION OF MY MIND (Jwill52) Welcome jwill! I like your writing. Here is a question: Are we creating...
  July 11th, 2017 15:59
• Clouds (Sue.evans) Sue, you have given me a whole new way of looking at clouds. Love that...
  July 11th, 2017 15:52
• They call me ego (Malubotelho) Malu I like the way you present both sides. But like it or not, where...
  July 11th, 2017 15:50
• The decisions I made (Avigail) Avigail your excellent poem touched a string in me. You are rightly saying...
  July 11th, 2017 15:45
• Hope Never Rests (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I don\'t have to say anything about your writing, we already know...
  July 11th, 2017 13:15
• Sex and Regret (Andreax21) Am I blushing? Maybe the title should have been \"Hot and Steamy\". Good...
  July 11th, 2017 13:04
• Lonely (Andreax21) Andrea, this is a great poem. I like the way you structured it, relating...
  July 11th, 2017 12:56
• Toast (Tony36) Thanks Tony, I had a good laugh. And a glass of beer, wine, bubbly or...
  July 11th, 2017 12:49
• I wish (Just a girl.) Well written poem. I like how you use the repetition of \"I wish you...
  July 11th, 2017 11:53
• The Truth (Kendra_dawnn) Kendra, I do like your poem just the way it is. Am no expert though, just...
  July 11th, 2017 11:46
• Slut (Just a girl.) Here is the actual meaning of \"slut\" according to wikipedia: Slut is...
  July 11th, 2017 11:35
• Paranoia (S.louise) A very fine poem about a debilitating sickness. So well written, I started...
  July 11th, 2017 11:27
• Hello doctor (S.louise) S.louise, thank you for this well written poem. You have really captured...
  July 11th, 2017 11:24
• Reflection Weary Judgement (Whisperingquill) Yes, what the hell are you going to post next? Whisperingquill, your...
  July 11th, 2017 10:20
• Our Thirsty Hearts (ShannonXx) Shannon, in my humble opinion, this is about as good as it gets. What a...
  July 11th, 2017 09:24
• Deluded (Jabberwocky) After reading this poem I went to your homepage and read a whole lot of...
  July 11th, 2017 04:05
• Final Visitation (M. Mohon) Welcome to this site Tsukasa! While your poem might be a little bit (or a...
  July 11th, 2017 03:57
• My Springtime Song (GeraldineTaylor) Very very nice, now all you need is somebody to write the music! Thanks...
  July 11th, 2017 03:52
• Heart door (Aa Harvey) Aa, I hope your loved one will read this poem, it is worth more than a...
  July 11th, 2017 03:50
• Vulnerability (Lost Girl) Lost Girl, anyone who can write as well as you do is NOT what you say you...
  July 11th, 2017 03:17
• Unconditionally (Moonflower15) Very emotional with vivid pictures. You do write well Moonflower!
  July 11th, 2017 03:06
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Michael I used to be an art publisher in a former lifetime, involved...
  July 11th, 2017 02:55
• Roses (BeautifulDisaster) BeautifulDisaster, thank you for a very moving and emotional poem, as well...
  July 11th, 2017 02:42
• Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne) You hit the nail on the head. I do wonder sometimes!
  July 11th, 2017 02:38
• PEACE? - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch you said a lot in these four lines. And John Lennon is one of my...
  July 11th, 2017 02:30
• 2nd shift (Jamesbackus) Welcome to the forum. Love your desciption of today\'s wired life. Very...
  July 11th, 2017 02:24
• mutual (Onepauly) Paul I hate to admit it, but this time you lost me half way into your...
  July 11th, 2017 02:06
• Incoming. (Fay Slimm.) What a beautiful way to describe waiting for the loved one. Living on an...
  July 11th, 2017 02:04
• A cry for opinion (Malubotelho) WOW! Malu, you are tackling some very heavy issues here and you are asking...
  July 10th, 2017 22:41
• Standing By (RhymeTime) Fabulous writing! Don\'t see too many poems like this one, and I also know...
  July 10th, 2017 18:31
• My Heart Pounds (Rosetintedview) From seeing him looking at you (previous poem), you now look at him! And a...
  July 10th, 2017 18:08
• I See You Looking At Me (Rosetintedview) A very well written emotional poem. I like how you structured it to go...
  July 10th, 2017 18:04
• time and time again (Mocuisle) mocuisle, you may not know how accurate your poem is, and so well written...
  July 10th, 2017 17:55
• Between the lines (Mocuisle) mocuisle, this is good, don\'t know why I did not read it earlier. But now...
  July 10th, 2017 17:51
• Not my problem... (GODisreal) Love your poem Misty, if more people could sit on their mouth, at least...
  July 10th, 2017 14:54
• The Sound Of A Gong. (Edthepoet) Ed, the line starting with \"interpretation of...\" really got me...
  July 10th, 2017 13:05
• Glisten (Nicholas Browning) And I will reminisce about your poem for a while! Beautifully written and...
  July 10th, 2017 12:59
• سالگردِ پدر (Hosein shafiei bidgoli) Hosein, Willkommen auf diesem Forum. Es waere natuerlich schon nett, wenn...
  July 10th, 2017 12:53
• THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs) This is an excellent, very thought provoking poem Louis. Indeed, when do...
  July 10th, 2017 12:30
• Remains (Baylee) Incredible writing Nicole. While it is true that some of the greatest...
  July 10th, 2017 12:11
• River of tears (Lost-but-not-broken17) And what a beautiful smile it is!!!! Cannot make up my mind what I like...
  July 10th, 2017 11:53
• Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi) Renzi, the picture and the poem are both incredible, but it is the...
  July 10th, 2017 11:45
• Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch you are so right! I like what you said in your comment from...
