Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• Depression (Undreamed_friend) I enjoy how you bring \"nature\" into the very end of the haiku as your...
  January 28th, 2023 01:39
• musings-2 (NafisaSB) The long tradition of poetry to pass on advice and wisdom continues! ...
  January 28th, 2023 01:37
• My Life (Noelle See) It\'s compelling that being \"free\" to you is being with your family. ...
  January 28th, 2023 01:35
• Peace (Undreamed_friend) Such a delicate little poem. I found peace just reading it. Thank you. ...
  January 28th, 2023 01:32
• What I see (L.Lewis24) I love your take on the Whitman style, which shows through. A+ It...
  January 28th, 2023 01:27
• The Mask (L.Lewis24) We are somewhat naturally self-centered. It is hard to put yourself in...
  January 28th, 2023 01:23
• Death Walks Among Man (M.E.M.) I love your take on this. So many wonderful lines. This is sublimely...
  January 27th, 2023 23:07
• I can’t trust my wife (Ok Waleed) My wise late father instilled this in me... when things go off the rails,...
  January 27th, 2023 22:45
• I’m a sex symbol (Ok Waleed) Yikes. I like your bravado.
  January 27th, 2023 22:41
• Valley of the Blue Moon (MJL) This is exhilarating and exhausting. Such a dense tour de force full of...
  January 27th, 2023 21:35
• Still Life (MJL) Playful and fun. Thanks!!
  January 27th, 2023 21:23
• Traumas (GabrielThePoet) You remind me of me 50 years ago... I hope you left a little of the scars...
  January 27th, 2023 21:21
• Why? (GabrielThePoet) Why is the universal question. You appropriately did not speculate an...
  January 27th, 2023 21:18
• Kam-Hong-Ro (Kinsley Lee) I love how you created that nature-centric sensual tone and worked...
  January 27th, 2023 21:14
• Becoming The Dream (Kurt Philip Behm) More fluid and \"natural\" than your usual tight diction. I like them...
  January 27th, 2023 21:12
• Missing (Kitty the naughty poet) No one else on this site has me saying \"oh my!\" out loud like you do...
  January 14th, 2023 21:19
• The bonds of friendship (Kitty the naughty poet) Oh my! I hope this is at least partially a work of the imagination......
  January 14th, 2023 21:16
• How Very Agincourt (Neville) I did not laugh... but the smile lasted a while! I bow to your talent! ...
  January 14th, 2023 14:06
• The Final Lie (Kurt Philip Behm) Very compelling... the \"meaning\" sneaks up on you, you lose your track...
  January 14th, 2023 14:01
• blood trail (Minki) I think most of us know this feeling... very intense and compelling poem. ...
  January 14th, 2023 13:52
• Art of living (NafisaSB) A nice little throwback to those medieval didactic poems teaching people...
  January 14th, 2023 13:02
• Seventy (NafisaSB) I\'m just a couple years behind you... thanks for leading the way with...
  January 14th, 2023 13:01
• Never Good Enough (Goddess of the Mist) Well, you are certainly more than good enough when you express yourself...
  January 13th, 2023 22:15
• Midnight in A Sullen Frame (A Boy With Roses) I love following the subtle--and sometimes not-so-subtle--evolutions of...
  January 13th, 2023 22:12
• the other me (A drop of mind) Very intriguing play of words and thought... good work... by both of you!
  January 13th, 2023 22:03
• I Miss Myself (Kalyani) At the end of a busy day, I often say I miss myself. So your title got my...
  December 12th, 2022 11:20
• The Cost of Living (Bella Shepard) They say pain and broken hearts and sadness and fear and hunger and...
  December 11th, 2022 23:04
• Artist And Puppets (Satishverma) Thee past and future always connect at the present... a fine observation...
  December 11th, 2022 23:01
• Crush (Zhangyuyouyu) I love the final three lines... the connection is all that matters at that...
  December 11th, 2022 22:59
• Alone (Zhangyuyouyu) Very fine little soliloquy. Loneliness has been described a million...
  December 11th, 2022 22:58
• The Chance (Poet-colette) Not just tender! That little phrase brings in so much suggestion... women...
  December 11th, 2022 22:55
• The Nightjar\'s Lament (A Boy With Roses) Here in Texas we call the nightjar the nighthawk. Have you ever witnessed...
  December 4th, 2022 03:10
• I Met A Griffin As He Prayed (Thomasine Dye) Your poems are far from perfect, but they are perfectly wonderful. I am...
