Comments on community poems by jarcher54 at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by jarcher54

Grave Concern (Dlherrmann) Watch your step, as more and more coffins are biodegradable! You slyly...
December 17th, 2020 02:18
Mastication (Neville) Oh, MASTICATED... my bad
December 16th, 2020 23:01
Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Goodness! I forgive you --I think! (-:
December 16th, 2020 22:59
The Meaning in Nothing (Nicholas Browning) A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive...
December 16th, 2020 22:31
Afternoon Blues (A Boy With Roses) Such a flow. Felt swept along, breaking into that old school sliding down...
December 16th, 2020 22:23
TO VACCINATE OR NOT TO VACCINATE ? ~ A 7 4 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) You guys are a scream... a great inconvenience indeed!
December 16th, 2020 03:27
DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards) And in your drawing why is the man in the moon trying to set off a bomb...
December 7th, 2020 02:21
DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards) Ah, but I adore many of the contributions that are not easily understood. ...
December 7th, 2020 02:19
Hurt and Traumatized (JordanandThomas29) I was really moved when you said I am angry at me. Very insightful and...
November 13th, 2020 02:34
Circles (Dasim) I love the simplicity and fluidity of this piece. It starts out a little...
November 12th, 2020 16:18
they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising) So many of my family and friends\' veteran fathers and uncles and grandpas...
November 8th, 2020 11:59
War Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great insight into the glorification and romanticizing of war through the...
November 8th, 2020 11:51
Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) A perfect return to action for action\'s sake!
November 2nd, 2020 15:27
the world is and continues, my grandfather died (Conradconrad) This is priceless . . . so many stunning and haunting recollections,...
November 2nd, 2020 15:19
Silent as the Grave (A Poem on the Dourest of Halloweens (2020)) (AuburnScribbler) tart it up--we don\'t say it that way in the USA but I laughed. I wonder...
November 1st, 2020 08:40
On Tour. (Doggerel Dave) I am pretty sure the missus and I stayed at the same place in Levelland,...
November 1st, 2020 02:42
Tale of a Solemn Tombstone (Alex Arnot) I skipped Trick or Treat this year so as to not invite the Reaper to pass...
November 1st, 2020 02:37
Or Did It (Kurt Philip Behm) When I read old books that are largely neglected, I often wonder if I will...
November 1st, 2020 02:12
UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards) One should never ignore suspicions! Blends of catarrh? Sounds like some...
November 1st, 2020 02:08
becoming (Queer-with-a-pen) We should all be so loved as to have a beacon to show us the way home and...
November 1st, 2020 01:09
eleventh night (Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach) I have not reconciled beauty and death, but I do think that beauty cannot...
November 1st, 2020 00:54
Gone Girl (Kevin Michael Bloor) Love your last couplet... I knew where you were headed and was ready for...
October 31st, 2020 12:11
I wish god would take my soul (Avivan) The world is inherently indifferent to us, but it is not inherently cruel....
October 31st, 2020 12:06
What to do When You’re Alone Again (Midnight drive) I appreciate the line You won\'t forget her when you are dead. Suicide...
October 30th, 2020 02:05
Pray For Those (ForeverJesus7) I would add, DO something for them...
October 30th, 2020 02:01
WORLD COURT ORDER (Joe Marcello) Clever title!
October 30th, 2020 01:58
It’s nothing personal (Aa Harvey) Damn, you figured us out.
October 30th, 2020 01:55
No Pain No Gain (Quemis) A good old Anglo-Saxon alliterative rune, fit to be carved on a mossy...
October 30th, 2020 01:45
Comatose (Quemis) Loss is the only promise made, well stated. Quite a litany of memorable,...
October 30th, 2020 01:39
Thoughts of a survivor (TheLonelyPoet90) You may feel alone in the little world that includes the perpetrator, but...
October 26th, 2020 00:38
Count down until E day (Germanamericanchurch) Methinks Midas touched his own face... thanks for the playful images...
October 22nd, 2020 23:45
SONG OF A FIST (Ifeanyichukwu) Your poems are so poignant, anytime, but especially now. We are thinking...
October 22nd, 2020 01:41
Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Einsteinium indeed... fleeting and only exists on the path from one...
October 20th, 2020 01:51
Chrysalis (A Boy With Roses) I noticed the silence. This is a fine return to action! Isn\'t making a...
