Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The...
September 9th, 2022 01:30 - i (Jon Nakapalau)
another interesting thought!
September 9th, 2022 01:27 - The Sea Of Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m pretty cynical toward monarchy or any of its like... but there is...
September 9th, 2022 01:25 - you (Jon Nakapalau)
It also reads \"sadness at any cost\" which stopped me in my tracks!
September 9th, 2022 01:21 - Feigned Love (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
Yes, our eyes are often unrealistic. You are very observant!
September 6th, 2022 22:45 - The liar\'s enigma (Hzugman)
A deft take on an old theme!
September 6th, 2022 22:43 - No Way Back (Kurt Philip Behm)
As usual, simple but enigmatic. The first couplet is a riddle, the second...
September 6th, 2022 22:30 - Willows Table (Jerry Reynolds)
Size does not matter, but someone clearly has a big heart!
September 6th, 2022 22:27 - A Real Love (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
Not here to explore! Love the message... nice little unique love poem......
September 6th, 2022 22:25 - As I Lay Dying (A Boy With Roses)
You often sing songs of heartbreak... I\'ll reread this one later. It\'s...
September 6th, 2022 22:22 - you (Jon Nakapalau)
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
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September 6th, 2022 22:16 - an old moan (Dusk arising)
I pledged to myself never to grumble about it... the neuropathy, the...
June 22nd, 2022 02:23 - Romeo (A Boy With Roses)
I talk to you like god... we all do that and yet you put it into words so...
June 22nd, 2022 02:16 - To my dear best friend (Sadkw33n)
I\'ll meet you in our memories... a very sweet way of saying it... such a...
June 6th, 2022 01:14 - There Is an Old Weed in my Garden (Quemis)
Your precise descriptions, almost technical language, and the short...
June 1st, 2022 00:38 - Worst girl at school (Anny)
This is such a wonderful account of being a young woman... thank you for...
May 25th, 2022 22:37 - I’m not afraid of dying (Anny)
Keep the spam poetry flowing! Your point of view is interesting.
May 25th, 2022 22:32 - memories (Jon Nakapalau)
Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet...
May 25th, 2022 22:30 - a fox (Dusk arising)
You English and your foxes! Here in Texas we have gray and red foxes. We...
May 23rd, 2022 15:33 - Another Worthless Poem (Thomasine Dye)
Another lovely poem... far from worthless... as Frost said, the woods are...
May 23rd, 2022 01:01 - Ol\' Vz. Young (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
JW, quite an intriguing dream! I don\'t know if I like it but your bold...
May 21st, 2022 15:42 - Blackbird (A Boy With Roses)
Who says you are insane? I said crazy!
May 20th, 2022 20:24 - Cry, my beloved Kyiv (Ifeanyichukwu)
This is quite moving. Your composition is universal and timeless, yet so...
April 22nd, 2022 15:31 - Echo de menos (Claudia Garcia De la torre.)
I have often said I miss myself after a period of intense work or family...
April 22nd, 2022 15:18 - CROWN THE COLONY (Osei Zion)
Very evocative and intense. You have things to say! Thank you for this.
April 20th, 2022 00:45 - Today I fell (Ajax (he/xe))
You are a precious voice for yourself and every hurt creature or lonely...
April 20th, 2022 00:26 - Tenemos que hablar (Claudia Garcia De la torre.)
Muchas gracias. This is a lovely but painful self-conversation that you...
April 20th, 2022 00:18 - Cajoled (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you seldom include yourself expressly in your poems, and that is an...
April 15th, 2022 12:40 - the love poet (Dusk arising)
I love it when you let loose!
April 15th, 2022 12:35 - Spring (Moyu Aoki)
Clever... it\'s hard to use modern, technology-based imagery in a nature...
April 15th, 2022 12:31 - Spring (Moyu Aoki)
I like how you started with nature, then abruptly inserted yourself into...
April 15th, 2022 12:29 - The Unity (Cassia DeSousa)
I think this is \"religious\" but it is also elusive and lovely. Keep it...
April 15th, 2022 12:27 - Today (Cassia DeSousa)
Yes, the painful irony of your sweet little poem is hard to ignore these...
April 15th, 2022 12:23 - Ode to Mother Nature (Goddess of the Mist)
LB is right... this is simply majestic. You are overdue for something...
