Comments on community poems by SerenWise

• The Knowing. (Fay Slimm.) An inspirational read
  December 23rd, 2020 21:40
• This Oyster Shell (Clara) Very interesting read, an enjoyable and unsettling metaphor
  December 22nd, 2020 10:05
• Strange Lady. (Goldfinch60) Cute funny write
  December 21st, 2020 22:09
• Two Muses. (Goldfinch60) A wonderfully tender write, so sweet!
  December 18th, 2020 14:08
• Nowness. (Fay Slimm.) This is really beautifully written. Suffused with hope... a divine little...
  December 18th, 2020 14:01
• Farewell to Stromness. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful write!
  December 17th, 2020 18:15
• Intake. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful imagery as always
  September 15th, 2020 22:40
• Duet. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written piece, as always
  June 8th, 2020 20:39
• Falling for Icarus (Neville) I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
  June 8th, 2020 20:37
• Severed. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely write, how such little things can provide inspiration
  May 7th, 2020 20:31
• Strategic Goodbyes (Neville) Such a beautiful emotive write, well done
  April 14th, 2020 11:37
• Not Quite Out of the Blue (Neville) Very relevant and truthful. Good work
  April 11th, 2020 15:18
• Birdsong (Neville) Very cute little write
  April 10th, 2020 05:02
• Enchanted. (Fay Slimm.) Simple and beautiful!
  April 10th, 2020 05:01
• Hooligans. (Goldfinch60) Wholeheartedly agree! Good expressive write
  April 4th, 2020 07:12
• Revived. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words, a lovely write
  April 3rd, 2020 11:50
• Treasure. (Fay Slimm.) A lovely poem
  March 31st, 2020 16:48
• Insidious (Neville) Beautifully written
  March 28th, 2020 02:16
• The Greenman (Saxon Crow) Great work, really creates a vision
  February 28th, 2020 12:24
• Until Spring (Neville) Expertly written, very interesting read
  February 13th, 2020 22:15
• noitcelfeR (Neville) Simple, soulful :)
  February 10th, 2020 16:12
• Regeneration. (Fay Slimm.) A gorgeous write... I can almost feel the calm of nature settling on my...
  December 17th, 2019 21:02
• Entering the silence (AlitaOpal) Very nicely written
  October 24th, 2019 19:05
• Indecently Yours (Neville) Nicely written, very elegant
  October 23rd, 2019 22:30
• Perfect Imperfections (Neville) Very sweet
  October 9th, 2019 17:20
• Deciduous (Neville) Nice little write, enjoyed the clever word play
  September 26th, 2019 21:02
• A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville) Plenty for sure. But a valid question nonetheless
  September 20th, 2019 21:16
• There Are Those (Neville) Excellent little write, perfection of rhyming!
  September 19th, 2019 22:08
• Good Time Girl (Neville) Nicely written, but rather sad. Really conjures up a lasting impression
  September 18th, 2019 22:06
• Fondly and Truly (Neville) Very sweet little write
  September 17th, 2019 11:52
• Correction (Neville) Interesting!
  September 12th, 2019 18:22
• Double Jeopardy (Neville) True indeed
  September 11th, 2019 21:45
• Un Chien Andalou (Jon Nakapalau) Interesting poem about an interesting film!
  September 11th, 2019 21:41
• Singular I’s (Neville) Beautifully written, elegant yet simple
  August 15th, 2019 22:27
• Secret. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely write, well penned
  August 13th, 2019 23:44
• Why When Where and How (Neville) I like this one
  August 12th, 2019 19:19
• Thinking Backwards (Neville) Lovely evocative words
  August 6th, 2019 20:47
• A Silent Refrain (Neville) Nicely written, a very sensitive poem
  July 28th, 2019 20:22
• Always & Forever (Neville) Lovely write, simple yet complex all at once
  July 26th, 2019 19:17
• She Sparkles (Neville) This is wonderful, love the imagery!
  July 22nd, 2019 13:44
• One Last Tear (Christina8) Lovely thought provoking write
  July 21st, 2019 00:50
• Witch (Sylviasearcher) I really like this, very well done!
  July 17th, 2019 19:50
• Tomorrow Lost (Neville) Lovely write, moving and emotive. I particularly like the third stanza......
  July 4th, 2019 21:41
• Captivating Games (Neville) Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
  June 30th, 2019 20:31
• BREAK OUT. (Fay Slimm.) Excellent write, as always an excellent use of metaphor and word play
  June 30th, 2019 02:19
• Escaping From Reality. (Goldfinch60) Well written, I am often guilty of this too!