October 20th, 2020 00:10
\"Oh no - not your operation!\" (Doggerel Dave) Just the right amounts of light and heavy. Doggerel do!
October 20th, 2020 00:05
Absence by Inference (Dlherrmann) That row of cedar trees has a way of enduring longer than the wooden...
October 19th, 2020 01:08
go then (Dusk arising) I have three brothers, all like me getting up there in their 60\'s. Your...
October 19th, 2020 01:04
NIGELLA (Michael Edwards) Oh my... looking up Cooking Channel now...
October 19th, 2020 01:01
History Has a Way of Living Twice (Steve Unruh) Steve, a well-wrought catalog and argument. Very dense and interesting to...
October 19th, 2020 00:45
BULLET IN THE HEART OF EGWU EKE (inpursuit of national rebirth) (Ifeanyichukwu) Nigeria is not alone in need of unified rebirth, but it certainly is near...
October 18th, 2020 03:05
The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ) Blue, I respect your assurance and viewpoint, and the urge to sing it out....
October 18th, 2020 02:06
Let me back in (Down the rabbithole) Aching to be understood indeed! At the end of this exquisitely sensitive...
October 18th, 2020 01:57
Shadows Shadow (WL Schuett) Given all and moved on... that\'s as astute an observation as I can...
October 18th, 2020 01:50
Mere exist (Myself and me) Most of us have a wound or two like that. Quite an observant, tender...
October 18th, 2020 01:45
The Face (Dasim) Oh my!
October 18th, 2020 01:42
PEACE IN ADVERSITY ~ ANGELA 💛 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Me and the missus kept one job and lost one, but feel beyond blessed to...
October 18th, 2020 01:36
Dropped to Earth (Goddess of the Mist) An angel must fall at least once to have any street cred. Being...
October 18th, 2020 01:30
bored through overkill (Dusk arising) ears bored... love it
October 18th, 2020 01:19
Making. (Fay Slimm.) You have been a good student and become a good master, all at the same...
October 17th, 2020 13:32
Joker44’s Side – Writing Poetry (Nafis Light) You are right, it isn\'t a hobby, it is sui generis, a compulsion for some...
October 17th, 2020 13:27
Joker44’s Side – Forever Together (Nafis Light) Nothing wrong with a sweet fantasy of eternal togetherness! Made me a...
October 17th, 2020 13:09
Quarantine Senryu (Lorna) I don\'t order pizza as much as I\'d like, must watch my girlish figure! ...
October 17th, 2020 13:06
A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards) LOL is it you who are broken and warped? Front doors are things of great...
October 17th, 2020 12:56
Blondie - A tribute to Debbie Harry (FineB) Debby Harry, fierce and brave, talented and humble, my fantasy at every...
October 17th, 2020 12:53
VOICES IN CLENCHED FISTS (Ifeanyichukwu) Yes, what have our leaders been doing? Police chiefs, judges,...
October 17th, 2020 12:42
Grandfather\'s Road (Dlherrmann) Yes, as I revisit the land of my family where I grew up, I imagine all the...
October 17th, 2020 12:05
Waxing Poetic (Gary Edward Geraci) Having known a dozen hale and hearty folks who are now unexpectedly dead,...
October 17th, 2020 11:49
The Dent on my Pillow (Dove) Very touching... we\'ve pretty much all known that dent on the pillow. ...
October 17th, 2020 11:40
My Dreams (Sadia Risa Anika) I\'m nearer the end of my dream journey than the beginning. Your...
October 17th, 2020 11:35
My Memoir in honor of Taliesin (Trenz Pruca) As Goldfinch suggests, you\'ll be remembered as much as the greatest lords...
October 17th, 2020 11:15
Pascal\'s Wager (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) An interesting pairing of poems. While I find Pascal\'s wager to be a bit...
October 17th, 2020 02:36
of november fallen (Dusk arising) One continuous compelling sentence. As clever as it is touching.
October 17th, 2020 02:26
Waving at Dolphins (Neville) Yes, they do curtsy, what insight!
October 17th, 2020 02:22
Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.) Being a nonconformist in most every respect myself, I\'ll diverge from the...
October 17th, 2020 02:16
in fields of green (Dusk arising) A sadness always overcomes me when I reflect how those calling for peace...
October 17th, 2020 01:56
I Have Tried to Write an Epic (Steve Unruh) I fantasized a number of epics as a teen poet. They are still in the back...
October 11th, 2020 23:50
Addiction. (Fay Slimm.) You are clearly addicted to singing your passions!