April 15th, 2022 12:17 - Meadow Song (A Boy With Roses)
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. ...
April 15th, 2022 12:14 - ROSES ARE RED (Michael Edwards)
Goodness, what\'s gotten into all the poet-posters today? Every poem I...
April 5th, 2022 11:26 - Masculine - Feminine (Fadime)
Oh my... made me blush, but wanting a little more!
April 5th, 2022 11:20 - Those Days Are Long Gone (A Boy With Roses)
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark...
April 5th, 2022 11:18 - lustfully greedily (Dusk arising)
I depend on you for my porn poetry... Oh my.
April 5th, 2022 11:15 - Brightest Of All Horizons (Charles Edward York)
A very sobering and interesting description of a common experience. You...
April 5th, 2022 11:13 - Brightest Of All Horizons (Charles Edward York)
Happy birthday CEY!
April 5th, 2022 11:10 - This Wonderful Place (Bella Shepard)
Yes MPS is a sweet getaway indeed. And you\'ve really enriched the place.
March 21st, 2022 01:17 - beneath the heavens (Dusk arising)
Quite lovely and more poignant. One of the mot efficient uses of words I...
March 21st, 2022 01:13 - Right Down Here (Charles Edward York)
You had me right from \"the altitude of dirt.\" Bravo!
March 11th, 2022 20:47 - Dead Flowers (A Boy With Roses)
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are...
March 11th, 2022 20:38 - Waxen Wings (A Boy With Roses)
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of...
March 11th, 2022 20:35 - One week and no speak (Alexander Pope III)
My pen is losing words fast... stunning expression!
February 19th, 2022 20:36 - Dear Fentanyl (StephanieAnn)
So good to hear from you. Happy Birthday!! Your sense of liberation is...
February 10th, 2022 23:05 - A Dark Journey (FallenAngel1🕊)
All I can say is... gulp!
January 30th, 2022 21:23 - Dreamclouds (A Boy With Roses)
I think we\'ve all cried all night over a love that isn\'t gonna work, or...
January 29th, 2022 23:25 - I Am Butterfly (GiftedT17)
Love the way your lines wander and linger and take their sweet time before...
January 29th, 2022 23:09 - Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning)
Fine craftsmanship and spirit to boot! A worthy contribution to the...
January 22nd, 2022 10:50 - Unbeatable (Fay Slimm.)
An intense, thoughtful exposition of the man v mountain confrontation. ...
January 22nd, 2022 10:37 - If I See You Again (Charles Edward York)
A lovely, haunting take on a universal emotion. As I read this, I was...
January 22nd, 2022 10:33 - My Island of Peace (Goldfinch60)
No need to join you... you\'ve brought the island to us! A precious...
January 22nd, 2022 02:26 - Tortured Love (A Boy With Roses)
Our angels, our warriors... a succinct, hard-hitting description......
January 22nd, 2022 01:29 - The Ocean (GiftedT17)
Your poem moves from little ripples to a pulsing surf. Your long couplets...
January 22nd, 2022 01:18 - within the depths of beyond (Dusk arising)
Heart-stopping images. Beautifully composed. Don\'t jump in just yet!
January 22nd, 2022 01:13 - goodbye meat loaf (Jon Nakapalau)
Meat Loaf was always true to himself, did not let fame mess him up or...
January 22nd, 2022 01:09 - A Fateful Accident (Zhangyuyouyu)
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By...
January 22nd, 2022 01:04 - Adomania (Quemis)
You have such poignant, vivid images, always musical and inventive,...
January 19th, 2022 23:49 - Church Bells (StephanieAnn)
There\'s a little church about a mile from my house that rings the hours...
January 13th, 2022 01:08 - Take Care, Stay Safe. (Doggerel Dave)
I am with Dusk... there\'s a collective weariness, but you have always...
January 13th, 2022 01:03 - Pain (Aryaa)
Such a bittersweet sentiment... reveals a kind soul. Your little pieces...
January 13th, 2022 01:00 - The Scavenger Vultures of Despair (Samer Amin)
Samer, I quite enjoyed (or let\'s say appreciated!) this powerful tour de...
January 13th, 2022 00:52 - to all of the people who call girls pretty (Ghosti)
I don\'t find that \"pretty\" is relevant any more. I have no idea if you...
January 12th, 2022 01:12 - Guaraná (A Boy With Roses)
Lots of choice images here. Your work is often like a puzzle, challenges...