  July 10th, 2017 04:44
• Its My Turn To Laugh (Lost Girl) Lost girl you are scaring the s...t out of me. Do I need to take boxing...
  July 10th, 2017 04:41
• Would you believe me (Poetic Dan) Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And...
  July 10th, 2017 04:34
• Ear (Aa Harvey) Aa, and your poems are ours to read! Thank you.
  July 10th, 2017 04:27
• WOMAN (David Grubb) David, what a beautiful ode to womanhood. Thank you for a great poem...
  July 10th, 2017 04:26
• solar system (Onepauly) Paul, only a mind like yours could come up with such a great poem about...
  July 10th, 2017 04:24
• Road-Shock. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, your poem opens our eyes to the sad fact of road-kill. Be it a fox,...
  July 10th, 2017 04:22
• Drifting Into Solace/ Cryptic Incursions (Whisperingquill) Whisperingquill you sent my head spinning with your eclectic writing....
  July 10th, 2017 04:19
• The Door Forevermore (BadThiliono) And we all have to go through this door at one point. Hopefully not right...
  July 10th, 2017 04:15
• Your Move (Lost in Murphy) Lost, I really like the love to chess comparison. But no matter how many...
  July 10th, 2017 00:06
• Better (Sarahgerome) Welcome to the forum Sarah. I like this well written poem, it is so...
  July 10th, 2017 00:02
• The Struggle (Rpgiii) Welcome rpgiii, a very well written honest and emotional poem. Let us hope...
  July 9th, 2017 23:44
• Chameleon (Nicholas Browning) Is there a way to turn this into a different font? I tried and could read...
  July 9th, 2017 18:17
• Hot Lead Alliteration (Whisperingquill) Well Whisperingquill, with this poem you \"veni, vidi, vici\" allright....
  July 9th, 2017 18:13
• Life change (Malubotelho) You beautifully caught the joy and happiness, but also the fear and pain,...
  July 9th, 2017 18:10
• Imperfection (Adrianna Kjeld) Life IS full of love, and yes, we are all imperfect. But that is the...
  July 9th, 2017 18:00
• Behind The Glass (Dylan) Welcome to the forum Dylan. You made quite an entrance here with your...
  July 9th, 2017 17:56
• Numb (R.A.Brown) Very good writing, I am sure anybody who knows about depression will see...
  July 9th, 2017 16:08
• Drowning (S.louise) A very emotional cry for help, and so well written!
  July 9th, 2017 16:04
• The Warmth of Your Gaze (Moonflower15) Thank you moonflower, for a very well written and honest poem. It is scary...
  July 9th, 2017 15:51
• Just say sorry (ShannonXx) First one has to realize that one made a mistake. Unfortunately a lot of...
  July 9th, 2017 15:43
• Flowerless Thorn (Baylee) Indeed, why pick the \"flowerless thorn\"? Baylee I really like this poem,...
  July 9th, 2017 15:38
• reflection (Heather T) Thank you heather for another very fine piece of writing! \"...as the day...
  July 9th, 2017 15:32
• How is your energy today? (Avigail) Avigail, at my age, when I get up in the morning and I am still...
  July 9th, 2017 15:19
• communication (Onepauly) \"The greater concepts of goodness and light\"...you write so...
  July 9th, 2017 15:03
• Heart Space (FredPeyer) Thanks so much for your comment Fay, I was playing around a little bit...
  July 9th, 2017 03:34
• A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose) What a beautiful, colorful, and entertaining poem about love and a wedding...
  July 9th, 2017 03:17
• Truth seeker (Lost Girl) Wow, talk about letting it all out. I can understand your feelings....
  July 9th, 2017 03:14
• Common (GeraldineTaylor) Thank you so much Geraldine for this musical poem....awesome choice of...
  July 9th, 2017 03:09
• COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Thank you Brian for a reminder to take a few minutes every day to spend in...
  July 9th, 2017 03:05
• Shore-Song. (Fay Slimm.) You are saying in such a beautiful way what I experience nearly every time...
  July 9th, 2017 03:02
• Yasiin Bey (GeraldineTaylor) Judicious choice of words. Love your poem. Kind of wish I could write like...
  July 8th, 2017 19:49
• Wish You Knew (Papi Y) Very well written Papi, full of emotion. Has a nice flow to it, you drew...
  July 8th, 2017 19:44
• Love (Katy Alvarez) Time heals all wounds! You should distribute this poem to all the hurt...
  July 8th, 2017 19:39
• That Sound. (Goldfinch60) Great poem!!! Their laughter is one of the reasons why I love so much to...
  July 8th, 2017 19:37
• A love Thats Found. (Kevin browne) Your poem hit me right between the eyes. THAT is what love is all...
  July 8th, 2017 19:32
• Obnoxious Entrapment (Whisperingquill) The writing is definitely NOT sick. You use extraordinary language. The...
  July 8th, 2017 19:17
• Standing alone (Roudan) I like the poem, but am not sure if I get the meaning you intended. What I...
  July 8th, 2017 19:06
• I *ove You (Cyprian Van Dyke) I did enjoy your poem, it is well written, but I do have one problem with...
  July 8th, 2017 19:01
• What I\'m Not (Ezra.mendoza) This is the best poem I ever read written by a non-person!
  July 8th, 2017 18:56
• Speed (Ezra.mendoza) An intriguing poem, well constructed. And I always thought people would...
  July 8th, 2017 18:54
• Please Recycle (TiffanyR) This is a poem that should be on the front pages of all newspapers and...
  July 8th, 2017 18:50
• Blank canvas (David) David, this is a great poem with an intriguing concept of love. Need to...
  July 8th, 2017 18:46
• Fix yourself (Molly Walsh) There could have been one more line added to this so well written...
  July 8th, 2017 18:41