  December 4th, 2022 02:57
• A Rhyme From A Lost Childhood (Thomasine Dye) Your writing is very beautiful, very pregnant with emotion and thoughtful...
  December 4th, 2022 02:49
• Eternal Strangers (Thomasine Dye) I like this... it is over the top but sophisticated and mature at the same...
  December 4th, 2022 02:44
• holding pattern (Queer-with-a-pen) Your first two lines are truly inspired! What a felicitous way to say...
  December 4th, 2022 02:41
• Starry sky (Reynaldo Casison) I love the first two lines... very felicitous way of saying it!
  December 4th, 2022 00:56
• Learning To Let the Past Go (A Boy With Roses) Don\'t be naive... there ARE monsters under the bed!
  November 5th, 2022 19:28
• Coffee and Mornings (Ahhrey) Fun is exactly what it is! Thanks!
  November 5th, 2022 19:23
• Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave) Delightful doggerel!
  November 3rd, 2022 21:07
• Nightingale (Athsfea) Your slightly awkward English is charming and tells a lot about you! Your...
  October 31st, 2022 22:23
• CORONAVIRUS19 (Anupam) I can only imagine losing a brother to COVID. Strength to you. I can...
  October 31st, 2022 22:18
• No more (Mary c) Short and firm, like a boxer\'s jab. Clear but mysterious. What did they...
  October 31st, 2022 22:15
• SHADOWS (Ninkasi) I\'ll just say that this is breathtakingly lovely. It is gauzy and sounds...
  October 14th, 2022 19:03
• Touch and Go Ache (A Boy With Roses) I am enjoying your recent pieces for their apparent simplicity and...
  October 14th, 2022 18:58
• Ngwana Mama (Garth Rakumakoe) This piece is so personal and poignant I am privileged to read it. It is...
  October 12th, 2022 12:09
• The Black Angel. (Paul Bell) As we say in Texas when a state representative is elected up to the state...
  October 12th, 2022 12:06
• The Potion. (Paul Bell) Very thoughtful little reverie... so many possible meanings, none of them...
  October 12th, 2022 12:04
• Little Red Riding hood (That quiet girl) A fine retelling of the story... the sacrifice to the wolves is a...
  September 17th, 2022 22:48
• Panic attack (That quiet girl) You fooled me for a minute! I read classical Greek and started trying to...
  September 17th, 2022 22:43
• Lost in Alzheimer\'s (Angela Unique Raine) A pithy commentary on the concept of fading away from yourself... we pray...
  September 11th, 2022 00:41
• A HOME (Sabo30) I love a good story. Your continuous, run-on self-narrative is haunting...
  September 11th, 2022 00:35
• Love In Sadness (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) Ain\'t it the truth! Sweet reminder of lost loves, never really gone.
  September 11th, 2022 00:31
• Words of Heart (Dr. Soma) It\'s interesting how we fall into patterns and architecture when...
  September 11th, 2022 00:29
• Work Daze On Weak Ends (RickthePoetWarrior) Thanks for a little laugh and for TRYING to make art out of bytes and...
  September 9th, 2022 11:22
• A SWEET POISON (Raymond shawa) OK, this is intriguing and a bit scary! I like the complexity of your...
  September 9th, 2022 02:33
• Musings (Orchidee) Interesting and thoughtful musings... to a doubter like me, so much (not...
  September 9th, 2022 02:27
• a song (NafisaSB) PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject...
  September 9th, 2022 02:21
• a song (NafisaSB) I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of...
  September 9th, 2022 02:20
• Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming (Neville) Self-portrait? I dunno but ya nailed me!
  September 9th, 2022 02:15
• Devils bride revisited (Tallisman) I do enjoy your spirited rhyming stories! I think I know this woman...
  September 9th, 2022 02:14
• Gone! (Dusk arising) You know it took her \"going\" to ensure her legacy. For a bloody royal,...
  September 9th, 2022 02:07
• Bottled Spider (Garth Rakumakoe) When I was a kid, we used to go catch scorpions and small rattlesnakes in...
  September 9th, 2022 01:58
• September 8th 2022 ! (Justa_Geezer) Young man, I see you in the King\'s Guard at the Palace. You would be an...
  September 9th, 2022 01:48
• The Love I Have For You (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) OK, now I know where to come for my daily fountain of youth. (-:
  September 9th, 2022 01:44
• Is A Change Really Coming (Sultra) PS \"Self check-out\" is so ambiguous... I laughed at that! Right before...