January 12th, 2022 01:06 - gently now withdrawn (Dusk arising)
A delicately ferocious and unforgettable title.
December 20th, 2021 11:17 - birth of a poet No2 (revised) (Dusk arising)
The simplicity of the poem reflects the speaker\'s purported lack of...
December 20th, 2021 02:28 - My Tears Flow Like Rivers (A Boy With Roses)
The boy who never got to love is kind of your anthem. Short and sweet. ...
December 9th, 2021 02:36 - The God of all Creation (Nicholas Browning)
NB, I appreciate the ambiguous, Miltonian tone and inscrutable nature of...
November 15th, 2021 03:35 - A torch in the Wind (Samer Amin)
I really like your conceit of the noble knight within her heart. May we...
November 15th, 2021 03:13 - Soundless Rest (Fay Slimm.)
tender, timeless, and piercing. Dusk makes a keen observation, that the...
November 15th, 2021 03:08 - Healing (Pacifique Niyitanga)
I used to see scars on my wife, like on her knees, or on her back where...
November 7th, 2021 14:32 - When A Vagabond Loves (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Parts of this, like the beginning and the end, are a fresh take on the...
November 7th, 2021 14:28 - Nautical (A Boy With Roses)
I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said...
November 7th, 2021 03:23 - so quickly (Dusk arising)
Your range continues to surprise. This is what MPS is for!
November 7th, 2021 02:56 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards)
I think the main creation going on here is your pen and ink! I love the...
November 4th, 2021 01:11 - Bard\'s Cant (Zemde)
Blades in their sockets... that\'s gotta hurt! I don\'t know why I like...
November 4th, 2021 01:05 - for love (Queer-with-a-pen)
Very elegant, very poignant. Narrative enough to make me want to finish,...
November 4th, 2021 00:59 - Grey (Andrew5yungk)
The courage you exemplify here is palpable, your suffering is heavy and...
October 26th, 2021 02:06 - Dad\'s Back. (Goldfinch60)
My dad would play one of his few cherished classical records on the old...
October 26th, 2021 01:59 - The Night\'s Play (Krutarth)
I don\'t know what is more miraculous, stars or fireflies! Thanks for the...
October 26th, 2021 01:44 - Breakfast Rituals (Neville)
He? LOL
October 26th, 2021 00:18 - whine (Robin jayne)
I had those awkward tan lines from whole summers at the river... the only...
October 26th, 2021 00:15 - Time! (The BlackShakespeare)
We all try to trap time in a glass... but somehow it escapes through...
October 26th, 2021 00:08 - Exit (Krutarth)
A thoughtful sharing of your valuable experience. Glad you can retell it....
October 26th, 2021 00:04 - New Life. (Paul Bell)
It’s impolite to stare
Sorry, I was undressing you
Such black humor...
October 26th, 2021 00:01 - AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards)
PS You suggest this doesn\'t fall into any genre you know of. I think...
October 25th, 2021 23:57 - AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards)
A lot of your best ideas, techniques, and intuition came together in this...
October 25th, 2021 23:55 - Hiding Beneath a Mask (Ajax (he/xe))
Moving and charming. A universal emotion very well described. Brava.
September 30th, 2021 01:16 - Mellow Softness Inside (A Boy With Roses)
A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice...
September 30th, 2021 01:03 - through a glass darkly (Dusk arising)
You are so unpredictable. This is very nuanced, very intense... no fairy...
September 14th, 2021 00:08 - The Absolute Essence (Samer Amin)
I don\'t really understand your explanations, though your point is clear. ...
September 13th, 2021 00:39 - Nostradamus (Doggerel Dave)
The pessimist makes the best seer, because you are always right...
September 13th, 2021 00:24 - A Pair of Men (Jay-Lee Jane)
A lovely and lively view of the two men. To me, you were implying that...
September 12th, 2021 23:56 - Wildblue Moonbeams (A Boy With Roses)
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting,...
September 12th, 2021 23:48 - Fablon (Neville)
We don\'t call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as...
September 11th, 2021 20:16 - Temple (A Boy With Roses)
A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once...
August 21st, 2021 23:46 - Creation is Love (Samer Amin)
Samer, you are a thoughtful soul. I enjoy your vivaciousness, your...
August 19th, 2021 23:33
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