Comments on community poems by SerenWise
- When Duty Calls (Neville) 
A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme
 April 22nd, 2019 12:37
- LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.) 
Beautiful, so simple and meaningful. Nicely written :)
 April 18th, 2019 14:40
- Harbour Side (Neville) 
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
 April 18th, 2019 14:37
- Winter Solstice (Aislinn Wilson) 
very emotive, beautiful :)
 April 17th, 2019 20:59
- Subsumed (Dovestoneboy) 
Nicely written
 April 17th, 2019 12:56
- Turn Toward the Window (Neville) 
Very emotional and elegantly written, well done
 April 17th, 2019 12:35
- Another New Day (Neville) 
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
 April 16th, 2019 19:02
- Tis Only Angels Crying (Neville) 
Nice little piece, makes you think...
 April 15th, 2019 14:40
- MAGICAL. (Fay Slimm.) 
Gorgeous words and use of metaphor, I think everyone who has been in a...
 April 15th, 2019 14:39
- Names and Faces (Reivax Camlost) 
Nicely written complex piece, very emotive
 April 12th, 2019 12:04
- La Petit Mort (Neville) 
Lovely erotic piece, I\'ve always loved the term \'la petit mort\' 
 April 12th, 2019 11:44
- Morning Coffee (Neville) 
Nice reflective piece, very emotive
 April 11th, 2019 11:20
- Shadow Envy  (Neville) 
Very poignant, nicely done
 April 10th, 2019 15:05
- Canvas (Neville) 
Interesting little write
 April 9th, 2019 12:35
- Roadside Irises (Sunshinefalling) 
Lovely write
 April 8th, 2019 23:37
- Poppies (Neville) 
Beautifully written, well done
 April 8th, 2019 13:10
- Dark stranger (Amherrera1190) 
Love this piece, great ending!
 April 7th, 2019 17:40
- Eventide (Moordykspot2) 
Beautiful use of language, nicely written
 April 7th, 2019 16:26
- Ballerina (Neville) 
Thought provoking piece, love the ending
 April 6th, 2019 12:57
- Feel Again  (SheWasTheSun) 
Nicely written evocative piece
 April 6th, 2019 12:56
- HITHER. (Fay Slimm.) 
Very well written piece, nice use of archaic language 
 April 6th, 2019 11:04
- Glitter (Brie) 
Nicely written
 April 5th, 2019 10:43
- Whisper of Leaves (Dead Naked Tree) 
Nice to see you here :p
 April 5th, 2019 10:24
- Our Lady of the Harbour (Neville) 
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
 April 5th, 2019 10:23
- A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville) 
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
 April 4th, 2019 12:41
- Read Yourself (Neville) 
Lovely words
 April 4th, 2019 12:13
- Three Little Words (SerenWise) 
Thank you all!
 April 3rd, 2019 22:31
- Before Breakfast (Neville) 
Lovely simple write
 March 30th, 2019 08:39
- Upon Your Return (Notapoet) 
Beautifully written
 March 19th, 2019 16:50
- How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning) 
Nicely written
 March 19th, 2019 00:43
- Princess (Night Owl) 
Beautifully written
 March 17th, 2019 23:57
- No more shelter  (Sylviasearcher) 
beautifully written, lovely imagery
 March 16th, 2019 12:46
- As Hollows Whisper (Nicholas Browning) 
Very enjoyable, great use of rhyme and metaphor 
 March 14th, 2019 10:22
- Perhaps (Sylviasearcher) 
Nicely written!
 March 14th, 2019 10:19
- Mourning Song (Neville) 
Nicely written
 March 13th, 2019 14:05
- Better Let Me Love You (Lizzie) 
beautifully written!
 March 12th, 2019 17:40
- Scarlett Point (Hedy) 
Very expressive write!
 March 9th, 2019 17:39
- View: The Living Room Window, and Birds (Hedy) 
Very endearing and creatively written :)
 March 4th, 2019 17:59
- One Bird, Two Stones (Wi11ow) 
Really nicely written, love the use of formatting :)
 March 3rd, 2019 17:01
- The Last Hurt (Neville) 
Nicely written, very personal feel
 March 2nd, 2019 11:19
- Me and you, on and on... (Sylviasearcher) 
Very powerful write
 March 1st, 2019 17:31
- New Skin (aka Transportation) (Hedy) 
Very nicely written piece, good rhythm
 March 1st, 2019 17:27
- Sex (Brie) 
Nicely written :)
 March 1st, 2019 13:17
- Zephyr (Hpoetry) 
Really nicely written, great cadence and rhythm 
 February 28th, 2019 16:54
- Bring Along a Lantern (Neville) 
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
 February 27th, 2019 14:10
- Reconfigure it out (Neville) 
Very nicely formatted, clever
 February 27th, 2019 14:04
- Weak (Traw) 
Nice little write
 February 27th, 2019 14:02
- Venom (Amherrera1190) 
Beautiful and emotive prose
 February 22nd, 2019 15:46
- Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest) 
This is lovely! Very well written and relatable 
 February 22nd, 2019 08:46
- Spring (Sylviasearcher) 
Beautifully written, lovely imagery :)
 February 21st, 2019 18:11
- Land of No More Shadow  (Kevin Michael Bloor) 
Beautifully written!