  June 30th, 2019 02:17
• Dance (Neville) Lovely evocative piece, nicely penned
  June 30th, 2019 02:16
• I Found Myself Thinking of You (Neville) Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
  June 30th, 2019 02:14
• Art into Words. (Goldfinch60) Lovely painting and lovely poem
  June 25th, 2019 02:31
• There Are No Graves (Neville) Very melancholy and beautiful write
  June 24th, 2019 10:37
• Ache (Neville) Beautiful little write, encasing a lot of feeling
  June 23rd, 2019 15:44
• Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60) Very cute little poem
  June 22nd, 2019 22:06
• Erigeron (Neville) Beautifully written, conjured up vivid images in my mind
  June 21st, 2019 22:31
• Out of the Blue (Neville) Very elegantly written
  June 16th, 2019 23:46
• Catching Flies (Neville) A very haunting and thought provoking write
  June 12th, 2019 15:41
• Broken (Neville) Nice thoughtful write, very relatable
  June 9th, 2019 19:52
• BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.) Good work, I can definitely relate as night time when I should be sleeping...
  June 6th, 2019 11:54
• Famous Last Words (Neville) Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good...
  June 6th, 2019 11:53
• Ode to the Artist (Sylviasearcher) Beautiful write, really conjures up some stirring images
  June 4th, 2019 16:43
• HAUTEUR.. (Fay Slimm.) Fantastic ode to an amazing creature, well written as always
  June 3rd, 2019 18:53
• Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville) A very relatable piece, nicely written
  June 3rd, 2019 18:52
• Snakeskin Shine (CindyB) I really like this, very good use of metaphor and this piece really has a...
  June 2nd, 2019 12:50
• A Moment (Neville) Nicely written, deep and reflective piece
  June 1st, 2019 20:25
• Less a Peach... more Apricot (Andrew Charles Forrest) A perfect expression of that feeling we all get from time to time,...
  May 31st, 2019 09:00
• COMBUSTION. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely piece, well structured
  May 31st, 2019 08:07
• Aithō (Neville) Beautiful little poem, conjures up some lovely daydreams
  May 31st, 2019 08:06
• If i could stay (Dusk arising) Very beautiful write, conjures up lovely images
  May 30th, 2019 08:53
• WHISPERS. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely write, a beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature
  May 30th, 2019 08:36
• No Cage for Thee (Neville) Beautiful write, you can never lose what is truly yours, it will always...
  May 30th, 2019 08:34
• LUSH. (Fay Slimm.) Nicely written, love your metaphors as always
  May 27th, 2019 11:21
• Freedom (Neville) Poignant, a little sad
  May 27th, 2019 11:20
• Lily of the Valley (Jenny Wren) Beautifully written, an ode to a lovely flower
  May 25th, 2019 23:21
• A Single Breath (Neville) This is very lovely :)
  May 25th, 2019 22:51
• ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.) Very sensual write tinged with power and beauty, like the sea herself!
  May 23rd, 2019 13:24
• Bang On (Neville) Light hearted yet deep, nicely done
  May 23rd, 2019 13:22
• Tserevo Koria (Neville) Beautiful write, really conjures up vivid imagery of a beautiful place
  May 21st, 2019 17:29
• Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60) Beautifully written, it is so often the little things that bring us joy...
  May 21st, 2019 17:27
• WOMAN-FED. (Fay Slimm.) Another lovely Cornish write - have you ever had star-gazey pie??
  May 20th, 2019 13:42
• Upon Her Ears (Neville) This is lovely :)
  May 20th, 2019 13:40
• UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.) Nicely written bundle of metaphor and divine wording
  May 19th, 2019 08:37
• Beautifully Broken (Neville) Lovely simple write, but holds great meaning
  May 19th, 2019 08:36
• STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful ode to Cornish history, the language is amazing and yet again...
  May 17th, 2019 03:48
• LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.) I love your writing more and more as I read it! The metaphors you use are...
  May 10th, 2019 00:06
• Dear Capricorn (Neville) Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor...
  May 7th, 2019 01:30
• I Am What I Am (Neville) This is fantastic, I love how the structure presents different ways of...
  May 4th, 2019 11:53
• Gender revealing (Poetic Dan) Beautiful!
  May 3rd, 2019 14:25
• Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville) This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...
  May 3rd, 2019 14:23
• Far (Sylviasearcher) Beautifully written, I like the use of structure too
  May 2nd, 2019 06:22
• WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.) Another beautiful piece, lovely archaic language and descriptive metaphor
  May 2nd, 2019 06:20
• In The Beginning (Neville) Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!
  May 2nd, 2019 06:19
• SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.) Another very emotive write, you have such a way with words - true poetry!
  April 29th, 2019 06:42
• Crumbs of Comfort (Neville) Very emotive write, really has an impact
  April 29th, 2019 06:41
• FREEING . (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written, I love the use of language!
  April 28th, 2019 22:37
• Soul Mates (C.J. Knudsen) Beautiful evocative write
  April 28th, 2019 10:35
• Empty Sky (Neville) Beautifully written!
  April 28th, 2019 10:34
• Orchid (Neville) Sad and sensitive little write
  April 27th, 2019 22:19
• BEING. (Fay Slimm.) I love this, so beautifully and elegantly written with beautiful...
  April 26th, 2019 11:29
• Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60) Nicely written and full of hope!
  April 26th, 2019 11:27
• In a Moment Gone (Neville) Simple, nice sentiment
  April 26th, 2019 10:14
• SWEETNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful use of language and metaphor, nicely done
  April 22nd, 2019 12:39