October 11th, 2020 23:35
Chemicals (John McChord) John, you are observant beyond your years. I won\'t say wise for who is...
September 26th, 2020 00:11
Year Six (John McChord) A well-crafted example of that paradox. It\'s not exactly an ethical...
September 25th, 2020 23:58
Before I fall asleep (Trenz Pruca) Oh my. You nailed it. The night that does not end Bearing fast...
September 25th, 2020 00:26
old crow grog (Queer-with-a-pen) My dad had four boys so of course he drank. I\'m sorry yours didn\'t...
September 25th, 2020 00:23
I, an Algorithm (Quemis) This piece is extremely moving from both an intellectual and an aesthetic...
September 25th, 2020 00:00
Stolen (Fay Slimm.) Taking time out of life... stolen moments... bitter-sweet and poignant. I...
September 20th, 2020 07:31
Bruises (Neville) Covered in them eh? That explains the sunglasses and folded arms! Some...
September 20th, 2020 07:23
Endless lake (Agiel) Many of the poems on MPS reflect despair, sorrow, loneliness, and pain. ...
September 20th, 2020 07:09
Virago (Trenz Pruca) Maybe it\'s irrelevant but as a kid I had a stallion named Castro... I...
September 20th, 2020 01:38
Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60) All you need is love. When they ridicule the idealist, the one who places...
September 20th, 2020 01:26
Water To Sand. (Chanel T.) Water to sand... water virtually disappears into sand, becomes one with...
September 20th, 2020 01:15
Years (Tayama) So bare-bones, yet so pregnant with hints, inferences, and imagined...
September 16th, 2020 09:26
Perfect Victim (A Boy With Roses) Dearest X-man, I\'m stunned by the self-awareness of this little...
September 16th, 2020 01:08
My Home All Over America (ForeverJesus7) So many beautiful, rich places in the world and America. Catalogs always...
September 13th, 2020 07:18
First Love Letter (Delilah) Very felicitous way of saying it... goodbye to my favorite stranger... I...
September 13th, 2020 00:03
Time (ThePoeticGirl) I think you are on to something here... a novel way to say Seize the Day! ...
September 12th, 2020 23:59
PROVERBS FOR POETS ~ AN ANTHOLOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN) I always found great wisdom in this from Yeats: Out of the quarrel with...
September 12th, 2020 09:32
Wet Cement (Living Dead Girl) Yes, it\'s possible to feel both above, victorious, yet below, defeated,...
September 12th, 2020 02:35
Locked Up Emotions (Living Dead Girl) This little tour de force says so much without giving us the facts... what...
September 12th, 2020 02:25
Slipping Away (Living Dead Girl) I\'ve often said to myself \"Right here right now is the center of time...
September 12th, 2020 02:20
In The End (Living Dead Girl) PS \"i am nothing if not inconsequential\" is insightfully witty. I will...
September 12th, 2020 02:17
In The End (Living Dead Girl) You may have felt invisible and unseen before, but your eloquence makes...
September 12th, 2020 02:14
Water is life and seems alive (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Very liquid as others have observed... I had to smile at the blue...
September 12th, 2020 01:48
Do Over (Kurt Philip Behm) Ah the fabled Do-Over... has a horn of pearl on its forehead. There\'s...
September 3rd, 2020 18:52
Consumed (Down the rabbithole) I appreciate how you use painting to embody that adoration, devotion that...
September 3rd, 2020 18:29
Decisions & Choices (Neville) I think you are tricking us with this nifty little tautology, but it\'s...
September 3rd, 2020 03:07
Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) I appreciate how you so often approach a subject or place or event...
September 3rd, 2020 03:03
Forgotten (Rose~) While it is quite obvious the cheater is not literally forgotten, you have...
September 3rd, 2020 02:52
Journey to Shadow (Edthepoet) A startling concluding stanza. Knowing where the monsters reside may come...
September 3rd, 2020 02:37
This is my Fight (Italianwoman) You certainly no longer live as a mime. You express yourself exquisitely....
September 3rd, 2020 02:26
Summer’s End (Neville) Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
To All the Boys I Let Hit (Narcisa) This is so fiercely beautiful I am in awe of your self-awareness of...
August 24th, 2020 09:00
giggle strips (Dusk arising) You\'ve nailed it for those of us over 50 (or whatever) with this: A...
August 24th, 2020 08:35

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