 February 21st, 2019 18:10
- Heathen (Neville) 
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
 February 21st, 2019 18:09
- The Sea Captain (ColorsToSpare) 
Sorrowful and beautiful!
 February 21st, 2019 17:46
- With The Stroke of My Pen (Daydreaming) 
Nicely written :)
 February 20th, 2019 16:53
- Taken (Sylviasearcher) 
beautifully written, nice use of language and rhymes :)
 February 20th, 2019 16:52
- Shield Maiden (Neville) 
This is awesome, I love the use of language and metaphor! Good job :)
 February 19th, 2019 17:37
- Foxes Are Special (W c) 
Nicely written, foxes are wonderful creatures!
 February 18th, 2019 16:59
- Dreamcaught (Noah) 
Lovely writing
 February 18th, 2019 03:04
- You Find Your Purpose  (Brooklyn6timesplus) 
Nicely written :)
 February 17th, 2019 19:21
- Gone (Mo_Elizabeth) 
Very interesting write, well done
 February 17th, 2019 19:16
- Oblivion  (Clark) 
Lovely work
 February 16th, 2019 21:45
- the sailor with a drowned future (Jon Nakapalau) 
Interesting write
 February 16th, 2019 15:55
- Pebble (Sylviasearcher) 
This is stunningly written... I can really relate to it as well. Nicely...
 February 16th, 2019 14:21
- Hands of a Guy (Shadows) 
Very thought-provoking and well written
 February 16th, 2019 11:24
- A Handful of Ghosts (Neville) 
This is very thought-provoking, nicely done
 February 16th, 2019 11:06
- Nothing (Dovestoneboy) 
Beautifully written, I love the creative use of metaphor
 February 15th, 2019 18:06
- Pride (Shadows) 
This is really poignant, well done! 
 February 15th, 2019 18:04
- Cartography of Lost Desire  (Jon Nakapalau) 
Nicely written, well done
 February 15th, 2019 18:02
- Come closer  (Sbon87) 
Very beautiful and erotic language, well done
 February 14th, 2019 17:04
- No Umbrella (Kurt Philip Behm) 
Very nicely written
 February 14th, 2019 17:01
- Stargaze (Noah) 
Beautiful write!
 February 14th, 2019 14:31
- Locusts (Amherrera1190) 
This is great, I love the metaphor 
 February 13th, 2019 19:09
- Secret Imitations  (JaydeVictoria) 
Lovely work
 February 12th, 2019 17:53
- Those Nights (Amherrera1190) 
Nicely written prose
 February 12th, 2019 15:43
- Sunset Hair (Lee Renard Caspian) 
Lovely imagery, very well written
 February 12th, 2019 14:05
- Perfection in  person  (IsraaD) 
Lovely write and great use of formatting
 February 10th, 2019 19:13
- The Void (Syd) 
Very well written, well done
 February 9th, 2019 12:22
- Brown Eyes (Luckykarma) 
This is precious 
 February 9th, 2019 11:16
- I LOVE YOU  (Shayl) 
Love this!
 February 8th, 2019 15:36
- I Am Living (DesertWords) 
Lovely work!
 February 6th, 2019 15:56
- The Hunter (CindyB) 
This is beautifully written! Well done on the rhyming :)
 February 5th, 2019 00:29
- Shadows in the dark (Adamlong86) 
Very powerful imagery - hope you\'re ok!
 February 4th, 2019 19:46
- O She! (Surucipe) 
Nicely written
 February 3rd, 2019 23:48
- The Pissed Optimist (Surucipe) 
Interesting write
 February 3rd, 2019 23:47
- Not Yet (Hidden) 
Interesting work, well done
 February 3rd, 2019 23:06
- You Are Enough (Noah Malice) 
This is beautiful, so well written
 February 3rd, 2019 11:14
- Ink Blots (Neville) 
Lovely imagery in this piece, well done
 February 3rd, 2019 11:12
- In Vacuum (Satishverma) 
Nice imagery
 February 2nd, 2019 21:14
- The Sparrow (CindyB) 
Beautiful imagery
 February 2nd, 2019 17:26
- The East (Dovestoneboy) 
Beautiful imagery, well written!
 February 2nd, 2019 17:21
- Gold Roses (Joanna Garrido) 
Lovely imagery
 February 2nd, 2019 17:20
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