  September 9th, 2022 01:41
• Is A Change Really Coming (Sultra) Sultra, this piece is so vivid and sincere... the run-on form is so...
  September 9th, 2022 01:39
• Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) PS love those browny brownies!
  September 9th, 2022 01:31
• Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The...
  September 9th, 2022 01:30
• i (Jon Nakapalau) another interesting thought!
  September 9th, 2022 01:27
• The Sea Of Eternity. (Goldfinch60) I\'m pretty cynical toward monarchy or any of its like... but there is...
  September 9th, 2022 01:25
• you (Jon Nakapalau) It also reads \"sadness at any cost\" which stopped me in my tracks!
  September 9th, 2022 01:21
• Feigned Love (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) Yes, our eyes are often unrealistic. You are very observant!
  September 6th, 2022 22:45
• The liar\'s enigma (Hzugman) A deft take on an old theme!
  September 6th, 2022 22:43
• No Way Back (Kurt Philip Behm) As usual, simple but enigmatic. The first couplet is a riddle, the second...
  September 6th, 2022 22:30
• Willows Table (Jerry Reynolds) Size does not matter, but someone clearly has a big heart!
  September 6th, 2022 22:27
• A Real Love (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) Not here to explore! Love the message... nice little unique love poem......
  September 6th, 2022 22:25
• As I Lay Dying (A Boy With Roses) You often sing songs of heartbreak... I\'ll reread this one later. It\'s...
  September 6th, 2022 22:22
• you (Jon Nakapalau) Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention. One word at ...
  September 6th, 2022 22:16
• an old moan (Dusk arising) I pledged to myself never to grumble about it... the neuropathy, the...
  June 22nd, 2022 02:23
• Romeo (A Boy With Roses) I talk to you like god... we all do that and yet you put it into words so...
  June 22nd, 2022 02:16
• To my dear best friend (Sadkw33n) I\'ll meet you in our memories... a very sweet way of saying it... such a...
  June 6th, 2022 01:14
• There Is an Old Weed in my Garden (Quemis) Your precise descriptions, almost technical language, and the short...
  June 1st, 2022 00:38
• Worst girl at school (Anny) This is such a wonderful account of being a young woman... thank you for...
  May 25th, 2022 22:37
• I’m not afraid of dying (Anny) Keep the spam poetry flowing! Your point of view is interesting.
  May 25th, 2022 22:32
• memories (Jon Nakapalau) Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet...
  May 25th, 2022 22:30
• a fox (Dusk arising) You English and your foxes! Here in Texas we have gray and red foxes. We...
  May 23rd, 2022 15:33
• Another Worthless Poem (Thomasine Dye) Another lovely poem... far from worthless... as Frost said, the woods are...
  May 23rd, 2022 01:01
• Ol\' Vz. Young (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) JW, quite an intriguing dream! I don\'t know if I like it but your bold...
  May 21st, 2022 15:42
• Blackbird (A Boy With Roses) Who says you are insane? I said crazy!
  May 20th, 2022 20:24
• Cry, my beloved Kyiv (Ifeanyichukwu) This is quite moving. Your composition is universal and timeless, yet so...
  April 22nd, 2022 15:31
• Echo de menos (Claudia Garcia De la torre.) I have often said I miss myself after a period of intense work or family...
  April 22nd, 2022 15:18
• CROWN THE COLONY (Osei Zion) Very evocative and intense. You have things to say! Thank you for this.
  April 20th, 2022 00:45
• Today I fell (Ajax (he/xe)) You are a precious voice for yourself and every hurt creature or lonely...
  April 20th, 2022 00:26
• Tenemos que hablar (Claudia Garcia De la torre.) Muchas gracias. This is a lovely but painful self-conversation that you...
  April 20th, 2022 00:18
• Cajoled (Fay Slimm.) Fay, you seldom include yourself expressly in your poems, and that is an...
  April 15th, 2022 12:40
• the love poet (Dusk arising) I love it when you let loose!
  April 15th, 2022 12:35
• Spring (Moyu Aoki) Clever... it\'s hard to use modern, technology-based imagery in a nature...
  April 15th, 2022 12:31
• Spring (Moyu Aoki) I like how you started with nature, then abruptly inserted yourself into...
  April 15th, 2022 12:29
• The Unity (Cassia DeSousa) I think this is \"religious\" but it is also elusive and lovely. Keep it...
  April 15th, 2022 12:27